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sugar_babe

@sugar_babe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

Ahhhaa exciting!!! Can't wait for this encounter!!

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

I'm so sorry i couldn't comment earlier. Actually have some life-changing exams going on nowadays so my visits to IF are reduced. Please don't mind if i don't comment as regularly as always. I'll be free on 14th june and then will be here all the time 😛

Btw, absolutely loved the concept ! This is so interesting. Read all seven parts in one go. Update the next part real soon. Can't wait!😳

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Usma55

@Usma55

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#323

Please update

Dont leave us hanging

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#324

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667300

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Posted: 13 years ago

#325

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Priya

@ArhiDeewani

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

Edited:

OMG Woohoo!!! I'm first for the first time ever!! *Does a crazy dance* 😆

I loved this SS; it was so different and you wrote it so so well, so well done!

Chapter 8:

Awwh OP hugged Arnav...ok...🤣 I so want to see that now!!!

Awhh Khushi died!! 😭 I wasn't too happy at first but then I read your note and now I think fair enough, and I actually like the end!

I really hope Arnav isn't just hiding, I wouldn't be able to digest that!

And yeah the terrace scene I found pretty weird as well, if I was in Khushi's place, who was about to commit suicide, and then gets stopped by Arnav only to have him get angry and leave, I would probably have decided to jump down. I still don't know how he just left her there.

And he does know about how Shyam so how can he leave Anjali and Khushi like that with the creep on the loose. Okay let's forget about Khushi, but his di is his world, how can he leave her like that?

I will be so angry if he is just "hiding"

Anyway I am SO off topic!

I'm meant to be talking about your SS right. I would have liked to read a little bit more, about what Arnav's reaction was and stuff but never mind!

Anyway the SS was awesome on the whole! Loved it!

👏

xxx

Edited by ArhiDeewani - 13 years ago

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#327

Wow that was honestly not expected and so sad!
Such a hurtful ending
Dowl we get another part please!?

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Usma55

@Usma55

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#328

What is Arnav gong through

Please don't end it here

Add another paragraph about what Arnav feels like after Khushi has dies

You can't kill her off

I am so sad

How could you

Update soon

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ilive2laugh

@ilive2laugh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#329

ouch that was sad! but i think for this story appropriate

shows how much she loved him

i liked it!

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Aisha

@asha...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#330

As a writer I can understand why you would do an ending like that... because if I could write...I would do something similar... But as a reader I wanted a happy ending... :p

A wonderful SS...truly loved it...Arnav got what he deserved for his cowardliness...