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@-SilverAngel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey Cham... will we get an RTL update today... plzzz say YES

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Sakura24

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: mahi0809
@Cham: That is one complicated family tree... but thanks for simplifying things out by writing it out clearly!... so happy Mini never got to have Uday and now even her riyasat will slip by her fingers as she is not the eldest anymore... Plus Rukmani was the true yuvrani... and the story gets more indepth!

That's exactly why I wrote it down so it's easy figuring out things😊
The part you've worked out about Mini is absolutely correct poor girl she's going to fight for many things

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Originally posted by: mahi0809
Hey Cham... will we get an RTL update today... plzzz say YES

Hmmm...what can I say...hmmm...YES!!
I will update today😛

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@-SilverAngel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ok Cham... whenever you update... plzz PM me!
Thanks!

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Sakura24

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hi!!
I know as I said the chapter 11 isn't over yet so this should be chapter11 part 2 but since this would be the final call of RTL first half let me call it the 12th chapter.
From this chapter the journey of Manyata ends and the journey of princess manyata begins, so bid her your good bye wholeheartedly, read and enjoy!!

Chapter 12
blood against blood

The rain falls around me
Neither I hear nor I see...

hopes were there so one could see them break, destiny was there so one could fight against, and love...why was love there, I'm still figuring out.
The darkness and the emptiness was all I could see, behind and before me, but there was life, breathe and a heart beating with no proper purpose.
Eyes sleepless as their dreams scared me now and the heart still beating.
"You disappointed me" was all she could tell, nevertheless I cared for nothing only her hold and her company, yet still she wasn't here, she left me to suffer if suffering was the word for it.
Knowing why she kept me alive I tried to be honest with myself, I wasn't alive for a long time, soon someday she would kill me and then things would come to an end.
My dreams were no longer haunted by him, but his reflection which feared me more and more. There was someone for whom I owed my life, someone whom I owe happiness, care and love if ever I get a chance to give them.
But they would make sure I don't and that was the reason I suffered.

the fire burns inside me
neither I care nor I flee...

Then he came with him came colors and hopes feelings which I've almost forgotten and the bless of sunlit days. The secret made my heart heavy he was taking me home...
Once there was things I used to dream about and suddenly they had turned in to nightmares. Facing his wasn't as easy as it had been, running away was rather a choice, he wanted answers and I had none.
No he wasn't interested in confessions it was truth that he wanted. The truth and only truth.
"You know nothing of pain doll" His voice was cold as ice and burning as toughest of fires.
Pain..if I knew nothing who did what the pain was?
Pain of losing, pain of gaining, pain of shattering and the pain of giving up willingly?
"The pain you cause me"
And the pain I went through..the sentence was completed in my mind, the pains waiting for us...
His hands were cold as they cupped my face, his eyes were frozen, for a moment he felt like a stranger and his lips touched my forehead.
"Why?" He whispered as he stared back into my heart, "Why do you always run away?
Why?? I asked myself,
"Because it's meant to be that way"
"You can't leave me like this, not again please"
Where was my hands? Why were they hugging him? Was it because I was afraid of the end, was it because I wanted to make sure I'm not alone at the end? Was it what you call love? Or was it just the fact that I had given up fighting?

Is it ice or is it fire
Is it wise or just desire
Is it a beat or a flame
Is it anything but a game...

Realizing is hard when I am puzzled, and the words I shouted at him reechoed in my mind sending shivers through my heart.
"I know why they claim me to be their daughter, I know everything! Everything!"
There was no anger only the pain of being used ruthlessly, being given a chance to live when I desired nothing but to be free, to die...
Those wounds caused no pain through he was hurt by them, what cause pain was the fact that no one cared anything but the throne, the crown and the power..it was a game just a smart game.
"Doll.." He tried to explain but I had no more Patience left in me to listen, to understand and to forgive,
"I know why you've brought me here" My words shouted in my own head, "I am more valuable aren't I more than anyone at the moment?"
"The girl must die, she can't claim what should rightfully be Mini's" More echoing sounds surrounded me..
"Stay with me doll, stay with me" The voice was anxious and weeping though others might think he sounded strong I know him enough to sense the weakness, the shattered heart disguised behind the slow deep voice,
The embrace was warm though it wasn't enough to warm the coldness I went through or the moments I've suffered by the worst decisions of my life and by whom I thought was my family...

For some say it's a good sign,
they wish for things near divine
though some say it's bad
nor they mourn nor is sad
there's the falling star that brings,
those two differences near within,
seeing it I wonder whether laugh or cry..
as it's nothing but its last sorry cry

The lights, the noises, do they know how much they disturb me? I was the one who left them, stating that I needed no help, no love no affection, yet here they were surrounding me and protecting me the one who turned them down.
I was wrong for the second time, trusting whom I shouldn't trust, mistrusting whom I shouldn't mistrust...
The world was coming to an end and I was the one to see it amend.
I wanted to tell him I was so sorry for each and every minute we were together...But no more I could see him no hear what the others were shouting, the light was fainting..fainting and fainting...
"The princess is hurt.."
A voice shouted and many more voices joined in the cry,
"The princess, the princess.."
I was trying to give her everything, everything she ever dreamed of and she thought I was stealing her life, she thought of me as an enemy when I was only trying to find her happiness...
He kissed me again...And I could do nothing but wish he would remain close to me...close enough to hold on...
There was nothing that belongs to me anymore, not even myself, so my fight was long forgotten..No more I will fight for her as she had shattered the one last remaining thread that linked us together...she had killed who was her sister and the life left in me wasn't for her, it wasn't for her I was breathing now...
"I'm sorry" I heard my lips mummer and I was sure he heard me, he was covered in blood, and so was I his look told me,
Who's blood was in whom no one could tell at the moment and only one thought crossed the shuddering surface of my mind,
Let it spill...let it drain...the blood we shared let it leave the veins and the heart which felt nothing for her anymore, I was here for what was mine...for what the god had given me, the only thing in the whole world that belonged to me...my love...

When the light leaves you,
and the darkness takes on
there's nothing but the dreams,
you have to carry on..

And the moment I knew why there was love, there was love so one could have faith when the faith itself is gone..
And the moment I realized why my destiny was written thus, and I wasn't feeling the emptiness they said was in my eyes...
"Don't leave me"
Was all I can ask for after all it was too much, when I had already left him so many times how could I ask for that? I did and I'm glad I did..
"Not until my last breath"
Even now he was the royal..and soon I'll learn to be a one too..
There was this life that linked us together, not letting me go, the gleam of the love I never acknowledged was giving me strength to keep breathing...
It was the only thing she couldn't take from me, the only thing I wouldn't give her, the only hope for which I lived, the one she had almost ruined.

Nothing but the soul,
nor good nor foul,
everything I saw,
till I reach the goal...

She was right, someone did die...
But it was the sister who loved her a lot more than her life, and was born a royal who had only one hope to live on. And I'm going to hold on until the last breath, and fight for what I should've won many years ago,
My right, my right to be happy, my right to care, my right to feel, my right to laugh, my right on every feeling in the world and my right to love...love...
"Save him.." I breathed before the breath left me...
"Save our son"

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The chapter finishes here,
and the next begins with the new journey,
I know it was confusing,
but tell me your views,
thanks for reading
cham

Edited by Cham42195 - 12 years ago

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chitra_rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hey cham 🤗, I read this mini update (yes it was too mini for me in the first go), but then I re-read it and understood the depth that it held. Very wonderfully put cham, but again a lot of thing u have left loose for the readers to interpret that whether Uday told her the complete truth or not, whether Uday forgave her for leaving him and running. whether the prince who died on reading her letter was still alive and there to claim his love, whether atleast now Manyata will fight for her right to love, and her right to the throne.

But then I again wait for the next chapter very desperately letting everything unfold on its own, it has its own beauty when thing unfold at the right time, but yes it does teach you, patience is a virtue😆

Is it ice or is it fire
Is it wise or just desire
Is it a beat or a flame
Is it anything but a game...

👏👏, everytime I re-read it, I see it in a spereate perspective, oosome👏

OK so now Uady and Manyata both seemed to be hurt, but who did that, was it Mini & NS who tried to kill Manyata and Uday jumped in to save her and accidently hurt him, but teh best part was Manyata being re-born as a royal, she deciding to fight for her love, and her right.👏👏I so wanted this, I'm not just kissing but also showering this new princess with hugs🤗 . Only one cannot fight for love, it is always both the partners who have to fight for their love. Uday was fighting so far for both of them, now its high time Manyata also joins him. What a heck of a turn this ff has taken 👏

Edited by chitra_rao - 12 years ago

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Sakura24

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: chitra_rao
Hey cham 🤗, I read this mini update (yes it was too mini for me in the first go), but then I re-read it and understood the depth that it held. Very wonderfully put cham, but again a lot of thing u have left loose for the readers to interpret that whether Uday told her the complete truth or not, whether Uday forgave her for leaving him and running. whether the prince who died on reading her letter was still alive and there to claim his love, whether atleast now Manyata will fight for her right to love, and her right to the throne.

But then I again wait for the next chapter very desperately letting everything unfold on its own, it has its own beauty when thing unfold at the right time, but yes it does teach you, patience is a virtue😆

Is it ice or is it fire
Is it wise or just desire
Is it a beat or a flame
Is it anything but a game...

👏👏, everytime I re-read it, I see it in a spereate perspective, oosome👏

Ahhh here comes a wise reader...
you haven't read the whole thing yet, and I have a nasty feeling that U'll feel like killing me after you do as this time I haven't left anything loose and made them the tighter possible,
Thanks for reading dear😃

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@-SilverAngel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

Dear Cham, You've managed to confuse me once again. I had at the back of my mind been wondering if Manyata was also gonna get preggy like Maya did before her... and she did, and that is the only thing I understood in this chapter. Was Manyata having like a miscarriage or was she shot etc... but still fab work!👍🏼👍🏼

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chitra_rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

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updated my previous comment on the complete update 🤗

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Sakura24

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: mahi0809
Dear Cham, You've managed to confuse me once again. I had at the back of my mind been wondering if Manyata was also gonna get preggy like Maya did before her... and she did, and that is the only thing I understood in this chapter. Was Manyata having like a miscarriage or was she shot etc... but still fab work!👍🏼👍🏼

Mini tried to kill her, and she's almost dying it was the whole story till now in her POV, it's a few days or maybe weeks after Uday taking her to Rajgadh as you must have realized she had left the palace and Mini got her finally,
the confusion cleared?
And one more thing this was the reason why NS wasn't killing her and it's the same reason Mini wanted to kill her in the previous update😃

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