OS: Her gift to him,as she lost her will to breath - Page 2

su just loved both the parts..

Amazing! Loved portrayal of khushi's feelings.

oh god that was so sad my tears wouldnt stop after reading this piece
not surprised that she committed suicide after he brutally shred her heart into little pieces but hopefully she wouldnt do that
by the way that would be the best punishment for ASR that he never see her again & suffer for the rest of his miserable life
but we viewers dont wanna suffer that so hopefully they will just be separated from each other
hope you do continue if not thats okay
thanx for pm

Fab OS!Both parts are beautifully written.

I couldn't stop my tears😭😭😭 Wow! you have captured Khushi's emotions beautifully.Khushi has always been thorugh a lot for no fault of hers. She lost her parents, was blamed for her sis's marriage break-up,was blamed for her sis-in-law's failed marriage(surprisngly Shyam is still not considered to be the snake he actually is), was always termed as a gold digger.But inspite of all this all she ever did was love---Love her adopted parents,buaji,love her in laws even that mami,love her husband who doesnt deserve it at all. She risked her life for him and this is her reward, being blamed for evrything.She is truly heart-broken.So even if she tries the extreme step, i sympathisize with her,cry with her and though I do not believe in running away from life but I just cant find it in my heart to condemn her.

U made me cry sunara 😔
m against suicide..it shows weakness of character..bt mayb smtyms thngs gt so dreadful n bad n hopeless n painful that d heart cnt tk it nemre n wants to die..dats wat has hppnd to khushi..her pain was so well described..*sob*
i do want u to cntinue this..atleast anothr part..