ArHi FF: Colors of the Wind; Th-1 Prologue - Ch-6B

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 14 years ago

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Arnav has so much to make up for! When he dragged her to the mandir that day and married her. He didn't just destroy the blooming relation between them, but he also managed to tear every one of Khushi's dreams apart. And a big wedding is not the only thing Khushi missed out on. The small joys like getting proposed to, the sweet wait between engagement and marriage, the rituals, an album to remember the day by. He took away all of her little dreams. I love that your Arnav is making up for it, step by step. But it's much harder to rebuild a dream than it is to dream.

I love the mystery surrounding Anjali. Her "whatever it takes" sounds ominous. Even though Arnav is the lion in the house, it's the quiet ones like Anji you have to keep your eyes on!

Loved the update. You've got a stalker :D

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

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I is very happy.

You are taking away all the bad *bash Arnav up* memories and making Arnav soothe each of them individually. :) I like! :D

The way he has chosen to speak all of this in front of Anjali shows how true he is and how pure his words are so as to speak them this way in front of the woman he considers the highest in his life to a woman he cannot live without but realizes he may not be worth her...beautiful! <3

And Khushi's insecurities are understandable...just hope she sees the truth behind his words, the purity of his feelings and let him heal her...sigh.

Coming to Anjali, "the whatever it takes" scares me...not cool, Anjie! That works in cases like ArHi with Arnav doing whatever it takes not when you have a filthy cheating swine for a husband!

Anyway, I loved the last para. :)

Great update, Meera! :)

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#484

Love the way u bring in the past with the future too...!!

Nice contrast...!!

Aww..Khushi feels uncomfortable with Arnav around...n to add the cherry Arnav bought her the ring...

Loved it..!!

Cont soon..!!

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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Its beauuutiful !!

Loved each and every word of it!!

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curiousbookworm

@curiousbookworm

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Posted: 14 years ago

#486

sooo beaitiful! last part with ring and scar ... sigh!

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

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Posted: 14 years ago

#487

Wow that was beautiful! the ring idea was really good. im glad Arnav has decided to win his khushi back. And god, i feel so terrible for khushi. but something seems off about Anjali...does she know about Shyam already? but i think im more happy that arnav has truly realized that he loves khushi. Beautiful update! :)