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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi,

I'm Zahran...and this is my very first attempt to do something creative...

so wish me luck and support me...

this ff contains all my efforts to make the characters look more and more irresistible...😉😉

So hold u'r breath for the...

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Monali

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Posted: 14 years ago

hi...congo on ur first ff...cont soon n do pm me

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

Congratz dear
waitng for u to start it sn

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Dona

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Posted: 14 years ago

congrats on the first ff...

cont soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 1 - soon..Page 1
Character sketch:Page 2
Part 2 - Page 6
Part 3 - Page 11
Part 4 - page 16
Part 5 - Page 19
Part 6 - Page 23
Part 7 - Page 27
Part 8 - Page 3o
Part 9 - Page 34
Part 1o - Page 4o
Part 11 - Page 5o

part 12 - Page 58
Part 13 - Page 68
Part 14 - Page 83

Part 15 - Page 96
Page 16 - Page 114
Part 17 - Page 121

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It was a dark room...rather say a gigantic room with just moon light...every thing was at place...PERFECT...except a girl at her late teens was sitting just by the large size half open glass window...despite of being in her messy form how she manages to look the most pretty girl anyone has ever seen is a wonder to all ...messy hair was doing wonder to her cute face...there was no stunning mess instead there was innocence all over written there...she was lost...somewhere...like a caged golden bird...locked up forever and ever and...ever...

Her Chain of thoughts were broken when two manly hands engulfed her into a massive back hug.she got stiffed at the hold...his every act reflects acute possessiveness...He placed his head above her head...cause he was too big for her or she was too timid for him.kissing the side of her head he took the brush from her hand and started brushing her hair.

''Hmmm...still there were i left u in the morning...na jaan?why r u doing this...u know na i love u...then why r u doing this...''

Facing her to him he stopped for a moment ...how can anyone look that cute...he cursed himself for not recognize his life for the first time...

''u know i can never get used to ur beauty GEET''saying this he leaned forward to kiss her...but stopped as she placed both of her hand in between them.

With great difficulty she manages to say something which he didn't even hear properly.

''u know na after ur operation u have to practice talking without sign language.but after a month u know na its for ur healing...''but he was cut short in the middle by her one word...

''...D...D...DEV...''

...Silence...

THUDDD...!!!!!

A tight slap on her face...by The MAAN SINGH KHURANA.The business tycoon...people shiver in front of him to say even a word.and here he desperately wanted to hear her voice for the first time but...

IT was with so force that she fell on the ground.

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Edited by Temporary99 - 13 years ago