TAMING OF THE SHREW-(RTMC)FF NEW PART PG 34

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Awesome, brilliant , nice parts
loved them

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disha

@disha15

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

OMG! 😍 loved it!Prithvi toh gaya 😉 Hope this aisha too falls for him SOON!

Loved the update Pranita!

Oh and happy bday RT <3

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rashmi gautam

@sweetsanyo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

res jii
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wow jii kinna shona update tha, haye, hoshh udd gye mere tho prithvi ki trah aisa romantic update dekhkr..

though romance only frm one side..

aaj main ash ki side nahi hun di,
coz she is being too rude prince prithvi..
dats nt fair, nt at all...

so aaj lagne wali h ash ki class..

ash tum samjhgti kya ho aapne aap ko..
president ki brti nhi ho tum,
itne taver tho koi aapne ghar main nahi dekhata, jinte tum yahan aapne sasural main dekha rahi hu...
😡...
tumhara bag h, prithvi ko kya pata kahan h??
politely baat kr rha h na voh tumse, .. den d ditch u r speaking such roasted wrds.. rude , u werr rude... i noe, papaji ne compell kiya tumhe wedding k liye..nahi , i will say marriage k liye, coz dis is the way it has to be...
tho, prithvi ko shuak nhi h, tum jaise crazy se marriage karne ka...

bechara phirr bhi, trying to fit himself in condt...
'
lekin, tumhe tho koi comprise hi nah chahiye, kissi type ka...

tumhe manners nhai h,
kaunse ghatiya skul main padhi ho tum...😡...
dare u behave dis way to prithvi...

di, mujhe bhott gussa aa rha h...ash prr..
i feel bad fr prithvi..😭...

di, as a punishment to ash..
aap kabhi na kabhi aisa sequel pakka dena,
wen ash will be a die hard lover of prithvi,

n prithvi will tease her...

aap karoge na?

vaise, aap herr baat mante ho meri...
haina...

acha laga,
MUGDHA THE MERMAID...
sunder lagg rhi h...

wow, kya scene tha, towel main apsara...
ooo...
bechara prithvi, enjoying his generous treat silently...

kya line thi yeh...
i ws just jumping imagining all dis,
really mind blasting...

thumbs up di.

one more thing...

ur description of d palace, tell.. really bring abt the picture of a royal modernized...palace...

awesome...

prithvi ka waking scene, wow, so hott...
awesome again...

lovely update di..

and u noe,m ek gadbad ho gyi...

yeh jo scene aapne rpithvi k liye dekhaya h,
dat same kinda kinda, scen i need to show fr swastika in coming uds of lovestry supernatural...

maine yeh scene pehle hi shruja di k saath discuss krr rakha h...

aap yeh nahi sochna ki maine cheating kiya, okey...

main cheating nahi karta, main acha bacha hun,

main sirf kartwati hun cheating...

😆...

god, all i noe is, prithvi k liye, dis journey is gona b a battlefield...

but prithvi ko tho jitne ki adat h😉.. he will win it..

but di ash ki punishment yaad rakhna plz...

lov u for dis ud,
and, simply bhi lov u...

ud soon,

cindy ff prr bhi mahrabani kijiye plz..

but i m loving tming d shrew too.

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago

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Nandini

@Nandini25

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

All the 3 updates are awesome

luvd them all

Ash n shy!!!

That'll b world's 8th wonder isnt it?

unique bride she is really. She is going through her wedding while listening 2 music!! I cracked up at the choice of music while exchanging the jaimala.

Bechare Prithvi ko pehli raat mein hi hall mein chorkar aa gayi!!!

Man! She is so rude! Prithvi is being so polite, so courteous n look at her.

She is hell bent on testing his patience.

I really want Prithvi 2 give her a piece of his mind or better still make her taste her own medicine.

update soon.

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Shreya

@sparksfly

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

all d 3 uds r brilliant!!!! ⭐️

luv ur writng style!! 👍🏼

srsly hilarious!!! 😃

Prithvi is spell bound by ash!!

he semms 2 b in a diffrnt world !! 😍

Ash's fathr blackmaild her!! sad!!

Pri is amzng!! ⭐️

Ash aapne pati se politly baat karo na...😉

oh God Prothvi's sleep sleep was funny!! 😆

d way her was LOST aftr seeing her in d towel...

true...ash+white+watr= deadly combo!!

n luvd dis line 2... went outside to save himself from the ultimate pain of talking to her when his mind may think of better things to do. 🤣

luv dis ff...n u 2!! 🤗

do continue soon!!

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

lovely update😃

haye prithvi kitna bhola h bechara usse yeh bhi nhi pta tha ki uski nayi nayi wife cahnge kar rhi thi...kitna innocent h hmara prithvi😆

but loved that scene..its my fav...maze aa gye us part ko padkar😃

loved it

aish is so cute mein to uski fan ban gyi hun is ff mein by god

wo jo bhi karti h i just love her n prithvi too😳

prithvi fall for her😃wow acche signals a rhe h shayad jald hi kuch hone wala h

prithvi ko dekhkar lagta h ki bhot romantic h but yeh aisha kya kahun😉

i loved this couple...unique h na isliye

haye bechara prithvi puri raat couch par soya...neend bhi nahi aayi hogi usse😕

apne husband ke sath koi aisa karta h kya😡

i love ur description as i said i love ur writing too

love u pls update soon kya karun excitement ho rhi h next part ke liye😛

update soon

love u😳

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@-The_Tomboy-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Wat a beauty!!! loved it!!

Was very vry very beautiful update!!

Aisha is so!! omg!!!!

Loved it!!!

Thank u for he pm!!

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo
res jii
~~EDITED~~

wow jii kinna shona update tha, haye, hoshh udd gye mere tho prithvi ki trah aisa romantic update dekhkr..

though romance only frm one side..

aaj main ash ki side nahi hun di,
coz she is being too rude prince prithvi..
dats nt fair, nt at all...

so aaj lagne wali h ash ki class..

ash tum samjhgti kya ho aapne aap ko..
president ki brti nhi ho tum,
itne taver tho koi aapne ghar main nahi dekhata, jinte tum yahan aapne sasural main dekha rahi hu...
😡...
tumhara bag h, prithvi ko kya pata kahan h??
politely baat kr rha h na voh tumse, .. den d ditch u r speaking such roasted wrds.. rude , u werr rude... i noe, papaji ne compell kiya tumhe wedding k liye..nahi , i will say marriage k liye, coz dis is the way it has to be...
tho, prithvi ko shuak nhi h, tum jaise crazy se marriage karne ka...

bechara phirr bhi, trying to fit himself in condt...
'
lekin, tumhe tho koi comprise hi nah chahiye, kissi type ka...

tumhe manners nhai h,
kaunse ghatiya skul main padhi ho tum...😡...
dare u behave dis way to prithvi...

di, mujhe bhott gussa aa rha h...ash prr..
i feel bad fr prithvi..😭...

di, as a punishment to ash..
aap kabhi na kabhi aisa sequel pakka dena,
wen ash will be a die hard lover of prithvi,

n prithvi will tease her...

aap karoge na?

vaise, aap herr baat mante ho meri...
haina...

acha laga,
MUGDHA THE MERMAID...
sunder lagg rhi h...

wow, kya scene tha, towel main apsara...
ooo...
bechara prithvi, enjoying his generous treat silently...

kya line thi yeh...
i ws just jumping imagining all dis,
really mind blasting...

thumbs up di.

one more thing...

ur description of d palace, tell.. really bring abt the picture of a royal modernized...palace...

awesome...

prithvi ka waking scene, wow, so hott...
awesome again...

lovely update di..

and u noe,m ek gadbad ho gyi...

yeh jo scene aapne rpithvi k liye dekhaya h,
dat same kinda kinda, scen i need to show fr swastika in coming uds of lovestry supernatural...

maine yeh scene pehle hi shruja di k saath discuss krr rakha h...

aap yeh nahi sochna ki maine cheating kiya, okey...

main cheating nahi karta, main acha bacha hun,

main sirf kartwati hun cheating...

😆...

god, all i noe is, prithvi k liye, dis journey is gona b a battlefield...

but prithvi ko tho jitne ki adat h😉.. he will win it..

but di ash ki punishment yaad rakhna plz...

lov u for dis ud,
and, simply bhi lov u...

ud soon,

cindy ff prr bhi mahrabani kijiye plz..

but i m loving tming d shrew too.

shant BHIM shant... ash bachhi hai, samjh jayegi...

Rashu plz chod de use, kahi bichari dar na jaye 😆 😆

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Sonali

@sonalimurat

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Pranita two updates at the same time

love u dear 🤗

loved both of part so much

those are awesome as always n hillarious

Liked ash's act look at the nose but here Prithvi was getting despirate to saw her eyes that 😉

finally he saw her beutiful eyes n here dumbo was listening songs ...this ridiculous Ash .. Bcoz of that idiot song u can't concentrate on Prithvi handsome face

She wanted to change but pri didn't allow her and she thought if his to been hubby could change then why not her 😆

in car .prithvi was thinking who gonnna talk first ...but good that prithvi started

but ash's answer ...she awesome yar ...her attitude really goingto kill prithvi

but I liked Prithvi ...how much he thinks about her

n in mansion ... He sacrifies his master bedroom and adjust himself on couch

when ash return back that time I thought she must been allow him to came inside his bedroom but instead of that she showed or suggest him huge dinning table 🤣

sorry prithvi ...but Ash should not behave like this

poor prithvi ...don'r worry dear ek din ye ladki tumhare pyuar me aise pagal ho jayegi bas sabkuch bhul jayegi .😆

she directly fell on bed her eyelids drowning ...me tooo felt same such as earth is mignetic field n I m attracting to bed wid so much force 😆

she had dream of her proposal day n she had to choose btw bank balance and freedom

and she choose money ..but don;'t worry Ash this is ur bestest decision u had take in life ...😃

ohhhoo what He saw ...Ash in bathrobe 😳

n he forgot to blink his eyes feared of loosing one precious seconds 😉

loved that scene

update soon

love u

Edited by sonalimurat - 13 years ago