Madly In Love With You...

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Hey guys... I am planning to write a FF on my favorite and cute couple ARVI- Arjun- Purvi. They both are rocking in the show PR nw, and have so many fans for them. I will start out in a simple way since it is my first FF of ARVI if u guys like then plz do comment I do need all your support 😊 In this FF both ARVI will be in INDIA...

Kirloskar's are rich people living in Mumbai...
Arjun Kirloskar: Age 24. Handsome and stylish makes all the girls go crazy with his cute smile and the way he talk. He done his software education wants to become an world famous model. He loves his family alot but sometimes doesn't enjoy life and gets little annoyed with his dad discipline behavior. He is very good in heart but doesn't believe in love until he meets his soul and will fall in love...

Digvijay Kirloskar: Aged 56. Big business tycoon, loves his family but doesn't give enough time to them as his business is important to him he is good at heart, strict and disciplined because of his status...

Ashna Kirloskar: In here she is not dead. Aged 47. Loves her family for her the world is arjun. She always gives him good advices and more friendly person who can understand anybody. She is waiting for her Bahu so that her son can change and enjoy his life with love.

Purvi Deshmukh- Aged 22. So beautiful and bubbly character who can turn all evils and dark into colorful and cheerful life. She have a most beautiful smile and preety eyes which speaks million words which make any guy to fall for her. She did her MBA for her mother and father but she want to become an dancer.

Archana Deshmukh- Aged 45. Loves her 2 daughters and also taught them the right path and support them. Wants her daughters to live a happy life and praying god to send her daughters a good groom.

Manav Deshmukh- Aged 50. Loves his family alot, very possessive about his family and always stand by them in hard times. He is looking for a nice/ safety community to live because, he just got transfered from the company he worked.

Teju Deshmukh- Age 25. She is older than purvi. Loves to drive bikes and cars and talks alot and very straight-forward. She will fight with guys if they try to flirt with her younger sister because, she loves purvi alot. She is very mature and bold.

All this is happening in MumBai... Other characters will be introduced according to the story...

Deshmukh's:

Archana: Purvi, Teju wake up... you are getting late for breakfast...
Teju: Mama.. let me sleep because, Im going to work with papa today wake ur other princess dekho kaise sorahe hai... She have to find a job not me...
Archana: U both need to wake up since we are moving to our new house na chalo uthooo...
Purvi: Opened her beautiful eyes slowly and had smile in her face and woke up and said...good morning mama y we have to leave this house I will really miss this mama because, its alot of good memorizes hai naa jiji...then she saw tej who was lying funnily and she started giggling... and want to tease her so she went near teju and screamed in teju ear... teju got freaked out and she started hitting her with pillow, now both started fighting with pillow like kids and laughing.
Archana with a smile on her preety face saw her two little angels have grown big but, still behaving like kids and prayed god that they both should have a happy and sucessful life. Just then Manav came in because of the noise...
Manav: Arre ye kya horaha hai bachoo, archana tum kaha ho... just then he saw her laughing at their daughters and went near them.
Manav: Archu, wat happened why r they behaving like this and why are you laughing at them instead of stopping...
Archu: Manav this is their part of enjoyment, let them enjoy na look both are looking very happy. Manav I just wish god should bring a good groom for both our daughters who will love them very much, give them respect, and keep them happy.
Manav: Haan archu, dont worry I cant believe they grow up so fast, and ofcourse one day they both will find their life-partners who will love them and keep them happy they are still my little angels he said by hugging archu and both watching the girls play and both he and archu joined them and hugged each other and all thanked god for having a good family.

Kirloskar's:

Achna: Arjun beta... how long will you sleep, papa ke sath office jana haina utho beta... jalte.
Arjun: Mom pls office is so boring is not my type pls sone do na...
Achna: If ur dad comes to know he will get so upset because, for him discipline and seriousness is important na arjun.
Arjun: Mom pls dad is always running behind business atleast his son can sleep peacefully... after he said this he woke up wit his cute smile and yawning and kissed his mom sayin good morning.
Achna: Good morning my baby, I can't believe my son has grown up looking really handsome teasing him and kissed his forehead.
Arjun: I knw im handsome because, I have the most beautiful mother in the whole world he said by hugging her and said I love you mom...
Achna: Love you too beta... now get ready fast me and ur father will be waiting for you in breakfast table k..
Arjun: O.K. mom ill be there in 20 mins.

At the breakfast table:
D.K: achna arjun kahain hai, is he still sleeping...
achna was coming downstairs... said no he is getting ready.
Achna: D.K why you are always throwing tantrum at him in discipline u knw he is our only son and will always be disciplined.
D.K: I know but I just need to make sure he won't forget this and maintain our status so, that people should never bad-mouth him u know.
Achna: I know D.K but he should need some time for himself and also let him enjoy his life too na he is going to live a life... by her saying arjun came down to breakfast table and said good morning to his dad.
D.K: Arjun please be sure you always maintain your discipline which is very important.
Arjun: yes dad... im sorry... by saying this all 3 had breakfast when D.K and arjun got ready to go achna put bhagwan's prasad on d.k. and arjun forehead after d.k went to his car arjun told his mom...
Arjun: mom u knw I dnt believe in god and this puja and all (he was about to rub his forehead when achna hold his hand frm doin it)
Achna: I knw u hate it bt, I do believe in god and for my sake u need to keep it pls dnt erase it o.k beta...
Arjun: ok mom only for u...smiling at her, he kissed in her cheek saying love u and also achna mouthed love u too... and after d.k and arjun left the house achna was praying to god saying...
Achna: God u gave me a wonderful family, these mens are my soul. I want arjun to fall in love with a beautiful, caring and understanding girl who can teach him what is responsibility and love so that they both should live an happy life, Bring my arjun his happiness god...

Precap: Deshmukh's moving to their new house where the Kirloskar are staying currently...

Guys pls tell me how do you like my FF need your support friends...
Will update soon tomm...

😳 for the mistakes pls do comment...




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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Ekta maam..if you are reading this, you should consider this member as one of your CV.

Good start. 👏
Keep it up 👍🏼.
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That was awesome!!!!😃😃😃
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wow i love this beautifully written.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you people for the support and I am happy you all liked my FF
ARVI rock alwys❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyy it ws superb...all r in mumbai and ashna is nt dead...ur ff is gonna b a big time hit...waiting for nxt post...and also waiting fot arvi to meet...btw i luvd ur title:madly in love wid u...truely awesome...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey darsh grt start
i jst loved it ryt 4m ur title "MADLY IN LOVE WITH YOU" intrstin
m glad ashna stil alive in dis ff
n manav archana 2gthr
ur ff seems 2 b realy intrstin
keep up d gud work
do cntinue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very good, keep up the good work. Can't wait for Part 2 👍🏼
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An excellent start yar!! Keep Updating!!
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well written.. loved the title.. MADLY IN LOVE WITH YOU...

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