Suraj hua madham-ff 4 garv-kumud - Page 2

Fantanstic jasmine!Why aren't you posting it in fan-fic forum.

Part-5 Garv-kumud go 2 an icecream parlour.Waiter cums.
G:1 chocobar
K:1 Anila
W:Anila?whats that?
K:icecream.i've eaten this b4.its white.its like a ball
W:Ma'am its vanilla
K is embarrassed:sorry.u r right
W goes. G:whats this kumud?atleast u shud no the icecream's name
K:I'l learn
G smiles.

They both go 4 a big party.K has worn an orange sari with matching jewellary.
1 guy cums:HI Garv
G:hi
They both hug. He extends his hand 2 K.K feels awkward:whats this?I don't like other men touching my hand.its so stupid.garv,why do u want such friendships?
He is dull & G is embarrassed.He goes.G follows him:sorry yaar.my wife is from a village.she is narrow minded
He:its ok.i understand.but I never thot that a highly qualified man like u wud marry an uneducated village girl
G is dull.A holds K's hand tightly & take her 2 car.
K:why r we going back soon?the party started only now
G:but its enuf
K:ya,I also felt the party boring & also the men there r disgusting
G stops the car & is angry:they r not disgusting.but u r …
K is shocked:u r blaming me?but he..
G:just stop it.now u r in city married 2 a man who's completely modern.don't b so traditional
K:but he tried 2 catch my hand
G:its common here.he did'nt mean it.just 2 shake hand.its not bad.it's a friendly affection
K's eyes rose:sorry
G feels sad:its ok.i just lost my control.sorry
K:u don't hav 2 say sorry.its my fault.u teach me how 2 behave in parties.i'l do that
G smiles.

G teaches K how 2 walk & how 2 dance in parties

Part-6 Kumud wears a beautiful maroon sari with matching jewellery & walks like a princess.Garv was surprised.
K:how is it?hav I improved?
G:fantastic.I cant believe that u cud change so fast
K smiles:thanku

They both hold hands 2gether & go 4 a party.K behaves 2 every1 normally.G is happy.
They both do romantic dance 2 suraj hua madham{K3G}

Kumud is cooking in the kitchen.Garv phones:u go buy sum vegetables.it's the time 4 the vegetable seller 2 cum
K:ok
K goes out & goes near the seller & luk at the vegetables.G goes inside the house without her knowledge.He gets inside the kitchen & starts cooking.There was a big crowd around the seller.So K cant even speak 2 him.Later she cud buy veg & goes inside the house.K goes 2 the kitchen & is shocked 2 see food ready.K:how did it happen?I did'nt finish cooking
Sum1 hugs her from back.K screams.G laughs.K was surprised 2 see him there:how cum u here?
G:I came early.u did'nt no that.don't get scared.i only cooked
K:what was the need?
G:it's a husband's duty 2 help his wife
K smiles.

Next day,K thinks:2day is my b'day.why angad is not wishing me?
K 2 G b4 going 2 office:did u 4get anything?
G:no K:r u sure? G:100% sure
G goes.
K is dull:garv does'nt think abt me

K was sleeping wen G came back.G smiles.G gets up:u came?sorry,I slept
G:u were very cute while sleeping
K smiles.
G closes K's eyes & takes her 2 another room.he removes his arms from her eyes.K was surprised 2 see a swinging chair.
K:wow!I luv it
K sits there.G swings it

Part 7
Garv:how is it?
Kumud:very nice.swinging like a bird…so sweet
G-K smile.
They go 2 the bedroom. K:I never thot u wil gift me such a sweet thing
G keeps his arms on her face:bcoz I luv u
K is shy.They fall on bed.

Morning.garv-kumud r sleeping on bed.K gets up & opens the door 2 get milk from the milkman.
Then she goes 2 bath.Some1 gets inside their house.That person closes K's bathroom door & G's bedroom.
After bathing,K tries 2 open the door.but she fails.
K:I no garv closed this 2 make fun
K smiles.Suddenly G opens the door & gets in & luks at K.K is shy.G hugs her.
Suddenly she realizes that it's a dream.
K:garv,don't try 2 trick me.open the door
G opens his eyes & gets up from the bed. G:which door she's talking abt?
G tries 2 open his door.but he cant.
G:whats this?
He hears K shouting:garv,I'm losing my patience.open the door
G feels strange:sumthing is wrong
G:kumud,even my door is closed.i'm not joking.sumthing is wrong.sum1 has entered our house
K is shocked:what?
K is scared:Oh my god.garv,r u ok?
G:yes.don't get scared

WHO'S THAT PERSON?

good one... i have no idea 😕

Part-8 Somebody opens Garv's door.G is relived & luks out.he sees no one.
Kumud:open the door plz
K is very nervous.G goes & opens the door.K hugs him:garv!who's that person?
G:mayb a thief.after stealing,he might've gone
K:Oh my God!
G-K cum out.Sum1 laughs loudly.They r shocked.They turn back & was surprised 2 see kali.
Ka:I'm not any thief
G:whats this tanu?we got scared
ka:so a smart guy like u get scared?
K:u r so naughty.why did u do so?
ka:just 4 a thrill.wen I cum here 4 the 1st time,I wanted 2 make a blast.i cud succeed.then another thing is that I'm going 2 stay here
K is surprised:really?
ka:I'm going 2 do MBA here
G:very gud


Kali enter their bedroom & sees the romantic photos of G-K.
Ka:wow!eternal cuple.u guys luv each other very much
Kumud:yes.we cant liv without each other
Ka:God bless u my sweet sister
K smiles:gOd blessed me

Next day,Kali 2 K:di,lets go 4 shopping
K:sorry kali.i've work 2 do.u go with kumud
Ka is dull. G:why don't u cum with us kumud?
K:next time,I'l also cum

Ka-G go 2 a shop. G:u buy things.i'l pay.but plz don't tell me 2 help u 2 choose.bcoz I'm bad at selection
Ka is luking at ornaments.a guy catches her hand. Kali is shocked

i think the guy is nakul! 😛

Good going! 😛 Continue soon. 😃

coool keep it up jasmine lol i could imagine the background music and effects in a true balaji soap style lol 😆

Part9 Kali is angry:leave my hand
He:how can I not touch a pretty girl like u?
Suddenly garv cums & beats him
K-G get inside the car.G:2day I'm in a bad mood.lets shop another day with kumud.if she's not there with me,tht day wil b unbearable.i'm sorry tanu
K:its ok jeeju.i'm not sad.bcoz u saved me from a disaster like a filmi hero.i'm gr8ful 2 u.whatelse is makes me happier dan this?
G smiles.K's eyes r on G.

They reach home. Kumud:what all things did u buy?
Ka:nothing
K:I cant believe it.how can a shop crazy girl like not buy anything
Ka explains the whole incident.K is shocked:Oh my god!thank god nothing bad happened
G:since I'd a small fite,my back is paining

G removes his shirt.Ka's eyes r on him.K puts a cloth piece into hot water & puts the cloth on G's back.
Ka:u dunno how 2 do it properly.i'l do it
Ka starts doing it.Ka had a special feeling touching G.

A few days later.B4 going 2 temple,G finds a letter inside his book.he reads it.
"My Dear Jeeju..i'm writing this letter 2 open my heart b4 u.I luv u"
G is shocked.G cant believe.
K gets inside the room:its getting late.cum garv
G cums out.he luks at Kali.Ka had a killing luk.They get inside the car.G luks at the mirror.he feels uncomfortable seeing Ka luking at him in the mirror.

They pray in the temple.G opens his eyes & is stunned 2 see Ka smiling at him instead of praying.G goes out & stands.Ka also goes near him.
G:whats written in the letter?
Ka:did'nt u read?
G:yes.u where unconscious while u write it?
Ka:no,I was unconscious.i luv u jeeju
G is angry:u r mad
Both see K smiling at them inside the temple.they also smile.
G:kali…Ka:plz don't waste ur time by advising me.i'm strong in my decision
G:u r spoiling ur sister's life
Ka:I'm not that cruel.i don't want 2 destroy di's life.i wont tel u 2 desert di 4 me.but I want u
G is stunned

WHAT'L GARV DO?