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kojagoryfan

@kojagoryfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#291

nice.but sometimes m confused.present/past/many relationship/many problems.n the problem is still i can't stop reading this.u write it beautifully.so m waiting 4 next part.

Edited by a.anu - 13 years ago

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@-SilverAngel-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#292

A wonderful update. Surely gives more perspective on the complicated past of the royals: Devghar, Jayghar, and Rajghar ... love it.!

Waiting for more and more!... The more intense it gets, the more interesting it becomes. Good work and update more soon!👏

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

HI!!😃😃
Wonder what I'm doing here?? 😕
Updating of cause!!😛
Read and enjoy!!😊😊
😊

Chapter 11 reflection

Aryan was getting restless, soon it would be his fault only and only his fault. He looked up for the tenth time to see his father pacing the sitting room his browns cutting in to each other.
"How could you?" He demanded after a moment, "How could you do such a mistake?"
"I.." Aryan thought for a moment, "I had no choice"
"So you let her go?" His father snapped,
"Well.."
"Can you imagine where she might've gone?" No answer came to that question, "Rajgadh, she might've ended up in Rajgadh do you know what that means? She's gone son, you'll never reach her again"
The glass in his hand shattered,
I won't let that happen" He said after a moment in a voice more convincing that he was feeling at the moment.
"How?"
"Rajmata promised me, she promised me that.."
"And she happens to be the same person who keep her in here wasn't she? now look where it landed us? Nearly in for kidnapping the heir of Rajgadh"
"She might've had her reasons"
"Very well, have you talked to her about this?"
"Not just yet, but I will soon"

***

A glass vase shattered on the floor as Mini looked up at Nani sahib, her heir wild and her eyes puffed and red she looked as if she hadn't slept for weeks. Nani sahib on the other hand looked whiter than usual, her wrinkled face looked more tired and old, she looked nearly defeated.
"Why?" Mini asked in a dead voice,
"Why didn't you tell me?"
There was a moment of silence,
"The reason is in front of you"
Nani sahib said calmly,
"You did all this to..to keep me in dark?"
"It's not what you think"
"Where is she..I'll I'll kill her"
"You can't Minakshi" Nani sahib said simply, "You can't reach her now"
"So..so she's..she's with him?"
There was a longer pause,
"Yes"
Another vase shattered, there was blood on her hands now,
"Why didn't you kill her when you had the CHANCE?"
"Keep your voice down"
"She..she would've killed me Nani sahib and I won't have said a thing...but why? Why/ uday? Why everything I want? Why everything that's...that's suppose to be mine?"
Nani sahib placed a hand on her shoulder,
"She won't take anything that is suppose to be yours I promise you that I won't let her"
After a moment Mini looked up and smiled although in a much weaker way.

***

The dawn after thousand sunless days is blessed with joy and peace, so was the feeling Pritvi had seeing her in front of him.
She looked weaker than he had seen her last, her eyes were full of curiosity. They reminded him of his love who had the same eyes ones that lead straight to her heart. It was surprising how Mirnalini managed to hate someone who had her beloved sister's eyes, but no wonder she's different, a true royal in many ways.
As he walked towards her Manyata backed away, almost hitting Uday's chest in process. Uday caught her shoulders and turned to him,
"I've kept my promise hukum, she's safe and sound"
Pritvi placed his hand on her head and his eyes rimmed with tears,
"Bless you my child" he whispered,
"I.." Manyata stammered, "I think there's some kind of a mistake maharaj ji, I don't know you"
"I know" Pritvi said in his unreadable voice, "We had no time to get to know each other, but we'll find time now"
"I.."
"We should go now" Pritvi said turning back to his car, "This is not a very suitable time for a on road discussions"
"I should get going" Uday said unintentionally and he freed Manyata from his hold, "Good luck princess"
She wasn't thinking of going anywhere at the moment and definitely not without him. She held in to his hand as if her life depended on it and Pritvi smiled,
"I think you should join us Yuvraj Udayveer, she enjoys you company better than ours"
After months Uday smirked,
"Sure, so shall we leave now princess?"

She said nothing and let him take her anywhere he wanted, this time her mind was too numb to think that she let other people do that for her. What was happening was not what she was worried about as she couldn't understand anything going on.
This is a dream, she decided finally and the dizziness of her head returned, slowly and slowly everything went pitch dark.
"Princess" His echo sounded through a tunnel of voices.

***

The colors and sounds everything was jammed until she reached one memory.
She was being dragged away and it wasn't Aryan who dragged her away from the airport. It was nani sahib,
"You disappointed me"
She said finally,
"Nani sahib please please listen to me, I...I'm leaving..I won't ever come between.."
"You've already done that" She replied in her cold voice,
"And now if you don't want any further trouble you'll do as I say, you'll get married to Aryan as it was decided before"
I can't please...I.."
"Do you want me to tell Mini everything?"
"No" Manyata gasped,
"Do you want Uday's royal life to be finished?"
"N..no"
"Then you'll do what I say"
The door slammed behind her and Manyata jerked awake.
It was a golden ceiling what caught her eyes, she was laying somewhere warm and cozy and his eyes where peering in to hers.
"What's it doll? YOu..you look terrible"
"Let me go" She said after a moment, "I don't want anymore trouble"
As she got up a portrait caught her eyes, it was a painting of a royal lady who looked or is..
"Mama" She said touching it,
"No doll that's not you mum, she's Maharani Avantika"
Uday said as he watched the dark pair of devgar's brown eyes gazing lovingly in to the features that were hated by all the devgar royals for what misfortune it had brought them.

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This is the first part of this chapter, I'll update the rest late tonight or tomorrow,
Tell me your views,
Thanks for reading!!
Cham.

Edited by Cham42195 - 13 years ago

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Shahista

@Shahi01

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

Talk about suspense, omg. Thanks so much for the brief update, now i am even more eager and curious 2 find out what happens next.

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@-SilverAngel-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

Thanks for more update Cham!...
Will read as soon as you finish updating!

Luv ur work Cham!... Oodles of appreciation!

Okay, read the chappy and it arose more questions in my head like NS knows M and U consummated?.. that means she has appointed someone to keep an eye on Manyata but then why couldn't she stop her from doing it in some way... why let it happen, why not create a diversion to stop it from happening?... and most importantly why keep Manyata alive?

So NS's hatred also stems from the fact that Maya resembled Maharani Avantika and thus that never let time heal her wounds/ or let her die her hatred down...

Very interesting indeed... update more soon!👏

Edited by mahi0809 - 13 years ago

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Fatima

@fatima4a

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

amazing, amazing, amazing!!!!!!

ufff... just can't get enough of your FF's

fabulous work cham

keep it up!!!!!😃

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

Hey cham 🤗, Loved the update,was amazingly but was too short for me😆, I know I know u would be thinking, I update that is big thing and this girl is complaining about the length😉, but u very well know ur impatient readers na!

Well so Princess Maya resembled Maharani Avantika whom NS hated with her very sight . Hmmm gosh this is getting even more interesting, could u please get the tyaga bhavan out of Manyata atleast now please. Make her realise that the Devghar people have been using her and her mother all this while, it is now time to claim her right, her right to love👍🏼.

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter, and I have been waiting since eternity for an update of checkmate 😉, see I'm again nagging here, well dear whenever u get a chance do update that also please!!!!!!

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kojagoryfan

@kojagoryfan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

more questions.oh cham u r killing me.can't wait.cont soon.

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afreshbegin

@afreshbegin

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#299

Hi cham
Superb update
luv u n all ur ffs😊player, checkmate queen, checkmate2.
pls update checkmate2 also
u r a brilliant author...👏

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Shahista

@Shahi01

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#300

Superb writing. I just get enough of ur stories. It just keeps me wanting more. Each one just gets better, please update player as well. Keep up the awesome work.

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