Captured Love (5)-[New thread pg.155]

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Chapter 37

"Don't ever give up...fight for your rights...fight for yourself...remember Geet..fight.." She closes her eyes in tears..."I can't mom..I lost..he made me very weak...I can't fight anymore...he broke all my strength and courage...I am nothing but a dead zombie walking around...I can't live this life anymore...am sorry mom..." She closes her eyes feeling weak..her legs were not even paining anymore..they were numb from being tied up...she felt nothing as she just laid there with no hope as she drifts to sleep.

"come here...where are you going?" Geet ran after a little girl wearing pink frock carrying candy in her hands as she kept running away from Geet. The girl stops short waiting for Geet to catch up to her...as soon as Geet was close enough to catch her she runs away yet again...

"Catch me if you can mom" (Geet sat on her knees huffing and puffing looking at her little girl...her life seemed so perfect without any worries...it was just her and her little girl playing around having fun with no devil or monster around...Geet gets up running after her again when she stopped shocked...she saw Maan holding her little girl above the swimming pool. He looks at her with smirk...the girl screamed and kicked her legs and arms to be set free...)

"Should I drop her Geet?"

Geet shakes her head back and fourth as she looks at the sight in horror..."Please don't..." (he drops the girl in water...Geet runs toward the swimming pool to jump after her girl when Maan held her back..) "let me go...let me go..." (she yelled and screamed)

Maan: Geettt...

She opens her eyes and saw Maan looking at her...he was moving..carrying her in his arms... She wanted to go back to her dream before Maan arrived..she wanted to be back with her kid and enjoy the only moment of happiness but even then he came and snatched it all away. Now she was in his arms..."let go of me!!!!(she yells and screams...)

Maan: SShhh its time for bath...gotta clean you up

He gently puts her down..as soon as her feet hits the ground she yells in pain...there was dried blood on her ankles...her mouth was sore from being tied all night...her throat was burning as if it was on fire...she holds on to Maan for support as she struggled to keep balance...he smirks holding her tight gently putting her on top of his feet...

"So you do need me..." (he says while looking at her...he saw all the marks that he left on her from last night..she was his and no one else's...whenever she is around him he feel calm and composed...now that he finally has her back in his arms he is relaxed...but still angry for what she has done..) "Looks like I will have to give you shower..."

Geet didn't say anything..she just stayed quiet...she had no energy anymore to fight...she wanted to tell him about her pregnancy but now it seems futile...she didn't care...she just stood there as Maan washed her and touched her all over her body..it took every ounce of her energy to not think about his touch...but the truth was it was still affecting her...after he was done...he dresses her up looking at her from top to bottom like she is some kind of doll...he puts some makeup around her mouth to conceal the marks from the blindfold...

"Walk for me..." (she does what she was told to do..she took once step and found herself falling down until she was caught by Maan...he places her on the bed looking at her ankles very closely with displeasing look) "If only you didn't make me this angry...I wouldn't have had to tie your legs...but good thing is its not too deep...you will be better by tomorrow...consider yourself lucky that you are getting some rest now or else I would've made you suffer more..." (He caresses her face...she removes his hand from her face)

"I don't need your sympathy nor scared of your punishments...do whatever you want because at the end only you will regret

Maan (pulls her hair) What will I regret huh?! Its you who will be regretting leaving me going against my decision...(Geet smiles seeing him like this...making him more angry..."He has no right to know about the baby...before he would even know about it..she will be gone from this world forever..." he throws her on the floor...she protects her stomach while looking at him with a smile...)

"Am not scared of you anymore...last night you proved there is nothing in you that needs to be feared of..."

Maan: ENOUGH!!! (he holds her by her arm dragging her out of the room...) your main purpose is to entertain me today...(he lets go of her...) you were once a dance teacher right...(he throws payals on the floor the one that kathak trainers wear) dance for me...and don't stop until I say so...if you do then you will get no food for the rest of the day...(she slowly starts wearing the payals...)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5awZ9sOTA54[/YOUTUBE]

Geet closes her eyes as the music plays...she ignores the pain on her feet..she ignores the monster sitting in front of her..it was just her and the music...she starts moving to the music and lyrics...she imagined her daughter from her dreams dancing with her..she smiles...

O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..

Geet stops dancing when she saw her mom clapping for both of them...she smiles as she dances around her daughter...her mom after a while too joins Geet..
Udne laga kyon man baawla re
Aaya kahan se yeh hosla re
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..

The little girl tries to copy her steps but failing miserably...Geet helps her get up motioning for her to stop and look at what she is doing...Geet taps her foot lightly bending down slightly to touch the tip of her toes...the girls does the same following whatever she did

Tanabana tanabana bunti hawaa haaye bunti hawa
Boondein bhi to aaye nahi baaz yahan
Sagish mein shaamil sara jahan hai
Har zare zare ki yeh iltiza hai

O re Piya
O re Piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re Piya

Maan saw her dancing with a smile and eyes closed...he slowly walks toward her as she was lost in her own thoughts as she danced...he raises his hand to touch her but stops midway...Geet in her dream is running after her daughter...eventually Geet picks her up dancing her with in her arms...
ni re ,re re ga
ga ga ma
ma ma pa
pa ma ga re sa
sa re re sa
ga ga re
ma ma ga
pa pa ma
dha dha pa
ni ni sa sa pa
pa sa ma pa dha ni sa ni
re ni sa sa sa.. . . . ..

Geet slowly puts her down while balancing on her knees...she hugs her daughter with tears not wanting to let go...the girl wipes the tears away shaking her head..she puts her hand on top of Geet's heart..."I am always here..." Geet nodes her head yes...the little girl holds her hand as both walk...

Nazrein bolen duniya bole
dil ki zaban haaye dil ki zubaan
Ishq maange ishq chahe koi toofan

"I am always here..." Geet nodes her head yes...the little girl holds her hand as both walk ahead as the sun sets and everything around them disappears...

Chalna aahiste ishq naya hai
Pehla yeh vada humne kiya hai

O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya
Piyaaa...

yehhh piya

Geet remembers her pain that Maan put her through...but she didn't care..all of that seemed to go away with her daughter...he no longer mattered to her...Geet felt her finger being loosened...she looks down to see her daughter disappearing...she looks around for her..."Here I am..." She says from far way...waving her goodbye...Geet runs after her.."No don't go...NO!!!" but it was too late she was gone...she heard Maan's laugh in the background..."she is gone Geet...now you are mine forever.."

Nange pairo pe angaro
chalti rahi haaye chalti rahi
Lagta hai ke gairo mein
Palti rahi haaye
le chal wahan jo
Mulk tera hai
Jahil zamana
dushman mera hai

...No.she can't go..no!!! (She yells opening up her eyes...she saw the same monster in front of her...she looks around for her but she was no where to be found...she marches up to Maan holding him by the collar...) "Where is she?" (he looks at her confused) "What have you done with her?"

haaye

O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..
O re piya haye..

Geet holds her stomach in pain...she drops on the ground screaming...Maan rushes after her but Geet puts her hand up stopping him midway..."Don't..." (she looks at her hand..it was filled with blood...) "Congratulations...you have killed your kid..." (she smiles at him as she faints..Maan rushes up to her..looking at the blood...)

Note:
Okay I know I left at another high point of the story but as you guys know I like to torture you guys...

Sorry if you guys didn't like the song its my favorite song and I had to use it...but idk if the situation called for it but I couldn't help myself😆😆

I got some bad news!

I won't update tomorrow...I HAVE to update BQ and OW tomorrow! This will be all the way at the end..if I do get time then I will update if not then I will update on Monday...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapters

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Current: Thread 5
Chapter 37 (above)

Edited by mrs.msk - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo n waiting simi diii
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Congrats on the new thread...

update soon...

waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for new thread

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hey simz...congrats on ur new thread...

to tell u the truth i am hating Maan! Esp the precap..:(

There is a limit to which a man can go before he is beyond redemption...the way he is humialiting geet is not aceptable. torturing someone physically and emotionally is different.

a person can overcome the physical scars, but the ones that are etchedd on ur soul, never fade away i gues...

but thats just my POV i guess...
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 13 years ago
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hey congrats for the new thread
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yay !!!! new thread...waiting waiting 😊
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congrats 4 the new thread

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CONGRATULATIONS FOR THE NEW THREAD.

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