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thanks for updates n pm
sorry for late comment
part -4
so best planner hired for this wedding! kyu na ho prince of jaigadh's marriage hai toh!!
and pri teaching all required quick atikates to aish
but look to nose was very funny
i thought mugz crossing her two eyes prithvi dekhega toh chakkar khayega!!
so marriage (i will not called it wedding) went through rituals!! atleast minmal!! thts gr8!! jai ho his highness someshwar!! her highness of jaigadh should get into his highness prithiraj should be in grand way!!
hey bhagwan aish called it as show!! and make good show!! for priya!
priya is lucky this time!! ohh poor zila going senti n ash listen music
touched scene between deepak & prithvi!! yeh he is best for aish!!
awesome description of wedding (as it had planner hired)
me too missing touch of colorfulness in royal weddings as prithvi!!
but wht to do our princess choose white for her!!
prithvi thinking her shy not seeing or glancing him but at the same time remember his visit to her on staircase!!
poor fellow don't know aish engrossing in listening music!!
but priya had done very gr8 job! hatsup to pri
thanks to god and priya that all rituals went smoothly!!
he tied black thread in her neck not mangalsutra of gold n black beeds? Y? tht too aisha forgot to take with her!! i guess pri will bring it later for aisha
and wht a timing of song!1 heheheh😆
and my line of every update i give
goes for this line of urs!!👏
Aisha raised her eye lids to see the target where this flowery thing was suppose to be thrown.🤣🤣🤣
(thanks to priya as i told u in prevs comment too!! u know tht)😆
TUM KAMAL HO AISHA!!!!
😉
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part 5
chalo aish ko prithvi ne thoda toh impress kiya
. Aisha gave a appreciative glance walking towards it, she mumbled to herself , "cool , just like in Dark Knight; impressive!. ".
poor prithvi was opened door n expecting glance of appreciation from her
n madam is busy in thinking
. Wat the hell he changed clothes!, why on earth Pri didn't let her. So Not fair.

hehehe u gave me reason for saying "TUM KAMAL HO AISHA" in start
Aisha adjusted herself on the passenger seat , passenger seat sucks , the thought of the grabbing the wheel when he was out and hit straight to the club crossed her mind numerous time. But its not right to ditch the new hubby when he showing so much courtesy to open a car door for her which was kind of new for her .

hehehehe chalo thoda toh rehem khaya apne new hubby pe!!😆😆😆
poor hubby showing curtsey to bring umbrella but aisha enter before tht!!
again sleepless night ohhh😉
heheh our aish couldn't scared with anything
but she really worried abt prithvi's sleepless nights
tht y came again with sheet n pilow n offered him dining table😉😆😆😆😆 in his own castle!!
ohh aisha baby missing pri zilaa
me too😭😭😭 but ab mat yaha aana or else how will prithvi do tamming of his beloved wife?

and convo between ram & aish described very well!! is that of marriage or deal?
coz end was superb!!

"Pri I M getting married , so if u don't want me to collapse out of excitement wud u SERVE ME THE DAMN BREAKFAST"😲


so our aish choose luxery over freedom!! as her name means AISH!!
but know one can't harm her freedom!! lets see? how prithvi will tam HER HIGHNESS PRINCESS OF JAIGAD!!

u asked color of mugz/aish eyes
when she is in role of kinda of shera den i liked her as dark black eyes
but when some kind of sanyo it will do dark brown
only rashmi made me feel apt in blue but only when she is swazy n vampire n in love with shal😳


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haila fultoo fatak updates the...all 3,4 n 5...finally able to read all three parts...n they r fantastic
so prithvi recognised that she was the same whom he met at the stairs...n priya poor girl ash ko saari rituals samjhane pade
n loved the scene where ash changed her decision of not marring man so funny...n that morning scene super amazing...so prithvi ko kuch kuch ho raha h...pata nahi ash ko kab hoga
update soon
luv u...:-)
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thanks for update & pm
sorry for late comment
Part 6
first of all awesome siggy!!
but y u taken so sad rt's pic
areh u should take lost in mugz wala rt :-p
so he slept after lots of 'fitting in' fight with the couch
(perfect words)
was fixed at his position as if someone had nailed in his feet to the ground
heheheehe q na ho awesome nazara jo dekhne mila!! subah subah cuty wife k darshan!! didn't wink for a moment tht 2 for nano sec(i liked it)
haye aish tum kamal ho!!
"And u thought u might get a free aftershower show" she completed
And forgot sake look at me I m not the ghost from 'Grudge'"
first she scolds him & again ask y not he looking at her
bechara achhe tarah se dekh toh raha tha tumhe!!
and how will his cloths fit to her? but she can wear his t's
heheheh seems aish done spell on our prince!!
ohh he had to do something!! now me worried abt taming prani!!
and for this update!! PRANITA tum kamal ho!!!

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@shruja

ha ha 😆siggie no dear its just scribbling i did online while ago along wid the banner below wen i was free

he is looking sad ,dhyan nahi gaya sorry 😊
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PART-7
NOTE
I m telling again my main motto was to have my words in form of banner. so there r absolutely no special charm or skills in the banner. Just my silly try .

So pls editing dekhe ke don't start laughing . its just silly way so ur imagination can b triggered.

so don't judge just think as if some toddler (in this case me ) has scribbled a drawing with crayons



half only proof read so mistakes r likely

do read the above note n below message


Aisha descended through stairs , she was starving , guess we have already established that hunger makes her super cranky. Bare footed she wandered the grand hall searching for housekeeping staff so they atleast pay heed to her needs, but few of minutes of searching yet she found not a single soul , she muttered to herself "guess dad must have mistook 'M' for 'B' WITH LACK of staff guess he must be just millionaire instead of billionaire ,Dad shud have taken a deep insight before throbbing his decision on poor soul like me . Now where is the kitchen? ".

Aisha sauntered near the dining table , she spread her fingers through the wet mass of the jet black hair framing her creamy complexion face.

"Finally" she muttered eyeing in one direction , deviating the whole dangling mass of hair to her one shoulder with her hand she moved forward. The way the complete ebony strands of her hair were flowing through her left shoulder & her right shoulder displaying the white fabric she wore. Painted a perfect picture black and white both extreme color like her nature of being extremist that is doing every thing at a fullest level whether love , hate ,fight ,fun .

She finally landed herself in the kitchen, the kitchen was very prim and ultra modernised .Decades away from the decor of the remaining castle eventhough the castle wasn't typical cliche setting ancient buildings with spider webs and stony walls it was more like elegant but yet had a touch of post renaissance period ; meaning everything was refurnished but wasn't replaced. So the entire look was like a upto date museum ,looking brand new but with well maintained old things. But the kitchen seemed as if she has landed into the space age Jetson's kitchen . She so wished Irona correction ROSIE ,Irona was in Richie Rich. Wat the hell wats in the name just wished may be there was a robot to attend her needs.

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But that was not gonna happen; have to self help no one's here to spoon feed u , to be fed , wat m I a dog '..Ok ok not spoon fed ; to be provided super delicious plated food. Stop day dreaming! hunt for some sustenance else you are gonna faint.

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She moved towards sleek silvery double door refrigerator with a cool tablet on it. Aisha forwarded her hands to turn it on so she cud place a order from her favorite restaurant if anything inside the fridge won't appeal to her ,to her bad luck no net connection ,damn. Finally she opened the door ,was awestruck ,WAT THE FU ..FUDGE.

Nothing fitting the category of 'aisha edible' stuff .Wat on earth! aren't fridge defined as place to store stuff people can eat. So why on earth except for a 3 milk cartons, a opened pack of cookie there was nothing in the storage compartment ,just eggs in egg counter there was nothing. SHE opened the other door , it was filled with bottles and cans of aerated drinks etc . Does soda and flavored soda fit for breakfast ?????? Naaa. Booze may qualify for dinner when partying but not breakfast. NO no ; real food needed , she thought as her stomach was dismayed by the lack of contents in the fridge. Finally she explored the veggie/fruit compartment. Though she wasn't against fruits irrespective of her opinion that that raw veggie n fruits are for goats and cows after living more than 20 yrs on the earth she was pretty darn sure that she wasn't either of them , but hey can't judge when her stomach was honking with hunger.


Aisha just unloaded 2 cartonsofmilk and cookies and few apples ,with her hands packed with these things she turned to keep them on the breakfast platform

"need a hand " prithvi suggested leaning to the edge of the breakfast platform ,with slight moisture still damping his jet black hair ; making his black shirt a paler version. But his eyes ...the darkest among other things , they were darker than a moonless night ,and why they were fixed on her????????????????? .

Aisha nodded in disapproval and in quick steps unloaded the stuff she held on the platform. He is so fair , she reflected , it was flawless , must be smooth to touch.

And why on earth u wanna touch his face!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He is so... So... gorgeous .and here we go again wat is wrong with ur vocabulary ! can't able to identify proper adjectives for him?

Gorgeous! Gorgeous! Gorgeous!

When was the last time Aish u used this word ,on the top of that, thatto describe a man!. As a matter of fact wen have u used any adjective in a 'compliment sense 'for a man?????????

Never!!!!!!!!!!

No no not right time to change of habits now. Striking out "gorgeous".

So just "pretty boy" ; must be even "snobbish"

So decided "Snobbish pretty boy" that certainly isn't a complement.


Finally crossing her arms ,she complained "u have no proper breakfast"

After deviating his attention from her elegant face with the lush of the dampen hair not so elegantly left loose. But the unattended mass of hair did something magical to make her more beautiful. For that matter something could make her 'the most beautiful '...just a thing is missing... a smile on the pink luscious lips ,wonder how the lips might taste!

"Ahh..." he paused when he ran what she said in his mind coz when she actually was speaking to him; he was busy .

"There are flakes in the right cupboard" he said pointing out in the direction

Aisha simply turned to move that side and opened the cupboard and being on her toes she recovered the big box of flakes on the upper section

Idiot! , idiot! ,idiot!

He scolded himself why the hell you have to tell her to retrieve the box , shouldn't you have done that? Not for her or in sense of chivalry but to save yourself from the torture of seeing her in what she was wearing or shud say ...seeing her in what she was not wearing'.

With a closet full of clothes , no matter male clothes that weren't suitable for but she chose

that ...

Certainly suits weren't a option, but he had t-shirts though they won't have appeared different from wat she was wearing now. But they coupled with his "shorts or casual three fourths" would have done the trick. Ofcourse the shorts won't hold on here petite waist but hello never heard of a thing called as "belt"

But No; out the loads of outfits , she opted for his long sleeve white shirt only , just his long sleeve white shirt , showing of her exquisite legs generously .

When entered he had already decided to concentrate his attention her face not anywhere else, so that his mind wud b in place , which was kind of misplaced since last night . but to his disappointment her face too had a potent effect on him.


So don't look at her , if he walked blind folded in his house or closed his eyes in her presence would she notice.???

Stupid idea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Inorder to get himself busy in other things he quickly turned other side , rummaged through the drawers to draw out a glass and a bowl and spoons .

They both walked towards the platform and placed the respective contents , without looking at him aisha was examining the flakes label , she showed a expression of disappointment on face and said "they are not flavoured . I generally prefer chocolate "

Prithvi slid the bowl towards her but she wasn't looking at him , she in her own thoughts poked in the opening of the carton , withdrew few flakes in her hand , her other hand captured the open carton of milk .

The moment she placed the flakes in her mouth , she gave a expression as she is being tasting "chewable sand" , hastily she placed the milk carton from thin air back to the platform. Swiftly unrolled the tissue from the kitchen roll , and spat it out in the tissue ; then drawing more tissue she cleaned her tongue .

Prithvi was watching her in surprise as he didn't understood wats wrong.

After doing the process of getting the hideous taste of her mouth , she walked near the platform, she eyed prithvi and blurted "wat flavour they were ?? sand!"

Prithvi tried to answer her but she dismissed him with a quick hand gestureand planted the milk carton from the platform to her mouth , with her mouth bloated with the liquid , her eyes were wide and she gave the look when someone was feeling nauseous . In seconds she was leaned to the sink to throw up ,and washed her mouth . She turned and her view was blocked by prithvi who was looking at her anxiously .She felt kind of blocked by him. She raised her palm to tell him to back off a bit, he backed a step .

P "r u ok "

AISHA had already sidepassed him ,she was angry , Damn! one thing she hated when her morning brunch was not upto the mark. She was furious but too hungry too shout she flipped her head and turned to face him and pointing a finger towards him said , "Don't u have enough money to by fresh milk"

Prithvi questionably gazed at her 'Fresh milk' that damn one must have been the freshest , & FYI that thing was delivered from the industry first hand , his staff always made sure that all food and stuff would be of optimum quality. And may be she needed to be informed. But there is no need for prithvi to approachher "In your face" attitude . so he kindly said.

"sorry that udidn'tlike it. But I can assure u that that was the freshest sample of soya milk"

Aisha looked at him in kind of surprise ,she raised her both hands ,palm facing him and said at the same time , "wait wait . first tell me" , now placing her hand to her waist , with her fingers curling her side waist , making the white shirt slightly more clinging to her body and continued ,

"since when vegetables started giving milk ??? last time checked I guess two horned creatures ,wat r they called" now her finger tapping her chin acting as if she is trying to remember something , "ya ya I got it is either cow or buffalo rite . now don't tell me ,they are following the dinosaur trend. Damn hope Spielberg doesn't make another sequel like cattle park ehh.. no emm... buffalo park naaa JuCoLo park. Naa , I m not gud that this ; cud u suggest something"

P "first listen to me.."

A "EH"making sound of game show buzzer indicating wrong answer "wat kind of name is that for the movie"

Prithvi decided to over look this mockery replied her with a hint of humour , "the cows r f9 and I guess the buffoloes are too doing well"

Ash too reciprocated "so why on earth u have to make a poor plant to do something which nature has not designed it for "


There was no point in indulging himself into this silly argument no matter how appealing was it, to argue with her. So he cleared the air by saying , "listen my diet consist of all the necessary protein so I go for soya milk over the conventional one ,hence there is soya milk in the fridge , u might didn't liked the taste . so please tell me was u like; my housekeeper is on theway ; I might call her to inform abt u r requirements "

Ash was assimilating all data he was providing and said , "u r a dude and u r a vegan"

P "no I m not I just eat rite"

A "certainly not rite for me , anyways milk and choclate flavour flakes wud do. And Ya ...milk from a cow not other source , and pls wholemilk not some stupid skimmed one till then this wud do " she picked the apple and turned munching it and sat on the table. Prithvi went to study to make the call.

After some time when prithvi came downstairs , his attention was caught by the sound of commotion from the kitchen , he guessed that his housekeeper Mrs Sen must have arrived and had already started working . he so hoped the she must have provided aisha with breakfast or else tommorow's headline wud be " His highness Prithvi starving his new bride"


As he ascended towards the dining area , his eyes fell on her , clad in only his white shirt , she was engrossed in enjoying the the big bowl of flakes , taking big chunks of the stuff on the spoon and munching it as in she had no care of the world.

Yum ! chocolate makes everything better, she was so indulged in relishing her morning treat which certainly she didn't get on time , she enjoying the food with her favourite music , her phone was placed on the table , and the miniature headphones were tucked in her ears , due to that she cudn't hear the movement of chair and someone taking it.

(they were sitting face to face but not at the opposite head of table separated by the length but only breadth of table , hope u guys got it rite? )

Prithvi cleared his throat to get her attention , but cudn't get it as her head was leaned over the big bowl so the milk droplets won't fall on the table .

Prithvi moved her hand to tap her arm , this got her attention , raising her gaze her eyes fell on the male specimen dressed in raven color shirt , with midnight black eyes focused on her , his hair weren't damp any more. She sucked in her lower lip in her mouth , sooo to clear the trails of milk from her lip, not that she was feeling funny coz this was second time in the day she noticed his features , the day hasn't even started yet , this was nooo reaction to the tingling feeling in the pit of her stomach.No way , wil go with the milk trails option.

Damn it! now someone lost their appetite

"pancakes ma'am" the housekeeper placed the plate in front of, finally she looked at the mrs sen and then to her plate.

"o o its back"

She dugged in the treat with fork and knife and was munching the morsel , when it clicked ,actually her taste buds clicked.

When u had pancakes without maple syrup and its right front for you??????


"so even the appetite is back; your senses aren't !!!!!!!!!!Not good"


Finally she engrossed herself in the enjoying the pancakes ,she squeezed out the syrup , generously spreading over them, she indulged herself in enjoying the pancakes and shooing off the stupid thoughts from her mind.


"is she for real?" this thought kept on lingering in his mind. he meant wat is she ?she is so ...so... so... different.

Ofcourse she is different from every other girl he ever met , he was bratty , possibly impatient which was sooo evident through her sarcastic comments abt not getting her favourite food. Food ! yup food , she was literally attacking the food . How many woman for have u seen doing that, forget the same thing even eating with proper appetite . The female companions he had came across mostly used to nibble the food as if it was poisoned , generally into raw green stuff.

Here she was so passionate abt food , so when Mrs sen asked her wat she preferred to eat Aisha described it so animatedly ,prithvi just cannot take his eyes off her when she was replying with such a warmth and ease.

"ummm ok its actually very simple, as u can see I m too fond breakfast so it has to be really good , chocolate flakes ofcourse accompanied with typical other things like pancakes , scones or I love Punjabi or south Indian delicacies. Lunch... feed me anything delicious , will do .Dinner too anything though it might be not so delicious , but after; when it comes to dessert I m a super dessert freak , so it had too top notch absolute no consolation in that , so bottom line feed me foliage and fruits for the day but after supper I will expect chocolate brownie , fudge cake , ice cream n the list is long "

A "so do you have signal in your cell phone. I've got zero bars"

P "huh!"

Finally prithvi's thoughts were hindered , he noticed that they were alone in the room and her big brown eyes were directed towards him. Ash repeated the question.

P "Abt the the range , the thing is that u cannot get any wireless signal in here"

"why so?" she asked complainingly

P "for security purpose there scramblers around the castle ,so not wireless signals"

"so how I m suppose get in contact with the outer world , plz let me" with fake courtesy

P"I know it's a inconvenience but there is landline in the study and wired net line "

A "wat the fu...fu... fuss abt not having no cell connection , com'on we live in tech age , u r suggesting modes of communication of a stone age .

P "I m not saying send a letter through a pigeon"

A "HA HA , vegan dude made a joke "

P " I not vegan.."

A "then u must be lacto intolerant , that's why no milk for U"

"I m no..." wait a sec why was he having this argument abt nothing with her. So HE gave her sensible approach.

"Listen..."

"Don't wanna" she interjected him ,got on her feet was already moving towards the stairs ,plugging the head phones and heading the stairs to her room



PART 8

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Hey guys thanks 4 ur patiences

so the thing is that college has began in full swing now


as we all know at start of semester we r "vele" just enjoying doing nothing justchilling


but as term end comes closer we all go into workoholics.

final yr project ,assignmemts test n other stuff. so will b kind of busy infuture


.so update wil be late , already i m already "late latif " but now


plans r to be a "super late latif"


hope u enjoyed the update if not , do tell me if i have streched the scenetoo long.




i myself didn't thot that this scene wil extend soo much .


but as i was writing in portions daily n updating small parts, that why it turned outlong


but has only few scene shifts. had planned to write more but i m kind of busy next week so gave a quick finishing touch n updated


i just wish u guys enjoyed the update coz i only judge my writing on one parameter that my buddies have enjoyed or have died of boredom or 50-50 of the two options



PART 8



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now don't laugh its all u people's fault all u talented siggie makers r busy thats why bachhi ko scribbling karni padi
but this is the final attempt from now will pester the experts to make the siggie 4 me😊
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