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Posted: 13 years ago
mindblowing update loved it a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb

Geet is loving Maan.. but whn Maan will respond it to her? Pari -- wht is her role exactly that Maan lost Dev..

Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful part...
so
finally geet accepted that she loves maan...
please continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...geet loves maan...good good...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Geet: nothing and just walked away from there……

Maan: Pagal hai………. totally…….. then again his mind got diverted to the person who came to the office…….. (self talk): What was Pari doing in office…… I will not leave her now because of her I lost Dev……

It was a normal day in the office……… Geet was as usual in her dreamland of Maan…….. when Maan entered her cabin as he had already called her many times and Geet had not responded at all…… Maan finally got angry and walked to her cabin where she had a pen in her hand but was lost somewhere………

Maan: Geet

Geet did not gave any response………

Maan's temper rose high and screamed: Geeettt……..

Geet got scared and got up from the seat making fall 2 to 3 things…… Maan just nodded his head in denial…….. Geet quickly picked up the things and kept it on the table……

Geet: Yes sir……….

Maan (angry): I have been calling you since last 15 minutes where the hell were you lost……..

Geet (without even thinking): In you………..

Maan: What???

Geet: I mean sir….. I was thinking about the files which I was suppose to give you……….. Sir you need anything…….. you could have called me….. I would have bought it in your cabin…….. you need not have come here…..

Maan: Geet I have been calling you since last 15 minutes but you were in your dreamworld……… Now if you are done with your inspection can I get recent project file………….

Geet: You want now sir……….

This angers Maan more: no tomorrow……… I came here to take file which I need tomorrow……….

Geet: I am just asking you…… Why are you getting so angry……….

Maan: You are impossible Geet…….. Can I get the file……….

Geet takes out the file and gives it to him………. Maan takes it roughly and walks out of her cabin…… Geet sits down on her chair……….(self talk): Hey Babaji…….. Why is he always ready to eat everyone…… He could have asked softly also na but no…… agar pyaar se baat kar le to who Maan Singh Khurana kaise ho sakte hai………..

While she was cribbing the door just opens and Palak comes in……

Geet: What are you doing here at this hour???

Palak: Actually I had come here to take you………

Geet: Where??? And that to now…… Madam my office hour is not over yet……….

Palak: By the way what were you doing????

Geet: Nothing……. Galiya sun rahi thi………

Palak giggles: Kya Geet…… If this goes on between you and Bhai how are you going to tell him that you love him………

Geet: Are you mad…… I am not going to tell him anything and you are also not telling him…… samji tum………

Palak: Geet…… But you will have to tell him one day……….

Geet: Tujhe kya kaam hai bata…… Where are you taking me………. I will have to take permission from sir……..

Palak: Chalo even I have to tell you both something……

Geet: What???

Palak: Chal to…….. and Palak took Geet to Maan's cabin……….

Maan was very much engrossed in his work……. When Palak called him out……….Maan looked at both of them: Palak you and in office…….. any specific reason………..

Palak: Bhai….. actually I need your permission……….

Maan knotted his eyebrow asking what permission…..

Palak: Bhai the social service group which I am working for is going to a small village to help the poor…. So I have to go with that group….. It is for a week………

Maan: Palak you should have told this to me in at home…… I don't think you must have known this now…… and then turning towards Geet….. Geet why did you not tell me……..

Geet: I was not aware of this….. and anyways sir…….. she is doing this for some good cause…….. you should give her permission………

Maan (angry): I know what I should do and what not…….

Geet: I just told you….. isme itna gussa karne ki kya baat hai….. jab dekho tab gussa...

Maan: Geet...

Palak: Hey stop it... I have come here for something and you both started fighting...

Maan: Theek you go……….

Palak: Thank you Bhai………. Acha I am taking Geet with me for doing some shopping……..

Maan: Ya take her….. waise bhi pata nahi dhyaan kaha hai is ladki ka subha se……..

Before Geet says something else Palak took Geet away…… They both went and did some shopping and Palak would tease Geet and Geet would imitate Maan…… They were enjoying themselves by doing shopping……..

In the office there was a meeting for Maan…….

Maan entered the conference room and was stunned to see Pari sitting with Rishab…… Rishab was their old client…… and Pari was Rishab's fianc working with him……… Looking at Maan, Pari gave a smirk smile and Maan was fuming with anger………. Maan was about to say something but Adi stopped him to say anything………..

The conference went on well but Maan was very frustrated with the idea of working with Pari…….. After the meeting was concluded Rishab invited Maan to come to the party which they have kept…….. Everyone from the business world was invited………. Maan tried to say no for coming for the party but with a pressure from Rishab he said yes………

When they were about to leave Pari said

Pari: See you Maan……. I mean Mr. Khurana at the Party…… We will be waiting for you……….

Rishab: We will surely be waiting for you……….

Maan just gave a nod to Rishab and ignored Pari………..

As soon as they left….. Adi noticed that Maan was very angry and Adi tried to make him understand that he should attend party………Maan told Adi to join him but Adi said that he cannot as he has to go out for 3 days……

Later at home Maan dropped Palak at the place to the pick up point where everyone was going to get gathered………

Maan gave her all sort of warning to take care of her and if there is any problem she has to only give one call and he will be there…….. Palak calmly noted all the advice given by his beloved brother……… Geet also wanted to go but was stopped by Palak and Maan both so Geet had no option but to stay back home………

So now only Maan and Geet were alone left at home…….. Geet was getting bored as no one was there to talk to her……… Maan had returned back and asked for his coffee in his room…… He did not noticed that the servants had already left to their quarters………. Geet heard him asking for coffee……….

She prepared it and took the coffee to his room…… She knocks the door for 2 to 3 times finding no answer she went into his room…….. His room door was open for the servant to come and keep the coffee…… She looked here and there but could not find Maan anywhere……

Geet (self talk): Yeh kaha chale gaye…..

She was about to keep the coffee……… when she sees Maan coming out in his night suit wiping his hair……… Maan had not noticed Geet but Geet was just get lost in him……… Her throat gets dry seeing him…… She feels like touching him then and there……… She was so lost in Maan that she did not even realise that while keeping the coffee tray is not been kept on the table properly and the coffee mug falls on her foot……

That is when her trance is broken and Geet screams

Geet: Ouchhh…… as the coffee was too hot and it fall on her foot……

Maan turned and saw Geet sitting on the floor holding her leg…. He came to her…….

Maan: Geet kya karti rehti ho tum……….. roz roz kuch na kuch hota rehta hai……. And what is this………. Apne aap pe garam garam coffee ghira diya…… And why did you got coffee where are servants gone…….

Geet: Who……. Their work had finished so I told them to go to their quarters……

Maan: How can you???

Geet: So are they suppose to stay till the time you return………. Do you have any time for returning…………….

Maan: theek hai theek hai……..

Geet was about to move but Maan stopped her and went and brought the medicine box and applied the medicine……. Geet was lost in his touch…….. While applying the medicine Maan asked

Maan: By the way Geet……. What has happen to you since morning…. Tum itni ajeeb si behave kyu kar rahi ho………..

Geet broke her trance and look down: Ji kuch nahi………..

Maan: Kahi tumhe koi pasand to nahi agaya hai……. Jiske khayalo mai khoi hui ho……..

Geet just moved her leg and fumbled saying: Nothing of this sort is there……….

And got up and started moving……..

Maan: What is wrong with her???? Geet …….. sambhal ke jana…….. otherwise again you will bang somewhere………….

Geet just turned and gave a angry look to Maan………. Geet was about to move out of room……….. Maan remembered something

Maan: Geet wait………

Geet: Yes………

Maan: By the way Geet, be ready tomorrow…. We have to go to party……..

Geet: Party??? But I am not been invited……… then How can I come…………

Maan: You are coming with me and anyway I can't leave you alone at home as no one is there…………

Geet: But I will stay alone……… I know to take care of myself………….

Maan: Yes I can see that……… so be ready tomorrow……….. and ha send someone to clean this coffee……..

Geet: Should I make a new coffee for you……….

Maan: No…….. you go and take rest……….. Good Night………..

Geet: Good night………

Precap: Party and Pari doing something











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Posted: 13 years ago
me first yipppeee

awsome update
because of pari
dev died
now pari is back
geet full on maan ke pyar mein pagal
nd payal gonre to some village nd geet hurt herslf

nd maaneet going to party
precap seems interesting
Edited by uteem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hum jaanthi haina geet tho chalthi phirti disaster hai..
lovely part waiting for party

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