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will be waiting.. update soon😊
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Maan: No…….. you go and take rest……….. Good Night………..

Geet: Good night………

Geet goes to her room and sits on her bed……..

Geet (self talk): Kaisi jalli hai tu….. Can't you see and do things…… What was the need to just keep on looking at him…….. What he must be thinking…….. and now going for a party is another shock…….. I am excited, nervous….. kuch samaj nahi araha hai mujhe……..

While thinking she went to sleep….. Next morning she woke up early and made breakfast and coffee for Maan…… She herself got ready and came to the breakfast were Maan was already sitting……… Geet looked at him… He was busy reading newspaper and having breakfast…….. He not for once looked at Geet……

After a while when Nakul called Geet that is when Maan noticed that even Geet was standing there………

Maan: Geet…… why are you standing there??? Have your breakfast fast…….. Then we have to leave for office also…..

Geet sat but was not only playing with the food which was noticed by Maan……

Maan (self talk): What is wrong with this girl……… and then called Geet…… Geet………. Kaha dhyan hai tumhara…….. breakfast kha lo…. Late ho rahe hai………

Geet: Ha….. who mujhe aap se baat karni hai……..

Maan: Hmm………

Geet: Who aaj ki party mai………

Maan: Ha we will go together from here…….. You can leave office early and I will pick you up by 7.00……

Geet just nods her head…….. They leave for the office…. The whole drive was silent…… Geet was busy checking Maan from the corner of her eyes while Maan was busy with his laptop……… The whole day went in the work…… Geet left from office early…….. She reached home and had a shower and was standing near her cupboard………

Geet: What should I wear?? It will be a very big party…….. She start looking at all the dresses…… Will he like if I wear this dress…. No I don't think so …….. Then what should I wear…… then she found a very beautiful red and white combination dress…….. Ya think this will look good…….. I will wear this……….

She wears red and white combination dress and does a minimal make up and was ready for Maan to come…….. She was sitting in the hall waiting for him watching TV……..

It was almost 7.30 and Maan had not come……….

Geet(self talk): He is never late…… then how come he has not come yet… .. good that I am ready and waiting for him nahi to pata nahi kitna sunate the mujhe if I would have been late……..

Her thought was broken by the voice of Maan who was talking on the phone…….. Her heart beat increased and turned to see Maan walking…..

Maan did not notice Geet and went towards his room to get ready……..

Geet went to the kitchen and made coffee for him…….. She was thinking whether to go his room to give coffee to him or not after yesterday's incident….. She decided to tell Nakul to give the coffee to Maan……..

Maan got ready and asked about Geet to Nakul to which he replied that she is in Kitchen….. Maan got furious and told Nakul to go away……..

Maan (self talk): I had told her to be ready now what is she doing in the kitchen??? I was late then also she is not ready……..

He came down screaming: Geet, Geet……..

Geet who was in the kitchen keeping things properly came running: ji….

Maan saw her and was totally lost in the angelic beauty of Geet…… The way Maan was looking at her Geet became more conscious and started looking at herself from down to up……..

Geet (self talk): Kya hua sab theek to hai na…… yeh aise bhoot ki tarah kyu khade hai……… abhi to chilla rahe the……

Geet went near him: Maan sir…….. What happen??? Why were you screaming………

Maan came out of her trance and looked at her: Ha…..

Geet: Kya hua……

Maan: Nothing…… are you ready…… we are getting late……..

Geet: I am ready since 7.00……

Maan: Ohh I am sorry…… I got late…… Lets go………

They both move out to go to the party……… They reached the party and Geet remembers the last time incident which happened with her…… Before entering the gate she just stops there…… Maan notices the change of expression on her face and he understand what must be bothering her…….. He holds her by her shoulder….. and said Geet I am there nothing will happen…… tum apne man se dar nikal do…… While Maan was making Geet understand someone was watching them with furious eyes…….. that was none other then Pari………

Pari (self talk): Who is this girl with Maan…… I could never see him with anyone…….. Now just see how I humiliate her……..

Geet was much satisfied and they both entered the party……..

Geet did not leave Maan's side at all…….. They were greeted by Rishab and Pari…… Maan introduced Geet to them……..

Maan spoke nicely with Rishab but ignored Pari which hurted her lot……

Geet got mixed with other people around….. She was talking to others when Maan met with one of his old business client….. He got involved talking to him………

Geet who was later on sitting on one of the table and was looking at others…….. Pari noticed that and went near and sat near her……

Pari: Hi…….. I am Pari

Geet gave a smile: Hi…… Geet here

Pari: why are you not having anything…… she calls the waiter……

Geet: I don't drink……..

Pari: But this is just a cold drink…… you can definitely have this……

Geet accept the drink but least she knew what was next thing that was going to happen……… Pari had already instructed the waiter to mix some alcohol in the soft drink……….

Geet had that cold drink and something hit her…

Geet: Hey this is very good…. I want more…..

Pari: Ya sure why not…… she gave her the other drink………

In the mean time the music started……..

Geet in totally drunk state: Nice music……

Pari: Why don't you dance…….

Geet: Me…..

Pari: Ya come…… She took her to the dance and made her dance and then left from there………..

Everyone was looking at her….. She was not able to stand properly here she was dancing…. Many of them were enjoying some were starring at her…. Maan could see all looking at one place and as soon as Maan looked at the direction he was stunned……….

Geet was doing all sort things which she would have never done in a norma circumstance…….. Pari was looking at all this standing at one of the corner……… Maan got angry and went near Geet……….

Geet was totally talli……..

Geet: Maan sir come come let us dance….. this is so fun………

Maan: Geet What are you doing………

Geet looks at Maan: Dancing………

Maan: Behave yourself Geet…..

Geet still was caring a glass in her hand and dancing……

Geet: This is too good (showing the glass)

Maan smells the glass: Geet what are you drinking???

Geet: Soft drink….. you also drink it is very tasty……..

Maan gets more angry with Geet behaviour….. But at present he need to take Geet away from there before she creates other scene………

Maan: Geet lets go………

Geet: No I want to dance……..

Maan forcefully takes Geet away from there…… He was angry thinking that Geet must have herself had the drink but his second thought said why would she drink……..

While all this tamasha was going on Pari went away far away so that Maan does not look her

Pari: Maan 1st time I had failed to make you mine but now not anymore…. I won't fail this time…… 1st time I used Dev just too make you mine but I failed but this time I will ensure no one comes between us……..

On the other side…… Maan made Geet sit in the car…… Geet started singing this time………. and was moving her hand and singing Humhe tumse pyaar kitna hum nahi jante par jee nahi sakte tumhare bina...

Maan : Geet sit properly and stop singing...

Geet: You also sing with me…… ha ha ha

Maan: She is going to make me mad……. There is no point to tell her anything………

Geet: What are you talking to yourself…….. Talk to me……… no no we will sing song………

Finally they reached home……..

Maan: Geet move out of the car…….. We have reached home……….

Geet: No………….

Maan (angry tone): Geet…….. move out……..

Geet: Humesha gussa karte ho………. I will not come with you...

Maan went to the other side of the door and opened the seat belt and carried her in his arms and close the door with his leg……….

Geet: Mujhe chodo, chodo mujhe……… I will not come with you………

Maan got very irritated: Geet shut up…… and if you made any noise then just see………

Geet like an obedient child kept her finger on her mouth and kept looking at him……..

Maan took her to the room and placed her on the bed…..

Maan: Now go to sleep……….

Geet: No…….. you sit here………

Maan: Geet…… sleep………

Geet pulled Maan and made her sit…..: Now talk to me…….

Maan(irritated): I am feeling sleepy…… you also sleep…….

Geet: I want to talk to you……..

Maan: We will talk tomorrow………

Geet: No….. you know I always want that you talk to me nicely but you never talk with me nicely…… humesha gussa karte ho…….. You know mai taras jati hu aap se baat karne ke liye………

Maan: Geet we will talk tomorrow (self talk): Sharab ka asar chada hai isse abhi……..

Geet: I Love you Maan sir………

Maan was stunned and shocked to hear this…… He just kept on looking at her….. By that time Geet was fully drowsed and so she closed her eyes and fell on the bed……

Maan still could not believe of what he heard…….. He made Geet sleep properly and tuck her with blanket……… He closed the light and went to his room……… He got lost in the words of Geet………

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Posted: 13 years ago
Yay me first...
Awesome update...
Talli Geet ... pareshan maan...
So at last Geet ne bol hi diya I love u
Edited by mansi.tripathi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
finally geet said ILU to maan in drunken state
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Posted: 13 years ago
pari bi... made geet drunk and wanted maan geet confessed in drunk state



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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...👏
Talli Geet ... pareshan maan...😉
So at last Geet ne bol hi diya I love u 😳
continue soon😊


yipeee me a senior member now🥳 congos to me



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Edited by drashtirocks1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
So talli geet ne finally ilu kaha...i hope maan usse seriously le!!!!
Cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update..
i hope maan vl cum to noe that pari s behind ds..
geet blurted out her feelings!!!
nw maan vl surely ignore her..
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wow lovely update...pari u did a good job...talli geet and bechare my maan...geet confess her love to my maan...wow now wat my maan will do ...

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