Right to love Manveer SS Note pg 43 - Page 16

OMG Cham no comments yaar.I m speachless(samajhdar ko ishara kafi hai:p)

Perfect update! Cham U wrote dis entire Chapter SO beautifully! I mean i loved this chapter esp the dance one! Manyata does not deserve this Hatred frm Nani sahab i guess. .. Anyways Ty 4 d pm & update as soon as possible 😃

Finally Finally Cham is back with a RTS update😃 O Cham was waiting so so mch for this RTS update was so happy when saw ur pm it was totally awesome fab as always (sorry for late comment got stuck with a test😭) loved the confession sequence at the end so beautifully written😳.. so cute the way he said i love u doll... thnx for such an awesome update & pm🤗🤗... update soon cant wait to read the rest Keep rocking😊

This was lovely!!... I was truly mesmerized and lost in this beautiful piece...

Please update more soon!... I can't wait!

An special update

September the seventeenth,

They say I lived,

When my breath is gone,

They say I fought,

When my faith is gone,

They say I won,

When my eyes 'till mourn

They say I loved,

When my heart is gone…

They say I danced,

When the tune is gone,

They say I've laughed,

When my joy is gone,

They say I'm here,

When my soul is gone…

They say I'm a queen

When my king is gone…

When you read this I'll be gone far away, where even your power and crown can't reach your highness. Don't ask me why, I've no reasons to give. Funny the way life made me helpless, I've promised someone I won't write to you ever again until my last breath, but there are more promises I made, and the ones which I shudder to break.

They were right; you are the sun I can't touch. But you still are the sun I can't live without. Still I'm selfish that I want your forgiveness before I leave, no matter what may happen afterwards. I know your love will remain and I have no right to ask you to forget me, it's your life and your heart as you correctly told me.

It's midnight and I dream about you with my open eyes, laughing at myself for what a silly goose I am. Will you agree to one humble request please don't visit my dreams ever again, as they say it's not nice for a maid to dream about a prince.

I know you'll frown while you read this, and sigh at how soon I lost my faith in our love. But it's not true your highness, I'm tired of fighting my own flesh and blood, my family and I'm tired of the taunt that I cause pain to my own sister. True I didn't understand them till now but when I saw her with that kind of determination I have nothing left in my soul to fight. She really loves you, and I wish you both all the luck in the world. I know you're ready to give up everything but believe me I'm not, and I can't forgive me again.

I heard that the engagement is three days away,

Yes you're right that's why I'm leaving because I'm so selfish that I can't see you becoming hers forever. Though it's my duty to be at my sister's side, you'll laugh I know, or will you cry for me as you once asked me? When you left today do you know what nani saib asked me? She asked me how much she'll have to pay me to leave your life…

She shattered me, now I don't want to shatter her in return. Don't look like that, like do I like to shatter you, I don't, but we have no choice but to shatter our selves. You gave me many things, things a girl could only dream of and now I'm guilty that I made you fall for me, every second, every breath I made you recall me, but we do have sweet things to recall don't we?

I do,

When I close my eyes you would smile at me, the same way you do every time we meet. Your eyes would twinkle and your hair would dance in the breeze. I would feel frozen on the spot and my heart will skip several beats. Do I sound silly? Well then let me be,

You would walk to me and as usual I would back away, till you'll have me cornered, your eyes would peer into my soul and burn my heart. Your gaze would touch me before you hand does, and those innocent hairs of mine will try to separate us and your lips will twist.

Have I ever told you how much I love that smile of yours, the one you give someone when they deny from giving what you want? It could melt people, trust me. Your face will come closer and I would feel your breath, the warmth they give me as though inviting into their embrace for eternity. Do you know how much I used to wish for that eternity? Don't worry I won't do that ever again.

Those long fingers of yours will shoo the hairs away, in a softer way than the winds would've done, and they would run down my cheek painting it scarlet. You fingers do that, and those sparks will turn alive again. You'll caress my cheek a way I never knew one could and you'll smile again when I would be brave enough to look back at you.

As though telling me this isn't wrong, that it's what is meant to be, you can read my heart, how even I can just wonder. You'll pull me closer, that we're breaths apart and I would feel your heart singing against mine.

Will you believe me if I say your touch is not on my skin but on my soul, that it's what that makes me feel complete and strong. Your lips would touch my forehead where they seem to think their home, and my eyes would close, feeling that heavenly bliss that washes my soul.

You were right, I can't do what I was going to do, and no one ever can take your place ever again. You've made sure of it your highness and you've won the battle. No one will ever touch the soul you've touched; no one will ever wipe the tears you've wept. 'Cause no touch can ever be compared to yours, and I'll never insult my love by doing so.

Now it's my turn to laugh, what have you thought? That I'm that weak? That once you've asked me something near impossible I would shut up and listen to you? No I know more, you thought that I'll plead you myself to marry me after what happened, but I will not. I will stick to my word and I hope you'll be too.

I gave you what you asked for and you'll have to give me what I asked for in return. Please, don't cheat as you used to do when we were young, because I can't tolerate someone playing with my sister's life, though they played with mine.

I'm not angry at all, for as they say you've destroyed me. I know better, my heart knows better that the one I loved, the one who loves me will never do such a thing, you love can't destroy me, it only makes me purer every time.

There are light lines in the horizon; my time to leave is coming. The breeze is playing with your hair, as you smile at me in your deep sleep. Don't ask me how I know that smile is for me, lovers just know things they can't explain.

When you thought you won, today you've lost me forever, but I have a lot to take with me. Your love and your memories.

Will you wake up if I kissed you one last time?

If you didn't see me with these tears before you read this letter you should know that you didn't and I thank you for giving me that one last chance.

I could still feel your scent in me, your warmth still encircles me, and so is that arm of yours. I would place it softly in this pillow you'll never now. When you wake up you doll will be gone Uday, but in years to come each time I wake up I'll remember this day, the day I woke up seeing your face as I wanted to all my life…

Until my breath remain,

Yours forever,

Doll.

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wow cham!!!

Oh my God. I am speechless. Literally. I can just say one word for this. BEAUTIFUL! 😍

Beautiful! Cham Amazing Wriring Skills! U Described Him so well in her Feelings! 😃

I can guarentee u that u always scored the highest in letter writing if u had it!! in ur school!! I am speechless!!

👏👏Cham 👏, I'm just speechless. The letter was so resplendent and wonderfull. The whole composition of the letter, the start was so lyrical, the body of the letter was so metomorphotic, the end so alluring. Gosh in every line I could feel the eternal bliss she was going through while imaging Uday, and also the eternal pain she is enduring coz she has to leave him for her selfish and worthless family😡.