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PART 83
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Next morning was usual like other days..maan went to kc n then to college..geet was in college with Vicky n friends'maan joined arjun..

Maan: where is hiten..gauri'

Arjun: idk..i think gauri's condition must have made him run away from here..darse bag gaya hoga..

Sameera came to maan..

Sam:maan'

Maan turned his face in disgust..his blood boiled seeing her..

Sam:maan..i was expecting u yesterday'I kept fast for u..

Maan smirked at her lie..

Maan: I saw u in canteen yesterday..u don't want to lie to me..waise..i have my own angel to keep fast for me..not a filth like u..

Sams nose was cut off..

Sam:I know maan,u r just lying to me..

Maan:I don't need to lie to u..mujei koi zaroorath nehi..samji tum..are u not ashamed to follow me even after I'm humiliating u..

Sam:no maan'bcoz I love u..

Maan:u love me..hahaha..

He laughed loudly making all look at him'they have never seen maan smiling like that..

Suddenly his face turned in pure rage..


Maan: what a joke'I know the meaning of love of urs'my power ,my money my fame..if there is nothing with me'u will not even turn to me'I know ur intensions ..i'm not the same maan, whom u betrayed once'

Sam looked at the group surrounding them n looking at her like a dirt'

Sam: maan that time also I loved u'

She tried to handle the situation..

Maan:ho..i believe'ur words..

He said sarcastically..

Maan: then what are you doing this two years after u broke up with me saying,its nothing like love'now u are claiming u love me..disgusting..

Sam:maan..wo..

Maan:just leave the place..warna..i'll end up doing something you may not have thought in ur dreams'

Hiten n gauri came at that time..

gauri: sam,why are u making urself a show piece..when he says stay away from him..then y don't u..stay away'

sam felt humiliated again ..she left the place making a mental note,she will take revenge once she succeeded her plan..

hiten n arjun kept their hands on his shoulders comforting him..

gauri:leave her maan..y u r spoiling ur mood..

arjun:hey'first tell me what happened yesterday..did the donkey came to ur house to open ur fast'

hiten scratched his head n smiled sheepishly..gauri was blushing..her cheeks turned reddish than a tomato..

maan looked at both..

arjun:arei yaar..will u tell me or u both will be looking at each other like this..like u have not seen each other before..

maan: wait arjun..

arjun: why yaar..

maan:see them yaar..they both are blushing..matlab'hiten went to gauri's house n opened her fast..haina dude'

hiten: haan yaar..

arjun: wow maan..r u a business man or a face reader..u know lot about love..

maan just thought about geet n her blushing face..

hiten: I'm also thinking the same yaar..r u in love maan..

he asked in blue..

maan was still lost in thoughts of geet..

maan:haan'

hiten:kaun hai wo ..

arjun kept his hands on maans shoulder..

arjun:haan yaar..u are saying to sam also about angel..who is it..

maan came out of his geet land'he cursed himself for blurting..

maan: not like that..it..it..was just .just..to avoid sam'

the three looked at him suspiciously'

gauri:teek hai..dont tell'but,u cant lie also maan..u r stammering for the first time..if u don't want to share with us..its ok..

maan looked at the three..they looked hurt'he looked the surroundings ..noone were there..

maan:ok..i trust u guys so I can share a part of truth..haan..there is a girl in my life..my angel..my pari..my princess..

arjun: have u proposed her..

maan: I would have,if she knows the meaning of love..

hiten:what..

maan: she don't know I love her to my extent..uski nazaron mein love is care..friendship..thats all..

the trio looked at him..he looked so much lost in his angel..the way he expressed itself said he loves her so much..

gauri: who is that lucky girl..

maan: sorry guys..no more questions..i'll not say anything more'when time comes I'll introduce her..till that u will not ask me more than this..n I hope u will not say this to others or media n break my trust..

arjun: sure. yaar..we will not say..hamari dosti ki kasm..we will wait for that day ..whats that part of truth..whats the other half..

maan: I said no more questions..

he said sternly..

gauri: okok..chapter closed'

maan: we were talking about u both..n u all turned me..say what happened yesterday..

hiten:wo..i went to gauri's house..i introduced myself with lots of courage..aur ye..ye tho ..

gauri:what what..

hiten : maan.she was smiling n giggling at my plight..my throat went dry talking to her parents..

arjun: phir..

hiten: ho..ive not felt this much nervous for exams too..

gauri laughed..

hiten:shut up gauri..i would have killed u..u know what?gauri has already told about our relation to her parents n they were just enquiring me for formalities,which I don't know..

maan:what?

Gauri:haan yaar..when I ve decided he is my life..then why must I hide from my parents..so,I told them..they wanted to meet hiten..so ,only I made him meet my parents..haan,I wanted to test his courage..so,only I didn't say my parents know about our love..

Arjun:phir kya hua.

Hiten:they were impressed ..n gave green signal to our love..

Arjun:what about ur family..

Hiten:before going to gauri's house I also said about our love to my parents..

Maan:then?

Hiten:the two families agreed ..but in 1 condition..

Arjun:what..?

Hiten: our marriage will be considered only after we finish our masters..n settle our careers..

Maan: gud..

Arjun: gud..not gud..u must wait for minimum 3 years..

Hiten: we can wait for centuries too..'its enough our parents accepted us..today,I'm taking gauri to my house..

Maan: congrats both of u..i'm proud at ur decision'arjun..dont u think u r already in that way'

Arjun:what..do u mean..

Maan:u joined ur fathers concern..why?..

Arjun:to prove myself..

Maan:not urself..to arohi n her father..u thought about ur future..here both their parents are doing the same..

Arjun: haan..ye tho sahi hai..

hiten..:tumhari love story kahaan tak pohuchi hai..

arjun: sirf hai hallo tak..

they heared the bell'

maan:ok..lets go to class..

lunch time..

maneet were in birds sanctuary..geet was giving fruits to Pikachu..

maan was standing hugging geet from back ..he was kissing her cheeks..her blood rushed to cheeks turning it more thicker..geet stopped giving fruit to pickachu..

pickachu:maanu..maanu..geetu..gauva..

maan :I said u yesterday also..she is geet..n I'm maan..

geet laughed at him..

maan:y r u laughing..

geet: u r getting angry at a bird..

pickachu: maanu..maanu..

maan: maanu 'I hate that sound..geetu..its better than maanu..

geet: whats there in name..

maan:acha,then..u call me..maan..

geet: no..

maan:geet,I want to hear my name from ur mouth..

geet:no..u r my husband..i cant call u by name..

maan: please..sona..

geet:prince..u know na..my mom always says..if we call husbands by name he will lose a day of his lifetime..we keep vrat only for husbands long life na..then how can I call u by name'

maan:mere liye ..ek baar..pls..

geet: '

maan:ok..take ur time .i'll wait till u think u can call me by name

maan left the topic n moved to give her fire treatment..it was again 4 min..he patted her back comforting her..

maan: not bad..u did not shiver at 4min..ok..u go.to ur class..



geet left him'n joined vicky..the noon classes were keeping all busy.. Proff..Xavior came n took his part..he then gave them a work,which made all speechless..they were given a measurement n asked to make a model of house in round shape'they must submit the next day itself..all went in thoughts..discussed their views n went home..

Vicky was driving the car home

Vicky: baby babhi..

Geet:haan Vicky..

Vicky:how are u going to finish the work..do u have any idea..

Geet: no Vicky..i want to go thru lessons once..we must first make a rough sketch..then only we can make a model..

Vicky:..hmm..i hope I can do it before tomorrow..

Geet:..u can..

Vicky:what will u do for clay ,cardboards etc..

Geet:I'll ask prince..

Vicky:haan..bhai must be having it..

Geet: Vicky we both can do it with help of each otherna..

Vicky: we can baby..but their will be no individuality..

Geet: hmmm..u r right'ok..u do of ur own..i'll do myself..

They reached their home'



Geet went to KP..she did her evening works n started to make her sketches..she was so much confused n the whole study was filled with papers..which she drew n crushed it when she doesn't like it'maan entered the room n changed..after freshing.

he went to study n saw geet in crumpy mood..he took the papers n opened it..

Maan:do u need any help'

Geet:hmm..wo'.par.. haan.

Maan:whats ur prob..

Geet: how can a house be circular in shape'.

Maan:so,that's ur problem..

He took his lappy n sat in chair...

Geet: haan..can u help me..

Maan: haan..but,its ur work..so u will finish'but I can help u without helping you..

Geet: how..

Maan:what will u give me if I give you a suggestion..

Geet: whatever u ask'

Maan:ok'think about igloo'u can make it'

He saw geets face brightening'she came n hugged maan n kissed him..her lips felt heavenly on his cheeks...

Geet: thank u thank u..thank u so much..

Maan st: no maan..hold on..she is making u crazy..

Geet went back to her place n started to make sketch..she got an idea..she made similar circular house n semi ceiling doom over it'

She divided the parts of house according to proff que..

She came with chart to maan..

Geet: prince,see how is it..

She asked like a student to teacher..n their was an excitement of achievement in her voice..

Maan looked at it..

Maan:perfect..

Geet:tho mein model banaun..like this..

Maan:yes..

Maan continued his work..

Geet: I need clay ,cardboard.,colours,.etc..

Maan: its there..he showed the box in top shelf..wait I'll help u..just 2 min..

But our geet is geet..she saw him working..so,she thought to take it herself'

Geet stood on the table to take it out..she missed her balance n that's when maan looked her n he immediately ran to her ..he fell down taking her fully over him n the things scattered all over them n on floor'

geet hugged him in fear..n maan was holding her waist tight..he looked at her feary face..her hair full of colour papers..he slowly cupped her face..

Maan:open ur eyes jaan..u r safe..

She opened her one eyes..n saw herself fully over him n she was safe'she opened the other eye..

Maan could only smile at her cute antics..he can fall for her cute expressions..then only he recognized her body was glued to him..her every part was over him..her breathe falling on his neck,her softness pressing his hard chest..he felt electrified n she was awakening his desire..his hands smoothed her back..she sat over him'he least expected that move of hers..she was sitting below his stomach..

Geet:have you got hurt..r u ok..

She asked him innocently..

Maans st:..i must say no'the way u r over me,I just want to feel u right now..

Maan:..sona,move..

Geet moved a little down..he was shocked..the way she moved over him..

Oh..no..im going to die today craving for her touch'

Geet:aap teek ho na prince..

Maan sat holding her..her legs either side of his waist..he started to remove the papers from her hair..a piece fell on his face ..n the colour sticked in his skin..she was also removing the papers over him..she started to rub his cheek to clear the colour..it pained him'

Maan:ouch..

Geet instantly blowed air over it..

Geet:sry..sry..sry..

Maan smirked..

Maan:I don't want this type of sorry..

Geet:u want kissy..

Maan nodded yes..


Geet placed her lips where she scratched the skin making it red..

Geet:now..

Maan:teek hai..u told u will do whatever I say..if I helped u in ur work..

Geet:haan..

Maan hesitated..he kissed her forehead,eyes nose chin cheeks chin n came to nape of her neck..she closed her eyes feeling butterflies in stomach..he kissed her their..he can feel her skin burning when his lips touched hers..

his hands were removing the buttons of her shirt'she was so lost in his proximity,she did not realize it..he removed her shirt leaving her in slips..the chillness touched her bare shoulders'she opened her eyes n saw herself..


Geet crossed her hands over her chest..maan stopped her..

Maan:not today..

Geet ..par prince..i..feel shy..

Maan:geet..have u seen the girls dressing in college..

Geet:yuck..they na wear small small clothes..

Maan: they wear bare shoulder dress also..i want to see u once like that..pls take ur hands off..

Geet:prince..

Maan:I'm asking only for me..not to wear outside..

Geet:wo..mein..keise..

Maan:u only said u will do anything I ask..its ok..

Maan made her sit aside n got up to move to his chair..

Geet stood up n held his hand..

Geet removed the other hand slowly'maan looked at her hungrily..her hands n her shoulder which exposed her beauty.helooked at the deep cut of her slips...his eyes stopped at her cleavages..her soft curves which are visible over the cloth..geet couldn'tstand that sight more..her cheeks burned..she crossed her hands..maan took her one hand n kissed it..

he was moving slowly upwards..his lips creating magic inside her..he kissed her bare shoulders ..she closed her hands to fist..maan lowered down..her feel was taking him to a new land..his heart alarmed him to stop..but his body reacted differently..his lips lowered n pressed between her softness'his hands trying to slide her strap'

Geet:p.pr.i..n..ce..

She whispered'he stopped n looked at her..a tear was rolling down her cheeks..maan panicked..did he hurt her..she didn't like it..

Geet.why r u crying..

Mujei kuch horaha hai..

What..

I don't know..

Don't u like my kiss..

Patha nehi..acha bhi lagtha hai..dar bhi lagtha hai..when u kiss me ,I feel something in my stomach..my body its burning n..n...i don't know how to say..she cried..

Maan took her in his embrace..n comforted her..

Maan:sorry..gudia..sorry'

Maan's st:,,..shayad..today I went too much that she couldn't handle.. she cannot take it so soon..wo ab bhi bachi hai..too nave n innocent to know about physical relation..

Maan:sona,r u ok..

She hiccupped..maan took the shirt n weared her..

Maan:u must complete ur model also..or ur Xavior proff will punish u..

He tried to divert her mind..

Geet..oh no babaji..how will I do now..

Maan:with ur hands..

He pecked her forehead n moved back..he gathered the things n asked her to finish..he started to work in his official files'he kept his tab on her fully'she made it ..

Geet:prince..see I've finished'its ok na..

Maan:hmm..but 1 thing is missing..

Geet:kya?

Maan:whenever we make a building we must keep our logo on it..so,it will easily show its urs..if its Khurana constructions..we keep K..if its mine I keep MSK'now urs..

Geet:I'll keep'GMSK..

Maan:no..sirf G'if someothers ask expansion of GMSK u cant say..

Geet:ok'

She made a G logo with her favourite red colour n surrounding by white..

Maan:its perfect now'u go n wash ur hands..lets have our dinner..

Geet left n maan also finished his work..they both had their dinner n slept'geet as usual placed her head in maans lap..maan caressed her hair making her sleep..

Maan was still feeling guilt for making her cry..it was only a few days,she has started to feel for him..n he moved too fast today'next time I'll be careful..will move slow to change her n awake her feelings'

Maan placed her head on his chest n slept soon'


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PART 84
Hai friends,

Thank you all for your support .Special thanks for my friends who clicked like buttons and commented my updates.. Please encouraging me in the same way'😊I love you all.

my net troubling me again...so only late..i couldnt post in 1 hr..sry for posting after 5hrs..

THE NEXT MORNING WAS AS USUAL'

Geet took her model n went to mansion..vicky has also somehow made a model..they both were excited..they went to college'the first period was proff.xavior's..he looked at each n everyones all have done..if,the model is gud..the measurement differed..or the colour choice are not suitable..xavior rejected mostly half of the class'the rest were ok for him..he took vicky's..it looked gud..but the colours were dull'he took geets model..the first attracted was her logo..G..why he don't know,he thought about maan'he also makes his own identity in every models..he never measured for others,but he did for gets..her every measurement was accurate..her colours,her designs everything attracted him..he was again impressed by this girl..

Proff:did anyone helped u..

Geet:yes..

Proff:what..who made this model..

Geet:I only..

Proff:thenu said someone helped u..

Geet:yes sir..its just a suggestion..

Proff:what suggestion the person gave to u..

Geet:think about igloo..u can make a house ..i did the same way..

Then she explained why she made like that..n all looked at her in awe..her technical answers made all spellbounded..whereas Vicky was proud at his baby bhabhi..

Proff:gud..excellent..nice description..

He looked at others..

Proff:this is called model..now,who all made ur models surfing net..i need a genuine truthful answer..

Vicky n group stood with few others..when they didn't get enough idea they surfed n made model basic on it..

Proff:I forgive u all..for ur honesty..next time put ur own thoughts..then only u can create a name of ur own in this field..now lets go to our lessons'

The day went well'n proff gave another assignment to submit on tuesday..

The next day was Saturday..all friends planned to go to film..maan also accepted..he went to office..geet n gang went to film jab we met'

Vicky was not able to answer geets question bank'why that kareena aka geet says she will run away'what is I love u'why she left her parents'when she saw kareena sad ,she started to cry..feeling bad for her..the group went on consoling their kid friend'renu was sitting next to Vicky'she smiled at vicky's plight'his puppy face..he was telling geet,I'll say u when we are alone..at home'now be quiet n see the film..when shahid hugs kareena in hotel room,she thought maan hugging her..she felt she want to be with him immediately..sh closed her eyes n was thinking about him'vicky entwingled his hand with renu at the last scene..renu blushed..he suddenly thought what geet will be feeling now seeing the liplock scene..geet was sleeping..

Vicky:thank god..what will I explain if she ask about this?

Renu laughed loudly'so was others'

Vicky:whyu all are laughing..

Renu: see ur face Vicky..u r scared n sweating in this a/c hall too..

Vicky:so..

Arohi:Vicky: this is not a scary film..its light romantic film..but u look scary seeing this film..

Vicky:st:hmm..i cant even say it out..bhabhi..kahaan fazaadiya aap mujei..

Vicky:no..no..not like that..i'm not scared..

Heer:ye lo..we are having masti n our princess geet is sleeping..

Meera:geet..geet..

Geet woke up..

Geet:where I am'

All laughed..

AV:in heaven..common geet we are in theatre n the film has ended..

Geet:oh..no..i slept..

Vicky:acha hua..aap sogayi..

Arohi:Vicky,tum usei aap kyun kehthi ho.

Vicky bit his tongue..

Renu:yes Vicky it sounds like u r giving respect to her'she is our classmate n of same age..

Vicky:..yes yaar.who denied ...i can call her whatever I think..becoz she is everything to me..baby chalein..

The friends nodded their head,knowing Vicky

Geet:yawning'I missed the film..vicky u will say the story at home ..

Vicky:o'no..ghar mein bhi I want 2 answer her nonstop questions...teek hain..

ST:..dadi will be there to save me..

They all went to restaurant n had their meals'then they had icecream..geet ordered strawberry ..n was delivered fruit salad with ice-cream..

Geet looked at Vicky..

Geet:Vicky u too'

Vicky looked at her icecream n nodded no..

Vicky:I didn't..

Then geets cell beeped ..she opened the message..

I ordered ..now chup chop khalo'

Geet made a puppy face..n showed to Vicky'vicky laughed n geet looked at him in anger..

Vicky:no way bhabhi..u must finish ur fruits..bhai has information about us..

He said in her ear..so.noone hears them..

Vicky took a spoon n fed her..she took silently..how can she go against her husband..

They all chatted for a while n dispersed to their houses..

Vicky n geet came to mansion..geet was asking him what happened in film..he shortly finished..

Geet:Vicky..

Vicky:..yes baby bhabhi..

geet:what is I love you..

Vicky spilled the coke he was having..

Vicky:why..

geet:wo kareena said na..

Vicky:love matlab ..aap nehi jaanthe

geet:love means pyaar..pyaar tho hum jise harthehen..jo humei ache lagthe hain

Vicky:haan that's all..

Vicky sighed in relief thinking he has escaped..

geet:so we tell I love u..to the person whom we love..

Vicky:..haan..

Geet: so..vicky..i love you..

Vicky dropped the coke can..in shock..

Vicky's st: oh..no..geet ki babaji bachalena mujei..bhabhi will make me kill by bhai'

Vicky:..k..k..k'ya??

geet:u only said na..

Vicky:..i didn't mean it..

geet:u only said we must say I love u 2 the person whom we love..i like u also..then arohi,meera,heer..prem..mani..arun..varun..pranav..

Vicky:..sab ko maar daal neka iradha hai kya..

geet:what..mei kyun marwawungi

Vicky:..babhi..i love u..u must say only to bhai..not to all..

geet:..kyun..y must not I say to all..

Vicky wants to hide himself'

Vicky:..baby..our relation is different from bhai..he is ur husband..n I'm ur BIL n they are ur friends..I love u..we say only to the person u are married or u r engaged..

He explained very politely..

Geet:so,I can say to ur bhai..

Vicky:yes..only to bhai'not to others..not even me'

Geet:ok..

Vicky:u will never repeat or ask me again..

Geet:ok'

Vicky don't know what he has stuffed in her mind'

At night..

Maneets room'

Geet was desperately waiting for maan..

Maan entered ..

Maan:hai dear..how was ur outing today..

He kept his files n lappy aside ..

Geet:achi thi

Maan:had ur dinner n medicine..

Geet:haan..n you..

Maan:ya,I too had with my clients..

he took his tracks n vest n went to freshup..she was following him everywhere n giving the things which he searched..

geet:I want to say..

maan"wait jaanu..i'll be back in 5 minutes..

he came out drying his hair n saw geet standing at doorstep of washroom..he knotted his brows..

maan:what geet?

Geet:i..i..

Maan:haan u want to say me something na..say it..

Geet:..i..i love you..

Maan stood rooted in his place..he was so much eager to hear it from her..n when he heared,it was totally a bliss..he looked at her eyes n tried to read her..there was nothing than innocence..the words she said ..its not an inner feeling..

Maan:who told this to u..

He asked in little hurt..

Geet:wo..we went to film na..the heroin often said..so I asked Vicky..he told me,I must say only to you..i love you..

He closed his eyes to control himself..

Even if it was not from her heart it gave a peace inside him..

He cupped her face n kissed her cheeks..

Maan: I love you too..more than my life..

He hugged her tight..he was trying to control his over flowing emotions.


Geet: I missed you..

Maan got another shock..

Maan:come again..

Geet:I missed you today..

Maan:kya ye bhi vickyne sikaaya tumei..

Geet lowered her head..

Geet: no..i was thinking about u when I was seing the film..

Geet : when I saw them hugging kissing n dancing..i was only thinking about us..

Maan: hmm..

Geet :..i really missed u n ur

Maan:n my..

Geet:..ur hug..

With that she hugged him more tight..

Maan took her more close to his heart..

Maans st:this heart beats for u geet..it paces fast when u come near me..i want to feel u as a husband n shower u all my love..but I couldn't...

He scooped her in his arms n moved to bed..

Maan:geet..

Geet:haanji..

Maan:I want to shower my love on u..

Geet:..why u r asking me..

He kissed her madly all over her face..but never tried to make her feel uneasy or cry..

His hands entwingled with hers..his forehead touching hers'

Maan:I love you geet..love u so much..

Geet:..me too me too..

Maan chuckled ..he very much wanted to kiss her lips..but after yesterday,he held himself back..he kissed the end of her lips'he found her grip on him tightening..he nuzzled his nose in her hair..N kissed her neck..

Maan:..ok..gud night sweet heart..

He placed a small peck on her forehead n tried to move..

Geet:do u have work..

Maan:yes..kyun..

Geet:make me sleep n then go..please..

Maan:u don't want to say please to me geet..

He sat beside her ..she moved to his lap'n hugged him by waist..it was something new..but he shrugged his thoughts ..he placed her on pillow n gave sweety in her hands n moved to study..

He slept when he finished his works'

The next day was Sunday..the dr.came for a regular checkup for geet..

Maan:how is she dr..

Dr:very gud..when u r there for her..there is nothing to worry..after 2 weeks we can increase the treatment

Maan:how?

Dr.: .candle to log of wood..

Maan:ok..

Dr:maan I want to talk to u alone..

Maan:geet..go n tell kala akka to bring coffee for dr..

Geet:ji'

Geet left the room..

Maan: is there any problem dr..

Dr:no'next week is diwali'n u know sound of crackers n the sky full of lightening'u cant stop geet from thinking about it..she may get into depression again..

Maan:what are u trying to say dr..

Dr:keep geet away from it..take her somewhere..where she cant hear the sound of crackers..its for geets gud only..

Maan: ok dr..i'll take her abroad'

After few chit chat about geets health ,dr also left..

Maan discussed with dadi..n she also said its gud to keep geet away for a week till diwali ends'maan was left in thoughts where to take geet n how?without falling in medias eyes..

Monday'

Geet screamed n wokeup'maan wokeup n looked at the time..it was early morning 4..

Maan :kya hua geet..y u r screaming..did u see any bad dream..

She clinged to him..

Geet: i think so..muje dar lagraha hai..

Maan:kyun geet..

Geet: don't know..

he gave water to drink. Maan also felt restless...he was holding her n patting her back..geet again slept feeling peace in his embrace..but maan couldn't..geet slept till 7am..n maan did not leave her for minute also'he was holding her like his life is in his arms'

after geet wokeup they both got ready'geet was silent than usual..

maan kissed her forehead..

maan:do u remember the dream..

geet:no..

maan:geet,don't think about that then..be yourself..i'm going to office ..will meet u in noon ..

geet:ok..

maan:geet u forgot..

geet kissed his cheeks..he did not feel anything like other days..her chirpness was missing..

maan:ok..bye..take care..

geet:ok..

she went to mansion.n joined vicky to college'she was aloof through out the day..

the last period was library..geets class were splitted to groups n were preparing the assignment proff xaviour gave'so, their class were busy searching books n taking notes..geet ,Vicky arun varun'n their group were divided into two..all finished their notes..the bell rang..all were hurrily picking their notes..arun winked at varun..this time they have planned prank in their house..so,no one was aware what is running in their mind..arun n varun exchanged all their friends note(yash to meera..meera to pari..pari to mani..mani to geet.geet to heer.heer to arun r arohi ,pranav..like that..) they hided vicky's note in library..all were stepping down chatting each other..arun stayed in library..all went to their class n stuffing the notes inside..

varun started as planned by them..

.varun :this is not my note..its yash's..

Yash :then whose note I have'

He looked at his notes..

Yash:this is meera's notes..

All started to check the notes n exchanged to their notes..

Varun:ok,bye guys..i got mine..

Yash:where is arun?

Varun:he went to washroom..he will join me in parking spot..

Pari:ok..bye..

vicky:baby,my note is missing..see in ur bag..

geet:no..its not with me also..

Renuka: I think u have left in library itself..

Vicky:shayad,u r right..

Geet:Vicky,lets go..n check there..

Vicky:ok guys u move on..i'll check in library n I'll also go to house..

All bid bye n left to their homes..

Vicky n geet were heading to the first floor to library..vicky got a call from Renu..

Renu:Vicky'can I get ur notes.which proff took today...

Vicky: ya..Its with me..come near the steps ..i'll give..

Geet has already left to library'he thought he will join her giving the notes to renu..he was giving the notes when her brother shyam came..

Shyam:stayaway from my sister..

Vicky:warna..

Shyam: u don't know me..i can kill u..

Vicky was irritated by his threat n behavior..it reminded his behavior to geet'

Vicky:do whatever u want..renu may be ur siater..but she is my girl friend'I'm not like you..changing girls day by day..n misbehaving with them..

It hurt shyams ego'no one has spoke to him rudely than maan.. they both started to fight'there were only few students..all have left ..shyaams punches hit Vicky hard..n he bleeded'Vicky also tried his best to hit him back..shyam twisted vicky's nand n gave a punch with elbow..vicky screamed in pain..renu n shyam s friends tried to stop them both..

His securities informed princi to interfere..n they took Vicky forcefully back from shyam..

Principal came there n called them to office n warned them..

Library..

Geet entered 'the door closed automatically...the room was dark ..all the doors n windows were closed..geet was afraid of dark..she was about to scream..she saw a shadow (varun) in a screen..light came from there..her throat struck n voice did not come out..she started to swaet in fear..

The lights went off again n arun neared her..they both did not see each other'geet was in dark'so AV doesn't know its geet..they were thinking its Vicky..

ARUN:in a scary voice..hahaha'we are waiting for you only..come..come..

Geet looked at the shadow nearing her'suddenly arun lighted a candle n took the light near his face..geet looked at the face..half burnt n half in blood'her mind went to her chachu..who was looking same like this after the blast..




Geet started to scream..chachu chachu..chachu..

She was holding her phone tightly..her fingers pressed speed dial n it went to maan..who was still in his classroom..

Maan:hello..

Geet dropped the phone..

She started to run all over the library..

Chachu..chachu'

Maan was shocked hearing her deadly scream'she was screaming from bottom of her lungs..

Maan panicked..

Maan:where r u..say me..h e llo..h e llo..

He heared falling of books ..

Maan:is she in library..he started to run to library..

AV was shocked to see geet..

They both tried to near her'

Geet ..sorry..its me arun varun..

They did not know what damage they have done'n they were nearing her with same burnt mask'she was hell scared..

Chachu..uuu..mama..papa..vicky'she called all her family members after several months'she did not let AV near her..

she fainted.fighting with her mental tortures...

AV:geet geet'

They heared the door opening sound..

AV:if someone caught us we will be restricted from college..lets hide somewhere..n they hided inside a cupboard..

Maan came n called geet..geet..he switched on the lights..his feet stamped on the phone,which confirmed geet is there..AV were watching thru the holes..n was shocked to see maan..maan saw geet lying on floor..

Maan:geet..geet..what happened..he patted her..he found her cold..

Maan called bahadur..

My car now at end of steps..n I need all of u to cover me.

Bahadur followed his orders seeing the tension in his voice..

Maan rubbed geets hands n legs..

Maan:jaan utto..utto na..tumhara maan hai..get up dear'pls get up..

Maan scooped her in his arms n looked around..noone is here..then hy geet came here..what happened..he ran down carrying geet'

Vicky came out of princi's room..shyam n group left to their cars..

vicky:bhabhi..where is she..he looked around n saw maans car rushing to the steps..he immediately went thre..only to see geet in maans arms..

bagadur did not stop Vicky..he neared them..

maan placed geet in car..

Vicky:bhabhiii..what happened to her..

Maan saw him..he was wounded'

Maan:bahadur follow me with him'

Maan took the injection n gave geet..he waited for her response..she was not moving also..

Maan called DR..n said he is coming to hospital with geet..

Dr..immediately made arrangements for geet..

They rushed her to emergency..maan gave bahadur a look..

Which he understood n took Vicky to dress up his wounds..

Hrs passed dr..did not come out n maan was pacing right n left on corridor'

Bahadur informed dadi about Vicky n geet..

Vicky 's hand was broken..he was adviced to be at bedrest for 21 days till the bandage is removed'

Maan :bahadur,did u ask him what happened..

Bahadur told what happened..

Maan:about geet..

Bahadur:even Vicky doesn't know what happened in library..

Dadi n kala arrived..vicky also did not hear to anyone..he came there keeping a little distance from maan..he was not scared of him..but scared of geet..the position he saw,it still wrenched his heart..

Dadi:maan,how is geet..

Maan silently shed tears..

They heared geet screaming'chachu..mama..

Dr..came out rushing..

Dr:can anyone say what happened..why she has again pushed back..

Maan:what happened dr..

Dr:she is again in depression..the thoughts which u made her forget is now alive..she is remembering her families death'she is back being violent..

Maan:but,how..how can she..

Maans words stopped in his throat'

Dr:something has happened mr.khurana..patha kariye..

Maan looked at the gaurds'n Vicky in anger..if look could kill someone that was his..vicky cried hugging dadi..they heared geets scream inside the room'

Vicky:I don't know dadi..such mein I don't know..how it happened I don't know..i want my baby back..i cant see her like this'

He slapped himself with both hands..

Dadi caught his hands..

Dadi:I know beta..u r telling truth..u must take care of urself also..patti khul jayegi..

Vicky:I don't care dadi..mujei meri baby chahiye..meri baby'bhabhi..i must not have fighted with shaym..i forgot her for a min..it all happened bcoz of me..punish me dadi..pls punish me..i did not take care of her..vicky was totally broke down'

Maan went insde geets room without caring for anyone..they were injecting her to sleep n relax..maan hugged her..she felt safe in his arms in that state too..she drifted to sleep holding maan tightly..


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Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First part was just awesome... i completely loved it...

I loved the nose cut that maan gave to Sam... and i loved maaneet moments... They were totally cute... The understanding Maan and the innocent Geet... they are just awesome !!!!

Wow,,, Love you for dedicating this update to me...

Me waiting for the next update in an hour!!!

Uff,,, so much happened in part 84... Geet actually told "I love you" to Maan... though not totally aware...

And that was really a twist in the story... she again back to the scary mode...

I just cant wait for the next update Valli,,,

Continue soon


Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago

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