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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

awsome update

love it

specially goons chasing geet was fab... goons pichhe geet aage😆😆

seriously lag rha tha dey r playing pakadm-pakdai🤣🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">awsome update</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">love it</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">specially goons chasing geet was fab... goons pichhe geet aage😆😆</font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">seriously lag rha tha dey r playing pakadm-pakdai🤣🤣</font></font>



thnkuuu so much dear.. i too luvd tht.. i was laughing while typing tht.. geet aage goons piche.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
wow!! i loved the way you described Geet when she was getting ready 😳
Poor Maan cant concentrate on his work because he is thinking of her 😍
and now Geet getting caught by goons but Maan coming to her rescue
but Maan gets hurt .. i hope kuch nahi hoga 😒
thanks for wonderful update and the pm too 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
waiting for the update 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
part 11
nice part...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u add the update and page numbers too in the title dear like ajab prem kahani 11@10?
Edited by spvd - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: --Neelam--

wonderful part
loved it...


thnksss dear...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

wow!! i loved the way you described Geet when she was getting ready 😳

Poor Maan cant concentrate on his work because he is thinking of her 😍
and now Geet getting caught by goons but Maan coming to her rescue
but Maan gets hurt .. i hope kuch nahi hoga 😒
thanks for wonderful update and the pm too 🤗



thnkuuu sooo much dear...😛😛... m glad tht u liked my work... m really happyyy...
yaaa sure... it will be pleasure if i pm u.. tnks 4 reading...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: -padma-

waiting for the update 😍


ohhh dear... thnks 4 this cmnt... m happy tht sm1 is waiting 4 update.. luv uuu dearyy... m jst updating it... 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: spvd

part 11
nice part...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u add the update and page numbers too in the title dear like ajab prem kahani 11@10?



thnksss...😛
okk i'll try.. bt i had added index... it is easy to access 4m index.. dn pg no.?????
okk i'll do it also...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70

helooo... sry 4 waiting u all...

wanted to tell tht y u r nt cmntng????? m getting really less respones... hy silent readers.. jagooo... jagooo!!!!!!!!


RECAP-

maan was shocked to see tht girl'. Jiske vo aaj kl din raat sapne dekhta hai' bcz of tht girl he is unable concentrate on his work'. All day he kept thinking abt her even when he don't want' her face alwz came infront of his eyes'

Tht girl' she is today standing infront of her' he saw struggling to free her hand 4m tht goons hold'. This is it.. maan's anger was on highest peak'.

Maan- choddo uska hath( leav her hand)

AJAB PREM KAHANI PRT 12'


goons- nai chodugaa.. kya krlega..

this is it.. nw its enough for maan.. nw he cant tolerate anymore... its unbearable 4 him tht she'. Yes she' sm days before whose dreams was maan taking' there was smthng.. a feeling tht didn't allow maan's eyes to see her in pain' maan don't knw abt this.. y he is feeling like this' or let it say he didn't wanted to knw abt this strange feeling 4 sm stranger' an unknwn girl' after vt had happened last year'.y his heart is in pain' he wish as he could kill tht goon on the spot'.. hw dare he touch her.. hurt her' his eyes r red in rage'

he gave a loud scream'. Aahhh n jumps n hit tht goons on his arm with full strength'

(lolllzzz tht goons..)


Tht goons 1st fell on 1 of his knees'.. crying in pain' auuhhh'.. n maan hit on his face hard with his elbow n he fall completely on the ground' the other goon came on was abt to hit maan on his back bt maan was too fast he suddenly turn n blocks his arm.. with his other hand he hit on his face'. Then maan twirl n floating his leg in air'. hit on his face'.. dn he thrust his elbow in his stomach'.

(note- m nt gud in writing n also in english'lollzzz'.. don't knw abt fight more' bt tried a lil to describe my imagination.. soo plzz try to understand it' abt the scene'. I knw it's a tooti footi si fight' bt tolerate me na')

Geet was tottaly scared bt happy too tht sm1 came n saves her' she was amazed with fighting skills of maan' oppss geet yet don't knw his name.. he is a stranger 4 her' bt nt anymore' he cant be a stranger who saves her life.. who fights 4 her with goons by taking his life in danger' she was so impressed with maan's personality' who will nt?????? He is maan singh khurana' on whom every girl dies' got crazy 4 him'. Bt geet didn't knw him yet' tht he is a stone.. who has no feelings left in his heart'

(Oppss!!!!! Fight bhul hi gae'Nw cmng to fight')

Geet was so lost in her thoughts' goons 1 came n hold her arm n was dragging her'. N hurting her' maan saw this.. he hurriedly came there n gave a tight punch on tht goon's face' geet released her hand 4m his grip' maan gave more punches n thrust his leg in his stomach' n dishhhmmm'. Dishmmm'. He was nw lifeless lying on the ground..

The other came 4m back' n hit maan on his back' n he fell on ground with sudden attack'.. bt maan was nt so weak.. nthng happens to him' he stands.. n gave a punch' mann bends him n gave 3-4 punches in his stomach' also hit him with his leg'

Maan turns to see geet is she is alright' she was standing their'. N watching the fight' as its like a film fight' n also acting like she is punching' this make maan smiles a bit' goon came forward' he floats his leg n was abt to hit maan' maan blocks it wih his arm' n hit him back.. hw was on the ground'

1 goon 4m side came with knife'. Maan didn't saw this as he was back facing him.. geet saw tht goon coming with knife & was aiming at maan.. geet got scared' vts happening????


He gonna hit him????? She cant let tht happen' hw she can' his life is in danger bcz of her' sm fear engulf in her heart' she runs'. Goon also came n was abt to hit maan on his shoulder' bt geet came' n she pushes maan' the knife thrush in geet's shoulder'. Maan fell on ground n he turns to see'. He was blank' like vt had happen nw????? tht goon scared n he throws knife on ground n runs 4m there.. the rest 2 were on ground bt after seeing tht girl got hurt.. dy also runs 4m there'.

Geet was abt to fell on ground bt nxt moment she was in two strongs arm.. holding her tight' saving her 4m nt to fell' maan slowly sit n takes her head in his lap'

Maan was like her life is going' a strange fear engulf in maan' abt which maan didn't knw.. or else say tht he also don't want to knw abt this'. Geet suddenly became unconscious' she is fainted n was sleeping in maan's lap'


Maan- hyy.. wake up.. utho utho na' he was holding her securely' his eyes goes on his hand.. tht had blood.. he got scared' dn he he saw she is badly injured with knife on her shoulder'. He immediately pick her in his arms' securely n lovingly holding her'. He strt moving towards the car' all the way he tried to wake her up.. jst open her eyes once.. plzz' he was pledding her' to open her eyes.. bt she was fainted due to continous bleeding'.


She reached near car' she makes her sit on the front seat of car.. he ties the belt.. n makes her sit securely' n crasses his fingers on her face lovingly'. Closes the window'.

Runs hurriedly n sits in the car.. strts the car' n strts deiving' speedup the car speed' like it was like a bullet' he speedsup as sm1 is following them n he has to be saved' like its nt a car it's a rocket' he takes a fast turn.. n geet moves 4m her place' he saw tht n drags her' n makes her sit properly.. his one hand was on styring wheel n 1 was holding geet 4m her arm to support her'

Soon maan stops the car' dy were nw standing in front of khurana mansion' he came out' n opens geet sides window' pick her in his arms.. strong n secure arms'he holds her tight' shut the window with her leg'

Maan strts walking by holding geet in her arms' like a mom is holding her child in her arms securely n safely'.


He was going to right side' weather the house was in front.. he was taking her to outhouse' soon he reached their.. n takes her upstairs n made her sit on the bed'


he hurriedly picks up the fst aid box.. n came to geet' he took her in his arms' made her lied her head on his shoulder' n do the dressing' maan was in pain' seeing geet in such condition his heart missed several beats' while cleaning te wound.. he was feeling the pain' e applies the antiseptic cream '. he is done with dressing n made her lied on bed' covers her with blanket' n was going out' while moving he saw back at geet who was sleeping' maan was abt to step out of room.. sm voice.. geet strt coughing.. maan came back hurriedly' n took the glass of water 4m side table n makes her drink a lil by holding her head in his hand'. She was in sleep' as maan gave her med of sleep also' so don't she can sleep.. n couldn't feel the pain of wound'

Maan came out n shuts the door of room'. He is feeling a strange feeling while leaving the room' bt don't knw vt was tht????? Like he want to sit beside her holding her hand all night' n taking care of her.. bt he came out'

previous- PART 11

next- part 13

PRECAP-

1.Maan doing the tai- chai with full force..

2. maan holding a photo frame n his eyes r wet'.

So frnds' it was the nxt part' hw u find this keep telling me' don't be like mum' don't be numb' speak smthng.. plzz don't give cmnt like' nice, osmm, grt, etc' do post vt u like in the part n abt story'thnksss 4 reading guys'.




Edited by simrancuty - 12 years ago

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