Make a Scene ! Story # 1 ...Arti's story!

so here it goes its ths wishful extension of bimari scene where our dear kesu for the very first time displayed his hidden house husband skills and took care of gulaal he did patti seva dawaa daaru (nopes dawa dhoodh ) the scene is something like that…….

Kesar gave her glass of milk and ask her to take rest and headed towards kitchen….

After some times he entered her room….. gulaal was sleeping contendly in her room ….He walked with a soft step and sat beside gulaal……for a moment kesar looked at her…his gulaal was beautiful and gorgeous….. she was more beautiful than he use to dream her back in his hostel days…..she lay on her left side and her face towards him……. her hand was half hidden under her cheek and the fingers besides her face was slightly curved in the softness of the sleep…..the contrast in the room was magical light and shade merging in the perfect artwork……

Kesar looked at her with a soft smile he saw a hairlock fallen on her cheeks the sight of it was so surreal and that he forget to breath… for his heart had been taken captive…he was amazed and knew not what was happening to him…there was some new kind of feeling rising in him some new likings strange to the world he had lived till now…

He could have looked at her forever but then he looked at the food platter that he had brought for her and he came out of the trance

he leaned close to her and whispered soflty in her ears "gulaal"

gulaal slowly opened her eyes and saw kesar sitting besides her he smiled and said "gulaal utho"

he spoke in a low soft voice that was as soothing as the first raindrop in the parched land

gulaal looked at him and sat on the bed slowly

kesar helped her and then said "gulaal mein khana laaya hun…… lo kha lo"

gulaal looked at the food and said "mujhe bhuk nahi hai"

kesar looked at her and said in complaining tone "kyu bhuk nahi hai meine rasoi mein dekha hai saara khana aise hi rakha hua hai tune subah se kuch nahi khaya hai…haina…le kha le bhuke suna nahi chahiye tabiyat aur kharab ho jaayegi"

gulaal resisted "kanha naa kesar sach mein bhuk nahi hai"

kesar said "mein punch nahi raha kah rah hun ki kha le….warna…."

gulaal raised her brows and asked "warna kya"

and before she can say any further kesar took a morsel and forcefully fed her

gulaal was taken by …..she looked at him

he looked confidently at her and said "teri yeh manmaani mere saath nahi chalegi….ab chupchap poora khana kha"

and he started feeding her

gulaal looked at him fondly the boy she yearned for……. the boy she longed for……… the boy who always refused to meet her….. was infront of her…..her kesar was back her world was with her….. but now he wasn't a boy anymore but a man who coulld take care of her…and equally challenge her……..yes her kesar was grown up little bratty but responsible…… and she was at the verge of tears

kesar looked at her and caught her gaze on him he blushed and asked soflty "aise kya dekh rahi hai"

gulaal said fondly "dekh rahi hun ki mera kesar bada ho gaya hai itna ki ab mera dhyaan rakh rah hai…….. warna tujhe to khud ka hos nahi rehta tha"

kesar replied haan to kya hua….pehle tu mera khayal rakhti thi ab mein rakh raha hun

he said looking into her eyes "hisaab barbar"

gulaal remained silent for a moment she thought of something and her eyes twinkled

as kesar offered her next bite…gulaal smiled and bite his finger…..

kesar was surprised he immediately withdrew his fingers and said "gulaal yeh kya"

gulaal had a mischiveous grin in her face she teased him and said kyu bachpan mein meri kitni baar ugli kaat leta tha…..ab hua hisaab barbar

kesar was speechless he looked at gulaal and they burst into laughter……then he looked at his gulaal was smiling and laughing like a carefree bird she use to be……she was happy and the sight of her touched the depth of his soul….he quietly stood up and turned around he looked at his fingers passionately and remembered how gulaal bit his finger he smiled and kissed his finger softly

kesar turned back and looked at gulaal and their gaze met……………

res 😳

Originally posted by: minizz

wow Arti🤗this was such a beautiful little scene.I enjoyed it a lot.It was so realistic.I can imagine a scene like this on the show.There was nothing OTT about this one.Very subtle portrayal of the changing equation between them😳I loved Kesarji's nihaarofying his Gulaal.How can any scene be complete without that na😆but what I really loved in this was Gulaal's thoughts about Kesar.awww it was so nice to see her finally starting to see him as as bratty but aso a responsible adult who can take care of her.Such a huge step for gullu na.I absolutely loved the hisab barabar thing going on and the playful spunky Gullu retaliating in her own style.That was just awesome.Both shared the joy of that moment and everything else was forgotten na...all the hurt,the pain,the supposed betrayal...sigh...it was just beautiful.but but...but my most fav part of the scene was the one where Kesar kissed his finger softly😳loved it and the eyelock😍...yeh sab kyun nahi mila show mein😭So all in all Arti this was just brilliant and I hope you will write more of such scenes yaar😃

thanks dear for liking actually i never imagined such scene or thing like that...it was that shrush told us to make some new scene aur woh kahe aur hum naa maane aise to halaat nahi (yes shursh me line maarying on you)😛😳
and coming to bimari scene... wen my first ff ended someone told me that she missed bimari scene in that particular story so this time thought to write a bimaari scene bas aur kuch nahi

biting finger reminds us of chota kesu and gulaal chemistry...dont know y but i find something magical in chota kesu and gulaal jodi i enjoyed over bada kesu and gulaal one ( waise bi banda bade hokar ludo hi khelta hai whats the purpose of replacementbetter hume hasta khelta nanha munha golu kesar milta😉)

i always wanted the to repeat scene like kesar biting her fingers she calling him kesu (sigh it never happened) he saying "hone de" these were true gulaal kesarish scene
that y put up here
and more scene (haaye haaye mein piu nahi hun ... wahi kes gul k romance ko write karna ka world record banaa sakti hai😛

thanks alot for liking🤗

Originally posted by: MR21

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Arti 🤗...wow bemaari scene😳

Loved it yaar...kesar looking at her while she is sleeping 😳...kesar doing all seva n she is looking at him in new light n making out that he is now bratty but responsible adult who can take care of her easily...there argument by forgetting about the past n hurt...just being her kesar n his gulaal...gulaal being all back to her self some 10 yaers back n biting his finger n doing bisaab bharaabar 😳...just loved how he kissed his finger n the last eye-lock 😳

Arti...just amazing yaar...looking frward for more n more updates from you now😍

thanks dear actually its more about reliving the past... the moment they cherished... the chemistry they shared biting his finger must have brought some sweetest memories back...distances never seperates the two hearts, for their memories span and in second they are there same old kes-gul same spunk same spark... just new romanticism added to it. .haila did i made any sense

thanks for liking and i did my job... now waiting for updates from other ppl😳

thanks once again🤗

Originally posted by: manzilmukul

Pehle mujhe tamatar mukhi banungi☺️

OYE Chotu govinda 😳pehle ye bata tere fingers pe to dard ho gaya hoga tune itna sara type liya hoga.😆..

.But me so happy coz une kiya to warna u ditched us with chor police FF

Now coming to the scene Awww sho cute...😍Cute che👏...I lubbed it⭐️..Specially the twist of Gullu biting his fingers and uske baad☺️

Oye Lubbly update ab nerxt wala jaldi lao ...I wanna read it..😳

P.S-world record main nahi tu banayegi w o bhi gayab rehne mein 😛

piu😃...arey yaar my fingers need a swedish spa after this😳 and chor police meine short mein explain kar diya tha kanhi par shayad

glad u liked a romance without chii typical kes-gul...and me done with update... now its ur turn (ofcourse with lots of chii and ahem ahem)😳

and piu i almost skipped that u brought a new ff just reading that got to admit this banaras waala ff is so capitivating and i think its the best one... yeah i love how raw and crass this kesar is ...seriously i m just glued to chair...thanks for such a lovely ff