OS: Her gift to him,as she lost her will to breath

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Sunara

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Nadia

@naddiya26

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Posted: 13 years ago

res by the way me first 😆

sorry i hope i didnot took your post 😕

read first part , very well written , you portrayed Khushi inner pain beautifully .

too sad that she try to kill her self , if she will stay with Anjali she will try to kill her self.

you made me cry dear 😭 her pain is not bearable now, but in dont want she try to kill her self

PS she is 25 as they showed in contract marriage yesterday

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monsi08

@monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

WOW... !

Why did u stop.. 2nd part pls ???

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zaibun un nisa

@saima4744

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Posted: 13 years ago

😉both parts r fabolus mind bloing😉

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG depressin :/ beautifully written :D hope u do con this x

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monsi08

@monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ohh... narration was fab..
but death is not the solution... she has to gather herself and leave everyone and start a new life...

but anyways.. since it's your story .. I cant change the ending 😛

But I loved the OS... in fact to be frank I dont really like Sad endings.. but I am annoyed so much since last nite.. I am liking all of them for my sadistic pleasure... 😕

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

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Posted: 13 years ago

gosh that was too emotional for me to handle

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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

it was so heart wrenching...beautifully written

I do not have an answer to your question. But this reminds me of something a very strong women who has faced a lot of hardships told me.." its very imp in this world that women are willing to go a lil extra mile for women even if they r complete strangers...not to say men do not suffer but the this world is hard on women"