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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

Maan ko abhi toh akal aani chahiye..

waiting for next.. do it soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 42

"I want to see Geet right now! We all came here to see her..." (her father spoke as Meera and Yash stood right next to him)

"I know, I was expecting you all to come it only took you guys what about a week..anyway better late then never..." (Maan smiles...he looks at the security guard) "let them come in.." (the guard moves aside...Yash comes and holds Maan's collar with anger...Maan looks at him and then at his hands...the guard was about to take a step forward but Maan raises his hand to stop him)

Yash: We would've been here sooner but you know what they say "Better late then never"

Maan (Holds Yash's hands bringing them down slowly) Don't try this again or else I won't be able to stop the guards next time...(he gives Yash threatening glare..Yash backs up a little...Maan smiles) Anyways, your guest rooms are all ready (he snaps his fingers...two servants come and carry the suitcases away...Meera, Yash and Mohindar were shocked to see Maan being so nice, he was the complete opposite from what they read and heard about him in the news.) Please follow the servants they will show you guys to your rooms

Mohindar: Cut this crap and take us to my daughter

Maan: ohh so you are the father that left your wife and daughter at the very young age under the pretense of work? I can't believe she finally found you

Mohindar: Its none of your business what I did in the past and don't be mistaken that Geet will stay with you any longer...we will take her with us..far away from you

Maan: We will talk about this later as of now why don't you all go freshen up...I have arranged for your every needs...(the servant comes and guides them away..a security guard was right behind them following them...Maan stops one of the guy) Listen keep close eyes on them and don't let them meet Geet until I say so...I want NO mistakes!

SG: Yes sir

Maan goes inside the house with a smile, he saw Dadima sitting on the couch reading her magazine as she usually does on Sunday afternoon. She puts the magazine down as he was going up the stairs to see Geet...

"Who were they?"

Maan stops in his tracks "Geet's family..."

Dadima stands up in anger..."And you didn't find it necessary to tell me?"

Maan (looks at her) Since I am dead to you what I do and what I don't do shouldn't concern you either...Anyway since you had asked I answered you...they will be staying in the guest rooms and will be able to see Geet as soon as she is better until then no one can see her and since I AM her husband I should make decisions what is right for her and what is not...(he leaves heading upstairs once again to see the one person he has been thinking about 24/7..Geet)

Dadima (shakes her head): You will never change
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Maan opens the door to see her lying on the bed like before...he motions the nurse to get out of the room...he goes toward the balcony to open the curtains and the doors...he looks back at her as the wind gradually blows her hair...he sits on the bed holding her hand slowly kissing it on her palm...he tucks away her hair strand behind her ear making her face fully visible for him..."you know I hate anything between us..."

(he traces the patterns on her hand as he talked to her...he looks at her hand...) "Every line on your hand screams my name...your faith and destiny was meant to be with me...we are meant to be together...why can't you see that?" (he kisses her stomach gently putting his ear against it to hear the baby) "I still can't believe that I am going to be a father...can you imagine" (he looks at her face...she didn't stare at him...he holds her face...)

"Why don't you answer me? Am I that bad? All I wanted was you and no one else...do you have any idea how much pain I went through without you for one month? 24/7 your face kept coming in front of my face...all I could see was your smile, your laughter, your tears, your hatered, your love..all I wanted was for you to be near me again..

I don't know why but you some how calmed me down...whenever you are near me..I feel so alive...and I don't know why...why Geet? you are the only one who can answer this...why? (He makes her sit holding her...shaking her slightly to make her come out of this..) Answer me damn it! (The answer runs inside after hearing him yell...she goes near Geet trying to stop him from doing this..)

Nurse: Please sir don't do that

Maan (looks at her with anger) Leave! I know how to take care of my wife

Nurse (sighs) Alright...(she goes toward the door) maybe some fresh air will help her...(Maan picks Geet up after listening to the doctor..he carries her down the stairs where Dadima and Geet's family were present...they all looked at Maan shocked...Meera comes running towards them...)

Meera: Geet its me Meera...see I have come and I am not alone...Yash and your dad both are with me..Geet...(Yash and Mohindar comes near her while Maan kept holding her tight in his arms as if making sure no one can snatch her away from him...)

Mohindar: Geet beta (he puts his hand on her head) I have come..I will never leave you...

Yash: Put her down...we can take care of her from now on

Maan: I have allowed you guys to live in my house but that doesn't mean you guys can order me around...Geet is my wife, as her husband, I have full rights to make any decisions I want...now if you excuse me

Dadima: Hold on Maan...you are right as a husband you can make any decisions you want about your wife but that doesn't mean we can't stop you...(she holds some papers in her hand showing them to Maan..he looks at them with anger)

Since Geet is not mentally capable to make any decisions herself, her father, Mohindar Handa along with myself, have filed for restraining order against you...and according to this you cannot be less then 50 feet away from Geet...and since you guys live in the same house..I have gotten kick-out order as well...you have till night to pack your stuff and leave this house if you know what's best for you!

Maan (smirks) And you all think that this will keep me away from my Geet?

Dadima: I am your Dadima..I know you have your connections but I have mine as well...And I will make sure you don't bend rules this time...that is my promise...(Yash comes to take Geet away..Maan moves up holding her closely to his body)

Maan: You all will pay for this (some police officers come in)

Dadima: if you don't do this then they will lock you up..and you will have no one to bail you out...so either let go of Geet OR go to the police station...the choice is yours

Maan (smirks) Well you said I have till night to leave (he looks at his watch) that gives me roughly about 6 hours of time to spend with Geet...(he begins to walk away outside carrying her) ohh and your orders nor the police could keep me away from what I own and possess...

He brings her outside to the garden, he made sure a nurse was around as a stand by in case if something happens to her...he opens up her hair letting it fly everywhere..just the way he liked it...this made her look so angelic...like a pari...Geet blinks a little as wind becomes a little fast...Maan saw her shivering a little..Maan wraps his arm around her bringing her closer...she looks at him slowly with tears...he wipes them away...

Geet watches his every movement closely...he leans toward to kiss her when he felt a sharp pain on his right cheek...a slap...she had just slapped him...he looks at her shocked..she moves away from him with tears trying to get up on her own..he tried to help her but she raises her hand to stop him..A nurse comes to help her..Maan watches her walk away...

Okay I know am late but I have a lot of work to catch up on..so I am trying to get back to my regular schedule😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeh!!!!! me first
🥳

So happy u updated
Loved the update
so finally devil is rectifying his deeds
😳

Maan though realised his mistakes, his approach is wrong
u can't seek forgiveness forcibly
😕

Geet was a⭐️ today
slapped the king😆
He really needed this reality check from Geet n
Dadi was amazing👏
Liked Maan allowed Yash Meera n Mohinder in his house

Missing Vicky😭
I think Geet will recover soon with Vicky around
Maybe Maan😈 may now get him to get back to stay around Geet

Continue soon
😊

Edited by heytal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey ya Simi Di!
*Finally caught you :P*
he he Kiddo here :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome prt...geet's dad n frnds came n she slppd. Maan...nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey sim ...after soo looong yaar ...any ways ...gr88 that geet responded ...niice that maan let mohindar yash n meera stay ...hatsoff to dadima foe restraining order ...updt sooon yaaar PLEZZZ eagerlyy waiting ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well at least she responsed back :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome simi
miss u yaar and our gang payal sonu
purvi
sona
everyone
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
i wonder whats gonna happen now
cont soon please
cant wait till the next part

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