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Posted: 13 years ago
R u goin ahead with miscarriage track
Please no no no no
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the next update...hope no miscarriage happens😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

R u goin ahead with miscarriage track

Please no no no no
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

idk going to go with the most votes for either miscarriage or keep the baby😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mollycoddle

waiting for the next update...hope no miscarriage happens😭

WILL UPDATE SOON!😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk



oye what happend to zoha?
i missed it😭


actually zoha msg me in last to last week. She is fine bt didnt able to knw reason of nt cuming to IF.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


WILL UPDATE SOON!😳😳


tera yeh update soon kab hoga?
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Originally posted by: SONU_29


actually zoha msg me in last to last week. She is fine bt didnt able to knw reason of nt cuming to IF.

ohh okay
u scared me😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SONU_29


tera yeh update soon kab hoga?

yaar idk lol
when I fiinish i guess😆😆
mera boss ek ke baad kaam de raha hai😭 wohi finish karke update finish karoongi😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 38

"Congratulations you have successfully killed your kid..."

Maan sat in the hospital with her words ringing in his head...he looks down at his bloodied hands..."his kid...she was pregnant with my kid? Why didn't she ever tell me?" toady he realized he was also repeating the same history...he still remembers the day when his father severely punished his mom while she was pregnant with another child after Vicky was born.

Maan had witnessed the whole thing hiding in a corner as he kept hitting her until she called for mercy begging his father to let her go. He was always taught that this is how its suppose to be that is how he was suppose to behave with women. How he was suppose to suppress everyone around him including everyone close to him. Maan looks at the doctor coming out of the room..he immediately gets up holding the doctor by his color as the doctor looks at him with fear..

"how is she? Is the baby safe?"

Doctor: we stopped the bleeding but for now can't say much...

Maan: What do you mean you cant say much? I want to know now about the baby and Geet

Doctor: We cannot do any scans until she awakens..for now all we can do is wait and see...am sorry...

Maan lets of the collar...he looks at Geet's face through the door remembering her smiling at him when he carried her to the car..."You have lost Mr. Khruana..I have won..." She laughs with pain as Maan lays her down inside the car...those were her last words before darkness took over her...now she laid on the bed motionless supported by various tubes and needles around her arm and hands...he was feeling something inside for the first time...uneasiness..his heartbeats were rising fast with each passing moment...he closes his eyes in frustration walking away unable to look at her anymore...

"My baby..." a smile formed for the first time..."his baby...the heir to his kingdom" He looks at his hands still filled with blood..the smile turned to anger and frustration...he heard laughter of Geet...he saw her straight ahead pointing and laughing at him while her mid region was filled with blood...he closes his eyes unable to see the blood.."You lost..you lost..." He covers his ears to stop her laughter and her voice..."SSTOOOPPP" He yells..the nurses and doctors all came running after hearing his voice...Maan jumps when he felt someone's hand on his shoulder...he slowly opens his eyes to see the doctor looking at him with worry...

Maan shrugs his shoulder to remove his hand...everyone leaves after Maan looks at them with anger...he stops the doctor from going slowly moving toward him..the doctor gulps in fear when he saw nothing but darkness in his eyes...Maan corners him against the wall...Maan slowly brings up his hand toward his neck...the doctor just stood there with fear unable to move nor comprehend what he was doing...his eyes move downward toward Maan's hands that were holding his tie tightly...

Maan fixes his tie properly..."How long did you say it will take for her to gain consciousness?" (he pulls the tie hard making him chock but quickly loosens it to let him talk again...) "I said.."

"I don't know..." (the doctor quickly says interrupting Maan before he could complete his sentence)

Maan: Hmmm (he lets go of his tie...) Make sure you know by tonight...(the doctor quickly nodes..Maan gives him a signal to leave...) wait...(the doctor stops after he took two big steps...Maan walks toward him...doctor flinches when Maan raises his hands in the air...) the bathroom..where is the bathroom?

"Its...down the hall"

"You expect me to use public bathroom?"

"no no no sir..." (he stammered) "you can use the bathroom in my office..."

Maan: good...(he walks past the doctor and one more thing...he stops looking at the doctor) "I don't want any disturbance or anyone on this floor besides you and two assigned nurses approved by me...(the doctor nodes his head yes) Also, I want you to decorate this whole hallway and Geet's room with balloons and decorations...when she opens her eyes I want her to see everything...

"Okay sir..."

Maan fixes his tie before leaving with a smirk...Maan goes to the bathroom washing his hands...the fear was slowly creeping inside him again...he hated that feeling of being helpless...he hated not having any power over this situation...he was alone now...

"what if Geet doesn't make it? What will he do?"

He didn't want himself to admit that he was used to her...he needed her in every aspect possible not to just own her...the month he spent without Geet was like hell but he knew she was alive somewhere out there...now he doesn't know if she will make it...he washes his face trying to clear his mind..."I can't loose you Geet...you are mine..only mine...you can't leave me like this...you can't win...I will not loose...Maan Singh Khurana doesn't loose...I will make sure you and the baby are okay and with me forever..."

He looks at himself with a smirk...

I know its short but I will give you another update tomorrow or a short promo later on...I won't reply back to anyone after i post this but will remain online...busy at work!!!!

I tried showing Maan in a different light as you could read but it will take time for him to "change" hope you guys liked it!!

You guys still have time to decide if you want the baby to be alive or dead... remember its a fan fic guys so anything can happen 😆
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Gr88 prt ...so maan's dad bet his mother while she was pregyy ..he donse seems effected ...he iz such a confuse character ...once he iz scared that if geet wont make it n other he tell ppl to decorate d place ...

Updt sooon yaar ...n need a looong updt ...plezzz
Edited by tehzeeb25 - 13 years ago

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