TAMING OF THE SHREW-(RTMC)FF NEW PART PG 34 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice upadate..
Prithvi is so sweet.. and ash is the spoilt brat..😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
both parts were amazing

i just love aisha...omg kya ladki h apni shaadi mein song sun rhi h

or yeh prithvi to bdi jaldi us par flat ho gya

bhagman ne badi acchi jodi bnayi h oops bhagwan ne nhi hmari pyari si writer ne bnayi h pranita

i love u dear for ur description its fabulous

thank god ki shaadi mein koi gadbad nhi hui

or prithvi ko dining table par sona padega wo v apni first night ko gosh she wanted separated

arey koi isse samjhao shaadi ke baad prithvi ka room hi uska room h

haye uske dad ne blackmail kiya use shaadi ke liye

accha hua itna handsome prithvi to mila usse

oh god kitni foody h yeh ladki bt i love her n u also

promo is vry nice

ud soon
yeh part to bhot jaldi chahiye pls pls

luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing part...ur story is getting interesting day by day...i luv Ash's character...she is unique...poor Prithvi had 2 spend outside d room...bt waiting 4 some romance.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing... just amazing 👏 👏

what an update... it deserves "Kya baat, Kya baat... kya baat..." ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

@Pranita, I really love ur writing style it is just wowww, I was literally waiting for this update


One request to u dear ( I already requested u this earlier but still again...)

I love Prithvi nd for his sake, plz provide him d disaster manager PRIYA, he needed her to handle this toofaan called AISHA 😉 😉 otherwise he'll be DEAD 🤢 🤢 🤢. Poor guy behaving so nicely with his SHREW (i.e. wife) nd Ash is like... i mean y she is behaving so rudely wid him??? Girl, look at ur hubby, he is so handsome nd charming... nd u... plz give atleast a chance to him... when it is written in ur destiny that he is going to be ur future, ur love, ur life... bcoz now u r his wife 😆 😆 (mujhe pata hai main bahut ghatiya rhyming match karti hu)

One friendly advise to Prithvi:

U really have to work hard to TAME THIS SHREW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Rajat Tokas

Chocolate Cake





Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
first thing i m not a siggie maker. i even didn't know wat sigies r. but i had off this evening (everyone bunking for COCKTAIL )
a song suits aisha from cocktail

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fti8IomJw6U

Yo Yo Honey Singh

Mundiya Nu Jaandi Thari
Thari Thari Ohdi Heat Te
Marjani Paundi Bhangra

Angrezi Beat Te
Angreji Beat Te
Angrezi Beat Te
Angreji Beat Te

Ohde Silki Silky Waal
Nasal Di Gori Aa
O Chhe 6 Futt Di Muteyaar
Ganne Di Pori Yaa
Khafa Rata Ni Hundi

Kise Nacheez Te
Marjani Paundi Bhangra

Angrezi Beat Te
Angreji Beat Te
Angrezi Beat Te
Angreji Beat Te

O Khad Ta Jaa Tu Nedde Aa
Bai Eiddan Na Tu Gedde Kha
O Kahton Ehni Desperate
Sanu Sade Ke A Rate
Shoe Teri Da, Dress Teri Da
Ghadi Jo Layi, Guess Karida
Charo Passe Dekh Lai Kudiye
Charcha Hotness Teri Da

Nachdi Mainu Lagdi Shudain
Sachi Main Ta Ho Gaya Fan
Machdi Hikk Nu Sambh Kude
Ni Teinu Goverment Ne Kar Dena Ban
Mera To Salah Ek Lehla

Main Tera Majnu, Ban Meri Laila
Ban Meri Laila, O Meri Laila
Marjani Paundi Bhangra

Angrezi Beat Te
Angreji Beat Te
Angrezi Beat Te
Angreji Beat Te


Poori Beer Sheer Paa Ke
Rum Chada Gayi Oye
Marjani Nachdi Nachdi
Gota Kha Gayi Oye
Kehnde Hunde Kharabi
Peeti Neat Te
Marjani Paundi Bhangra

Angrezi Beat Te
Angreji Beat Te
Angrezi Beat Te
Angreji Beat Te
Angrezi Beat Te

Angreji Beat Te
Angreji Beat Te

Yo Yo Honey Singh


NOTE
so where was i yes that i have no knowledge abt photo editing and i don't even have a photo editing software on pc
but as i was free i felt doing some scribbling as my sis (who is master in photo shop. but just hersef n friends n ofcourse enrique iglesias ke photo editing she is interested)

told me site

but i m telling again my main motto was to have my words in form of banner. so there r absolutely no special charm in the banner. just my silly try .

so pls editing dekhe ke has na mat
Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 5


PART 6
silly attempt of my first editing
By pranita1202 at 2012-07-17


The dawn broke in with the sun peeping from the sky , to provide the light to avert the darkness of the night. The lush of the foliage around the castle were dancing to the tune of the morning breeze. The fragrance of the wet earth was swaying in the atmosphere. Birds were singing duet with their partners. All in all 'fultoo' bright morning after the dark rainy night.

Each new morning opens door to a new world , new vistas, new aims, new plans, new things , new troubles. Life begins each morning. Today this was literally true for two souls brought together.

Prithvi was sleeping on the couch on his stomach ,after lots 'fitting in' fight with the couch ,he eventually slept in.

With advent of the bright light as the grand hall wasn't curtained completely, the beams of sun light through the huge glass windows, made him to open his eyes, he stretched and sat on the couch .Even just rising from bed he was magnificently handsome, the fact of him being shirtless was nothing to with it.

He rubbed his eyes ,he spread his hands over the thick mass of the hair which were messed up as he had been in a fight. He yawned and then stretched his hands and got off the couch , he was seriously in need of a shower.

He ascended upstairs in quick pace,the bedroom door was slightly opened ,he knocked but no one replied, he needed to get his clothes from his wardrobe. He peeked in the room ; the bed was empty he slid inside ,sound of flow of water indicated she was in shower . He quietly moved and picked the remote control lying near the lamp stand and pressed the button towards the wardrobe door and the door slid and opened revealing the extravagant collection on menwear from formal to casuals. The left compartment with a number of white shirts hanged properly , the other section had formal suits accompanied with casual Armani jackets, entire upper half of the right section contained casuals, there were compartments where accessories as glasses, watches etc were accommodated ,remaining sections had other components. All in all it was the automated mega closet comprised of all the things which one can find in men's section of a mall.

Prithvi collected for himself casual black shirt and jeans and turned to move away from the wardrobe but was fixed at his position as if someone had nailed in his feet to the ground , his eyes were transfixed on something.

She was rubbing her face with large napkin ,guess she came doing so from the bathroom ,clad in white towel ,the fabric was rolled around body resembling a skin hugging strapless above the knee length dress ; she turned a back towards him and dropped the napkin aside and spread her fingers into her damp hair and flustered them around ,the act displayed her neck and her upper back ,she was doing it oblivious about someone's presence.

Though she wasn't doing this for longer than minute or two; but it seemed to be running in slow motions in his mind , his eyes were enjoying the generous treat , all the rational thoughts vacated his mind long ago , he was lost in her as she had done a magic spell on him , he was even afraid to blink ;scared to devoid himself even for nanoseconds to what he was looking.

Aisha turned towards him and almost undid the knot of the towel across her chest and was about to drop the towel when her eyes noticed pair of feet standing infront of her , she traveled her eyes upwards .She was taken aback by his presence , she tightly held the towel to protect it from revealing herself ,in quick moments she tucked the the sides of towel ,near her under arm , holding it with one hand ,she pointed a finger towards him and scolded out

"Wat the hell u r doing here!"

Her one shrieking sentence was enough to retrieve him back to reality, but he was amazed and couldn't help looking her cheek going red with anger ,her dark brown eyes (do tell me wat is mugs eyes color if it is not brown ) staring at him , wet black tendrils across her face. , she looked like angry mermaid recently transformed in human form. (rashu its 4 u , u said to describe our mugs as super something as did with prithvi's entry . hope a did justice to ur req)

Damn why u act like this around her. Its so not u. Mental note to himself water , white and this woman ,disastrous combination.

HE QUICKLY JERKED AND closing his EYES FACED OTHER SIDE .

P "I m so sorry . actually I m came here to collect my clothes''."

"And u thought u might get a free aftershower show" she completed

"No u r getting it all wrong . I' m really sorry , I ' LL leave now" and took quick steps to the door.

But he halted as aisha called him out

Ash "hey wait ,first tell where the heck r my things"

"They must be in here only . Look properly" he said without looking at here

Ash "u think I m blind that I might be unable to see the relatively big suitcases. Why don't u only find them for me . I guess the castle mice must have stolen them"

Prithvi "There aren't any unwelcome creatures in her .though the exterior is medieval , the entire interior is modernized"

"modernized! She repeated " U don't even have a LCD in here"

"Actually'" he was giving her the reason

"I don't want u to narrate me'my beloved castle' chanting . Just answer my question. And forgot sake look at me I m not the ghost from 'Grudge'". "Do I look like one? " she muttered to herself and tiled over the dressing table mirror to have a peep.

Prithvi turned towards her , her face was titled otherside.

He didn't know if she looked like a ghost or not .But he surely was spooked by her presence

He cleared his throat to get her attention , he didn't want himself to be lost again as he being attacked by a freezing gun and was frozen at one place eyeing her

"I had instructed my assistant to get u r suitcases in here , but I guess they have been delayed"

His reason caught her attention and she looked into his eyes and spoke in a soft tone initially

ASH "so wud u pls care to tell me . WHAT THE HELL I M GONNA WEAR"

PRITHVI "Fell free to use anything from my closet, I see to it u get ur things asap ."

And he quickly turned and went outside to save himself from the ultimate pain of talking to her when his mind may think of better things to do.

Prithvi just went to the guest room downstairs , the room was totally empty , he entered the bathroom. He stood under the cold shower , his clenched fist hit the tiles of the room under the flow of water . Wat the hell. Wats wrong with him. How he just simply lose his senses. In his 24 yrs of life never once he felt overpowered by any desire. So why now , she practically did nothing but just her presence shatters the strong glass of his self control ,all the rationality just go down the sink , he becomes a puppet whose actions controlled by her presence . So not cool!. He needed to nullify her effect on him. He let the water fall on his face by tilting the face towards the mouth of the shower.

Her glimpses ran through his mind , his eyes were shut but the combat he was giving mentally to relieve himself from thinking her (perceiving mentally) was evident on his face.

Frustrated ,he turned off the shower & leaned his shoulders back against the cold tiles.He resolved that he had to do something abt this tornado of feelings going on inside him.



Part 7

Edited by pranita1202 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey i m unable to view that page 😭 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

hey i m unable to view that page 😭 😭


how so dear just refresh it
may some network issue must b there as lots of pics r there
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update pranita and the pics r awesome

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