Right to love Manveer SS Note pg 43

Sakura24 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#1

Hi everyone!!!😃😃😃

Some of you may know me; some of you may remember me,

I wrote a SS called Checkmate,

Now checkmate came to its end, I can't write more about Aditya and his plans (I really liked his evil character), it's sad and depressing really,

So I came up with this new idea for those who'll love a SS just like Checkmate,

And sorry guys it's not Checkmate 2, it's a different story, one that is different from checkmate slightly and total opposite from the true track of DEK,

Well the idea is something like this'

Here Rajmata Mirnalini devi is mother of two daughters one of whom is the current queen Maharani Komal who is married to Brijraj Singh just like the true track and has two daughters, Meenakshi and Jaynandini.

But Komal is the youngest daughter so what happened to the elder daughter and the heir to the throne?

Well she is Maya whose name isn't even mentioned under the roof of Mirnalini devi.

Why?

Well as you guys could possibly be guessing,

Because her affair with Brijraj Singh just as the true track she was his first love and they have a daughter who's a year older than Meenakshi, Manyata.

Well trouble begins with Maya's death and Manyata's arrival in the royal palace, the truth's out, trust broken Maharani Komal is totally shattered.

So shattered that she lost her will to live,

Now after many years,

Rajmata takes care of all three girls as Brijraj Singh had also passed away yet she doesn't accept Manyata to be a princess, in her eyes Meenaksi is the oldest princess and the heir to throne, to make her right more clear she is the future Maharani of Jaygar, the fianc of the Jaygar prince,

But'

Do you have control over your heart?

Can you decide when to give it away and to whom?

What will you do when you realize that love is blind and the others don't?

That is the story I'm going to tell'

It is the story of Manyata; a girl who committed a terrible crime, the crime of loving someone out of her reach, the crime of following her heart, the crime of repeating the history, the crime of being the same chapter that had been torn away from the royal family, being blindly in love'

It is her story' RIGHT TO LOVE

Tell me your views,😃

Should I continue???😊😊

Thanks for reading,😊😊

Sorry if I wasted your time,😭😭

Cham

INDEX

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

The special update

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

special update

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

special update

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

ENJOY!!!

Edited by Cham42195 - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

327

Views

42.1k

Users

55

Likes

732

Frequent Posters

-The_Tomboy- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
yooo man!!! do continue dear!!
mahnoor246 thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
love it to bits cham ...ur story is amzing please pm me n cham tum bee naa...please jaldee sey manveer start kerna n uday ko manyata sey pehley pyaar ho manyata ko nahee lease werna it will make us feel like manyata is 'matlabee' pleaseee :)👏👏👏
-JEHAN- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#4
again WASTED UR TIME...😡I HATE THIS LINE NOWWW...
wohooo...loved it...continue soon...and do PM me...best of luck for this story...👍🏼
i would love to read it...plz do continue...
Edited by -JEHAN- - 13 years ago
fia21 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
Okay seriously, how the hell do you get such amazing ideas? 😲
I am seriously your fan now. You have awesome ideas and an amazing brain Mashallah.
I would love to read this story. it sounds really interesting. More for the fact that for a change,it would be Manyata falling in love with Uday first and not the other way around.
Please do update The Player aswell.
Hawa.Hawai thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#6
nice one cham.do continue n pliz pm me if u can.
SaHillover101 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Woooww!! Another great concept!!! I loved it!! Plzzz continue soon n plzzz add me to ur pm list!! Thanks in advance:)
wendy25 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
Please cham write it and edit that ugly line"sorry if i wasted your time".
Love the concept. Does it means that manyata is first one to fall in love with UV. Super excited. Why I am having feeling that manyata and UV story will be some what like Maya-BR's.
Is meenakshi is going to play the role of aditya here?
cham update soon. I am in love with checkmate and player. please update player also.

Sakura24 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: wendy25

Please cham write it and edit that ugly line"sorry if i wasted your time".

Love the concept. Does it means that manyata is first one to fall in love with UV. Super excited. Why I am having feeling that manyata and UV story will be some what like Maya-BR's.
Is meenakshi is going to play the role of aditya here?
cham update soon. I am in love with checkmate and player. please update player also.


No dear Meenakshi won't be Aditya in here she'll be more emotional blackmailing type
And UV amd M's love story won't be like BR and M thing as UV and Br are too totally opposite characters
But they'll have so many obstacles than the true track,
It's a story of two lovers who fights for their right to love
cham
SyedAinah thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Cham awesome concept...OMG manyata z fallng in luv with uday first ...woah woah i m super excited,,,,,,update fast

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".