Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [Chap 16 - pg 84] - Page 41

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashukapoor007

Sweet update! Manveer & Maggi awsum combo dear! Anyways update next part soon ..Ty 4 d pm 😃

thnxx...will try my best 😃...no probz dear 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Asmimelody

fantastic Update dear:)pls do continue soon..

thnx...will try my best 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Havvii

Wow Anjie u created so much suspence C.I.D. dekh rahi ho kya bt awesome update. Bt girl u becoming lazy ek to late wo bhi short next i want long update

hehe yaa...nopes mai CID nhin dekhti 😆...thnxx 😃 lol mai bhi observe kar rhi hun ye change 😛...yep will try my best
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shals9

Superb update. Pls update nxt part soon.

Thanks for pm

thnxx 😳 will try my best 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Niha-

lol dw i was only joking wiv ya. rly luv ur ff, keep up da gud work :D x

ohh okieee 😆 glad u love it 😃 will try my level best 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjalika13


hehe yaa...nopes mai CID nhin dekhti😆...thnxx😃lol mai bhi observe kar rhi hun ye change😛...yep will try my best

good observe kar liya na nw improve it
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was a lovely part oh god now even im scared and the precap scared me even more please update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Havvii

good observe kar liya na nw improve it

okk then i'll update it real soon this time 😊 😉 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preya_radev

it was a lovely part oh god now even im scared and the precap scared me even more please update soon and thanks for the pm

thnxx...hehe...will update asap...no probzz
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey everyone . heres chapter 11 . enjoy...and pls do comment as this is the first time i wrote something different lol...and i dnt know if it is okk or not...so pls do like n comment


Uday opens the door and goes outside . He notices a car standing there . It was black in colour so was a bit difficult to notice at first . He goes near it and reads the number '5678' that wasn't Raj's car . His dought was cleared by that time about what Raj had told him . Someone was keeping a watch on them since morning . He was now scared for manyata . He somehow knew that their enemy...whoever it was knew them well ...maybe he was some relative or friend...he just couldn't get it .

Uday looked at the car again and went near his front door . He looked through the window...there was no one in the car . He had to be careful now...knowing that there was very less possibility of the person to be their friend . He walked around slowly and carefully not making a sound and searched around the house .

Manyata came out of the room and slowly searched the house...hoping that udaywould have come inside . She went from room to room carefully first on ground floor and then on second...but no one was there . She now went to Uday's room and searched for him there but he wasn't there either . Just as she was about to go out of the room her mobile rang...scaring her . She jumped up scared and then relaxed noticing that it was just a call . She looked at the ID 'DS' . She decided to not pick it up ...and that DS would then think that she is asleep now . She decided to go outside the house... put her mobile in silent mode...as it could be dangerous out there...

Uday searched around the house but then again found no one...then he started to wonder if the person or people had gone inside the house . He felt very scared now ...manyata was in the house and it would be dangerous for her...he turned around and saw someones shadow...he walked behind the tree and then felt someone pushing him 'damn he was fast' UV thought .He got up and moved a little back...he was again out of sight...he looked around and then saw him behind ...

Uday "who are you ? and why are you keeping a watch here ?"

Person " only my boss can answer that question...and you wont be able to meet him after today...nor can the princess "

Uday " which princess ? i live here alone "

Person " nice try but i have seen her "

The person was mascular...but not like uday...he punched uday on his face as he was looking to the house . Uday was shocked by the war and cursed himself for not paying attention and punched the guy back . Their fight started getting worse as both of them punched and kicked each other . Uday was now hurt badly but he managed to punch the guy badly in the stomach . The person fell down not in his senses . Uday turned around holding his arm...it was bleeding .

Manyata went to the door and opened it and what she saw scared her...Uday punched a person who then fell down...he was very badly hurt...then she saw another person hiding behind a tree taking out a gun .

Manyata shouted in pain...not being able to bear to see him like that " Uday"

Uday turned around and walked near her just as the person from behind was about to shoot...he missed the shot and uday was now conscious...He noticed the person standing near the tree near him...he went near him and punched him hard that he fell down...he went to manyata and dragged her inside and closed the door .

Manyata " uday lets go to the room...i'll apply some medicine to your wounds "

Uday " manyata you shouldn't have come outside...you know i was so scared to see you there "

Manyata " but uday "

Uday " please manyata ...dont do that again..."

Manyata "but uday...you were in danger...and i just can't stop myself...and please we will talk about this later...first please let me apply some first aid" she said and pulled him in his room .

She made him sit on his bed and brought the first aid box...took the cotton and savlon and first applied on his arm...she slowly applied it looking at him if it was paining...but saw that he was looking at her ...she felt shy and looked down at his arm and blushing a bit .

Uday looked at manyata as she applied the medicine...she was looking super cute at that time . He was lost in her observing her moves . He noticed her looking at him with a worried expression on her face...then she looked at him in surprise and then looked down smiling shyly . He smirked looking at her .

As she finished applying it on his arm...she took another piece of cotton and started applying the medicine on his forhead...which was bleeding but not very badly . Uday looked at her and then made a face as if it was hurting very badly .

Uday "ahhh"

Manyata looked at him "is it paining a lot ?"

Uday nodded his head slowly and closed his eyes . She went near his face and did it even more carefully now...uday opened his eyes and got lost in her . She was looking cuter now as she worked carefully and slowly . Manyata finished her work and then moved back .

Manyata "done...uday you rest now...its already night...see you tomorrow " she said and was about to leave as he stopped her by holding her wrist . Manyata turned around and looked at him . Uday stood up and went near her.

Uday "now tell me why weren't you able to stop yourself when i was in danger ?"

Manyata was shocked to hear that question from him "because...u r my friend "

Uday raised his eyebrow "only friend ?"

Meanwhile DS was very worried for manyata...she had been calling her now since two hours but manyata didnt pick her call . She decided to call yuvraaj ...

DS "hello "

Yuvraaj "i was waiting for your call only "

DS "what happened to manyata ?"

Yuvraaj "well she is just being trapped...by that yuvraaj of Jaigad...he is just trying to fool you guys...he is trapping manyata "

DS "and how do you know all this ?"

Yuvraaj " i just do...you should now go and save your grandaughter "


Chapter 12

Edited by Anjalika13 - 12 years ago

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