Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [Chap 16 - pg 84] - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry for late comment anjie
it was awesome, rly detailed ;)
loved it
do update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
loving the story ❤️...and the suspense as well...if UV has kidnapped M or nt?? 😲...though m pretty sure it's him...😛...frm the phone calls and all...bt i'm thinking wht if it's someone else behind it and UV actually ends up saving her?? 😆...it's just a thought 😛...really eager to know who's the kidnapper and will devgarh ppl will be able to help M in tim or nt??...or will M help herself?? 😲...so many ques yet to be answered 😆...waiting fr the answers to come soon...so plzzz update soon dear!!! 😃
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Originally posted by: ultravioletray

😃awesome...

different story...I'm very eager to know how Manveer will fall in love😆...nice nd interesting👍🏼...thanx 4 pm...plzzz update soon😃

thnx dear ...no probz...will try


Originally posted by: -Priya01

Hi Baby 🤗 hope u r fine

Lovely update ...thxs for the pm n do continue soon

hey priya dii 🤗yupp i amm :)
thnx dii ...no problem...i will try...


Originally posted by: -Niha-

sorry for late comment anjie

it was awesome, rly detailed ;)
loved it
do update soon :)

no [robz dear ...
thnx...
glad u loved it :)
will tryy...


Originally posted by: akshi_t

loving the story ❤️...and the suspense as well...if UV has kidnapped M or nt?? 😲...though m pretty sure it's him...😛...frm the phone calls and all...bt i'm thinking wht if it's someone else behind it and UV actually ends up saving her?? 😆...it's just a thought 😛...really eager to know who's the kidnapper and will devgarh ppl will be able to help M in tim or nt??...or will M help herself?? 😲...so many ques yet to be answered 😆...waiting fr the answers to come soon...so plzzz update soon dear!!! 😃

glad u r loving it :):)...haha hope u like the future updates n ur ques are cleared ...if nt u r free to ask me ...ill be glad to answer them 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

thank you everyone for the likes and comments 🤗
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Hey everyone...hope you like the update...


Jay takes the note and reads it again

Dear Jay ,

I know you would get this note sooner or later .Actually i wanted to tell you that i am running away from here and i don't want to be devdags maharani . Hope you understand .

Manyata

'ohh manyata jiji...what have you done ?...pls come back soon '

Manyata looks a the clock placed above the study table on the wall...it was going to be 4 pm soon...she decided to break the window and run away at night . she thinks for sometime and then falls asleep...nearly after thirty minutes after sleeping she hears the opening of a door so gets up . The man had come again...with food... he looks at the breakfast tray and just takes the breakfast tray and keeps the lunch and goes...

Manyata now decides to eat so she can run away at night easily...and dosent feel hungry during the way . She silently eats her food and goes back to sleep...

She gets up at night at nearly 8 pm...hhmm food ws already kept there...maybe the person had gone somewhere ...she decides to wait till 11 pm atleast and so sits and eats and then thinks about what she is going to do

' soo id break the window and go outside from here . Then i will run along the road to reach a main road . There should be a main road somewhere . Just hope i can run away before anyone notices that i am not here ...huh only one more day...i have to reach the mahal before Friday..." she thinks...and sits on the study table wondering how to pass the time ...

She looks at the clock for the hundredth time in the last 3 hours . Phew the time is here at last...she goes near the door and tries to listen if anyones outside ...No sound...She picks up a lamp from nearby and breaks the window...and luckily it dosent make much noise ...she tries to squeeze out of the window and gets a little cut on her finger but managaes to squeeze out...

Uday is working out in his gym when his phone rings

Person "boss i have to go...have an emergency so i am leaving the house and the room locked "

Uday "Whatt ??? okk then you can go ill go there for tonight " he says angrily

He goes to his car and starts driving ' now how would i face her ?...' He drives through the deserted streets...nearly 30 minutes to reach there...

Manyata looks around and starts running from one side of the road...She runs a bit inside the jungle but still with the road not wanting to be seen ... she runs a bit more and sees a small tes shop there and decides to ask the person about the way...

Manyata "excuse me can u tell me what is the way to mumbai ? "

Person " yess if you keep on oing straight along this road you will reach Mumbai "

Manyata " okk thank you " she says and starts walking again...

She walks for some time and then sees a car coming towards her . She puts out her hand signalling it to stop ...

Uday stops the car as he gets a phone call...

Person "boss my work was finished so i came back only to see that she has gone...she broke the only window in that room and ran away..."

Uday " what? How ? i told you to keep her in the second floor room na then how can she escape through the window ??"

Person " umm actually she ...wwas in the g...ground floor room only..."

Uday "why ? i told you na ? ohh leave it just look around maybe she would be nearby only ...and ill look for her here.."

Uday starts driving again as they cut the call but this time he drives slowly looking around if he could find her...

The car stops in front of manyata and Manyata goes to ask for lift but is shocked to see who is inside

"a...arjun ? what are you doing here ? you were supposed to be in delhi na ?"

Arjun "ya manyata but when i read about your coronation ceremony i came here to join you all ..."

Arjun was in manyatas college and secretly admired her . He was a rich buisnessmans son and wanted to marry manyata and so took this opportunity of the coronation ceremony to meet her family but manyata hated him as once he had tried to force her and so always tried to maintain a distance from him

Arjun "okk soo you need a lift ? "

Manyata " noo i don't "

Arjun " but manyata how will you go alone ...that too during night "

Manyata didn't feel good and the way in which he was speaking kind of scared her ...

Manyata "no ill be fine...its okk ...you carry on with your drive and ill go myself " She said and started walking ...

Arjun "but manyata its not safe..." he said getting out of the car and walking towards her

Manyata "ill be safe till you are away from me..."

Arjun "what ?? what are you talking about ?"

Manyata " nothing...justt...uhh you go your way and ill go mine...soo bbye "

Arjun " No manyata why don't you understand...its night and i cant ..." he said angrily advancing towards her

Manyata " you don't have to worry about me arjun...w...what are you doing ?" she said backing away

Arjun "Manyata you are coming with me and thats final .

Manyata "you are no one to decide that so just go ..." she said and started running...


She ran for sometime and then noticed another car standing there and a person standing outside and talking on his mobile...she ran near him and said

Manyata "please help me...someone is after me..."

The person cuts the call and turns around...

Manyata "Uday ???"

Uday "Manyata ? What are you doing here ?"

Manyata " Running away..." she says and then turns around and sees that Arjun is goin away now...maybe he saw Uday...

Uday "from whom ?"

Manyata "don't know...but why am i telling you all this...sorry to disturb you yuvraj udayveer singh..." she says and starts walking away ...he stops her and holds her arms and drags her towards the front door ...

Manyata "What are you doing Uday ? Leave me "

Uday " Shut up manyata...You dare speak a word now " he shouts...

She looks at him confused " You have no right to shout at me uday " she says

Uday " ohh really ? just get in the car manyata "

Manyata " i wont..."

Uday drags her and forces her to sit and then goes to the drivers seat quickly and starts driving...

Manyata " Uday where are we going ? Mumbai is the opposite way na "

Uday " Manyata you don't have to worry about that... "


Precap - Manyata back at that stupid house...


Chapter 7 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/58363884�

Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update ,finally manveer in one house ,but it was too short ,i was expecting some manveer scenes ,but itz ok ,i will for next update:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: annysyed

Beautiful update ,finally manveer in one house ,but it was too short ,i was expecting some manveer scenes ,but itz ok ,i will for next update:)

thnx anny...ya...lolzz ya im used to short updates 😉...hmm dunno worry vo to aate hi rahenge...hehe...kk will try to update soon 😃 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update Anjali 👍🏼
Poor thing doesn't even know that Uday is the one who has kidnapped her. Lol 😆 . She must be regretting not going with Arjun now. Haha.
I hope they talk it out and try to clear out their misunderstandings till the time they are together in that house. Update the next part soon. Thanks for the PM! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally manverr again...came face to face...waooo...plzz update da next part soon plzzz...its becoming interesting mre n more...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update:)waiting for the next part...

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