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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Arsha1994

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Luvd d updt nams...

D way u described avantika nd alka...ws awesum...

Arrghh I hate dat avantika...

Reyz entry ws superb...

Vicky ko sone ki alawa aur kuch nhi sujhta hain kya😆

Overall it ws fantastic...

Thnx fr d pm dear...




thnk u soo much 😳

yess i too hate her.. 😡 rey haye haye u dont knw hw much times i wnt 2 my dreamland thinking abt it
😍

hahahahha aata hena swayam ko pakana 😆

thnkx dear


Originally posted by: Born2Dance

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Hey... Liked it a lot...
Both d time periods ver awesum...
Luvd it...
Thanx fr d pm..



hey thnkx a lot yaar.. 😃

my pleasure 😳

Originally posted by: Arsha-4-Ever

Very nice prologue. Are this Avantika seems to be a very powerful para human. I am feeling scared of her now.She gonna create some big problems between rey and kria i guess.

Finally our hero landed in India. I hope our kria will be introduced in the next update.

I am really liking ur new FF since it has a very different concept.

Will wait for ur next update.



Thank u soo much .. yes she is power full.. abt her powers u will know in later updates.. 😳

dont b scared..!! she will create probs but temme wer does true love exists widout facing any hurdels ?? its just a test for true love.. c wether kriyaansh will overcome it or not 😳

im soo glad u like my works 😳😳😳

thnkx again😛

Originally posted by: anniemathias

prologue was beautifuly written
it was fantastic
i loved it and waiting for 1 part eagerly
and yaa u asked that by which name u shouls start ss then i suggest kriyaansh



thnkx dear 😃

chapter one coming in few mins 😳😳

ya i havent decided abt SS yet.. will surely look into this and come up wid SS asap.. 😳

thnkx anyway 😛


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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: medhasainanee

freakin awesome

this concept is so different and unique. hats off 2 u
plz introduce kriya soon n upd8 asap
btw thnx fr the pm



hey thnkx a lot dear.. 😳

im soo glad u liked it.. and my pleasure 😳

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

ek dum pata hai K3G ka scene repeat kiya...😉😆

i mean bas yahan pyaar nhi junnon hai...

rey taani mein no attraction na... agar huya na tooh main tujhe maar dalungi and u wudn't be able to celebrate ur b'day😉

so swaron are alreay together...

come on make kriyansh meet na...

ab update asap...

will kriyansh remember their past lives and will swayam know true form of sharon...

and one more thing matlab avantika pyaar toh karti hai matlab its just a want but then also as she was able to sense it...



oyee K3G ????? 🤣anvi kuch b bolti hai... 😆scenes ki beech difference dekh!!🤣

wahan MAA BETE
yahan toh ermm ermmm rey and taani LOL😆

wo tu aage ka chaps padke dekh kya hota rey taani ko like karega ya hate karega.. kria ke saat kya hogaa.. kriyaansh ke saat ky hoga.. intezaar kar balike intezaar ka fal meeta hota hai 🤣

updating in few mins 😳

swayam and sharon ka b sabse bada suspence.. hai u got 2 wait and read it 😆

does avantika love ? or is it love ? is it lust ? is it passion ?? yeh saari sawalon ka jawab aanewaale chapters pe milega !!! 😉😉

thnkx anyway 😳

Originally posted by: awesomeabshu

OMG kya likha yaar tune..!!

it was AH-MAZING!!!
LUVED the update..!!
well im very darpok..so dis ff is lil bit scaring me..😆



thnkxx abshu!!! 😳😳

thnk u soo much.. hahaha im not at all darpok ?? 😕

but i lov such stories of raja maharaj pyaar junoon ghost stuffs 😆

Originally posted by: Kriyansh_jaanu

Absolutely fantastic...fab updt..!!
hate dat avantika man!!
loved vicky's...aww bechara...
nd yess i too kno yajna...i was craving for fresh air..sitting in front of it!!!



ur new reader to my ffs.. but ur coments make me smile.. thnk u soo much for ur lov and support 😳

hahhaha yess same here even we had during house warming ceremony.. trust me i died coughing tat day 🤢



@aditi : okay will b waiting

@prrk : thnkx 😊


Originally posted by: yogini64

Rey ki flight india me land bhi nhi hui . . . . Aur iss tantrika ko uski khushboo bhi aa gayi 😆
she's dangerous . . . Glaring at her father 😲 . . . . Isse to kisi bottle me band kar ke rakhna chahiye . . . 🤣
wats the case with sharon 🤔
vicky knw where she is but swayam don't knw . . 😳



trust me i always love to c ur coments.. wid soo many fullstops and emoticons.. it makes me feel blessed THNKX A TON for ur support 😳😳

hahhaha avantika ki senses bahut powerfull hai

yess she is dangerous.. uski dad ke baare mei.. n y did she glare at him n al u will knw in coming chaps.. long way 2 go though..

hahahah bottle mei band karenge toh fir se bottle kholke ayegi 😆😆 jus wait n watch ki kya hota hai😉

no vicky dosnt know wer sharon is he is jus trying to save his life 😆

thnkx fr ur coments 😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: kriyanshluver1

Awesome prolgue !!
Cant w8 fr chap 1 !!
N yaa nxt ss on kriyansh ! Plzz
Bt arshi bhi chalega !



thnk u soo much..

chap one will b up sooon 😳

ya sure ss on kriyaansh 😳


Originally posted by: asmaju

Amazing prologue nams.

It was amazing.
Wonderful one.
I want the new update on Kriyaansh.
I have my exams till 5th so plz understand I'll comment to u ias much as i can do it soon.







thnku soo much 😳😳

im so glad u liked it 😳

yaa sure its okay xams r imp 😃

Originally posted by: namratajadhav

Wow amazing...
M so getting badly addicted 2 dis 1..
Keep on updating sooner plz...
N kriyaansh vala likhana ss plz...



wow its so overwhelming u lik it soo much.. thnkx a lot dear 😳

i hope i can keep up 2 ur expectations 😊

yess next updt on it way and kriyaansh wala hi likoongi 😉

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Nams its Fabulous...

loved it very much

the way u described the yagjna thing was amazing...avantika sensing the return of her love..

hayyee the way u described rey's entry mai toh pahunch gayi in his dream land😍

eagerly waiting for the update...





thnkx a lot dear 😳😳

hahahah mei khud uski dreamland mei baitke lik rhi hoon 😆

next update on its way..

thnkx again 😛



@shivani : THNKS A LOT DEAR ..


@nirju : THNK U SOOO MUCH 😊😊


Originally posted by: kvarsha

wow its awesome loved the update lot alottt... ohhh sooo they r in present time and alka in dehradun hmmm...

thnks for pm😃...



thnk uu sooo much... 😳

no no alka isnt in dehradun.. the palace of para humans isnt visible to anyone.. i will describe abt it also in future updates.. until then think its in some spooky place 😊

ur welcome...

Originally posted by: tinatartari

awesome dude!!

loved it!!
ll b reading n updatng on weekends nw on..
plx dnt mind



thnk u soo much.. i will wait fr ur replies.. 😳😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Waiting for d next updt...


I wil unres for all d 3 together...


One res for d CS, prologue n now updt...


*Kan Pakadke*Really sorry nams was struck in all d works...


But Seriously i luv all ur works..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Nice prologue...
Rey ki entry hogai...
Thanx 4 d pm



thnkx a lot kinjal 😳😳

yes rey ki hogayi.. ab kria ki baaki hai 😃

ur welcome.. 😊

@neha : THNKS A LOT DEAR 😳


@Teju: yes im narmada not namratha.. nd im d same whom ur thinking off pagli kahi ki hhahahaha confuse ho jaati hai humehsa 😆 i hv sent u d pm check out


Originally posted by: Dazzling_Smile

res

again res :P
and yaad dila diyo..
as STML janti ho na ap :P



jaanti hoon and waiting fr ur res it warna teri jaan kha jaongi 😡😡

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

an awesome intro wid a mindblowing significance of the title followed by an eerie summary...again succeeded by an interesting prologue...the prologue showing two totally different worlds was something really out of the box...now m hell scred of avantika aka taani-she just cant come in b/w kriyansh...they were meant to be united...u have shown her really powerful and dangerous...alka aka sharon as always sweet...but y does every1 assumes her to be wekaer than avantika...and y is she bored of living lyk a human...i mean just after it we come to know that swayam and sharon know each other-den also she is exhausted of her lyf...m curious now...and does vicky really know the whereabouts of sharon...so many questions taking a stroll on my mind...kya ye parahumans apna real nature jante hain...i mean jab vo humans ki tarah rehte hain...finally the entry of our hero-rey...i could visually imagine him and myself was drooling over him...but...yet again comes the CHUDAIL of our as well as rey's lives-avantika or miss taani...last part-splendid and spooky...the last lines of avantika added the much desired effect to the atmosphere...she could sense her love(is it even love or just an insane want)...seriously she is way too powerful...swayam and vicky-as always gud...the d3 boys always manage to grab my attention...thnx for the pm...i will be waiting for the next 1 as i can see a really creative horror/romance/comedy/mythical/historical(whatever u call it-actually a complete package) story being shaped up...m still having goosebumps over the last lines of the prologue(rather avantika)...😊



hey shweta first of all a BIG HUG fr u 🤗 for such a BIG COMENT..

im soo over whelmed.. THNK U SOO MUCH

woow im soo happie u loved intro summary and prologue.. my pleasure

vicky doesnt know anythn abt sharon.. he is just saving his dear life..

i dint get ur question ??!! para humans.. stay along wid humans... jus like vampires.. and they definetely know who they are and why are staying as human .. as its now compulsory to live in human world when they have their own world.. yet why sharon is staying as para human ? u will know in furture updates.. she loves rey.. or watevr she feels fr rey will be described clearely in future updates..
d3 boys hai hi aise 😉 ur welcome dear..

and chap will b up soon.. hahahha last line is most imp line for prologue.. wich will conti the chapters 😳

once a BIG THNKX FOR SUCH A GREAT REVIEW 😃

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

awesome...loved it very much

loved the introduction of alka and avantika and yajna's
and entry of rey awesome
waiting eagerly for 1st part
continue soon



THNK U SOOO MUCH 😳😳

haye rey entry pe mei khud fida hoon
😍

next updt on its way 😳

Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

jeez... dis taani is sooo obsessed abt rey... stalker hain sachi main...
dude... vicky swayam ka chota bhai! nyc jodi! yay... rey's back in india!
upd8 fast...



thnk u sooo much.. yes she is a stalker 😡

hahahah yup vicky swayam ka cousin.. 😳 rey is back now kria ki b entry hogi once i meld up wid avantika 😆

thnkx anyway 😳

Originally posted by: kaba3003

Amazing update:):)
Luvd it:):)
And i hate dis avanthika...
Waiting for d next part:):)



start an ss on kriyaansh:):)even if its on arsha it'll b nice:))



thnk u sooo much dear.. yess will b on KRIYAANSH ONLY 😳😳😳



@
abhiyakreya : thnk u sooo much 😳😳


Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

omg!!!!!!!!!!omg!!!!!!!!!omg!!!!!!!
nams it was freaking awsome
agr prolouge itna faad h to chapters kaise honge
aww u show so prefectly yaar
one side avantika sensing rey n other side rey in india...wow yaar dis is called para human n human...n nw i m waiting 4 kriya aka mukta entry...i m soo xcited 4 dis chapter...update asap



awww shaffy i was waiting fr ur review 😳

thnk u soo much shaffy 😃😃

yess kria ki entry will b up soon 😳😳

chap on its way 😳



@shiksha_03 : thnkx a lot dear.. will b updating soon

@chetna..: tak ur time dear... will b waiting fr u reviews.. thnkx a lot 😊😊


Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

this was scary.. this Avantika, is she nuts?? glares at her father... manners nahi hai kya?? ya phir mom-dad kuch sikhaya nahi.. oh she can feel the persence of Rey before the flight landed... kuch zyada hi spiritual powers hain maharani mein...

Swayam Sharon already met.. ohh.. thats great... Vicky ko kuch nahi pata.. but to save his lyf.. he said that... n Swayam, Sharon ka naam sunte hi apne aap break lag gaya...
waiting for KriYaansh to meet...



oh well why she is so disobedient u will know it..

and fake ppl hardly contain any manners...!!

she is very powerfull..

hhahahhaa vicky is saving his life 😳

swayam knows sharon! how ? u will know later..

kriyaansh meet will b up soon once i meld up wid avantika 😛

THNKS DEAR FR UR REVIEWS 😛


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Posted: 13 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Waiting for d next updt...


I wil unres for all d 3 together...


One res for d CS, prologue n now updt...


*Kan Pakadke*Really sorry nams was struck in all d works...


But Seriously i luv all ur works..





ok then sorry i think i sent u 2 pms im sorry..


i will wiat 😳😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#87












'REYYY' screamed vicky n swayam in unison as rey entered the arrival junction.. vicky and swayam took him into a bone crashing hug..

The trio jumped around like maniac and again hugged each other tightly..

'GOSH I love india soo much!!' rey announced as he came out of the airport..

Vicky and swayam came behind him balancing with his luggage wich rey forgot to take it..

'aate hi sala coolie bana di' vicky said gritting his teeth.. 'REY!!!!!' swayam screemed..

'WHAT ??' rey turned asking as though he is least aware of anything.. rey was lost lost in india.. lost in finally agreeing he is india..

'Apna saaman utani ki kast karega ??' swayam and vicky said together keeping the hands on their hips..

'kast what ????' confused rey raised his eye brows..

Swayam and vicky together glared at him and then at bag and then pointed their index finger at him followed by the bag..

Rey understood and bit hi tongue..

'hum tuje receive karne aayethe tere bags ko nhi' vicky said pouting..

'ohhh mere bhai soorrry' vicky smiled and hugged rey tight.. 'whoooaah vicky control control' rey said patting his back..

Swayam smirked, rey looked at him and pushed vicky.. 'vicky be straight' rey said setting up his hair.. swayam burst out into laughter.. soon the trio laughed harder and again hugged each other..

***

'yudhistir' she said turning into her shape from the white mass.. she swayed her head by tilting into left side and smiled.. she made her self invisible to others and moved closer to Rey who was chatting and laughing along with swayam and vicky.. she came closer to him..

She stood right infront of him and tried to touch his face.. rey moved front crossing her body.. he stopped at once as he felt someone's presence.. he looked around to find no one..

'kya hua rey ??' swayam asked in concern as rey started thinking something..

'ummm nothing..' said looking around.. she again tried to touch him but this time she was thrown away from him.. she stood near the gate and closed her eyes.. her body started burning like never before..

Her face turned white and eyes into red.. she looked up.. there was thunder and lightning.. in the sky and she could see some face amidst the sky..

She glared at the face wich appeared in the sky and again tried to move near rey.. but she was thrown into the road side.. every time she tried to move closer to rey she was thrown way to far from him.. this made her anger go worse she turned into white mass and disappeared in no seconds..

***

'december mei thunder lightning ?? wo b bina barish ke ??' swayam looked up the sky analysing if its gonna rain..?

'strange' rey said as he put his stuffs inside the car.. 'guys lets leave..'

'okay' swayam said moving towards the car.. but vicky crossed his arms on his chest and glared at swayam disbelivingly.. it was then struck to swayam..

'umm rey ?? any plans for new year ???'

'swayam not yet decided ! and lets talk about it once we reach home ? okay?'

'agar abi nhi manaya then raat tak dehrdun nhi pahunch payenge' swayam thought 'rey I have a surprise'

'what surprise ?' 'agar bataonga toh surprise kaisa rahega?? Shut up and sit in the car no questions no arguments okay ???' showing his index finger swayam said firmly..

'hmm okay okay chill dude itna tension kyu le rha hai??'

'man gaye swayam!! Sharon ke liye kya kaya karega tu !??' vicky murmered smirking..

'tu waha kade ho kya hass raha hai ??? chal aja' rey said while sitting inside th car.. soon the trio went towards the Dehradun.. rey was too tired that he slept..

***

'chahe jitney b janam lene pade hum aapko paake rahenge yeh humara kasam hai..' the voice again echoed in his ears..

The place was dark.. nothing was visible except a big foto frame of a prince.. he stared into the photo.. he went to caress it.. and as he looked up at the face he jerked back saying NOOO

'hey kya hua ???' vicky tapped his cheeks.. rey got up at once to find himself panting and safe inside the car..

He tried to recall the incident and then realised it was just a dream.. he had such kind of dreams very often since childhood.. but this one was different.. he tried to recall the face in the frame but the more he tried the more his head ached..

'hey are u okay rey ??' swayam looked back getting the car halted side of the highway..

'ya im fine swayam.. just a dream.. lets go as fast as possible I need some rest'

'ok il drive faster' swayam assured handling water to rey..

***

'HADH HOGAYI!! What do u think of ur self ??? don't u know ur not suppose to touch any human beings until the yagjna gets over ???'

Garima shook Avantika one last time!! She was still in the trance of seeing her love come back again..

'maa humne unhe dekha.. wo aye hai sirf humare liye..' Avantika said picturizing rey infront of her.. trying to caress him..

'maharani..!' a servant politely came in bending down her head.. garima looked sides ways on her shoulders..

'sabha shuru ho chukka hai.. maharaj has ordered to bring u and rajkumari avantika..'

Garima indicated thru her fingers fr the servant to leave.. she stared at Avantika and released a red light from her eyes wich touched avantika's eyes wid a jerk..

Avantika fell down.. 'OOUUUCH MAAA!!!!!! WTH!!!!'

'u better concentrate in the sabha or else I will not hesitate to supress ur powers u get that avantika ???'

Avantika tried to get up but the pain was worst.. garima stood one step behind letting Avantika regain her senses.. after some struggles Avantika stood up and looked at garima..

'sabha ??? y the court is called today ??'

'gud morning!! Im happy that u woke up from ur dreams!!' garima mocked at her..

'MAAA!!! What ru saying ???'

'well Avantika u had discontinued the yagjna few hours ago remember ?? and im sure u do know how important is this yagjna ?? don't u ????'

'maa! I am sorry..'

'no sorrys will be entertained for such behavier!!'

'I will not repeat it again..' Avantika assured

Garima agreed but she was lost in some thoughts Avantika noticed and was about to ask.. just then alka entered

'maa, Avantika the SAMRAAT has arrived.. u need 2 b there in court now.. its maharaj's orders..' alka stood near the door as garima went out without looking at Avantika.. Avantika was quite surprised listeing that SAMRAT has arrived.. usually he never arrives to SAMRAJYA instead they go to his palace.. but today .. ?? she understood its not just the consequence of discontinuing the yagjna but something else..

'alka is everything alright ??' Avantika enquired

'come to the court u will know' alka said walking off to the court.. Avantika was confused..



I know all are waiting for kriyaansh entry right ?? first let me end up wid that Avantika thing and tat court meeting.. after that u will find few updates love love love..! and lil of horror as spice in ice..


next update after 50 likes..


i think i can ask dis much ryt ? counting tat there are 83+ in my list ??


and p.s im keeping a acc of how many have liked, comented.. who are inactive ( who hv tld 2 me ) and who are active yet not comnting or liking.. so if u arent liking or comenting in my posts.. after several updates i will pm u a one last time informing u will not recive any future pms!! u dont want tat to happen then pls atleast like tat post..!


im sorry but sometimes i have 2 b rude..! 🤢


review time..

Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
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Nams rockin updt...
d way u mentioned dat avantika ..hr feelingz..
since it a supernatural thng itz usually difficult 2 imagine nd pen it on ppr..
bt u do it amazingly...
rey flt sumthng wierd ..d dream...
it ws perfect..
in d court d scene ..ws ritten vry well..
damn i jst hate dis avntika..
waitin fr kriaz entry..
jst a doubt..is alka a bad person??lyk avantika??
do dey gt d human avtar..i mean lyk d vampires dey do liv amaon human beingz??sharon nd alka r sam na den r dey allowed 2 b in relation wid a human being becoz sharon is swayamz gf..itz a bit confusing??
thnx fr d pm...
sry fr unresing it late..
luvd d updt..
Edited by Arsha1994 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

*Res*

**Unres**


Finally Im doing dis...cheers to me!!!😆


Always loved d Trio-perfect combination.


I loved dis invisible prey...!!!


U rock in such type of works nams...u r so creative!!


I think d cv's shud learn how to be creative from you..


She cant touch rey thank god...i loved d way u told it.


Avantika gosh...glad dat she cant touch rey until d yagnas get over...


Waiting for Kriyaansh meeting..


Update was fantabulous n sorry for late unres'ing.

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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#90

The first chapter felt good...always luv the camaraderie between the boyz...& Rey's joy on touching home base...the horror part is interestingly draped in ancient folk and makes good reading...luking forward to KR meeting

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