Suraj hua madham-ff 4 garv-kumud

part-1 Kumud who is luking at the mirror is shy.
kali cums near her:didi,u luk very happy & pretty
K smiles.K:but I'm tensed.he's from a big city like mumbai.but I'm from a village.so wil he like me?
Kali:no doubt.who cant like my didi?
K smiles.

K is sitting alone in her room:how wil b the guy luk like?
Ka cums inside:di,the guy has cum
K is excited:did u c him?
Ka:ya,he luks cute.cum di,maa is calling

The guy is talking 2 kumud's parents:can u plz call kumud?
Kali brings K.he smiles at her.K luks at him & smiles.
He:hi kumud
K does'nt no what 2 say.Ka whispers:di,tell hi
K:hi He:my name is garv
K smiles:my name… G:I no..kumud.why r u standing?sit
K sits slowly. G:relax & sit.this is ur home no
K sits properly.
G:ur parents told everything abt u.do u want 2 no anything abt me?ask
K:who is ur fav film actor?
Ka thinks:Oh!didi did a big blunder by asking such silly question
G laughs:very nice question.usually no girl asks such a question wen a guy cums 2 see.u r very different kumud.my fav actor is Amitab Bachan
K:really?mine is alo him.but my sister kali prefers shahrukh.who is u fav film actress?
G:Kajol K:mine too
G:so our tastes r same.well,kumud..i think filmi questions r enuf now.we'l talk sumthing else
K:ok G:what food u like?
K:home made G:even I prefer that fast food.did u like me?
K is nervous. G:tell straightly
K luks at her parents. Her dad suryaban:tell beti
K is shy & smiles:yes
Ka is thrilled. S:did u like our daughter garv?

WHAT'L B HIS REPLY?

thats nice!
i think he'll say yes 😊

Part 2:kumud & kali r tensed. Garv smiles:yes,I liked kumud
All r happy.

Garv is having lunch there.S:the lunch is gud
Kumud's mom Gayatri:this is prepared by kumud
G:really?very nice
K smiles.
G is washing his hands after lunch.kali goes near him:Hi garv,I'm …
G:kumud's dearest sister kali
K:yes.actually I wanted 2 ask u sumthing
G:ok,ask K:plz don't misunderstand me.it'l b very nice if u giv the report of ur blood result
G:but why?
K:bcoz…I mean…I'm not suspecting u.but since u had a bachelor's life in a big city like mumbai..even I've studied in mumbai.there was no problem with me.i no all the mumbaiwalas r not like that.but still..plz don't misunderstand me
G:its ok.i understand.u care 4 ur sister very much.kali is so lucky 2 hav a protective sister like u
K is relieved.


2 days later.Kali is waiting at a lonely place.G cums there with the report:here is my report,open it & see
Ka:thanx
Ka opens it & read & smiles.
G:now how do u feel?
Ka:I'm very happy that my sister is going 2 catch a nice man's hand.plz take care of my sister.he is very innocent & sweet
G smiles:I promise

Garv-kumud's wedding takes place.They,Kali dance 2 mahive..{Kal ho na ho}

1st nite….The room is covered with flowers.Kumud is surprised.Garv:how is the decoration?
K:very nice
G:is'nt beautiful like u?
K smiles.G puts flower petals on her.K closes her eyes

awesome part...cont soon

*******edited post from higher case to lower case******

coool jasmine thanks for sharing keep up the fan fict 😊 btw girlie could you use lower case next time because using caps is considered as shouting on IF..thanks 😛

Originally posted by: candyfloss

good work but post this in fanfic section.
one more thing dont ruin this story by replacing garv with dumb kshitij 😡 😡

hmm candy could you not use words like 'dumb' to any character, it would be appreciated, thanks😊

hey jasmine, great work!!! 👏
i like the second part as well! 😛

Part-3…Garv-kumud go 2 Goa 4 honeymoon.They stay in a hotel.
G:kumud,cum out.its getting late
K cums out of the room.
G:sari?
K:ya.why?
G:no no
K:why?I always put it
G:ya,but we r going 2 the beach.so u cant wear this
K:then what shud I wear?
G smiles & goes inside the room & takes a cover.G:put this
K opens it.She was shocked 2 see shorts in it:I shud wear this?
G:ya K:no no
G:why not?see I've also worn shorts
K luks at him properly:that's ok.but I cant wear such small dress.i don't wear this
G:Oh!u shud wear dresses according 2 the situation.now we've 2 go 2 the beach.so u've 2
K:but… G:no excuse.put this & cum
After sumtime,G:kumuddddd
K cums out.she is really uncomfortable with the small skirt.G smiles:u r luking so pretty.very hot
K is shy.

G-K go 2 the beach.there she see half naked foreign women
K:what kind of dresses!
G:here ur dress is the longest one.so r u relieved?
G-K laugh.A throws water on her.
K:Garv!whats this?
G pushes her into 2 the water.They both enjoy in the sea water.

They reach back.Kumud:u said,u'l take me 2 ur house.but u did'nt.actually do u hav a house?
G is ruf:what do u mean?now we r in my house
K:that's true.this is ur family house.but I meant the house where u stay in mumbai
G is angry:so u doubt.then hear..i don't hav a house there
K is shocked at the behaviour

whoa! garv is being a lil rude!
thanx jasmine! 😊

Part-4..Kumud:why r u getting angry?do u get angry like this?
Garv was ruf:yes,I become angry
K:but its 4 the 1st time u became angry after our marriage
G:that's bcoz of ur..
G goes 2 sleep.K is upset.

Next morning.
G:pack the bags.we r going 2 a place
K:where?
G:no question.do what I say
K:ok
K thinks:suddenly what happened 2 garv?always angry

G-K in the car. K:u don't hav a house right?then where r we going?
G is silent. K:Garv!
G:why r u always keeping ur mouth open?just close it 4 sumtime
K is upset:sorry.since childhood I'm like this.i talk foolish things
G:ok ok

They reach a place. G:cum out & luk carefully
K was surprised 2 c a house:whats this?
G:I was on the construction of a new house 4 u.4 both of us 2 stay 2gether.i was planning 2 giv u a big surprise
K smiles:I got scared
G smiles:open the door K:u do it
G:no,u must do it as I believe that only if u do that luck wil cum
K smiles & opens the door.they hold hands 2gether & get inside.
K:wow!so beautiful
K is surprised 2 see lots of her framed photos kept there:how did u get al these?
G:I got it from ur dad.actually I keep these photos with me as seeing these only I fell in luv with u
K is shy.a carries her in his arms & keeps her on the bed. G:this is our bed
G lies down close 2 her.They both smile