Love & Blood Roses |part 1|ch4 jul'4 *pms 2mrw*

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[ Thank You KHUSHI for an Awsum Siggie 😳 ]







when evil comes in way of love, the rose path of love turns bloodshed..



















the concept is COMPLETELY fictious! i dont think the picturisation of certaion characters and creatures ever exists.. i own all copyrights for the imagination of the concept 😳
horror ff.. based on few characters from d3.. historic and prsent period revolution..




















they say that if love is pure and divine nor evil nor god can touch it..
but the path always isnt as sweet as honey and as beautiful as roses..

but once fallen in luv even pain seems like happiness wid one whom u luv by ur side..

one whose love is divine pure and true..
the other whose love is just one sided with the will of owning it..

whose mistake ?? fate ? destiny ? or god ??

there are 3 lives cliff hanging with the rope of love..
the couple who are madly in love..
and the other whose love is mad..

recarnation of Yudhistir and Mukta as Rey and Kria.. did they get re birth to complete their story..?

all love stories have roses carved in it.. some roses just give pleasure.. rest of the roses bleed..! when journey of luv is like bleeding roses can the two withstand it ??
will rey and kria unite ??

Avantika who is so madly in love wid Yudhistir could not win over him.. she turned into a para human.. waited with long lasting meditation for ages countably 150 years.. will she find her love back ?? will she find out of the recarnation of Yudhistir as rey ??

if she comes into the life of Rey and Kria to own him in this life, what will this innocent love go thru ??

the story is all about LOVE and BLOOD carved in the beautiful symbol of love - rose..

blood roses : is refered as the path taken by love.. its as sweet as rose but the rose is red not by its color but by the blood..










pls do post ur reviews!😳













character sketch and small intro : click here


summary next post below
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prologue: Click here


PART 1 : THE BEGINNING

chapter 1 : click here

chapter 2 : click here

chapter 3 : click here

chapter 4 : click here

chapter 5 :

chapter 6 :

chapter 7 :

chapter 8 :

chapter 9 :

chapter 10 :




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Posted: 13 years ago
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just giving u intro regarding para humans and historic times ( included in ff )

1000 years ago there lived few people who owned special powers through meditations and by different yagjans. These got supernatural powers from the holy spirit.. whom they worshipped and impressed.. they are called as Tantrikas..not just satisfied wid the supernatural powers they created few creatures..

These creatures were nothing but departed souls from the body.. called as para humans..

PARA HUMANS

There can be precisely called as PARA HUMANS OR ICCHADAARI PISHAACH.. they live between the human.. they aren't cold blooded creatures like vampires.. these are just the souls of the body.. they turn into white mass and disappear wherever they want.. there is a KING called as SAMRAAT who rule over them.. these can live between the humans.. they have emotions just like us.. these don't feed on anything.. as body needs food not the soul.. but these also have an end.. ( wil be revealed in story ) and like every other creature in this world they too have a particular form of enemies..

those tantrikas killed people and served their holy spirit to gain more powers.. hence if a tantrika want more powers or to be precise if he wants his particular desire to b full filled he wud better sacrifice a life of a human being by serving the holy spirit wid human blood..

These rituals kept moving from one generation to another..

So in 1700-1800 times.. there lived the Ranawats and Jadeja's in the UDAIPUR KINGDOM..

Being cousin of JAGAT SINGH RANAWAT, YADUVANSHI MAHAJAN JADEJA always wished to take over the seat.. Jagat Singh was like a Big brother to Yaduvanshi but the evil is a evil..

Yaduvanshi was one such Tantrik like I mentioned earlier.. there is a secret place in his palace wich a 2 kms from the Main palace of Kings.. in his palace there is a underground room wer he kept all the rituals like sacrifice and yagjaans goin on.. he had few follwers too..

At the age of 40 he owned the first supernatural power by giving the lives of 198 women from the kingdom in 30 years..

The King Jagat Singh was always wandered how the married women ( just married and before mating wid the husband ) disappeared.. there was a great record of kidnaps of women soon after marriage.. people say that women get hypnotised and disappear.. but who will do it ? that too in his kingdom?

Udaipur Kingdom was one of the richest and majority wer literate.. there wer no signs of these tantrikas anywer in the kingdom so how wud such cases exists ?? these wer common questions and confusions in the king's mind since the last 198th women was lost, who was suppose to be the daughter of his favourite minister..

This brought the king in dilemma..

It was another day when he heard another news of kidnap of woman.. he was shocked at this and he assured himself he personally wud look into the matter..

The kidnaped woman was his prime minister's daughter.. that minister stayed just like a brother to him.. and this matter went so serious one day he found out that in his cousin ' yaduvanshi's palace such rituals take place.. he was spell bound and very much devastated yet he assured it mite someone else misusing the rights given by Ydauvanshi.. he can nevr do such things..

One day using the secret passage said by his senadhipathi he invaded the palace.. he searched whole palace but nothing was found.. instead he came face to face with the fuming daughter of Yaduvanshi..

She was in rage.. she almost killed the whole sena of the Maharaj not knowing the reason, king tried to stop her.. but all in vain.. she had stabbed him hard and another group of sena rushed to yaduvanshi's palace.. she ran off..

Jagat suffereing from pain went in no direction and landed leaning on the floor but astonishingly there was a door underneath him wich swayed open and he fell down in the place..

It was the place where yaduvanshi was in deep meditation..

And his eyes fumed open seeing Jagat here in such state.. evil mind struck open and he killed jagat singh..


wen yaduvanshi wud sacrfice the 200th woman then it said that he wud own all the powers like the god almighty.. and he had his desire full filled by killing a new bride ( princess ) from his own family.. it said that he had two reasons to kill her.. and seeing the death of the princess, her husband tried to retort but all in vain he too took his last breath along wid her..

there was a unexpected death of Jagat Singh's Queen too.. puaraa's says that the person who killed her is none other than the brutal Yaduvanshi..

he named the kingdom then as YADUVANSHI SAAMRAJYA

His daughter too came back.. he took over the dynasty..

In his rule the dynasty went very rich over all the other dynasties but had to face a brutal fall when another kind invaded their kingdom.. nevertheless there was a biggest cyclone wich took away the kingdom into rashes..!

They say that there was another resting palace of the king in Dehradun but there is no proof on where that palace is situated.. hence the rumours also died wich stated tat family of king mite have shifted there..

This story also embedded a beautiful and cruel love story of three..




Confused regarding why few names above is not mentioned ? dont worry u will gues it ryt ! i know and will b revealed in updates also.. its just a summary picture abi baaki hai dost 😆

so what do u think ?? 😛

did i stand upto ur expectations ??😃

prologue will b up by 2mrw 😳



review times guys! i need more reviews and likes this time


luv ya all

regards

nams ❤️

Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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such a beautiful ff !!! m srsly in lu wit it !!!
u rite osmm...kriyansh n swaron 1000 yrs bakk...its lyk new version of KR n SS lolz :P
d intro is really gud...u noe an ff related to history is really intresting for me as i luv dis king thingies a lot :P
overol an osmm ff...m eagerly waitin for u to strt it...nyc intro...update asap :)

P.S. sorry 4 cmenting late...was havin LUNCH :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome intro wating for 1 part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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The intro is unique and shows how much ur working towards giving us sumthng different this time- hav always lovd folklore so this is gona keep me interested I'm sure- luking forward to it 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*Res*

**Unres**


1000 yrs old love story...interesting!!!!


Summary was too confusing...but it was really gud.


Each n every word was perfect n apted.


Gr8 one..continue soon.




Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome summary ...loved it very much
1000 years old love story...great
waiting eagerly for i st part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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accha let me get one thing correct...

200th princess- kriya and the prince rey

but y was taani behaving killing every1...

i am not using the ild names... they r problematic... bahut likhna padta hai... and am lazy...

and miss nams... u think i wud let u so easily that u wudn't comment on my latest chapter and i will let u escape...

not happening... u have to go now... ( pointing finger and saying in an angry tone)

This story also embedded a beautiful and cruel love story of three..

love story of two yaar not three...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kriyansh24

accha let me get one thing correct...

200th princess- kriya and the prince rey

but y was taani behaving killing every1...

i am not using the ild names... they r problematic... bahut likhna padta hai... and am lazy...

and miss nams... u think i wud let u so easily that u wudn't comment on my latest chapter and i will let u escape...

not happening... u have to go now... ( pointing finger and saying in an angry tone)

This story also embedded a beautiful and cruel love story of three..

love story of two yaar not three...



array meine coment kia tha na 😕😕

and its luv story of three : kriyaansh 😳 swaron 😳and taani 😡

hahaha old names easy na yudhistir and mukta simple 😆😆

hahahhaa muje pata tha tere dimaag ki batti jalegi regarding the prince and princess 🤣

thnkx fr review 😳😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg namy ...
dats fab ...!!!
it seems so interesting ...
update soon !!

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