Manveer FF : Separate Worlds [Chap 16 - pg 84] - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ManVeer4ever

Lovely update <333 wanna see some manveer scenes in next update :D

thnx...will be there
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Originally posted by: preya_radev

that was awesome loved oops uday caught manyata and now she is going to be back in that house hope we will see some manveer scenes update soon and thanks for the pm

thnx...glad u loved it...haha yaa...yup u will...i will try...no probz...😆
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Originally posted by: alissa345

awesome update anjy.👏👏👏.loved it😉..btw missing ur bandarss😳😉


thnx alissa dii 😃
glad you loved it 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cutie pie waiting shaiting for ur next update with hot manveer romance
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: annysyed

Cutie pie waiting shaiting for ur next update with hot manveer romance

okk anny babes...will update soon
Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: annysyed

Soon meanz very soon:):)

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Originally posted by: annysyed

Datz lke my good girl

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing...!!! ManVeer in 1 house..!! Sounds sooo Dreamy..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 2010

very nice thanks for pm

thnx...no probz 😆
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Originally posted by: princess_T

Amazing...!!! ManVeer in 1 house..!! Sounds sooo Dreamy..!!

thnx...yaa its soo dreamy 😍...
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey everyone 🤗. Thanks a lot lot and lot for the lovely comments and likes .🤗 They really are very appreciative and make me feel like writing more and more 😆 soo heres chapter 7 ...sorry for the small update


They drove for some time while manyata kept on speaking the whole time...after 30 mins of drive Uday stopped the car and got out...Manyata looked at all sides

Manyata "Udayy , where are we ? ...we should have been in...OHH NO " she says as she notices the same house "what are we doing here ?"

Uday " We are going to stay here "

Manyata "no im not going inside...i want to go to Mumbai..."

Uday "Manyata you are coming inside and thats final " he said while opening the door ...

Manyata " no no no and you cant take me inside " she said standing up and folding her hands across her chest...

Uday " just wait and watch "

He picks her up in his arms and starts walking near the door . manyata looks at him wide eyed and then starts struggling

Manyata " uday le me go ...i don't want to stay here ...i want to go home '

Uday " shut up manyata "

Manyata "nahiiinnn...i want to go home...H-O-M-E ...and nowhere else " she shouts

Uday " Manyata..."

Manyata " yaaa" she says...now lost in his eyes

Uday " i know the spelling of home..."

Manyata "ohhh...whatt? when did i say you don't? " she says getting back to reality

Uday knocks the door...Someone opens the door...

Manyata looks at the person and notices that hes the same person...then she looks at uday and notices that they are talking through signs and thus realizes that its all udays plan . She closes her eyes and hugs uday and whispers to him

Manyata "Uday please i don't want to go there again "

Uday "sorry manyata but you have to "

He walks inside and tells him to clear the second floor room . He takes her in another room ...not the one in which she had been before and slowly makes her sit on the bed and then leaves...locking the door behind him...

Uday goes outside and sits on the sofa waitin for the person to come...

Person "Boss i have to leave now..."

Uday "okk but no one else should come to know about this so it would be better if you keep your mouth shut "

Person "yess boss , i wont tell anyone"

The person says and leaves . Uday goes to the second floor room and checks it . The room has one bed , a study table , a lamo , clock , window and washroom and is nearly the same as the other one . The only thing is that it is on second floor so no one can escape through the window . He takes a second look and then goes down . He unlocks the door and notices that manyatas now asleep . He stands there llost in her . he comes out of his thoughts as the person leaves the house shutting the door and making a lot of noise .

Uday goes near manyata to wake her up . He stands there lost in her beuty . Her cheeks were pink maybe because of all the running she did . He wanted to peck her once but controlled himself . He picked her up not wanting to disturb her sleep and took her to the room upstairs . He placed her on the bed slowly and went away smiling .

He went to his room which was on the ground floor and sat on the couch and switched on the tv...He took a glass and poured some wine drinking it slowly . He smiled thinking of manyata...wait...what was happening...suddenly he turned serious and tensed...what was happening ? why was he thinking of manyata ? He tried to focus on the news channel he was watching and succeeded too...for sometime..It was nearly 3pm when he slept...

In the morning...manyata woke up to get confused ' haan ? where am i ? i ran away breaking the window yesterday but the window is still here ...' she looked out through the window and noticed that now she was on the second floor ... ' no chances of running away now'...

She went and tried to open the door again...no use...it was Thursday ...how was she going to escape now...

Rajpurohit ji came to visit the mahal once before the coronation ceremony to see if everything was in order . Daadisaab talked to him for sometime before the other members of the family checked everything and came

Ds " rajpurohit ji can we change the date of coronation ceremony . Actually manyata has gone out somewhere so she wont be able to attend it ..."

Rajpurohit ji " what ? how can this happen ? this was one of the most important days for devgad and for her so how could she go out?"

Ds " actually rajpurohit j ii think she is in some kind of problem..."

Rajpurohit ji "i will see to it ... there were two dates for the ceremony one was of tomorrow and the other of next year ...now its all your wish if you want to keep it tomorrow or next year "

Ds "umm can we delay it till next year ?"

Rajpurohit ji "okk but its only because rajkumari manyata is not here "

Ds "ji rajpurohit ji "

they delay the date and announce it on tv and radio...

Manyata knocks the door loudly and starts shouting

"i want to go home . let me go . open this door "

Uday gets up as he hears the noise . 'What the hell ?'

Manyata is about to kick the door when the door opens and she falls on the person standing in front . She opens her eyes which she closed when she was about to fall to see uday holding her .

Uday "what were you doing ?"

Manyata "i want to get out . tomorrow is my crowning ceremony uday and you know its very important so take your revenge some other time "

Uday " manyata what do you think that i don't know that tomorrow is your crowning ...but poor you...wont be there to attend it " he said smirking

Manyata widens her eyes in horror " huh noo i would run away from here and you wont be able to do anything "

Uday "ohh really ...lets see "

Manyata "now would you care to leave me ?"

Uday "noo not here ...".he goes to the room again and makes her sit on the bed and goes outside and is about to lock the door when he leaves it open

Uday "on second thoughts...ill leave it open ...manyata you are going to make the breakfast today..."


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Edited by Anjalika13 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update. Pls give more Manveer scene in the next update. Thnks 4 the PM.
Edited by Arieltabi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Arieltabi

Nice update. Pls give more Manveer scene in the next update. Thnks 4 the PM.

thnx...okkk...no probz...😊
thnx for commenting and liking 😃

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