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Posted: 13 years ago
I just love the title... heart of sea.. what's this Dev matter? I hope Maaneet accept their love soon and get married sooner...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear!!!
Loved it...Hope Maaneet accept deir feelings soon!!!!
plzzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago






Geet(self talk): What happen to him suddenly…… In the morning everything was fine………. I can never understand him…… Chal Geet be ready otherwise one more round of firing will start………

They leave from Mumbai to go to Delhi…….. The whole journey was quite………. Geet was totally confused with the change of behavior of Maan………

Days started passing by…… Geet had developed a feeling for Maan….. In the office also she would find some or the other reason to be near Maan… Somewhere Adi and Anvesha noticed it…… Infact Anvesha indirectly tried to ask her but Geet ignored it by saying it is not like this….. But somewhere Geet was lost in the world of Maan…… Maan was not aware about the feeling of Geet…… Maan was happy with the performance of Geet…….

She would cook food at home also just for Maan but unaware of him that is what she felt but Maan could make out the difference in everyone's cooking….. She was feeling more then happy nowadays…….. The effect of Maan was taking to its toll for Geet……… She use to get ready as Maan liked, use to do whatever he use to like………

But one person was seeing all this with utmost care…….. Palak….. She was in a way happy for this…. But she thought that she has to find out from Geet whether whatever she is thinking is right or wrong………

She was finding an opportunity to ask Geet and finally found it……

It was an usual evening for all….. Maan and Adi were late to come to office…. Geet had finished her work so Maan send Geet back home….. Geet and Palak were in the kitchen preparing food…….. Geet was lost in her own world……… She was chopping the vegetables but her concentration was somewhere else…. It just cut her finger and she screamed…….. Palak who was standing beside her came running to her and screamed

Palak: Geet…… Tera dhyan kaha rehta hai aaj kal…….. and what is this….

While screaming on her She took her hand in the cold water and the applied turmeric powder for instant relief…….. She made her sit on the table near by and went and bought the first aid box and did the dressing……..

Geet tried to protest saying that she is fine but Palak was very angry on her………

After everything was done……

Palak: Geet, what is wrong with you??? Where are you lost nowadays…. Apne hi duniya mai rehti hai………

Geet: nahi Palak aisi koi baat nahi hai...

Palak: Phir jhut bol rahi hai……… I am seeing you since last many days you are not at your self…….. Kiske khayalo mai khoi hui rehti hai aaj kal….. I think I know……..

Geet: Palak…. Chup yaar….. kuch bhi bolti hai….. Let us finish the work before Maan sir comes…….

Palak got an idea in her mind: Geet, Maan Bhai is very khadoos na…. He is very strict and was about to say something more bad Geet immediately stopped her

Geet: No Palak….. he is very nice, he is very helpful. You know how he helped me whenever I was in trouble, how much he took care of me…. How he fought from that gang……..She started telling all the things with a spark in her eyes…….. He has a HEART OF SEA vast and wide

Palak: Geet, I think you are in love……..and I am serious this time…… Admit it Geet……….

Geet was shocked to hear this sudden sentence from Palak……..

Palak: Geet yes you have started loving Maan Bhai……

Geet: No……

Palak: Yes……… and you screaming no is not going to change the fact understood…….. So it is better accept the fact……….

Geet: No Palak…..

Palak shaking Geet's shoulder: Why Geet?? Why are you hiding ha…. Tumhari aakho mai saaf dikhta hai that you love him like crazy…….. You do what ever he likes then what is this? Is these not love………. If tomorrow something happens to him then……

Geet stopped her: Nahi nothing will happen to him…….. I wont let anything happen to him….

Palak: Why??? How does it matter if something happens to him……..

Geet: It matters…… I wont able to live without him……… I love him…… I love him very much………..

Palak was happy at Geet's confession………. She hugged her and said: Geet I am there with you…….. Now you have to tell Maan Bhai also…..

Geet who already had tears in her eyes: No…… You wont say anything to him nor will I say…..

Palak was confused at her answer: But why??? I am sure Geet he also has some feelings for you bus you have to take it out……..

Geet: No….. I am even scared to say anything to him….. Unka kabhi koi Barossa hi nahi hota kab gussa hojate hai pata nahi……….

Palak does not say anything but thinks that they should take it easy and need to find out the reason why Maan just hates girls……….

She hugs Geet and says teasingly: So my would be Bhabhi……..

Geet hits her on her shoulder: Shut up yaar……..

They both again get involve in their work…… The teasing session seems to be like a never ending process for Palak today…….. She kept on teasing Geet to no end as Geet was becoming shy………

As they were waiting for the Maan and Adi to return home…… It could be seen that Maan was in a foul mood……

Adi: Maan at least listen……….

Maan: What should I listen Adi….. You know every well that I just hate her….. then what the hell she was doing in our office……..

Adi: Even I am surprise………

Palak and Geet got alerted and stood up……

Palak: Kya hua Bhai…… Why are you so much angry???

Maan: Nothing……….

Palak: There is something otherwise why would you be so angry??

Adi: Who Palak……

Maan signaled Adi not to say anything…….. Adi just changed the topic and said who office ka thoda tension hai………

Palak and Geet were not satisfied with the answer but remained quiet….

Geet: Let us have food……..

Maan and Adi left to their room…… They got freshen up and came down to have dinner…… The food had everything of Maan's favorite……..

Adi: wow kya baat hai….. aaj to everything is of Maan's favorite…..

Palak: Ha this is made by…….

Geet stopped Palak from her eyes not to say anything……..

Adi: You were saying something Palak……

Palak: Nothing………

Maan was noticing everything but remained quiet and enjoyed the food…. And Geet was stealing glances from Maan and when ever Maan use to look up she would put her eye down……..

After dinner everyone retired to their room…… Geet was not feeling sleepy so she decided to go to the terrace…… and on the other side Maan was disturbed…… something was disturbing him……… When Geet came to the terrace she saw Maan in deep thought……….

Geet was looking at him in lost……… She was in her own dream land….. She was walking looking at him but did not noticed that she banged herself to the pot which came in her way…… She just lost her balance and fall making a noise……..

Geet: Ouch………

Maan got distracted and saw Geet sitting on the floor holding her leg…..

Maan went to her and asked: Tum dekh ke nahi chal sakti kya……

Geet: Who….

Maan Who who kya….. tum chalta phirta disaster ho…… Pata nahi kitni baar ghirti ho din mai………

Geet: You called me disaster….. She was trying to get up but was having little difficulty……..

Maan: aur nahi to kya??? Now wait…..

He holded her leg and was pulling her salwar little up……

Geet immediately: What are you doing………. She tried to put her hand which had a cut on his hand and again got hurted herself as his watch came in between……..

Again she screamed: Ouch

And Maan noticed that she has hurt her hand also……..

Maan: I was right……. Chalta phita Disaster……… Tum jaise sample ek hi ho sakti hai……….

Now keep quiet and started massing her legs so that the cramps may go…. She was just looking at a handsome face with all her love…….. She was still lost but her trance was broken by Maan……..

Maan: Now get up and see……..

Geet got up with help of Maan and was able to move her leg……

Maan: Now instead of roaming here and there go to your room and sleep and go carefully otherwise will hit somewhere else……

Geet just moved murmuring: Dust…… 10 heads wala Ravan hai….. Jab dekho tab gussa….. pata nahi problem kya hai mere saath unko…..

Maan was trying hard to listen but could not hear so finally asked: Kya badbada rahi ho tum……..

Geet: nothing and just walked away from there……

Maan: Pagal hai………. totally…….. then again his mind got diverted to the person who came to the office…….. (self talk): What was pari doing in office…… I will not leave her now because of her I lost Dev……

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
want to know the past of maan
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Posted: 13 years ago


wow lovely...te way my geet expressing her love for maan...wow lovely cute scenes...i loved it...maan is tension , somthing in his past happen , for wat he hates girls...my geet ur realy a chalta phirta disaster...my maan is dust dhanav...lovely combination...tottaly both are devils...i loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
so geet knows now that she love him. come back soon with another update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update dear...

Love it...😛

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