Shikwaa : Pt.3,pg.5(28/06)

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi friends...

I intend to a write a short story...

As the name itself suggests, it is supposed to be an intense,emotional kinds...with lil bit of humour(may be)...

I witnessed a few undergoing this turmoil..and thought of writing something over it...though this story is completely a fiction...

Then...about our lead pair...i mean...Raj and Naina...

Well...its difficult for me to project Raj in a deep negative shade..i tried it once in " Flames" n couldnt help, lightening his fault as the OS reached it's end...😆

Here i dont wanna do that...moreover...mujhe yeh bhi darr hai ki agar maine Raj ko negative banaya toh aap mein se koi mujhe zinda nahi chodega...😆

so i thought of dropping them and select newer characters...but again the problem is, many of us hardly like to read without Raj and Naina..😕

Bhai...main toh dharam sankat mein padd gayi hu...😕

Anyways...i've decided to start story with newer characters...BUT ...will be waiting for your feedback...IF YOU GUYS DONT MIND SEEING RAJ IN A GREY SHADE, I'LL GLADLY CHANGE THE CHARACTERS TO RAJ AND NAINA...

And most important thing !!!

This is a short story...and I INTEND TO FINISH THIS UP WITHIN A WEEK BY GIVING FREQUENT UPDATES...

SO gal pals...hurry up !!!

luv,

mana 😊

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 3 - Page 5

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part ONE:

Is it always possible to describe the pain??

They say, pain is measured in decibels...but...

Can we really measure the pain given by our beloved?

Can anyone really repair the damage caused when the love of

your life backstabs you?

These were the questions Samidha wanted to ask...

For which,somehow, she deducted that the answer was NO...

And so she screamed out in pain as her tears mingled with the untimely rain...which seemed to be falling,only to hide her tears...

She cried inconsolably...telling herself every second that she wont cry over that cheat...that she is a strong girl...that he doesnt deserve her tears either...

But still..fresh tears pounded everytime she harshly wiped them off...

She was thankful that nobody was around...that she can cry her heart out...

She had put up a brave front in front of everyone...while she was breaking...piece by piece...with every passing second...

Who had thought that the new dimension of life, she had entered amidst shower of blessings and love of dear ones,with all the pomp and glory, will cease it's existence even before she gets adapted to it...?

Who had thought, that the person, whom she had started trusting blindly...will prove her blind...?

But she wiped her tears ...she wont surrender to the cruelty of her fate...

She wont fall apart...

She is a fighter...and besides...she cant add to the sufferings of those two people...only ones,who loved her unconditionally...her parents...!

she needs to be strong...for them atleast...

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

grey or not i want raj!! mana di raj ko lao...😊 aur bole to apun ke alekh ko bhi😆

vidushi

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

i love reading ur ffs so waiting for this one also

plz make raj grey but not fully negative

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pranita1202

@pranita1202

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

raj in grey

me likey .

but not completely negative

but grey shade wud do . coz grey shades on lead guy is more appealing😍 n makes the character more intruiging .

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Preetika/Elena

@Windsof.Heaven

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Mana🤗

Yaar tum ne to mere dill ki baat sun li mein Raj ko ek negitive role mein dekhna-padhna chahti thi but not tottaly negative...😊😃😃😃

All The Best👍🏼 👍🏼👍🏼

❤️Ayushi⭐️

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

a new story great

but i need raj

plz cont soon and pm me

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Ek nayi story wo bhi Daactarni ji se isse acchi kya baat ho sakti hai 😃😆

Ab Raj negative ho ya positive hume to dono mein hi accha lagega ab bas jaldi se le aao chahe grey mein ya white mein magar lao😉😆

Continue soon😊

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

dactarni sahiba..dekha mere raj ki demand kitni badhi hui hai...ab to bas le hi ayie use...lekin pura black mat kar dena..grey chalega waise agar white hota to daudta...lekin raj to raj hai na jaisa bhi ho..😳😉

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