Do you really love her Mr Raizada?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Do you really Love her Mr Raizada?

I would like you to read the bellow rhyme and give your feed back on Mr Arnav Singh Raizada's supposedly so called 'love'. You don't need to answer back with poems but I'd be very much obliged if you can answer with honesty. *This is not intended for bashing but for a healthy discussion*

The sunshine fell in beautiful shades

And here I am pondering the fates

Does Arnav Singh Raizada portray truth as we see

Does he love her as he proclaims to be?

He says he loves her so very much

And his breath would fail if she left her and such,

A vile man ruined her in word-full symphony

Yet he hardly lifted a finger to defend her dignity

Mute and slack, he watched it unfold

Horrified and dejected his woman implored

She took a fall for him, had to beg for him to speak

She was reduced to her knees, exhausted and weak

She was responsible for it, you said dear Sir,

Implied she made the evil man come after her,

What kind of love accuses her for a seductress?

In 'anger' you claimed her to be a temptress?

She's still a wrong doer in eyes of his family

He hides the truths that speak her virtue, happily

Had wronged her on countless occasions

But unapologetic and unabashed, flirts in all locations

Can you say a simple sorry for ruining her life?

When you married her by force, her heart plunged a knife,

Talk to her and show some respect to the woman

She might not want you, she's after all a human

You made her suffer far longer than you know

Yet you smirk when you think how low,

You had stooped to make her bow

Unashamed you relate them in tones all mellow

Is this love when you can't feel her pain?

That ties to you after everything in vain

Accusations hurled on the innocent dove

Free her from them and prove your love

I don't believe you love her dear Sir

Before romancing, give justice to her.

You break her courage to bind her to you
Why make her helpless and then try to woo

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Posted: 13 years ago
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👍🏼 Beautifully Written. I'm short of words. I've always read such poetry in literature but didnt expect that I would read one in context to IPKKND 😊 Thanks for sharing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: guptarashi

👍🏼 Beautifully Written. I'm short of words. I've always read such poetry in literature but didnt expect that I would read one in context to IPKKND 😊 Thanks for sharing.

Thank you! And I hope I got my message across?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thats what this redemption is for, for him to realize his mistake and her worth, if you see all the episodes after he accused her [the past week], when hes romancing or giving her attention, sanaya's acting as khushi truly portrays khushi's discomfort with that, she is not enjoying the romance at all, or the gifts, or the flowers! she feels she is a trophy for him and arnav will have to make her feel she is his equal in every respect, not by forcing her to comeback , but letting her have her say.
on a lighter note, i think he will do a similar drama as to what khushi did to bring payash together, by taking payash/NK into confidence; and win her over- ofcourse that would be after a long time of tom and jerry chases
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arnav is the most coward, lousy and low-life lover ever.. nothing to say about his overt Di mania..
I rest my case..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i relay agree with you
if he is saying that hi love her why then hi cogent read her eyes yesterday when she was so sad bout if it had been she. she had red his eyes like a book.
and i think hi hasn't relaze yet how much his words to be the bigest mistake in his life have affected her and hurt her and broke her heart and i think in that moment she gave up on him and his love
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Posted: 13 years ago
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BTW very nice poem Hiru.. loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved ur rhyme, hope ASR repents this time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CDlove

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Thank you! And I hope I got my message across?



Yep. I agree with each and every word you said through this poem. I've NO arguments to put forward. ASR urgently needs to realize his faults and then compensate for them. Before "romancing Khushi definitely needs justice".
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: arkhi

thats what this redemption is for, for him to realize his mistake and her worth, if you see all the episodes after he accused her [the past week], when hes romancing or giving her attention, sanaya's acting as khushi truly portrays khushi's discomfort with that, she is not enjoying the romance at all, or the gifts, or the flowers! she feels she is a trophy for him and arnav will have to make her feel she is his equal in every respect, not by forcing her to comeback , but letting her have her say.
on a lighter note, i think he will do a similar drama as to what khushi did to bring payash together, by taking payash/NK into confidence; and win her over- ofcourse that would be after a long time of tom and jerry chases

I'd like to think along these lines too, but as of now he shows no remorse or empathy for her feelings. He pursues her as if she's something of a posession without regards to her feelings. I really do hope he will recognize his mistakes and appolagize to her. She probably doesn't want a poetic lament. Just a mere 'sorry' for everything he had done to her would suffice. As of now, he seems amused by all the discomforts forced by him. That doesn't sit well with me.
Thanks for your feed back. 😊

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