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Hey guys,
This is my new fan fic after Shetan Ka Ghar...it will be another dark story with a twist..so I hope that you guys like this story and like Maan in his new avatar as the Raja in this modern era...
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Few other things:
This concept was given to me by MuraadlovesDD and the title suggestion was from her as well..so please if you guys like the concept then the credit should go to her...
Also, can anyone create a banner of Maan and Geet...where Maan is shown as the king? Please it would really mean a lot and the credit will go to the person...
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Chapter 1
A place stood apart from everything in Hoshiyarpur or "Kingdom" as many pronounce it. The palace, the people that often lives there spoke of money. Everything was high-five, even the guards and servants were given proper clothing to represent the wealth of people living inside it. Many people feared stepping a foot inside the palace, not because of what it is but because of who lived inside the palace.
Nothing happens anything without his permission, no one can leave the palace unless he says so and most importantly no one can speak a word against him. Everyone bowed down to him as he walked, cleared their path as he passed by them...no one would dare to cross his path that is until now.
"Sir we have found her..."
"bring her to me"
"Yes sir..."
A women dressed in heavy sari and ornaments...he turns around to look at her and smirks...she looks at him with anger...he walks toward her while she walks back...this was his kingdom..his palace, he was the raja of this place...anything he says goes and no one can defy him not even his own grandmother...
He looks at his wife as he walks toward her...she had fear in her eyes with each step that he took toward her but kept her stance..that is what impresses him about her..she wasn't scared like others..she wasn't afraid to go against him even knowing the consequences of it...
"What is this I come home and found out that you were missing...I was so worried about you. We haven't even been married for two days and already you decided to run away?" (he touches her face but she pushes his hand away..this angered him but he controlled it...she begins to walk away from him without answering him..he grabs her arm harshly...) Answer me when you are spoken to Geet...
"Why should I..." (she looks directly into his eyes)
"Lower your eyes...if it was anyone else then I would've taken their you should be lucky that you have the luxury of being my queen in this palace..a lot of girls die to be in my place"
"Well I am not like every other girls..."
(He smirks) that I know that is why I have chosen you...my beautiful wife...everything in my palace is priceless like you
"I am not a doll Maan..."
Maan: Maan ji...I am your husband call me with respect and don't make me repeat this again...(he gives her a deadly glare that was enough to scare her...she tried to back up a little...he holds her in place..) I haven't given you any permission to move yet have I?
Geet: woh mein
Maan (looks at her sari and sees dirt spot on it) Is this a way for queen to dress? What will people say that Rajkumar Maan Singh Khruana's doesn't give his wife proper clothes? (he shakes her harshly making her gasp in pain..) My family reputation means everything to me...I will not let you spoil that
Geet: If your name means so much to you then why did you wish to marry a mere peasant? I came from filth...
Maan: phool bhi toh keechar se aate hai...usse bhi toh pyaar se simbhal kar rakhte hai jaise ki maine tumhe yaha par rakha hai...I gave you everything that every women dreams of...
Geet; mujhe yeh saab nahi chahiye
Maan: Tumare chahine se kuch nahi hota..joh main chahata hoon wahi hoga...(he picks up the phone and calls two service women..they arrived within five minutes...) clean her up...we have to leave tonight
Geet: Where are we going?
Maan (looks at her and smirks...) To your new kingdom in Delhi...away from here...(she looks at him shocked...he leaves the room leaving her alone with two strange women...she felt like a doll in his hands...she didn't know what her tomorrow will bring...for now she is living in a house like every other objects...she has no say in anything all because of her so called husband...Rajkumar Maan Singh Khurana...)
He was the raja in Hoshiyarpur where everyone feared him...everyone...he owned hundreds of house in almost every city..people knew who he was just by hearing his name..it was enough to get them scared...he owned Khruana Constructions that have many branches spread out around the world. This was his ancestors home, often he would only come here on the death of his parents anniversary but who knew that he won't be leaving Hoshiyarpur alone this time...
Maan went downstairs in the living room...all the servants stood in line as he came by..he walked in front of them one by one giving each of an angry look...no one looked straight into his eyes knowing the consequences.
"Who was the person in charge of the queen ?" (No one spook they just stood there shaking with fear and anticipation...) "I am going to ask last time and if someone does not step in front within 3 seconds then I won't be resonsible of what happens next..." One...two...
One of the servant grabbed his leg asking for forgiveness..."please sir forgive me..I will not repeat this mistake again...please..." Maan kicks him and takes out his belt..."You...whip him until he remembers who's orders he follows..." (he orders one of the servant..he looks at his friend on the floor helplessly...) "please sir I will not do this again... please..." (Maan ignores him the servant with the belt starts to hit the guy while he screamed and yelled for mercy...Maan leave the living room feeling satisfied...)
Maan smirks as he heard the yelling and screaming...He never gave punishment himself..he only touched things that were up to his status. Of course, Geet was the only exception...her beauty made him forget his rules and his principals..all he knew was that he needed to have her at any cost...everyone saluted him with their heads down as he walked out of the house...
He stops in front of one of the security guards..."You slap yourself..." The guard does so..."Another one..." He again slaps himself..."another one..." The guard does so again..Maan laughs out loud as the guard kept hitting himself and then he stopped laughing looking at the guard with anger...
"Keep hitting yourself until you know what is your duty..."
He takes out his phone call as he gets inside the limo..."Hello have my private jet ready by tonight and also make sure the palace is nicely decorated by tomorrow morning...I am bringing home my queen..." He shuts the phone...
So how do you guys like it?
Also, I know this is short but this is what came to my head so far..
I WON'T BE ABLE TO UPDATE ON MONDAY...So see you guys on TUESDAY!!😳
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