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The party venue was breaking high wid bursting music.. rey vicky and swayam ordered for drinks and occupied the bar seats..
Vicky constantly kept searching for someone.. he was growing impatient.. even swayam was lost somewer.. rey kept talking to both.. but both had their eyes glued to the door.. rey stopped talking and kept staring at both.. he snapped his fingers infront of them to get them back to the world.. he raised his eye brows and asked in facial expression 'kaha khoye hue ho ?' both nodded nothing.. and got back to joking and blabbering random stuffs..
***
'im telling u we not reaching on time!!!'
'OFFOOO!!! Shut up!!!!! Trust me we will reach on time!!!'
'how ??? deko abi 11.30 baj gaya!!! Vicky toh party mei maza kar rha hoga neha ko chodke!!'
'NEHA!!! Agar ab tum chup nhi hui na trust me!!! I will leave u and will go to the party ALL ALONE BY MYSELF!!!!!'
'par kria mei toh..' neha started only to receive the dreadful glare by kria..
Kria opened the house gates ( neha's house ) and walked out holding the fone on her ears and continuously chanting 'pick up pick up'
She stopped infront of her car and literally threw her fone back on air.. taken aback by kria's reaction neha suddenly went forward to hold the fone wich was flying in air.. she made a perfect catch!! And chirped.. but the very next moment she saw kria in utter disturbed state.. she placed her hands on kria's shoulders.. 'kria ?? whats wrong ?? Sharon ko calling u r ??'

Kria turned around wid teary eyes and nodded in consent..
Neha took a deep breath went forward placed her palms on kria's cheeks and continued 'relax! Wo ajayegi!! And moreover Sharon ne bataya tha na 12 baje tak ajayegi ? then y tensioning u r ?? and dis is not the first time Sharon going! So relax kria!! kuch zyada hi tension lene lagi ho!!'
Kria shook her head and continued.. 'no neha baat wo nhi hai.. I mean Sharon keep going I mean practically disappearing lekin muje fikar hoti hai!!! u know na im so dependent on her.. she is my younger sis mana ki cousin hai , lekin hai toh meri behen hi na ?? and muje ek baat samaj nhi aati jab b aise chali jaati hai, uska fone not reachable kyu aata hai ?'
Neha giggle at first but kria makes a straight face . 'oh c'mon kria!!! fone not reachable tab aying jab network nhi hota simple!!' kria gave 'oh-really-I 'dint-know-look.. neha shut her mouth..
Kria's fone beeped in neha's hands.. kria took her fone instantly and checked the id it read 'swam' ..

She picked up the call biting her tongue.. 'im so so sorry swam mei actually..' she started off wid her excuses without letting the other person speak' 'KRIA RELAXXX' swayam almost screamed to calm her down.. 'oopps sorry.. accha il b ther in 5 mins..! pakka.. bye tc..' like always she dint let him complete and she disconnected the call..
'neha chalo baito lets leave warna dair hojayegi..'
Kria opened the car door and was about to enter.. when she realized neha was still glued to her place..! kria turned confusingly 'what ??' kria muttered seeing neha shivering..
'5 mins mei hum kaise pahunchenge ??' neha asked innocently!
'mein hoona!!! We will reach within 5 mins trust me!!' kria said proudly..
'isiliye toh darr lag rha hai!! coz its U!!' neha mumbeled under her breath..
'tumne kuch kaha ??' 'nhi neha dint say anythn.. but kria party venue yahan se 30 mins ki duri par hai..! how we reaching so fast ??'
'kitni sawal puchti ho tum huh? Neha party mei nhi ana hai n vicky se b nhi milna hai tho , u can stay here I don't have any probs..' saying wich kria sat in the car and started d engine..
Neha looked up at the sky 'bagwaan muje itni jaldi nhi marna!! Kria ka toh pata nhi but please neha ko bacha lena!! Abi tak kaagu baabu ki shaadi b nhi hui..' neha frowned ' she sat inside the car before kria wud rush off..
Kria started the car and indicated neha to put the seat belts.. neha quickly pulled the seat belts closed her eyes and started chanting 'mantras'
The car started in a swift.. and went in a speed of plane.. wid evry turn neha's heart came upto her throat.. but she kept eyes tightly shut.. neha was terribly thinking this was the end.. while kria was driving in super fast speed throwing all the vehicles behind .. she was really enjoying this, wer as neha was constantly calling all possible god's names..
Neha slowly opened her eyes to c the view.. while kria said 50 seconds to go.. and they wer nearely 5 mins far.. kria increased the speed wich gave a major heart attack to neha.. neha saw kria.. who was grinning wide and driving.. she saw front.. they wer litraly going on a speed of plane.. and den neha saw a big truck facing towards them.. she saw the truck it looked like yamraj coming in the form of truck she saw kria glaring at the truck wich was coming in the opp side..
Even after watching the high speed of the car the truck driver dint worry to go slow and give It a side.. wich went on kria's nerves as they wer approaching closer.. nd only 50 secs wer left..
They heard sudden horns constantly from behind.. another car was rushing towards them wid full speed.. kria got irritated of sudden sounds and turned to check who it was.. in blink of an eye tat car over took kria's.. neha closed her eyes.. and started chanting all mantras In super speed..
it went ahead and reached the truck from left side..leaving perplexed driver behind.. kria smirked as she realized wat was going on.. she pulled the gear and went in full speed.. she went past the truck from right.. it looked like both the car's wer moving past the truck .. one from left another from right.. wid same speed.. finally thr truck driver stopped the truck and turned to give gaali for the car drivers unfortunately he cudnt decide whom to scold first ?? poor soul LOL!!
The two cars went in same speed and took a semi circle before it halted wid jerk.. neha screamed...
***
'kria ???' rey asked him completely unware of who the gal is..
'oh tune abi tak kria ko nhi deka na ???' vicky asked him excitedly.. rey nodded no having no clue who was she..
Swayam also realised rey dint know anythn about her.. as kria was new entry for their group..!
'mei bata hoon..' swayam stood infront of rey taking his drink..
'Kria Ghai..!!' swayam started off turning around facing his back to rey who was listening to both of them wid full concentration..
'St.Louis ki Dancing Sensation!!' vicky added..
'the fighter !!' swayam said proudly..
'the winner!!' vicky said giving hi 5 to swayam..
'humari best friend..' swayam and vicky said together..!!
Rey stood trying to picturise kria..
He went forward of the swayam and vicky such tat his back was facing them.. he stood staring at the door..
Swayam continued 'bijli ki tarah tez hai wo..!!'
'and honey se b zyada sweet!!!' vicky said wid thumps up..
'kisi ko help karne ke liye apna jaan b de skti hai!!!' swayam continued ..
'she is weird at times..!!' vicky said shaking his as if she had strangled him once !
'she is very daring..' swayam said in a fear..
'simple hai..!' vicky said wid a smile
'mordern hai..' swayam joined wid broad smile
'all in all..' vicky said coming right behind rey
'she is the best!!!' swayam added standing right behind rey next to vicky!!
'woaaahhh!!!! Itni saari qualities ek hi ladki mei ?? naaa..!!' rey said shaking his head.. yet he was impressed..
'jab tu usse milega tab tuje pata chalega!!' vicky said patting his ( rey ) back!!
'wo Sharon ki cousin hai.. Sharon ke saat rehti hai.. 7 months pehle hi clg join kia hai..'
'aur itna kam time mei humari bahut acchi dost ban gayi..' vicky said smiling..!
'woow she looks interesting!!! I dint know Sharon had a cousin too!!' rey said.
Vicky and swayam 'humei b nhi pata tha!!!' *frowned*
'but ya its true..! anyways abi aate hi honge.. she said she il b here in 5 mins!!!'
'WHAT 5 mins ??' vicky asked surprisingly!!
'yup!!'
'lekin neha ke gar toh 30 mins ki duri par hai!!!'
Rey was hearing their convo all while
'well I can belive it , its kria after all!! U know she drives super fast!!!'
'IMPOSSIBLE!!' rey said turning around ( facing swayam and vicky )
Rey looked at his watch and continued 5mins hogaya!!!
***

Neha slowly opened her eyes to c if she is still alive.. she looked at her side.. kria was not ther.. she looked around.. wether she is still in dis world or no..
Then she saw another car right infront of their's.. neha opened the car door and saw kria hugging someone.. neha cleared her vision and whispered to herself 'sharon ???'





so finally kria has made her entry!! how was kria's entry ?? a daring gal!!! okay this update dint have any para normal part or darawna parts.. n nxt updt will also b concentrated on KriYaansh!! and a lil on SwaRon n ViHa 😳 hope u like it..


please read the note !!!!
Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well im not gonna request anything anymore!! my last request was 55 likes wich isnt completed yet.. nd not nly dis in all my other works also!!!! but i posted d next part cz i dont like to ditch anyone as they do to me! sorry if i sound rude but it hurts.. infact wen day and night while i shud sit n study, i keep writing ffs .. hearing shoutings from everyone! canceling hangouts just cz i need to update here.. even wen mom decided to cancel internet i literally begged her thinking what will u guys do if i dont update ? and den i have my xams going on !! still im here regularly wid updates!!! why ?? im soo idiot ?? or because i love u all ?? and moreover i had even stopped writing love is my drug! its cz u all who requested i continued or else it was a closed chapter!! im not boasting abt myself!! but im hurt guys seriously hurt.. il nt let u face consequence of my pain let it b wid me only tats better!! anyways idk wen il update next cz i hav my xams goin on.. yet il try best to update asap IF U R INTERESTED!

and pm list will b re done again !!!! il let u knw wen n all!!! if u wanna b list pls like or comment dont just b a silent reader just for my works and be active in other's works!! tat hurts even more im not forcing anyone anymore its left to u.. nd i hope u all dont hurt me to tat extent tat i leave IF sumday !!! 🤢

thank u and sorry 😭😭😭

i hav cried a lot thinking there is sum fault in my works.. not any more!!! im a sensitive gal silly things it may b but it hurts.. i dont lik 2 rule ovr anyone! i dont lik 2 b rude to anyone!!! but spending so much time jus for updates and wen u dont even bother to have a luk wont hurt ?? and please let me know if u dont want pms il delete u tat atleast will not keep my hopes.. well no more hopes left !!! no more expectations or requestes!! enough !! next time i will not give any notes.. if it hurts il b leaving the forum simple.. y to annoy u all ?? right ?

and ya no updates before 20th ! as i seriously need 2 do sum studies.. but i can update as i have all parts already written jus need 2 edit n post.. but il not do it.. only if i feel u guys really read it.. my hard work isnt wasted then only u will get one update before 20th.. or else wait till 20th!!

if im not clear to anyone jus pm me or ask ur doubts in comments..

i usually dont use red fonts for long comments but im using here it means i mean very word i said !!!! 🤢
Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sorry for unresing it late!

Awsm update nams!

Luved Kriya's entry and the way swayam and vicky described her!

Thanx for pm

And regarding note

Pls dear dont do this atleast to those who regularly comment and like ur updates
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yaar nams kitni senti baate karti hai..!
how can u evn think we dun lyk ur writings..
ur d One Of D Best Writer yaar..plxx dun be Sad..:"(
frm now onwards agar im busy also ill cmmnt..cux tu bohut jaldi bura manti hai..:P *hugs* gal dun think dat no one loves ur writing teri stry line are unique and awesum..<3!!
* Edited*
lol update padhna bhul gayi thi..😆
it was Superb
one word WOW..!!
abhi aise update karogi den i wont never let u stop writing here on IF..!
HATS OFF..
Edited by awesomeabshu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Update nams.
Loved it.
Kria ka kya entry tha.
30 mins ka dis covered in 5 mins.
wah.
And the desc of Kria by Swayam and Vicky was perfect.
Absoultyly our Kria.
Rey abhi impress ho chuke hai dekhenge tho kya hoga?????
Aur nams yeh note klya tha.

pehle ab u concentrate in exams.

bad mai update de dena ham pad lenge aur woh kya tha IF chodne ka.

ham sab hai nah tumhare liye.
aisa karni ki sochna bhi mat.
We love u and u know it perfectly.
Ab itna senti mat ho yaar.

Thanks for pm.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nams plzz...dnt think abt ending and if chodne ki baat toh bilkul mat karna...we really love ur works...i know it hurts but phir bhi some r loyal ri8??????so plzz dnt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nams really yaar...

kya likhti hai tu??????????

i loved kriya ki entry a lot...

abhi se rey ki dil mei entry shuru...

sharon bhi aagayi...

neha bechari...

nanhi si jaan kriya ki speed mei phas gayi...


i wanna read further...

very intresting...

but next update toh love to hate u ka kariyo...

dying to read it ...😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update di...its simply freaking awesome
loved it
kya entry thi kriya
kriya and sharon cousins!!!!!!
poor neha bechari kitna darr gayi
eagerly waiting for the next part
and regarding the note di kuch bhi ho IF chodne ki baat mat karna and ya kisne kaha aapse ki aapke ff's ache nhi hai..aise hi kuch bhi mat socha karo aap...they r mind blowing
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
U r one of the best writer's
I'm sorry sometime I forget to comment because when I'm reading something I'm mom calls me so I forget comment and don't think about leaving IF
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesume.. waiting for more

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