Make a Scene ! Story # 1 ...Arti's story! - Page 2

Originally posted by: arti07

piu😃...arey yaar my fingers need a swedish spa after this😳 and chor police meine short mein explain kar diya tha kanhi par shayad

glad u liked a romance without chii typical kes-gul...and me done with update... now its ur turn (ofcourse with lots of chii and ahem ahem)😳

and piu i almost skipped that u brought a new ff just reading that got to admit this banaras waala ff is so capitivating and i think its the best one... yeah i love how raw and crass this kesar is ...seriously i m just glued to chair...thanks for such a lovely ff

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

hain itni jaldi padh liya abhi to kaha 7 chappis padhne hain..I am glad that you liked it..Ab tu swedish spa k baad phir se type karna shuru kar😛

i read 2 chapiis and first chapii mein hi ahem ahem i simply loved it will give detail comment on ur ff and om shaanti😆 whts that😆

and wht about the post life waala sequence bring it soon

Brilliant lil alternation Arti,beautifully done,I know the beemari scene was the longest scene in the show where that blotch called Talli was absent,I mean from between them still they managed to bring her in between the scene, kya kare kismet but coming to your write-up I loved it,wish it was in the show...

Originally posted by: enchanted23

Brilliant lil alternation Arti,beautifully done,I know the beemari scene was the longest scene in the show where that blotch called Talli was absent,I mean from between them still they managed to bring her in between the scene, kya kare kismet but coming to your write-up I loved it,wish it was in the show...

Kesar's trade mark of giving that mesmerized look to Gulaal in any situation was something that was so missing after he turned house husband uss waqt toh jayada hona chahiye tha but then he got conscious of what she would think alas! beautiful chemistry wasted

I agree with Mini,that moment of hisaab barabar was really good and typical pre-leap Gulaal when she met Vasant in her village,but the soft kissing of his hands by stealing that moment away from her is what lingers on after you have read through the scene,amazing write-up,hope you can come up with few more when you get chance Thank you for doing this one...

thanks dear ...yaa bimari scene was our absolute fav coz the crocodile haddi wasn't there ...thanks the director for small mercies😳...and bang on aditi the trademark kesar's look was absent after they stayed together... it was such a miss... the chemistry just got wasted in stupid ramblings like wicked panba paneer pakoda and yeh jeevan hai😡... yeh couple thodha flirt kar leta yaa romance kar lete to kya aliens aa jaate. and biting finger by chota kesu is my absolute fav scene from the show (he he he banda bachpan mein jyada flirt tha) 😆.no wonder i always prefer chota kesu😉 ...so just thought to put this scene on the big bore couples (mojiri padne waali hai)

thanks alot for liking and me done now ur turn next week ek mast scene chahiye boss😎

Waise I am never gonna leave a chance to beat you black and blue...as I said..we are perfect Gulaal Kesar😳...Gulaal in her chandika mode and Kesar in his aa bail mujhe maar mode ...But I tell you, you have super writing abilities..and only you could have written this...the biting scene..and btw...I forgot to write on my last VM that it was for you...you were the one who had once told me to make a VM on Gullu's journey from Chhotu to Motu..so it was an attempt for htat...now having said that...I am taking my hunter and standing for your next scene update..till anyone else volunteers..now this thread is your responsibility..so chal ..get going😛