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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome update

poor karan bechare ko geet nd uske frndz ne kitna irritate kar diya😆😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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geet aur usske friends kitne shaitaan hai haila awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
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Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awsome update

poor karan bechare ko geet nd uske frndz ne kitna irritate kar diya😆😆



hmmm... thnksss dear 4 readingg n cmnting...
lolzz karan..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnksss dear...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: monikaseth

geet aur usske friends kitne shaitaan hai haila awesome





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abinash079

lovely update

continue soon



will update 2moro... thnks 4 cmntng dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome ...
Love it...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Neelam--

Awesome ...
Love it...
waiting to know the next...



thnksss dear...
will update 2moro..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 9
nice part dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello frndss…hws u all??????? Nw here's d nxt update of my ff… plzz frnds keep giving ur views.. its important 4 me.. plzz tell me if u r nt liking d story…here u go..

RECAP-

All 4 sits in d car… n geet strt driving

Simran- hm kha ja rahe hai???

Geet- teri fav jagah aur hm sab ki bhi.. jha tera gussa yun chutkion mn gayab..

Simran ne sits quiet…

Maan has nw done his work n was ready to leave d office.. as he has to go to mall to exchange his shirt…

Ajab prem kahani part-10.

Maan is sitting on back seat of his car.. n was fully engraved in his lappy.. doing his officw work.. making sm presentation.. they were on d way to mall..

Geet was driving d car n dy were going smwhere.. only geet knws where..

Nupur- oyee hm kha ja rahe hai???

Geet- have sm patience jaanii.

Nupur- by god geet.. tu kha le k jar rahi hai hume…

Geet- chill yr,, bhootian bangle mn to nai le k aa rahi.. so jst relax.. bs teri bhi favvv jagah hai vo..

Nupur- hai laaa.. sachhiii…

After 5min geet stops d car… n cameout.. she didn't let simran to open d door n she opens d door of d car 4 her..

Simran- hmmm impressive…

Geet- surprise… ye le.. tere favvv.. oyee nupur khushi bahr nikloo.. aoo na..

There was tooo much traffic.. n was was cought in it..

Maan- kya hua driver

Driver- sirr.. vo age both traffic hai. Shyad koi accident hua hai..

Maan- kitna time lagega???.

Driver- mn dekhta hu sir.

Maan- hmm…. D window panes r open.. n nw winds strt blowing… he was nw with d button on window abt to shut it.. n he saw.. tht beautiful grl…opening d window vry elegantly 4 her frnd.. n making cute faces.. n he stops in between n again lower d pane…. Dn he saw there was another grl… he thought it may be his illusion.. maan ye the kya ho rha hai,, har jagah the vahi dikhaye de rahi hai,, u r maan singh khurana.. n vts happening to u.. n again going to up d pane n he saw geet smiling whole heartdly with her frnds.. n he stops.. d 1 word came 4m his mouth.. beautiful n he moves back to his sences.. maan.. ye kya ho rha hai tje???? Dekh vha koi nai hai.. vha koi aur hai..

(actually smtimes simran came infront of geet so maan couldn't see her.)

Bs maan boht ho gya… nw back to work.. he was saying all this in his thoughts.. nd nw again saw outside… hw saw her…. N get lost…

He kept staring at her face.. her almond eyes making him insane…. Her rosy pink cheeks…. Due to wind her hairs were flowing n were cming on her face.. she was struggling with dm.. maan wants to go there n move her hair strands n tuck it on back of her ear..he was nehrfyinggg her..

Simran- hayeee….

Geet- ki hoea????

(vt happen)

Nupur- hai laaa…

Geet- aisa kyu chilla rahi ho?? Jaise bhoot dekha ho??

Khushi- hayee marr jawn.. GOL GAPPE..

Simran- yummyyy.. n hugs geet.. thnkss sweety….

Nai maan ye sach mn hai… dekh na..

Vts happening???? U r THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA aur u r thinking abt a grl.. no no….

Geet- ur wlcm meri jaan.. ab khush.

Simran- yuppp.. meri kamzori mere samne hai.. to mn kaise inkaar kar sakti hu????

Geet- hmm ye to hi.. n moves to gol gappe..

Geet- bhaiyaa plate dena.. mje tikhe dena

Nupur- mje meethe golgappe..

Simran- mje khatte meethe khilana bhaiya..

Khushi- mje bhi khatta meetha..

Bhaiyaa (tht gol gappe vala) strt giving dm gol gappa's 1 by 1.. dy were njoying it a lot… geet gulp gol gappa in her mouth.. maan was staring at her wih love.. n care….


There were sm ters in geet's eyes as she was having full spicy gol gappa's…

Geet took gol gappa 4m simran's plate.. at this maan smiles a bit..

Simran hit her arm playfully..

Geet- oouchhh…

(imagine maan is nt standing there)

In d meanwhile d driver came.. nd sits in d car..

Driver- sir bs 2min aur lagege.. this bring maan to his sences.. n his staring session came to end..

Maan- hmm..

Driver- vo sir 2 min lagege..

Maan- thik hai..

Rain strt slowly nd driver close all window panes.. n of maan's side too..

(lolzzz ab maan kaise geet ko dekhega??)

Simran- yummyyy.. kitne tasty hai..

Nupur- chaloo yr chalte hai.. kabhi bhi barish tez ho sakti hai..

Khushi- hmm.. n gave d plate to staller..

N all sits hurridly sits into the car.. geet makes d payment n came n sits on driving seat……

Geet- ab maan gae tu??

Simran- hmmm.. n gave a smile…

Geet- chalee???

Nupur- by god.. ab kha jana hai???

Geet- aree yr.. vo saree exchange karne jana hai..

Khushi- chal fir..

N geet strt driving to the mall..

Maan reached d mall… n goes to tht shop 4m where he buy it..

Maan- suniye…vo kl mn shirt le k gya tha.. n it got exchanged… can u o smthg.

Salesman- gg sir.. can u show me tht exchange bag

Maan- yaa sur.. n gave d bag.

Salesman- sir.. it's a saree.. u plzz go to tht shop 4m where it was takes..

There was bill in bag.. n he told him d direction of shop.. sir aap vha se pta karlijea.. maybe.. u got ur shirt

Maan- thnx.

Geet goes to tht saree's shop.. n

Geet- excuse me… vo kl mai saree le k gae thi yha se.. n it got exchanged.. can u do smthg?

Salesgirl- yes mam.. plzz show me ur bag n geet gave it to her..

Mam aap ek kijeye.. aap ye hume dedo.. agar inhe koi exchange karne aya to hm aapko inform kardege.. aap apna no de dijea..

Geet- okk cool… n gives her number..

Nd leaves d shop..

Maan came to tht shop…

Maan- hy.. I thnk it has been bought 4m ur shop

Salesgirl – yess sir.. hw can I help u??

Maan- ohh.. my shirt got exchanged.. so m here..

Salesgirl- ohh tht.. aapki shirt konse clr ki hai??

Maan- vt?????

Salesgirl- vo sir.. abhi ek mam hume shirt de k gae hai.. aur unki saree exchange ho gae thi..

Maan- okk.. its of white clr..

D girl shows him tht shirt.. yess its mine.. hnxx..

Salesgirl- thx sir 4 cmng.. have a nice day.. n maan leaves 4m there..

D grl call geet n geet came n took her saree n goes 4m there…


PRECAP-

Maaneet meeting??????????????.

Frndsss plzzz do cmnts… hws this part??? Hw m doing???? Do tell me plzz…

Stinna..


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