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😉😉😛GUYS ACTUALLY IT VAS A 1ST FF V RITTEN 4 U IF U GUYS LIK PLZ COMMENT THEN ONLY NEXT PART VIL BE UPDATED




INTRODUCTION

KRIYA:-ONLY DAUGTER OF KRITHI AND KRISH

REYANSH:-SON OF RHIDHIMA AND RIHAN

SHARON:-DAUGTER OF SMRITHI AND SHAN

SWAYAM :-SON OF SHREYA AND SIDH

PART 1

ST LOUIS COLLAGE

A SILENT ROOM VICKY ,NEHA,SHARIN,SWAYAM,REY OR BAKKI SAB EXAM ATTEND KARREHIHEY

PUNE:-SIR KYA MEY ANDHER AASAKTHI HU

SIR;-YA

PUNE-SIR PRINCIPLE SIR YE APKO DENEKELIYE KAHA

SIR;-(OPEN THE LETTER AND READS)

A NEW GAL COMMING

NAME;-KRIYA

ALLOW HER 2 ATTEND THE CLASS

KIDKEY SEY HAVA ARAHAHEY SWAYAMKA EXAM PAPER BENCH SEY NEECHEY GIRGAYE ,VO USKEY PEECHEY BAGRAHEYHEY

KRIYA;-EXCUSE ME SIR

SIR;-TUM

KRIYA ;-SIR KRIYA

REY;-LOOKING KRIYA &WONDERING WHO S THIS

VICKY;-TUM KON HO

SIR;-VICKY KYA MEY TUMSEY KUCH POOCHA

VICKY;-NAHEY SIR

SIR;-THEN CHUP RAHO

KRIYA;-SIR

SIR;-YUM SWAYAM KEY PASS BAITTO

SHARON;-NO SIR

SIR;-I DIDNT ASK U

SWYAM OR KRIYA FACE TO FACE LOOKING ,REY KO YE PASSANH NAHEY AYA ESILIYE REY SWAYAM KO PUSH KARDHIYA.SWAYAM SUDDENLY KRIYA KO PAKKADLIYA OR VO DHONOM NECHEY GIRGAYE.SHARON KO YE DEKKAR ETHANY GHUSSA

SHARON;-SIR VATS GOING ON

SIR;-SWAYAM R U ALL RIGHT

SWAYAM ;-YES SIR

SWAYAM OR KRIYA SLOWLY TAKES THERE PLACE

SWAYAM ;-HAI I AM SWAYAM

KRIYA;-HAI ME KRIYA

SWAYAM;-Y U CHOOS THIS COLLG

KRIYA;-AM NE 2 MIMBI MY DAD BROUGHT A PROPERTY SO V CAME HERE

SWAYAM;-UR NEW 2 THE COLLG KYA TUM MUJSEY DHOSTHI KAROOGHI

KRIYA;-Y NOT,MUJEY BE EK FRND KE ZAROORY HEY

BAKKI SAB YE DHONOMKO DHEKKREHIHEY

REY;- SIR I FINSD THE EXM LET I GO

SIR;-YA U CN

KRIYA;-Y HE S LOOKING SO STRANGE

SWAYAM;-I DONT NO

SHARON;-SAB TUMARAVAJASEY

KRIYA;-KYA

SWAYAM INTRODUCING KRIYA TO BHARATH,NEHA,AMAR,VISHAKA

PART;-2

REY;-KONHEY YE LADKY

VICKY;-MUJEY KYA PATHA

NILESH;-BUT

REY;-BUT...THAT NEW GAL S S SO CUTE

NILESH ;-HA KRIYA S CUTE

VICKY;-VN COMP TO SHARON SHE S NOTHING

REY;-TUM SHARON KO CHODO

NILESH ;-VAT SHE S UR BEST FRND

VICKY;-REY SAB BOOLGAYE

SHARON;-VATHA HELL UR TAIKING REY TUM MUJEY BOOL GAYE

REY;-VAT

SHARON;-TUM,SWAYAM SAB MUJEY BOOLGAYE

REY;-SWAYAM!!!!!!!

SHARON;-I MEAN...

REY;- ACTUALLY TU SAB KO BOOLGAYA

SHARON;-JUST STOP IT REY

VICKY;-HUMEY VO NAYE LADKE KO KUCH KARNAPADEY GA

SIMI ,RINI;-V BOTH R VITH U

PART 3

VICKY NILESH

SIMI RINI ;- PUTTING OIL ON THE FLOOR

AMAR BHARATH

VISHAKA,NEHA ;-YE LOG KYA KAR RAHEY HEY

YE BOTH STARTS FITTING THEY FORGET THAT THEY DROP THE OIL REY,SHARN,SWAYAM OR KREYA ARAHAHEY

REY OIL PAR SLIP KARKEY KRIYA KO BE SATH LEKKAR FLOOR MEY GIRGAYE OR GIRNEYKKEY FORCE MEY REY KRIYA KO KISS KARDHIYA

SHARON FELT DOWN SO BADLY SWAYAM USSEY HELPKARNEKELIYE PASS JARAHEY OR ONETHER SIDEY MEY PUNE PRINCIPAL SIR KELIYE COFFE LEKKAR ARAHEY HEY WHILE SWAYAM HELPING SHARON OIL MEY SLIP KAR PUNE COFFE SHARONKEY BODY PAR GIRGAYE YE DEKKAR SWAYAM HASSREHIHEY,SHARNO GHUSSA ARAHAHEY OR VAHASEY UDKAR CHALGAYE

PART4

ARMAN ENTERING

ARMAN;-REY VATS GOING ON

REY;-LOOKING KRIYAS EYES

KRIYA;-REY PEECHEY DEKKO

REY;-OMG SIR AAP

ARMAN ;-SIR ACTUALLY

ARMAN;-MEY SAB SAMACH GAYE ,BARBIE DOLL TUM YEHA

KRIYA;-ARMAN MEY YEHA SETTLE HOGAYA

REY;-ARMAN

SWAYAM ;-VATS GOING ON

KRIYA;-ARMAN S MY FAMILLY FRND

SWAYAM;-THATS GUD

REY;-VAT GUD

ARMAN;-MUJEY KRIYA SEY BATH KARNAHEY TUM LOG JAVO

SWAYAM;-OK SIR

REY;-MM BYE KRIYA

SWAYAM;-REY MUJEY HELP KARROOO NA

REY;-KYA

SWAYAM;-MUJEY SHARON SEY SORRY BOLNAHEY

REY;-BUT MERA KRIYA

SWAYAM ;-TUMARA KRIYA

REY;-NOTHING I VIL GIV U THE PHON NO OF HER

SYAM;- THANKS

PART5

REY;-MUJEY KYA HORAHAHEY

RIDHIMA;-VAT HAPPEN

REY;-MOM NOTHING(SMILING)

RIHAN;-I THINK HAMEREY BETTEY KO KISISEY PYAAR HOGAYA

RIDHIMA;-PYAAR,THATS GUD

REY;-NOOO

RIHAN;-PYAR KARNA GALATH KAM NAHEY

REY;-BUT DAD MUJEY PATHANAHEY YE PYAR HEY OR NOT

RIHAN;-HW CAN U SAY

REY;-DAD SHE S A NEW GAL 2 OUR COLLG

RIDHIMA;-PYAR AT 1ST SIGHT

RIHAN;-BETTA SAMBALKAR TAKE EACH STEP SLOWLY

RIDHIMA;-MERA BAHU KAISEY DIKTHEY

REY;-CUTE

SMART...ETC

RIHAN;-MMM GUD

RIDHIMA;-CHALO SOJAVO

REY;-GUD NIT MOM AND DAD

PARANT;-GUD NIT BETTA

KRIYA;-MA

KRITHI;-TUM KISSEY DEKKAR HASRAHEY HEY

KRIYA;-KOY BE NAHEY

KRITHI;-GOD MERA BETTIKO BACHAVO

KRIYA;-MAAA

KRITHI;-TUM CHUP RAHO MUJEY DAHLAGTHAHEY TUM SAB AAGKEY SMANEKKA HEY ESSALIYE DARLAGTHAHEY KOIY GALATH KAM MATH KARNA

KRIYA;-PAPPAAA

KRISH;-DOLL I LOVE

KRIYA;-PAPPA ME TOOO

KRIYA;-ETHANA LATE

KRISH ;-SORRY DOLL

I THINK TUMARA MOM TUMEY BORE KARDHIYA

KRIYA;-YAAA

KRISH KO PATHAHEY THAT KRIYA KO KUCH THO PATHANAHEY,KRIYA AAG KYA KYAHUVA SAB USKA PAPPASEY BATHADEYA KRISHKO SAMACH AYATHA REY KRIYA KO PASSANDHKARTHEY HEY VO KRIYA KO KUCH NAHEY PATHAYA

SHARON;-CRIYING

SMRITHI;-KYA HUVA

SHARON;- ALL HATE ME

SMRITHI;-TUM SEY KON PATHA YA

SHARON;-MUJEY AKKELEY CHODO

(MOBILE RINGING)

SMRITHI;-SHARON PHONE UTTALO

SHARON;-NO

SMRITHI;-HELLO KHON

SWAYAM;-SHARON

SMRITHI;-BETTA MEY SHARON KA MA

SWAYAM;-SORRY AUNTY

SMRITHI;-BETTA THUMARELIYE

SWAYAM;-SHARON

SHARON;-VAT

SWAYAM;- AM SERIOUSLY SORRY

SHARON;-KIS NEY MERA NO DHIYA

SWAYAM;-REY

SHARON;-KYA MEY TUGEY JOCKER JAISEY DIKK RAHEY HO

SWAYAM;-NAHEY TUM MUJEY YEK...MUJEY TUMSEY KUCH BATH BATHANAHEY

SHARON ;-VAT????????

SWAYAM;- MEY KAL BATHAYEGA

SHARON;-BYEEE

SWAYAM;-BYEE TC

PART 6

NEXT DAY

KRIYA OR NEHA PASSING DANCE ROOM

KRIYA;-Y THIS ROOM VAS CLOSED

NEHA;-YE HAMARA DANCING ROOM

KRIYA;-WOW CAN I SEE

NEHA;-Y NOT NOW ITS URS ALSO

HA TUM UNDHER GAVO MUJEY KUCH KAMEY

KRIYA;-OK BYEEE

NEHA;-BYEEE

KRIYA ENTERING ROOM

SAW REY DANCING FOR THE SONG DILSEY REY

WHILE TURNING REY SAW KRIYA AND SMILEY SUDDENLY KUCH AVAZ ARAHEHEY VICKEY OR NILESH ROM KO BANDH KARDEYA ,VICKY OR NILESH KO PATHA NAHEY THAT REY ALSO THERE THEY BOTH TRIED A LOT 2 OPEN THE DOOR

BUT DOOR KULNA MUSHKIL HEY

REY;-KRIYA TUM BAITTI KISINEY HAMEY HELP KARNEKELIYE AYEGE

KRIYA;-HA MEY DANCING ROOM DEKK NEY KELIYE AYATHA

REY;-OK TUMEY DANCE PASSANDH HEY

KRIYA;- DANCE MY PASSION

REY;-THATS NICE

THE TUBE LIGHT GET FUSED

KRIYA;-REYYY

REY;-KRIYA KYA

KRIYA;-KYA MEY TUMARA PASS AJAVU

REY ;-NAHEY MEY TUMARA PASS AVUNJA

KRIYA;-OK

REY SLOWLY GET TOWARDS KRIYA,KRIYA SLOWLY MOVE BACKWARD FINALLY SHE VAS LOCKED BY REY,KRIYA BLINKING HER EYES REY OR KRIYA LIP TO LOIP FACING

SWAYAM SHARON KO LEKKER OLD STARE MEY CHALLAGAYE SWAYAM SHOWS HIS HANDA TOWARDS SHARON

SWAYAM;-TUM...

TUM MATHLAB SHARON...TUM MERA ZINDHAGI MEY IMP PERSON HU OR I ...

SHARON ;-SMILING VAT???????

REY;-CLOSE UR EYES

KRIYA;-NO

REY;-I SAID CLOSE UR EYES

KRIYA;-CLOSE HER EYES

REY KRIYA KA PASS AAKAR KRIYA KKA HATH PAKKADLIYA...

NEXT PART VILL BE PUBLISHED NEXT FRIDAY

IF U LIKE THIS PLZ LIKE IT AND COMMEND IT U CAN GIV ANY SUJJETION

ACCORDING 2 UR COMMEND AND LIKES V VILL CONTINUE THE FF SO PLZZ COMMENT IT

Kriya:-universe geee plz help me

Part 7

Arman;-hai guys

Sab;-hai

Arman;-kriya kahahey

Viky,nilesh;-smiling

Arman;-or bakki logom be kahahey

Viky;-hamey payhanahey

Arman;-mujey tum sab sey kuch kehanahey

Bharath;-kya sir

Arman;-met ney hamari collage keliye ek dance team select kiya hey

Vishaka;-kya sir sach much

Amar;-ethany jeldhey

Arman;- ek team but 12 members r there and it s divided into 6couples

Neha:-wow

Arman;-there r 3 main lead couples

Rini;-sir y u divid all into couple

Arman;-mey ney sab ko couples par divid kiya

Simi;-sir vo 6 couples kon kon hey

Neha;-sir actually v are 11 but the 12th one?????????

Arman;-just vait

Simmi;-kya vo 12th one main lead hey

Arman;-simmi plz rey,swayam or bakki sab ko be aney dhoo

Amar;-ha sir

Part 8

Swayam;-sharon

Sharo;-ha kya swayam

Swayam ;-iii

Sharon;-iii then

Swayam;-I need ur help Sharon

Sharon;- vat ye bolneykeliye tum mujey bulaya

Swayam;-ha tum kya socha

Sharon gussey mey

Sharon;-nothing,vat help u vant frm me

Swayam;-kya tum mera dance partner bannojy

Sharon;-shocked tumara

Swayam;-ya mera

Sharon;-mujey soch na padey ga

Swayam;-take ur time

Sharon;- I think now hamey chal na chahiye

Rey kriya key pass ,suddenly rey push kriya toward the center and switich on the song,kriya s wondering vats gng 2 happen baground mey dil serey song rey kriya ko pakkad kar dance karna shoooru kiya ,kriya s also dancing vith a cute smile

Rey;-kya huva

Kriya;-nothing

Rey;-sab ladkiya tumey jaisey

Kriy;-marey jaisey math lab

Rey;-mind voice mey kuch or samney kuch or

Kriya;-mey vaisey nahe hu

Rey;-or kaisey

Kriya suddenly gusseysey rey ko push kardhiya

Rey;-kriya ye kya hey

Kriya;-plz any one there

Swayam or Sharon vr passing the room they heard the sound they opens the door

Swayam;-kriya tum

Kriya;-mujey koy ye room mey lock kardhiya

Swayam ;-kya

Sharon;-tum teek tuna

Kriya ;-ya

Rey;-tum sab

Rey;-tum be undher

Rey;-actually'''''

Swayam;-mujeypathahey

Sharon;-sab boys ko sab patha hey kuch pooch vo kahey ga mujey pathahey mujey actually ek dout hey

Kriya;-vat??????????

Sharon;-kya ye boys r same 2 god becoz that they no every thing

Kriya;-ya ur right

Sharon or kriya started to talk each other

Pune;-tum sab ko arman sir bularahahey jaldeee javo

Sab;-ok thanks

Sharon or kriya gusseysey vahasey jaya

Part9

Arman;-hai Barbie doll

Kriya;-hai arman

Rey;-vats this mey kriya ko panachathihu or arman sir usey line mar rahahey

Sharon;-sir ur looking so hot

Swayam;-kya

Nilesh;-ye gals vaisey hey

Viky;-u r right

Arman;-the 12th dancer s kriya

Sharon;-kriya

Vishaka;-so nice

Arman;-actually kriya s a dancer

Rey;-ya

Swayam;-tumey kaisey patha hey

Rey;-vo vo vo

Arman;-12membs,6coupls,3 main lead coupz also there

Kriya;-ye suprb idea

Sharon;-3 main lead.

Swayam;-sir who r the couple

Arman;-

Nilesh-simi

Bharath-vishaka

Amar-rini

Main lead

Viky-sharon

Swayam-kriya

Rey-neha

Rey;-swayam-kriya or viky 'sharon

Arman;-let c ur dance if there is any prob I vil chang the couple

Viky;-suprb selection I think mujey vo neha nahey mile god thanks

Sab ladkiyam kush hey,but rey or swayam kush nahey vo dhonom kriya or Sharon ko mananey kaliye plan kar raheyhey

continuvation

Rey:-kya karooo

Swayam;-hamey vo dhonom ko mananapadeyga

Rey;-hamey kuch karnahoga

Swayam;-vo dhonom gussey mey hey

Rey;-ham hey na ,manapadeyga

Swayam;-kaisey

Rey;-kuch to plan karna padey ga

Swayam;-plan

Rey;- kya plan workout hoga

Swayam;-I thnk so

Rey;-kya karoo

Swayam;-hamey vo dhonom ko bahar lekkar chalnahoga

Rey;-bagar mathlab

Swayam;-beach,park,film etc

Rey;-vat??????kya vo dhonom hamarey sath ayega

Swayam;-mey kriya ko lekkar zjaroor vaham agyega

Rey;-mey Sharon ko…… try karoonga

Swayam;-kya try

Rey;-nahe mey or Sharon avoonga

Swayam;-beach or movie

Rey;- beach kuch to romantic hona chahiye

Swayam;-ok ,when

Rey;-kal

Swayam;-kya kal ethane jaldey

Rey;-ha v can do dnt vory

Swayam ok byeee

Rey;-bye

Class room

Sahron;-hai kriya,tum mera sath baitoo

Rey;-ye kya horahahey

Swayam;-yesterday ye dhonom milethey abh frnds hogaya

Rey;-aftrol vo "gals" hey

Swayam;-I think vo dhonom gussey meyhey

Rey;-wait a second abh dekko kya honey vala hey

Attention plzz mujey tum sab sey kuch kehanahey

Sab;-kya

Rey;-mujey maf kardhooo

Sab;-ham ku tumey mafkarnahey

Viky;-rey tum pagal ho

Swayam;-ye kya kar rahey hey

Rey;-mey ney kisi sey fight kiya or ussey mafi magna chathi hu esaliye app logoney kya sazadhengi mujey or swayam ko manzoor hey

Nilesh;-swayam

Swayam;-vats ths mey kyo

Rey;-vo be kisi sey fght kiya,swayam ths the only vay v can do othr wise vo hamarey sath ayegi

Swayam:- ok

Sab rey tumey u vant u sing a song

Rey;-kya song

Sab;-swayam tumey 25times pushup karna padeyga but tumey Sharon Sharon keyhakar u vant 2 do

Sharon ;-ye kya

Sab;-ye hey tum sab ka saza

Rey;- ok

dil sambhal ja zara, phir mohabbat
karne chala hai tu, dil yahin ruk jaa zara
phir mohabbat, karne chala hai tu
kuch bhi nahi, jab darmiyaan
phir kyun hai dil, tere hi khwaab bunta
chaha ki du tujhko bhula
par yeh bhi mumkin
ho na sakaa..……aa
kya hai yeh maamla
janu naa main janu naa
dil sambhal ja zara, phir mohabbat
arne chala hai tu, dil yahin ruk jaa zara
phir mohabbat, karne chala hai tu
dil sambhal ja zara, phir mohabbat


karne chala hai tu

plzzz mujey maf kardhooo

kriya;-smiling

swayam;- let start

sahron…..

sahron…..

sahron…..

……………….

…………………

Sharon;-plz guys usey pain horahey

Swayam;- tumareliye sab kuch karoonga

Sharon;-m mmm not bad

Swayam;-plz I vont repeat mafkardhona

Precap;-kya rey or swayam vo dhonom ko bahar lekkar jageygi

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ye 1st 1 2 like & coment..
Gud sart...
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amazing plz pm me when u update

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Please refrain from posting updates in caps, in constitutes as shouting in internet lingo
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Nice one vicky sharon and swayam kria woah...n wanna see howz rey gona manao kriya...
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Nice story . . . But y are u writing all the parts in 1 post? . . You can write it in a new post & make index.. 😳

plz pm me too..
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Loved it...nyc concept...do pm me
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it was amazing pm me ur nxt update waiting eagerly
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guys next part vil be udated saturday all those who like and read my ff thanks
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😊guys next part vil be udated saturday all those who like and read my ff thanks😃

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