ajab prem kahani- prt20/pg56/ 27oct/ imp note pg57 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow loved maaneet romance...bt i need mre romance btwn them...but i lvd dis part...loo tumhara mehnat ka inam milgaya...sry 4r late rply...i wil be waitng 4r next part...update soon if u r free...:-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 14
nice part...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful part dear..
Love it..

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...luves the update...
khushi n arnav ki sagai...wahh
arnav n maan..frends
maneet...haayyeee mast scene tha
dadi n geet luves eachother company...
contiue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
hayee wt a lovelo shvly update
soo cute...
lv my maaneet n baki b 😆😆😆
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thankss deary..
glad tht u likd it..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

wow kya scene hai...maan aur geet k second mulakat toh masallah kya hai...gr8...

beautiful
update...

loved it sooo much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

continue nxt prt soon plz...

eagerly waiting...




thnkuuu fr u r cute cmnt dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --NUHA--

Wow loved maaneet romance...bt i need mre romance btwn them...but i lvd dis part...loo tumhara mehnat ka inam milgaya...sry 4r late rply...i wil be waitng 4r next part...update soon if u r free...:-)


thankuu so much dear...
m overwhelmed with ur cmnt.. thnks a lot.. luv uuu😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vanshi_maaneet

wow...luves the update...
khushi n arnav ki sagai...wahh

arnav n maan..frends
maneet...haayyeee mast scene tha
dadi n geet luves eachother company...
contiue soon..


thnks sweety 4 ur cute cmnt...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanksss😛
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RECAP-

The wooden stair couldn't manage their n tht fell on ground' the stair hit another wooden stair.. tht man on another stair was tucking their big red curtains' it fell 4m boy's hand n fall'

The big curtain covered maaneet' both were in curtain n were lost in their deep eyes'

Geet got lost in his deep ocean eyes'

Dy both forget the whole world.. jst standing over their.. dy dont knw abt flowers.. curtain' anything happening all around'

Maan was holding geet 4m her waist n both were lost in eachother'

Suddenly maan lose the balance n both fell on ground' maan was underneath geet'

Geet- ouvhhh'. She was struggling to get up.. she was lying on maan n was pulling the curtain..

Maan was nehorifing her'.

Geet- hy babaji.. ye kya ho gya'

Aur aap???? App yha ???

Maan was jst lost'

Geet- oyee helooo' mne kuch pucha..

(hyy.. I had asked smthing..)

Here m struggling with this dammm curtain n u' u r nt answering evn helping me.. to get out of this'

Maan- if u gonna shut ur mouth dn I ll say smthg na..

Geet- with O shape mouth. Houuu

Maan- shut ur mouth.. otherwise sm1 will enter in ur mouth' n geet suddenly shut her mouth'

Maan- nw if u will get up 4m me' dn I will do smnthg.. so.. will u???

Geet- han' toh. Mje bhi koi saunk nai hai.. tumhare upar baithne ka'

(haan.. m also nt fond of lying over u.)

Vo to bs.. m nt able to get up.. as coz of this curtain'

Maan- okk wait.. n maan rolled her.. man came over her with geet underneath..

Geet- vt u doing???

Maan- jst helping u.. u said na.. u wanna get out of their.. dn?????

Geet- dn y u rolled????

Maan- omg!!! U said na u r nt able to get up.. so m trying to get up.. maan strting to ge up.. he stand half bt again fell'. Thuddd on geet'

Geet- oouuu'. Vt u doing???

Maan- u don't understand in 1 line??? Nw shutupp..

Maan again stand n strt rolling the curtain.. n slowly he remove the curtain n both were out of there'.

Maan turn to see geet who was still on floor' trying to get up.. as her hands got dirty with maan's clothes..

Maan forward his hand towards geet to help her to stand' geet hold her hand..

Maan with a jerk pull her. N geet collide with his strongly chest' geet closed her eyes 4 a sec.. her head was near his heart..

Geet came back' n saw her clothes tht were fully messed up' all over soil.. muddy water'

Geet- yuckkss'. N shot a angry glare towards maan..

Maan-vt????

Geet- vt is this haan??? Dn observe maan 4m head to toe.. n suddenly start laughing.. hahahahheehhehe

Maan-vt??? R u mad?? Y u strt laughing???

Geet said with her eyes to look at him 1st..

Maan observe himself'. N remembered abt his clothes.. tht he bymistake fell in the garden n his clothes were messy'

Maan saw geet who was laughing smiling whole heartdly.. maan again got lost in her'

Geet- yeh kya hall bna rakha hai???? N maan ame back 4m his la la land'

Maan- hmmm'

Geet- haan.. ye sab???

Maan- vo mn.. vo bahr' n points to outside..

Geet- aur aap yha???

She didn't let him tell' n cut him

Geet- houu..😆😆


mere kapde' jst smtime is left.. n my clothes' agrhh

Geet strt walking towards maan' while pointing his finger to him.. aap.. app samjhte kya ho apne aap ko??? Haan.. mere sare kapde khrab kar diye.. mne ye specially sanku k liye .. matlab k uski sagai k liye kharide the' she keep cming towards him n maan was going back'

(vt u mean to haan??? U jst spoiled my clothes' I especially bought this 4 sanku.. I mn 4 her engagement')

Hayeee.. ab mn kya pehnugi..

(hou.. nw vt m gonna wear)

her eyes were spitting fire' n maan was geeting scared with her expressions.. her big big scary eyes were haunting him'


maan collide with the door' n geet was still cmng towards him'

geet- hayee babaji.. mne toh aur kapde bhi nai liye the' ab mn kya karu.. ye sab apki vajah se hua' ab aap bolo na' houu ab kuh bob hi nai rahe hai..

(o god' I evn didn't buy any other dress' nw vt to do.. this all happen coz of u' nw tell' speak up na' hou. Nw nt telling smthg.)

Maan couldn't hold this' he hold geet n turn n pin her to the door' place her hand on her mouth


Maan- chup' bilkul chup..

Kitna bolti ho tum'khabrdaar ab ek lafz bhi bola to' vrna'. He remove her palm 4 her lips.. n saw her juicy pinky.. like a rose petal lips' tht were so tasty, he wanna taste it' he was staring it, an urge is thre to get them the vry moment'😉


Geet was lost in his ocean eyes.. tht has so many emotions' care, love, anger, frustration, n many more' she was drowning in his eyes, bt maan;s hold on her hand hurt her n bring her to reality..

.. she was struggling to it to get free 4m his hold' Maan's hold on her wrist lighten'

Geet saw the change.. he lossen the grip n in a sec leaves her hand n turn around'

Geet- ajeeb hai..( strange) abhi itna akad k bol rha tha aur abhi muh fer k khada hai.. hunn. Chadoo mne ki.. she was abt to go bt dn she felt he rwrist holded' she turns' maan was holding her wrist..

Maan- wait' u hav to help me..

Geet- vt?????

Maan signals to ' his messed up clothes with his eyes'

Geet- vt???? Mn kyuu haan.. mere dekhe hai, tumhari vajah se.. smje.. ab mn kya pehnugi han. Btao..

Maan- thts nt my prob.

Geet- a ha haa' she frees her hand in a jerk. Toh mr.. attitude.. ye bhi meri prob nai hai. Handle by urself. Hunn n turn to go.

Maan- okk.. I'll help u'.

Geet with a winning smile on her face' hmm.. ab aya na mr attitude, miss geet k neeche'

Geet- okk' dn cm with me'

Geet having a smirk on her face

Maan- bt where????

Geet drags him with her' soon dy were in garden.. maan was standing at the centre.. geet went smwhere saying she is cmng in a min' maan was waiting 4 her.. n were full frustrated..

Suddenly' hathhhdnndn'.

Water strting poring on maan's back' he turns to see'.

Geet was standing there with a water pipe in her hand..

All water came on maan's face' he keeps his hand on his face' n said..

Maan- geet.. stoppp.. he was keeping his hands on his face, smwhere on right, left. .saving his face.. saving himself 4m this mad yet cute girl

Geet. Stop.. vt u doing??

Geet was having fun with this' she was laughing.. giggling njoying it' in irritating this mr. attitude..

Geet- kyuu.. mn to vahi kr rahi hu jo aapne kha' dusht danav.. heheh

Maan turns.. the water was falling on his back..

Maan- vt???? When did I say???

Geet- houu' she murmurs.. bada hi chalak hai.. bt mn bhi kam nai hu dusht danav' rukoo.. she goes to tht side.. on which maan was facing' n again water falls on maan's face'

Geet- eloo' aap bhi na bade hi bhulakad ho.. abhi to kha tha aapne.. aap k kapde kharb ho gaye hai' yaad aya??😆😆

She strt pouring the water on his whole body. 3m top to bottom'.

Maan strted walking towards geet' slowly' geet was going backwards'

Maan takes 1step ahead.. geet took 1 step backs'

1 ahed n 1 backs' dy did this 4-5 times' dn geet strtd running backwards'.

Maan also strted running ' geet was running backwards as she till nw didn't stop her water session.. it was wetting maan 4m head to toe'

Both were taking rounds' the pipe was rolled'

Geet's foot got into tht pipe' she was abt to fall.. aaahhh'. N saw down.. n her eyes were wide open' maan saw this.. he scream.. geeet..

The next moment geet found herself near to her heart.. close to her heart'


Maan pulls her hand n saves her 4m falling'😉😉

With this geet collide with maan's manly body.. the soft petal like body collide to a strong body' her face was on his chest.. dy both were so near' tht space for air was nt left'

Geet open her eyes..

She was feeling butterflies in her stomach.. ticking her.. she was having a strange feeling' n she was liking it'

bt..as she saw herself in his arms' in maan's arms' geet immediately came back' she was feeling embrace.. she lowers her eye lashes' vo.. geet murmurs'. Thankuu'

maan- its okk. Smiles a lil..

geet don't wanted this embraced session.. so she remembers her water falling session' n again took tht pipe n stsrtd her water maan session'

she runs by showing eher thumb to him..


previous- part 14

next- part 16

PRECAP-

Engagement ring in geet's n maan's finger??????

Sryy 4 itna late update' plzz forgive me.. bt m held up with home n school works.. moreover m also nt feeling fine 4m sm days..

Guys do read n bless me with ur cmnts' all bad cmnts r most welcmd.. bt do cmnt.. it will give motivation n power to me write..

frnds... next update will be after my exams.. my xamz r strting 4m 3rd sept..😭😭😭 will miss u all n luv u all...😳

Thnkuu

Stinna


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Edited by simrancuty - 12 years ago

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