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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

Would you continue reading if this were to be based on M&G?

Oh, Well, you know for me it always depends upon what character you show in the story. I would read only if there is a strong pull towards the story ,
You know I am a Maan fan, but this is also true that I won't expect him everywhere, so I will read.
In the end of the day, story matters.
And who ever the lead pair is my brain visualises them by default😉.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey, I thought of visiting this thread today to see if you are around.

Well I read a few comments and saw you mentioning the switch to M&G.

I'll tell you my history on this forum.I know I am partial to MG.Infact there was a time when I didnt read anything other than MG. Then the soap ended and the fictions reduced. This was a blow to me since I used to spend a lot of time on FFF and the stories took away my pressure at work. It not only reduced my hours on India Forums but made me ponder over adjusting my partialities. I started reading a few IPKKND FF's with stacked parts and found out that I like the creativity and writing skills of quite a few writers. I do read them still and with time am changing my preferences. While earlier I tried to imagine MG in the shoes of the protagonists, I found many of the stories actually have the lead personality far removed from traditional MSK, so that doenst help either...I am trying to adjust my preferences, am doing things which I promised I would never do - but it sometimes requires a push.

So what I am trying to say is in an ideal world good literature will find its mark sooner or later, irrespective of the lead visualisation. But yes, a large chunk of readers in this forum are not always interested in good literature - they want visuals and spice. Its your call at the end of the day.

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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm around...but I was writing NYT and I guess my lack of focus is making me taking longer than usual to finish that part.

Ah! thanks for the input. I'm still contemplating switching to M&G because there couldn't be a serious betrayal than that to those who have give me the story: Dhruv and Lehar. In some ways this a personal fascination with KK and Yami of mine which is not much different than your preference to M&G and yet, there is that stubborn side of me that will take a bit of time to come to terms with switching their names to M&G while posting alone.

I will continue to write for Dhruv and Lehar in my blog though. As for IF, I will decide in a bit.


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Posted: 13 years ago
the innocence of a child leaves u speechless...

they know everything ..yet they dont know anything...

they cant lie but they cant understand certain things also...

the bond that they share is diff from the rest...

i sometimes wonder...that there r two types of people that we r attracted or rather interested in...one r the ones who r similar like us...who have gone through the same situations like us...n the other r the ones who r diff...mysterious n we want to find more abt them...

in his case...both of them r valid...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 9Its so cute. Nanhi finding for Bholu. Dhruv tot Bholu is baby. But Bholu is puppy 😃 Love the part Dhruv went along for the rescue

Part10
Lifebouy for Dhruv!!!😆 I really shocked when she said she killed Dolly!!! But you surprised me by meant by her piggy bank. That was really touching.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 11: A morning of many firsts

When the first drop of the morning rain plopped on his forehead, he still didn't know that it was a dawn with many firsts in his life...

Sometime between waiting for either his Chacha or Guru to show up and getting lost in the nightly spread of the starry sky he'd dozed off and now, as he shifted on the cot, while his eyes adjusted to the light and the daze melted away, he felt a brush of the back of her hand against his cheek. It was the first time he woke up to find himself sleeping next to someone he didn't find a will to run from. Chavanni and her entourage of a fluffy pink blanket, a rag doll and a pillow in the shape of Dora's face lay next to him and he smiled, realizing she'd survived the night without being crushed to death by him.

There had been that one drop of rain that had come as an empty threat from nature, not nearly followed through and he stayed on the cot, languid and assured, without hurrying them inside. In the quiet of the morning, he absorbed the details he'd never before paid attention to: the dark spread of her lashes that fanned outwards and the stubby nails that refused grow past her fingers. Then there was the dent on the bridge of her nose from the thick gross pink glasses she wore. Most of all, it was the first time he took in the perpetual crinkle of her lips that never seem to fade even as she was in the depths of her dream bound sleep.

Oh! Hell...Why did the most beautiful things in life come in such annoying little packages?, he thought getting to his feet and deciding to put her back in her bed before those moments he'd watched her sleep strike him with any significance at all, without wanting to gain clarity that they already had.

Throwing her over his shoulders, he walked towards the room and he turned back to find the edge of her blanket mopping the trail they'd taken to reach the door; Chavanni having tied one corner of the blanket to her thumb and he couldn't help the smile that floated up to his face, seeing the small ways in which she still remained a child.

He lazily pushed on one of the double doors and his sleep dissolved away as he caught on that it was locked from the inside. Shit! He shook the lever harder and the door rattled, not relenting to the growing force of his thrust. Chavanni sniffled in the crook of his neck and he gave up and waited for a while until she settled back into the comforts of her slumber. When he was about to walk down to find a help or Guru to solve the puzzle of the closed door, the doors creaked, shrieking as the lever was pulled back on the inside and jerked open to have her leaning onto one side.

He went very still then, the image her of in bed hair and a ruffled sari permeating a defined awareness even amidst the last haze of his sleep. If that hadn't done it, her smudge of dark kohl under her half-lidded eyes had made him suck in his breath for that long moment.

"One minute..." She yawned covering her mouth. "I will be right back" She said, pushing a lock of hair that slid over her face and he watched her fingers take them back and continuing to hold them there while she turned and staggered her way to the back of the house.

He blinked and stayed where he was, thinking it was the first time he was entering the bedroom of a woman at this hour when he had nothing to do with her unkempt hair, the smear of kohl below her eyes or the loose folds of her sari. Again, there was her daughter sleeping over his shoulders and yet in light of everything inconvenient and objectionable he couldn't deny that she still appeared more agreeable than most women he'd seen in that state.

He wished he was still dreaming...or ardently hoped she'd only been a nightmare. Either ways, he reckoned he had some waking up to do.

Edited by 6th.Element - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
A very short update...but this is all I could manage. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow, that was really alot of firsts. I loved the way he adores nanhi.
One doubt , in whose house is she sleeping? if it is Guru's room then what is Leher doing there, or maybe Dhruv and Nanhi are sleeping on his Chacha's roof top!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ooff confusion.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely! I can't get enough of them Dhruv + Chavanni. She is so endearing.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hamini_yash

One doubt , in whose house is she sleeping? if it is Guru's room then what is Leher doing there, or maybe Dhruv and Nanhi are sleeping on his Chacha's roof top!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ooff confusion.



In part 10 he brings her over to her bedroom from Guru's place. Remember?

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