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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the positive feedback guys...you really made my day...so YES, I will continue with this FF...
I just hope I fulfil all your expectations...wish me luck and as soon as the first chapter is ready, you all will be notified... personally...
Thank you once again for your support
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What can get any better than vampires, angels and IPKKND!!!!! LOVE the concept!! PLEASE add me to your PM list I would love to read more!!!!!!😃
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Chapter 1
The day was turning out to be one of the hottest yet, as the sun started to climb its way up. Khushi was heaving and panting heavily. After what appeared to be hours of tugging and pulling at her loving fathers dead body, Khushi looked behind to see how far she had dragged the body. The body had barely moved!!! The grief which had shrouded Khushi since the death of her father had made her loose her appetite. She hadn't eaten anything since yesterday. The combined heat and fatigue caused Khushi to become dizzy and fall. She had no one to catch her. She fell. Disappointed with her situation, she burst into tears. She needed money to cremate her fathers body and to get a roof over her head.
The ignorant Landlord approached her. He hadn't come to help Khushi, quite the opposite infact. He had come to throw her belongings out. He started rummaging through his rental house and started picking up Khushi's stuff randomly and threw them out.
Khushi: Uncleji, please, just give me till sunset, I will move myself out. Please don't throw my things out like that. Please Uncleji? Have some mercy! I just lost my only family member yesterday and I have no money on me...please I beg of you!!!
The Landlord didn't reply to Khushi's earnest appeal. He kept on picking stuffs up randomly and kept on throwing them out. He then picked up Khushi's dead mothers photo, and just as he was about to hurl it out, he noticed a small pouch attached to the back of the photo frame. Discreetly, he removed the small pouch and put the photo back. He had a look inside the pouch and saw some money inside it. Greedily, he hid the pouch inside his breast pocket. Quite oblivious to what was happening right behind her back, Khushi busily gathered her few scattered belongings from the ground outside.
The pompous Landlord walked outside to Khushi and started talking to her sweetly.
"Since I am a very kind and noble man, and I can see how your fathers death has affected you, I will allow you till the sunset today to gather all your belongings from my house and move out. But beware girl, only till sunset. After sunset, I will come and lock the house and then whatever of your things are left behind will then belong to me. Do you understand me?" said the selfish Landlord, happy that he had cleverly pocketed some extra money from the dead tenant's daughter. After saying that he stepped past Khushi's fathers dead body.
The Landlord was busy thinking to himself : Silly girl!!! I bet she doesn't even know that there was money in the house! Otherwise she would have given that money to me to extend her stay here and cremated her father's body too. It seemed to be quite a lot of money too, I saw several Rs.100 notes in the pouch. I bet her father was saving it for her wedding!!!
Khushi was very happy at the Landlords kindness. She thanked him heartily. Atleast she had till sunset to arrange for some money. She stepped into the house to put away her discarded possessions and gasped at what she saw!!!
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Shashi Gupta, Khushi's father, was looking down from heaven at his beloved daughter. He was angry at how the Landlord had robbed his daughter off all the money he had saved. He turned around to face God and fell down to his knees and began imploring to HIM in a silent prayer at the injustice that was being done to his daughter.
Just then Arnav appeared next to God. He silently watched and waited for the turmoil present in Shashi's eyes to be addressed.
God: Shashi, get up and come here. When living on Earth, you were kind, loving, brave, righteous, you always fought all the hurdles that I put in your way to test your strenght and faith, you never gave up. You taught the same values to your child. Even those who are undeserving of my mercy are showered with my blessings. So what makes you think that there will be no one to look after your loving and kind spirited daughter? hmm?
A bright smile spread across Shashi's face. Tears of gratitude and happiness made their way down his face. He felt calm and then for the first time since Yamraj had brought him to heaven, Shashi began to take notice of his surrounding. What he saw filled his spirit with joy and peace.
Even though, there was no source of light present, the heavenly paradise was anything but dull. The place was bathed in a warm, glowing radiance reflected by the present Gods and Angels. Souls, which had acquired purity and love through their deeds on Earth were also present. Abundant beauty was surrounded by tranquility and peace. There was light chatter going on between young and old Angels alike, some younger Angels were laughing while the Baby Angels charmed everyone with their play.
God:...hmmm...so Arnav you finally found time to grace ME with your presence?
Arnav (with mishchievious twinkle in his eyes) replied: It would be impossible for me to grace YOU with my presence, since YOU Are Present Everywhere. So, my Loving Lord, I never left your presence to begin with.
God chuckled and then in a more serious voice he began: Man kind on earth are in more danger than ever. When I had appeared on Earth in one of my many forms, I had banished and destroyed All Demons. All Demons that were bad that is. Those that were kind and those who had descided to change their ways were left behind. However, their descendants got entangled in Evil ways to attain immortality. They exist as vampires now. In the beginning it wasn't a problem since people on earth mostly caught them and destroyed them. But now, with passing time, they have become more ferocious and blood thirsty in their quest for immortality. As you all know, we never interfere directly in Mankind's plight. However, this situation has become out of control for man on earth as those who are power hungry are also joining forces with the creatures to attain immortality.
God (continued): So, for the first time, I am going to send five of my best Angels to contain this plague of vampires. Arnav, Aakash, Sidharth, Payal and Maansi, you all are allowed, for this once to interfere, but mind you, you are not to show your true form to any human. As soon as you all have destroyed the creatures of darkness, you all are to return to heaven. And if for some reason, you loose your way, or use your powers for any other reasons apart from the benefit of mankind, then you shall spend the remainder of your lifetime on earth as a normal human being. You shall loose all your powers then. You are free to help anyone and ask for extra help from other Angels, should you need it. Understood?
Arnav, Aakash, Sidharth, Payal and Maansi: Yes
God: Except Arnav, you all can go now. Make your way to earth. Whether you all stay together, or work as separate is your choice. Arnav, I need to talk to you regarding another matter.
After, the other four Angels had departed, Arnav moved closer to God. Then God looked at Shashi, and nodded once at him, signalling him to come closer as well. Looking at Shashi, God siad to Arnav, "Arnav apart from the mission of destroying vampires, you are to watch over Khushi as well. Help her become safe. She is all alone, so find her a home and a family.
"In other words, find her a prince charming?" asked Arnav. "But God, matches are made in heaven by You, and she can meet her love only when You Will It to happen, so how can I interfere?"
"Do not worry about that Arnav. Just do as I asked and when the time comes, you will know who is her Prince charming, ok?" replied God in his mysterious way.
"okay, then I will. I will protect her until she meets him and then she will be his responsibility, I better get going, I can't let Aakash be the first to reach earth", saying that Arnav flew down to earth.
God chuckled.
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Comments and opinions are most welcome...and thanks to the encouraging remarks of those people who commented...this one is dedicated to you all...
PS: do let me know if the story starts getting boring...I will stop writing it immediately then...lol...don't want to put people to sleep with a boring story... :)
Edited by s-576 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow.. great update 👏 continue soon.. 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AHHH I was sooo excited to read this!!!!!
And you didn't disappoint!!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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liked it very much, after many years i am reading a story which takes me back to my childhood reading all fairytales.
fantastic one really liked it.
update soon yaar.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
hai ki baat hai ji so arnav khushi will be meeting soon
God sure is sounding mysterious huh is he trying to hint something about arhi then i hope so
good update stupid mean and evil landlord hope he rots in hell
so angels going to eradicate the vampires hope they get there in time
thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww this is going so sweet , with Arnav, God, and Angels... I love this but am feeling so SAD for Khushi and what she is going through... can't wait for Arnav to reach her and protect her ... can't wait to read another chapter ...
PLEASE UPDATE SOON ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2
That Day, The Whole Universe became the silent audience, watching spellbound, waiting with baited breadth for the ultimate meeting of The Two Estranged Soulmates. Even Time itself had lost count of the number of times the two lovers had parted ways. Sometimes for the love of others, and at other times, simply because another would come in between them. Then, there were those times when they never met, when they simply withered away and died alone. This time, even Destiny and Fate had come together to scheme and plot, to put an end to their endless pain. Finally, they will meet, and never part or so they feverently hoped!!!
Unawares of the plight of Time, Fate and Destiny, Arnav stretched his glorious wings and swooped down, trying to beat his fellow Angels in the race down to Earth. Sidharth wasn't going to make it easy for Arnav, he thrust his wings forward, and then drove it downward to obtain maximum speed. The race was on.
"Sometimes they behave like kids, really, I mean who would expect Angels to be like that?" complained Payal.
"Okay Payal, you tell me how is an Angel to behave? hmm? All serious, quiet, and serious? Really?!! Tell me, would you have been attracted to Aakash if he had behaved like that with you?" defended Maansi.
Payal laughed. She knew Maansi was right. Both friends descided they had had enough of talking and descided to join the race too. Arnav just barely managed to win.
"Ha! Got you Sid!! Next time I will give you a couple of hours head start?" said Arnav, having a poke at his best friend.
"Oh, that's ok. I will just make sure next time I Don't Slow Down for you to catch up!!" responded Sidharth. "Anyways, what took you so long?"
"Oh, nothing. I just have to protect and watch over a girl. She is an orphan and all, and as soon as she finds her Prince Charming, I am free from her. No biggie" answered Arnav.
"Okay, we better disguise ourselves as humans now. That would make it easier for us to blend in. Then we have to arrange for shelter and all and then we have to ...by the way, how do we differentiate the vampires from normal humans?" asked Maansi.
"We have to wait for it to get dark. Then we can find them easily as they will be hunting for food. During the day it would be next to impossible to identify them as they look pretty ordinary." suggested Aakash.
"What? So they can walk in sunlight? Don't they burn to ashes if they come out during daytime?" asked a shocked Payal. All the other friends smiled at her. Afterall, she wasn't as old as the other Angels.
"No, there is no such thing. They are fibs made by humans, but in reality you cannot tell them apart until they attack, which is why we have to be extra careful. If we kill an innocent man under wrong suspicion, then we will loose our powers and would have to stay as humans on earth until the end of our lifetime," explained a calm Arnav.
The seriousness of their mission downed on them. They could not make any mistakes. There was nothing such as collateral damage in an Angel's or a Gods dictionary.
"Well Arnav, how about you go see if that girl, whom you're to protect, needs any help for now and we will go arrange everything else. We can meet back here. Arnav? Aren't you going as a human to her? " asked Sidharth.
"I just have to protect her and keep her safe until she meets her prince. She does not need to see me. So, I will go as an Angel, invisible. Only when I need to interfere, then will I go as a human to her, makes sense?" came his angry reply. All his friends knew that Arnav did not like getting involved with humans personally. He believed that if he stayed away from them then he would be able to keep himself from falling in Love. To him, love meant messing things up.
Who knew it better than Aakash. The number of times Arnav had to cover for him so that he could go and save Payal (when she had been a human), were endless. The worst one was, when during one of the battles he had to leave Maansi's side to go to Payal's aid, but even then, Arnav had assisted him without a question. But after Payal had passed all her tests sent by the Gods then she had become an Angel. Now they were together forever. He couldn't be happier. He just hoped that Arnav would one day find that true happiness.
That same wish was being thought by the other three Angels. They dearly loved Arnav and they wanted him to discover his happiness. Little did they know that the Whole Universe sided with them in that wish. What the future was going to unfold, only the Gods knew.
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As Khushi turned around, she gasped at what she saw!!! There on the floor, next to her father's feet was a small pouch, which wasn't there before. She looked around but nobody seemed to be searching for a lost pouch. She picked it up gingerly and opened it, hoping to find some clue as to who the owner of the pouch was. She was gobsmacked at the sight of the amount of money the little pouch held. She looked outside again for its owner but found no one howling for their lost treasure. She went inside the house and emptied the contents of the pouch. A letter caught her eye. She opened it, happy that soon she will know who the owner was and she could return their possession to them.
The letter read:
To My Darling Khushi
You really must look beautiful today, on your wedding day. I am giving this letter to your father as I enter the 9th month of my pregnancy. The doctor's have already warned me about the complications regarding having a child in my weakened condition. But know this my sweet daugther, I wouldnot change anything for the entire world. Your father and I love you heaps and I never regretted making this choice. You are my baby, my last link to your father. I love you with all my heart and I am sorry.
I am sorry I will not be there when you cry for me, for your mothers love. I am sorry for not being there when you take your first step & stumble n fall , or when the first time you say your first word. I will also miss your first day of school. But most of all, I am so so sorry, for not being there when you need my hugs to soothe away your worries and fears. I am sorry for not being there when you need my encouragment. I am sorry for missing out on all important events of your life and for not being the first one to congratulate you.
But know this, my child, I am watching over you. I am there with you in spirit and as you are a part of me, I know in some way I still live. Everytime you smile, I will share your joy and everytime you shed a tear, I will hassle the Gods to come to your aid. Even though you may not see me, feel me, I will be there.
My dear, today you are getting married. Be happy. Love your new family as you have come to love your own. If you ever make a mistake, then don't cry over it! Instead, learn from it, and make sure to never repeat it. Live life to its fullest and at its best. Be quick to forgive, but not quick to judge. People make all sorts of mistakes, so give everyone a chance. I hope your husband loves you more than the number of stars present in the sky, but if he doesn't already, then I am sure he will soon, it is impossible to not love you.
I know that as I am already in love with you and I have not even met you!!!
Stay safe and look after your father. Could you do something for me? Can you make sure he does not miss me a lot. He would get more careless with old age, I know him. Make sure he takes all his medicines on time, please, as a favour to an absent mother.
Since its your wedding day, I have a very small gift for you. I am leaving my anklets (payals) to you and also, I will attach a recepie for Jalebi to this letter. Why Jalebi, you ask? Well, while I am pregnant, I got this huge craving for Jalebi and no matter how much I eat it, it just does not seem to go away. So I am guessing that it must be your favourite. And who knows, maybe someday, when you are expecting your little angel, you might crave jalebi as well...
Take care my little gudiya
I will always watch over you..
My Aarshivaad and Best wishes to You and your Husband
Khushi burst into tears and turned the letter over and sure enough there was the recepie for jalebi and her mother's anklets taped to the bottom of the page. Khushi hugged the letter to her heart and cried out for a mother she never got to meet. Then fresh tears broke loose when she realised that the one man for whom her mother was worried had also passed away.
After sometime, when she could not cry anymore, Khushi collected all her money and put it back in the little pouch and went out to make arrangements for her fathers cremation.
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The greedy Landlord stepped into his house quickly and bolted the doors shut. He went over to the table and shoved his hands in his pocket to take the pouch of money out. He couldn't find it!!! He looked inside his pockets and he saw there was a hole at the bottom lining of his pocket. He became puzzled. He was pretty sure there were no holes in the pocket when he put his clothes on in the morning!!! How? what?, the Landlord thought.
<FLASHBACK>
While the Landlord had been talking to Khushi:
["Since I am a very kind and noble man, and I can see how your fathers death has affected you, I will allow you till the sunset today to gather all your belongings from my house and move out. But beware girl, only till sunset. After sunset, I will come and lock the house and then whatever of your things are left behind will then belong to me. Do you understand me?" said the selfish Landlord, happy that he had cleverly pocketed some extra money from the dead tenant's daughter. ]
Arnav had appeared, but, because he was in his true form, he was invisible. He had watched the Landlord pocket the poor girls money when he had been in heaven. At the time he had not known that he would soon be assigned to protect her. It was her he had been watching when Aakash had asked him to go before God.
"I can not punish you as your bad deeds one day will come back to haunt you. But I can help her." Arnav thought. He gazed at the Landlords pocket and willed the threaded seam to unravel, causing a gap to appear. Just as the Landlord had stepped past the dead body, the pouch had slipped down and fallen next to Shashi's feet.
<END OF FLASHBACK>
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I hope you all enjoyed reading this chapter, please let me know what you thought of Khushi's mothers letter, and I hope I didn't disappoint anyone.
Thank you very very much for the kind words and your support. Originally, I had thought I would update it next week, but then as I sat down, my fingers started to type out this chapter. So here it is for you all. Please don't forget to comment, who knows with more encouragements I may come up with chapter 3 as well...lol...but definitely not tomorrow...I have to work on my other FF as well...
Oh and one more thing...Whoever Comments First Gets To Make A Special Scene Request which they wish to see in the upcoming chapter...I would write it in, maybe not exactly but as close to it as possible...so good luck...so here goes...comments and bashing can officially begin now...
Edited by s-576 - 13 years ago
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OHH the letter was AMAZING!!!!
The whole chapter was AMAZING!!!!!
I really can't wait to read more!!!!!

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