All My Life (kriyaansh ff)updated pt 12

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

its awsome
loved it alot
wowww kriya dance haye!!!!
n tanni ab smjh aa hi gya hoga
thnk god rey ko doubt to ho ra h
plsss update nxt asap

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star94

@star94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

loved it..it was awesum... update soon

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

awesome update...the kriyansh LLHH in the start refreshened all memories...hate taani like hell...gud that kria gave it on her face,...loved how rey stopped kria...and his curiosity...eager for jungle pucnic...superb job...

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Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: spicyrays
wow wat a update... i must say... kriya ka dance was d bst prt atlst ab uski feelings bahar toh aayi...

yeah thank u ...😆

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Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

😊

Originally posted by: yogini64
Damn! . . . This taani 😡

samajhti kya hai apne aap ko . . . 🤬

1 kathak karni kya aati hai,,,, badi aayi kriya ko challange karne . . . 😛

but here she proved dat who's the best!! . . . . 😉

I expected the same song only for the fusion dance . . . 😃

yaar i was bit confused about the song i tried to find something else but i cudn't so sorry if disappointed..😊

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Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

😃

Originally posted by: Jiya_ArSha4Ever
Nice update dear. Enjoyed reading it.
Loved the dance ka takrar between Kria and taani. Taani was dancing with enviness for kria while kria was dancing with her heart full of emotions.

thank u..i wanted that emotions to come i u felt then m succeeded😃

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Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: rhu90
nice update... kriya's dance was mindblowing...hate that taani...thanx 4 the pm

thank u ...😛

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Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Kriyansh_jaanu
awesumm updt dear...loved the dance...
atlast taani also came to know dat she can't even compare kria wid her self...

plzz updt soon

Kria is born to dance no 1 can b compared to her...thats wat i wanted to show...bhale 1 saal to kya 10 saal b dance na kare to b 10Tani ko hara sakti hai...😃

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Angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

😉

first of all thank u for liking the second part ...whoever read it and all the ppl who commented thank u thank u thank u so so so much...

now here we go...

all the weaklings dazling came to Kria...

Vish: Kria r u ok ...tum aise...

Neha: ya r u ok kria...

Kria: haaan guys m perfevtly ok...mjhe kya hua ...

Bharat: par tu aise...

Kria: guys mene aj aik saal bad dance kiya ...aik saal baad pta nhe main kese door rahe dance se ...is liye shayad m khud to control nhe karpayi...

Rey ,Swaron ,Tani and all of them were listening this...

Kria: tani i m really sorry...i didn't meant to do this ...

Tani:(saw every1 luking )no no kria i m sorry ...mene tumhe aisa kaha actually agar aisa na kehti ti tum dance nhe karti ...in sab s sunaa tha tumhe challenges buht pasand h...so is liye y sab...

Kria: dont say sorry itx ok...

Vicky: come on guys sorry sorrry baad m karna enjoy the party...

All of them dances Tarey together Kria was just luking at them...

Amar: hey kria Rahul nhe aya...

Kria: Ahem...nhe use kuch kaam tha wo Dehradoon chale gaya...

Rey and Swayam were litening to it...

so they partyed for long time than evry1 started going..

Vish: hey ! where r y staying..???

Kria: hmmm...abhi tak to hotel m jab tak koi gar nhe milta...

Sharon: Ahem..wo ...tum mere gar p ruk sakti ho...

every 1 shocked...Sharon herself embarassed...

Neha: Neha not believing u saying this Sharon...

Sharon:haan to is m kya h...she is our frnd and frnf ki help krni chaiye...(she luked at swayam and swayam smiled by this gesture of hers, sharon blushed)

Kria: thanx Sharon but i'll manage kuch na kuch hojaye ga bando bast...

Sharon: but its perfectly ok tum mere saath reh sakti ho..

Kria: but m tumhare gar m aise kese..

Sharon: ok to tum pay kardena...u can live as a paying guest?????

every1 like swayam tera asar hai😆

Kria: ok ...she smiled...

Sharon and Kria went home together ...Sharon hugged Swayam (side hug haan zyaada free mat hona😆😉)and said bye...Viha and other went home..Swayam carried tani with him ...she hugged Rey too...Kria saw this but tried to ignore...Rey hesitated a bit..all of them home now...

Sharon's home...

Sharon: be comfortable kria...this is ur room

Kria:itx beautiful...

Sharon:thanx but ab y tumhara h...

Kria hugged her and said.

Kria: thank u ... ur an Angel...

Sharon hugged her back...and said..

Sharon ...koi baat nhe...

both went for sleep...

Sharon slept...

but Kria can't she had all the bad memories...and cudn't control herself and cries hard ...so hard that she had to put her hand on her mouth so no 1 can hear her voice...she was alone and no 1 was with her...she canr even share this to her best frnd Swayam cuz Tani is his sister...

she wrote in her diary

"Meri aankhon main Ansu aaye na hote,
Wo humein dekh kar muskuraye na hote,
Sochti hun aksar tanhai may main,
Meri zindagi main kash wo aaye na hote,
Na tarapte hum unke liye itna,
Dil ne khawab unke sajaye na hote,
Naa toot kar bikharti main is kadar,
Kash wo mere dil main apna ghaar banaye na hote'."

just like thiss...

there Rey cud not understand what us going on in his life...y he moved toward kria...y he stoped her...he is with Tani and now he have no right to think about Kria...he thought that he shud b commited to Tani and shud have concerns with Kria but said to himseif...

Rey: but is dil ka kya krun jo har waqt use dekhna chahta...use mehsoos karna chahta h...rey stop control urself tum y kya soch rahe ho tum Tani k saath annd wo kisi aur k saath thats the truth ...

NEXTDAY IN ST LOUIS COLLEGE...

in atrium princi announcing sumthing...all dazling and weaklings were there...

Princi: so student we have plaaned a camp for u in jungle to teach u how to tacle xtreme situation and how to live in jungle...

Nil: hum kya jungleee hain jo jungle m rahen g...

Simmi: shhh.shup kar...

Princi:you will have fun there wahan tum logon ko rock climbing b sikhai jaye g and much more thing so hum kal ja rahein h and itx compulsary sab ko ana zaroori hai...

every1 shouted yeahhh...

Rinni:rack climbing it'll b fun...

Amar: haan mada aye da...

Rimar LLHH...

Vish: yeah guys it'll b fun...

Kria: wo b compulsary ...ab to chalna parega ...

Vicky: main and babu jungle m wow...

Tani: aur m Rey k saaath..

Rey smile but hesitated...

Kria also luked this but she cant do anything ...

swaron alo luked each other and smiled like they'll also have some time alone...

Precap:

do pyaar karne wale jungle m kho gaye...

ignore typo errors didin't recheck

for pms add Angel56...

hope u all liked it..

"
Ajeeb ha
lat hote hain is Muhabbat mein Dil ke,
Udaas jab bhi Yaar ho Qasoor apna lagta hai.."

"You can close your eyes to things you don't want to see, but you can't close your heart to things you don't want to feel."

Thank u...for reading...

Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

loved each and every bit of it...the sharon-kria bonding...kria's diary part...rey thiking abt kria...is taani ka kuch karo plzzz...she gets on my nerves...jungle mein romance,...ab to dekhna hi padega...i want u to update asap...roaking update...