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Originally posted by: monikaseth

Wow awesome precap superb


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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




loved Maan-Geet fighting...

MSK is scared of Geet...

precap is interesting...engagement rings on Maan and Geet's finger...😕

awesome update...

thanx for pm...



4 a long & cute cmnt.. luv u dear😛
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Originally posted by: lovesia

awesome

maam singh khurana geet se dar gaya😆
precap is interesting plz update soon


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loved whole part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ff read it in a go
loved it very much
n the water fight was awesome
n precpa is also interesting
plz continue soon
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She was feeling butterflies in her stomach.. ticking her.. she was having a strange feeling' n she was liking it'

bt..as she saw herself in his arms' in maan's arms' geet immediately came back' she was feeling embrace.. she lowers her eye lashes' vo.. geet murmurs'. Thankuu'

maan- its okk. Smiles a lil..

geet don't wanted this embraced session.. so she remembers her water falling session' n again took tht pipe n stsrtd her water maan session'

she runs by showing her thumb to him..

part 16-

index

Maan was lost in her innocence.. hw cute she is.. hw pure.. her eyes r like a small child.. her eyes r full of masti' ohhh she was making maan crazy'

"geet' geet rukoo' vt u hav done u have to repent fr this.. m nt gonna leave u 4 this. Wait geet' he was running behing geet to catch her..

Geet was fast bt' hw she can beat the great maan singh khurana' he soon catch her' he hold her 4m her waist n rolled down.. n were on ground'. Geet was underneath maan' maan hold her both wrist with his hands' n maahhiii maahhiii'

Ab bolo geet.. bach k kha jaogi????

Maan realizes their state' n suddenly get up'. The water pipe was lying on the ground..

Geet was standing their feeling embarrassed' her cheeks were tomato red' maan hurriedly picks the pipe n strt pouring water on geet' as he don't want geet to feel uncomfortable'.


"I told u geet' u hav to pay 4 this.. vt u hav done.. u had messed up my clothes n nw its ur turn'

Geet was blocking the water to touch her face with her hands near her face..

"plzz maan.. m sorry haan.. plzz stop" geet said.' as water was continuously falling on geet's face' it make geet to choked her breath' she was having difficulty to breath.. n she strt panting'

Maan saw this' he throws the pipe on floor or ground.. n moves to geet ' feeling her restless pierced maan's heart .. hw maan can do this???? He was the reson of geet's situation.. he cupped her face with his hands' n ask..

"r u okk geet????... hws u feeling?? M really sorry.. I didn't mean to hurt u..

He suddenly embraced her in his protective hug' he cocooned her in his embrace.

He patted her back' geet was feeling so good.. she was feeling protected n safe in his arms.. n wanted to be in his arms forever n ever'. Bt why??? Why she is feeling like tht??? She ehrdelf don't knw' she is in a strangers arm???


"maan m okk.. no need to worry'" geet plead..

Maan moves backward n leave her.. n turn sideways'

"vo.. vo.. m sorry geet.." maan said.

"its okk.." n gave a smile'

Achha chaliye' geet said'

Maan- kha???

Geet took him with her by dragging him' aree aapko ese engagement mn aana hai kya???

Nahi na.. toh mere sath chaliye..

Geet didn't wait for his answer n was dragging him with her'

Soon they reached a big room' it was beautifully decorated.. all over flowers.. curtains, small mirrors decoration' and many more..

Maan- ye kha le ae ho mje??? Whose room is this??

Geet- btati hoon' aap washroom mein jayeiye fresh ho jaiye' mn 2 min mn ae.. thik hai..

N was going.. maan don't knw vt to do now..

Geet came back' aree haan' pehle kapde utaariye' ( take off ur clothes)

Maan- vt?????? N was shocked.. vt she is saying.. is she mad???

Bt y??

Geet- aree' aapbhi na.. agr mje kapde nahi doge toh mn inko saaf kaise karugi. Only dn u can cm to the party.. ese agar aogo toh people will think u of a beggar' do u want tht kya???

Maan nodded no..

Geet- oyee heloo' u didn't told me vt u r doing here???

Kahin' u r following me kya??? With a teasing smile..

Maan- no.. no.. y sd I follow u??? u hav any reason??

Geet- haan haan.. hai na

Maan with questioning face..

Mn sunder.. jawan cute ladki.. kisi ka bhi dil fisal sakta hai..

( m beautiful.. young cute girl.. any1's heart can fell over me_)

Maan- nahi toh'

Geet with O shape'

m nt beautiful??? M not young?? M I old??? Hunnn.. tum bhudde.. tera baap' oppss.. bad manners na.. haan' kis angel se mai tumhe young cute nahi lagti???? With her 1 eye brow up'

Maan- hold on hold on.. whn did I say tht'

Geet- abhi toh kha.. n made a golgappa face..

Maan- nahi toh. Tum toh ' a smile came at corner of geet's lips'

Maan was lost in her beauty.. her wet hairs r oming to her face' it was complementing to her milky white skin' she was driving maan crazy..

U r really beautiful.. n

"hayeee sachii'.." maan nodded to yes' geet was happy' like she want to hear this compliment 4m him only.. only him can tell her hw beautiful she is'


Achha ab mn aati hu' till dn u get freshnup.. I'll be back..

Till maan can say anything geet was all gone..

After 2-3 mins geet came. .maan was in washroom'. His shirt was lying on the bed.. geet enters n saw the shirt'

Geet- suniye'. Mn na apki shirt le jaa rai hu.. bs 5 min mn isse saaf kr k laati hu' bed pe towel rakh hai.. le lijiyega

(hy listen.. m taking ur shirt.. will be back in 5 mins after cleaning it.. towel is placed on bed.. take it..)

Maan hears her n smiles a bit'

Geet washes the shirt n dried it' she took it in her hands..

Haan.. ab lag rai hai' ek dam chakka chak..

Maan came out of washroom.. his hairs were wet' there were water droplets on his toned body.. he was exploding his toned body.. looking dam sexy..

Towel was around his neck n was drying his hairs.. at time geet came..

He saw maan shirtless' he droll over his toned body' hayeee'. Geet oh fida types on our sexy sa maan.. she was lost in her la la land.


Maan cough's a lil.. to gain her attention.. this brought geet 4m her dreamland'

Geet- here it is ur shirt, I cleaned it' n given to to maan..

Maan gave a smile to him'.

Aur haan'. She handed over him a pajama type track' take this also.. u wera this .. till dn I'll clean ur trouser' maan nodded to her..

Vt maan can do.. he has no other choice other than listen to her' maan went to washroom n came out wearing tht track' n handed geet his trousers'.

When he was coming out.. geet was murmuring

"hy babaji.. dekho na.. kitna time ho gya hai.. hun mn ki karugi???? Meri dress ta ful to khraab ho gae' hun mn new dress kitho liava??? Help karo na.. sab is dusht danav ki vajah se.. upar se.. mn iske kapde suka rai hu.. vaah kya baat hai' chadoo..

(hy god!!! See na.. vts the time' bw vt will I do???? My dress is full messes up' nw hw I'll hav a new1?? Plzz help me' all this happens coz of tht dusht danav' n me.. m here cleaning his clothes.. hunn' leave it)

At time maan came.. bt he listen his talk.. he asked.. vt happen???? To which geet said no n goes 4m there'

Maan took his phone 4m bed' it was also drenched in water.. he took out the battery n agin put it back.. n switch on.. he calls a no..

Person (P)- hello sir..

Maan- listen to me carefully'.

P- bt sir..

Maan-''.

P- at this?????

Maan- '..

????????????

Call ended'

Geet came with his trouser.. maan wears it n was nw looking like he came to any engagement'

Geet was going out.. he held her 4m her wrist'

Maan- hy wait..

Geet questions with her eye brow'

Jldi bolo' I don't hav enough time'. Many works r pending n over of all'. I hav to arrange a new dress in such a less time.. god knws hw I'll do this'

Maan- u nt need to worry' u jst 1st wear any of clothes' so tht u don't catch cold'

Geet- bt' he didn't let her speak by placing his finger on his lips'

Geet shivers with his touch' a urrent passes through geet'

Maan- no if.. no bt. Jst do vt ii say'

Geet noded.. bt don't knw y?? hw she so easily agreed to him' dam.. vts happening to her????

Geet goes 4m there smiling n also leaves maan smiling back'

Geet strted doing her works of setting everything' checking all preparations' though there were planners also bt its geet's frnds's biggest day.. hw she can leave all at sm others hand'

So she was checking all out'

Maan was going in corridor.. n he banged with arnav..

Maan- hy dued..

Arnav- hy maan.. when u came???

Maan- where was u???? more than 1 n half hour yr..

Arnav- vt?? Y don't u tell me??? Did u hav smthg???

Maan- achhaa' nw u r getting worried 4 ur frnd haan????

Their ormal convo was going.. maan told him abt her messy clothes.. bt didn't tell him abt geet.. who helped her'

(stinna- chupe rustam maan'.)

Nupur- geet' geeet'

Geet- kya hai..

Nupur- vts all this???? Indicating toward her dress..

Geet make a puppy face' vo yr pta hai.. mn na gili ho gae thi.. I was fully drenched into water' so my dress got messed up' so I hav to change it..

Nupur- nw vt u will wear???

Geet- lets see..

Nupur- vt u mean???

Geet- aree yr.. dekhte hai na.. kuch v pehn lu gi'

Nupur- u can take any of my dress yr'

Oh oh oh.. hw I forget.. miss geet handa doesn't wear any1's clothes..

Geet with puppy face'

Geet- let it be' jst go with the flow' at time vt I'll get I'll wear tht.. btw I called mom' she is doing smthng.. maybe arranging smthng..

With this dy both went to their work'

PRECAP- same'.

Frnds'. After a long time' all coz of my exams' bt nw here's a full maaneet update.. evn 4m 2-3 updates m giving only maaneet parts.. evn tht there is no change in likes n cmnt.. no no.. here a change. Slowly with posting of new part' the likes n cmnts r decreasing continuously' frnds' may I knw the reason of this' its really disappointing'..

Do give ur views abt this ff' I need it.. if there sis nay kind of problem u can tell n give ur views'

Thankuuu to those who read n cmnt' luv u all'.

sryy 4 any grammer, hindi n english mistakes...

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Edited by simrancuty - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome n cute update.
Loved it.
Maan defo gonna help geet with dress now.

Edited by shristi1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

awesome ff read it in a go

loved it very much
n the water fight was awesome
n precpa is also interesting
plz continue soon


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