Suraj hua madham-ff 4 garv-kumud - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
Good Work! 👏 Keep Continuing! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
Part13 Kumud:ok,bri ng it bak
Garv:what nonsense!
K:kali,u go & place it
Ka smiles at G & goes.
G:whT DID U TEL?I CANT push it 4 kali.she's crazy
K:she is stil childish.don't care.plz fulfil her small wish
G:kumud,I cant
K forces:plz..

Ka places the swinging chair & sits on it.she luks at G.G slowly pushes it 4 her 2 swing.K smiles.Ka has a victory's smile.K goes.G pushes it harshly.So Ka falls down.
G smiles:don't try 2 b oversmart
G goes.Ka is irritated.

G cums bak in late nite.K:why did u becum late?
G:meeting was dere
K:ok,cum & sleep.u r tired.
K goes. Ka:I no dat u did'nt go 4 any meeting.where did u go?
G:2 a prostitute
Ka laughs:u'l never do dat
G:why not?
G goes.Ka smiles.

Ka cums bak after her class.she waits 4 a taxi.finaly she gets into1.she's thinking abt her moments with G.she did'nt no dat the driver was driving 2 a wrong place.
He:ma'am!
Ka gets out & realizes dat its not the place:whats dis?dis is not my place.u r mistaken.drop me 2 my place.u cant get money after dropping me 2 a wrong place
Ka gets in.Driver luks at her.Ka is shocked
He smiles. Ka is angry:u?u wanted 2 trap me as a fake driver?dat'l never happen
Ka tries 2 open the door 2 go out.but he catches her hand so tightly dat she cant do so

WHO'S HE?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
keep it up jasmine 👏 ive got a feeling its nakul wot seyy peop;e?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Part14 Kali:Nakul,leave my hand
N:no,u can go only after I finish talking 2 u
K:whats dere new 2 tel?
N:nothing new.the same old thing dat I luv u.but as long as u don't listen 2 me,I'l repeat the same thing.i luv u
K:I'm repeating my answer.i hate u
N:but why?I'l try 2 change myself.i'l do whatever u tel
K:no use.i cant never luv a loser like u
K goes.N's eyes get filled up with tears.

Kali 2 kumud:nakul has reached mumbai
K was surprised:really?why?
Ka:the same aim.2 marry me.dat'l never happen
K:but he's a nice boy.he was so sweet wen he came 2 c our dad 2 ask 4 u.but u insulted him
ka:r u on his side?
K:no.but he' nice
ka shouts:no
K:why r u becoming angry 4 such a silly thing?
ka:its not a silly thing 4 me
ka goes.K is dull.

K is on her bed.Ka cums.
K:can u plz bring my medicine
Ka:why r u treating me like a servant?I did'nt cum here 2 b ur servant.i came here 2 stay here & study
K is upset:why r u talking like this?I did'nt mean dat.if u feel so,den I wont desturb u anymore
K gets up & goes 2 take medicines.Ka feels quilty:sorry di.i'l bring medicines
K smiles & thinks:kali has changed a lot.now I cant understand her

While Ka was walking on the road,Nakul kidnaps her.he sprays sumthing on her nose.she fals asleep.
Ka is sleeping on the bed.she opens her eyes.was shocked 2 c N near her on the bed.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
wow thats nice!
yea i also thought it would b nakul too! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
Part 15 Kali screams at Nakul:why did u do dis 2 me?
Ka slaps him manytimes.N is upset.

All r tensed not seeing Ka back.Ka cums.Kumud:where were u?
Ka cries & hugs K:di,I'm spoilt
K:what?
Ka:nakul raped me
K & garv r shocked.

Ka is shattered completely.she's continuously shedding tears.K is comforting her.Ka falls asleep.

K cries on G's chest:den also how did it happen 2 my lovly sister.wenever she told abt nakul's character I did'nt believe her.but I was wrong.i cud'nt save my sister
G's eyes r ful of tears.G is going crazy.

G goes 2 Ka's room.Ka is weeping:I got punished jeeju
G:why don't u marry nakul?
Ka:after happening this much also u want me 2 marry him?how cud u think so?bcuz u hate me?
G:no.u remember once I came late.dat day I went 2 c him.its bcuz I told him he came 2 mumbai
Ka is shocked:what?
G:I came 2 no abt nakul who luvs u very much.wen i enquired abt him I realized dat he's a nice man.he suits u.so I went 2 him.i introduced myself 2 him.his rooms were decorated with ur photos.i saw his luv directly.i asked him why he's not marrying u if he luvs u like crazy.he was very upset 2 tel dat u avoids him.i told him 2 marry u.he said,he does'nt hav hope as u hate him.i told him 2 express his luv 2 u.but he realized dat dere is no use of it as however he expresses his luv u neglect him.so I yold him even 2 force u,2 compel u 2 marry him.but I never thot dat he'l do dis 2 u 2 gain u.i'm sorry kali
ka cries:don't b sorry

Suryaban-gayatri cum & hug Ka with tears after cuming 2 no what happened 2 her
Gaya:2morrow we r taking her back
Ka cums near kumud:di,shal I sleep with u as it's the last chance
K weeps:why r u talking like dis?

Ka-K in the bedroom. Ka:u r very lucky 2 get a gud husband like jeeju.he's the best husband
K:dat I no b4 itself no
Ka:no,u donno anything.now I'm going 2 reveal how nice he's

WIL KALI CONFES?HOW'L KUMUD REACT?
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
i hope she doesnt confess! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
Part 16 Kali tells everything.Kumud is shocked.K cant believe:no u r lying.i don't belive dis.my sister cant do dis
Ka weeps:no di.its true.i'm a sinner.now I repent.plz di don't hate me.since childhud u used 2 4giv me.plz 4giv dis time too.i promise dat I wont hurt u again
K cries & hugs her:how can I hate u my sister?

Ka goes near garv:I'm going jeeju.b4 going I want 2 apologize with full heart.sorry 4 the trubles I gave u
G:no need of dat.u r my little sister.a brother 4givs his sister without any apology
Ka:thx a lot.i confessed everything 2 di & apologized
G is shocked:wht was the need 2 tel her?she mayb upset
Ka cries & goes out.K sees it & goes near G.G cant face her.
K:I no u r angry with tanu.but plz don't b angry with her.plz 4giv her.she's smal.did a smal mistake.she wont repeat it
G hugs K:u r a gr8 wife & a sister.how cud u take it easily?
K's eyes r ful of tears.

G,K,Ka,parents go near the car 2 go.They were shocked 2 c nakul.
Suryaban beats him heavily:how did u get the courage 2 appear b4 me?
N goes near G.G slaps him:I never thot u'l do dis.its my fault dat I called u here
N:plz listen 2 me.i want 2 marry kali
N goes near K:bhabhi
K:how dare u cal me bhabhi?a girl's worst fate is 2 get raped.u did dat 2 tanu & u've cum here with no hesitation 2 propose.a girl cant marry her rapist
N:but I did'nt rape kali
Al r shocked. N:I made her sleep.wen she woke up she thot she thot she has been spoilt by me.i did'nt try 2 clear her misunderstanding.bcoz I thot he'l marry me thinking dat she's spoilt by me.usually girls try 2 do dat.but kali is different.she is a woman of substance & selfprestige.i admire dat.after my luv 4 her increased
Ka:no u r lying
N:u no how much I lov u.do u think a lover can do dat?if u don't believe me,u can do medical test.my mistake was dat I tried the wrong method 2 get my true luv.bcoz Im dat crazy of u dat I cant liv without u
Ka weeps. G goes near Ka:luk at nakul's eyes & tel whether u need medical test 2 prove his innocence?
Ka cries. G:I dunno whether I'm wrong.but I think kali shud go with nakul,not with her parents.
ka is shocked & luks at G.
G:we shud conduct kali & nakul's wedding immediately.i'm sure dat she'b hapy with him.1 shud marry 1 who luvs him or her.kali,do u think I'm wrong?
Ka weeps:never jeeju
Ka luks at N:I'm sorry 4 not seeing ur luv
N:don't say sory.i respect u.no 1 expects dis kind of a talk from the person whom he respects
Ka weeps:why do u luv me dis much after getting so much of insult from me without doing anyting wrong?
N:dat's luv.i luv u
Ka smiles with tears.Every1 smiles.

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desi_baby07 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39
wow jasmine! that was great! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
Fantantic ending jasmine!! 😊

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