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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

WRITE A SCENE CONTEST

Just felt like holding one...long time since we have had one and everything seems gloomy and uncertain. So, let's have some fun.

The deadline for the contest is May 20th 2011.

Please post your entries here along with the entry number. The first person puts Entry no 1, copies the 3 pictures and writes the dialogues. Next person puts Entry no 2 and so on.

Any questions are welcome.

I request EVERYONE here to try their hand at this.

Thank you. 😊

Here are the pics...you have to write a scene connecting the given pictures. You may change the order of the pictures if required.

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

Entry - 1

At a hotel's lawn

Manager, waiter and a security guard are standing in the lawn and shouting
Manager: Sir... Sir.. ...Sir yahaan neeche..
Waiter: ACP saab.. jaldhi ayiye... neeche...

ACP sir and team looks through the window as to what happened and who is calling them

Waiter : Sir.. Jaldhi neeche ayiye..
Security guard: sir...yahaan pe ek laash hai... 😲

Everyone is shocked hearing this and steps away from the window...
Daya (shouts): Kisi bhi cheez ko haath mat lagaana..ham log neeche aa rahe hai..

ACP and team comes down towards the waiter and the manager

Manager, waiter and security guard are standing there looking at ACP and team,... shocked...confused...totally awe struck 😲😕

ACP: Kahaan hai laash...??

The waiter and manager are just looking at them.. no one is responding...
Abhijeet turns towards the security guard

Security guard is standing still...looking confused...

Abhijeet: kahaan hai..kahaan hai laash..??? Uppar khidki mein khade the toh paagalo jaise laash laash chilla rahe the.. ab kyon bolthi band ho gayi???

Security guard: sir.. aapko kaise pata ... mai laash laash chilla raha tha...
Abhijeet😕: Kya??? Kya matlab hai tumhaara?? Tumne nahi chillaya????? kya hua hai tum sab logon ko.. koi saanp soong gaya kya???

Manager: Sir... woh...woh...
Abhijeet: Woh woh kya...??

Security Guard: Saab...Aap log kaun hai.. ACP saab toh.. ek madam, ek lambe - gore chitte saab aur ek moocho waale saab ke saath aaye the... aur maine unhe hi khidki mein dekha tha... lekin.. jab neeche uthre.. toh... ACP saab toh waise ke waise hi reh gaye... lekin woh memsaab... aur woh dono saab... aap log...

Abhijeet: Arey woh..😆 woh log hotel mein hi hai,, kuch aur kaam kar rahe hai...

Security guard(still looking confused😕): Lekin saab... aap kab aaye...aur aapko kaise pata.. yahaan laash hai..???

Abhijeet: Yeh CID team hai lallu... kya samjhe... ??? hum sarvavyapak(omnipresent) hai... aur agar ek ko kuch pata chala hai..toh samjho sab ko pata chal gaya hai...ham duniya ke kisi bhi kone mein ho...

Security Guard: 😲 Ware-wolves !!!!! The security guard faints 😉

Edited by astonish - 13 years ago

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Entry # 2

CID Team present in Brearu, Daya is looking tense.Abhijeet Tries to say Somthng to him, But Befor he initiate.All heard Voices from outside the breau.ACP, Purvi, Freddy & Daya runs towards the Window and Looks Downward to knw Whats the matter.

ACP: Arre yah tu Bht Hangama kar raha han, hain kon yah Log.

Purvi: Sir! Pata nae kon log hain yah,Per Bht hangama kar raha han.

Freddy (scary tone): Sir lagta ha Breau ka bahr lassh mili hai.

ACP (Shocking tone): Kye Breau ka Bahr Lassh 😲😲 Tum log butt bna kye dakh raha ho..chalu neecha..

Daya: Kye Neecha 😲😲

ACP: Kyun tuma neecha jana sa Kye Problem hai.??

Daya: nae Sir..wo..wo... Ajj saa main Breau ka baher nahen Jaion gaa..

ACP: Kye.. Yah kye bol raha ho tum?? aga he neecha itna hangama ha Aur Uper sa tum Shuru ho gaya..

Daya: Sir bahr kitni garmi hai..Ma yah jacket pahen kar bahr nahen Jaion gaa.

Freddy: Per ACP Sir aur Abhijeet Sir b tu Coat Pehnta han.Uno na tu kabi complain nae ki.

Daya: Un ki baat aur hai.Ab tu Log muja Dakh ka Asa gorta han Jasa un ki Nigahen Poch rae hon muj sa Ka Garmiyon ka kapra nahen han Kye?..😆😆

ACP(irritating tone): Acha acha choro yah sab Aur jisa neecha ana ha wo chala mera sath.

ACP: Yah kye Shor macha raka hai??

Person1(white shirt): Sir yae Tu Hum ajj yahen Pochna ayea hain, akher kye laga raka ha FW walon naa??

ACP: Dakho Saf saf Bolo Kahen ha lassh???😆😆

Person 1: Kye lassh😲😲 kon si lassh?? Arre Hum yahen kissi lassh ka bara ma nahen CID k bara ma baat karna ayea hain.

Vivek: Kye baat karni ha tuma?? Saf Saf bolo?

Person2 (black coat): dakyea Bht ho gaya..Ab aur nae Chala ga..Audience tang ayea gae hai CID ma loopholes dakh dakh ka..Yah kam tha k FW wala tri-weekly karna Chala han CID ko. Aga 2 Episodes Sambali nae jatien aur 3,3 episodes wo b extra cast k sath..Hum yah nae sahen gaa.

Nikhil: kon sa Loopholes, muja tu koe loopholes nazer nae ata..aur kye takleef hai app logon ko ager CID ma 2,4 aur mera jasa Officers ayea jayen tu??

Person1: Aga he Purni cast dakhna ko nae milti..aur app aur Cast ki baat kar raha han. Aik Scene ma aur Officer hota han aur agala ma aur.. dakyea abi b Uper sa aur officers jahank raha tha aur neecha aur ayea hain?? Asa Kyun ACP Sahab?

ACP: Dakho ma tuma yah Jankari dana nae ayea ka baki ka officers kyun necha nae ayea..un ka Kuch personal issues han.

During all Convo Abhijeet noticed Security gaurd and he moves towards him and says

Abhijeet: Tum kye khara khara hans raha ho...Ina ander kasa ana dyea?malom hai na FW wala humari nae Sunta tu inn ki kye suna gaa..

SG: Nae sir, ina bolna dan.. ma na ina tabi ander ana dyea ha..ta ka Shyead FW inn ki hi sun lan.

Abhijeet Smiles Strangly and Whisper.. teak hai teak ha Laga raho..aur sunu Jo log bahr kara hai una b under Bulaio..aur acha sa hangama karo..jana nae dana jab tak FW wala manta nae..

Aur Suno humara COAT b uttarwaio.

SG (Confused): Ji Sir??

Abhijeet: Arre itni garmi ma yah Coat pehn kar Shooting nae kar sakta hum.. Daya ko dako uss na Tu bearu sa bahr ana sa b inkar kar dyea hai..FW walon sa humara new Clothes ki demand b karo...smjay..

He moves and wink to Daya who was watching him from Window, that Plan is sucessfull..

Edited by neeme - 13 years ago

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

ENTRY 3

In a hotel some murder occurs & the whole CID team is present as the all actors have a sequence to act inside the hotel. But suddenly Abhijeet is going outside the hotel but no one notice it as everyone is busy in their shooting.

OUTSIDE THE HOTEL

Abhijeet : (To see someone) Are aap ? Mujhe yaqeen nehin ho raha ke aap CID mein wapas aa gayi...

Dr Niyati : Kya karu Abhijeet mein to bohot pehele hi wapas aana chahti thi par fireworks ne bulaya hi nehin aur phir suna ke aap Tarika ke pyaar mein pad gaye to aane ka jee nehin kiya...😭

Abhijeet : Areee..😳 aap vi suru ho gayi... waise wapas kyun aayi ? 😉

Dr Niyati : Kyun mere wapas aane se lagta hein aap jyada khus nehin hein 😉

Abhijeet : Aree nehin nehin mein to bohot hi khush hoon...sach batau woh Tarikaji ke saath itna maja nehin aata 😆

Dr Niyati : Achha 😉...fireworks wale phirse request kiya to socha thik hein triweekly ho raha hein...to chali aayi 😆

INSIDE THE HOTEL

ACP sir has a conversation with Abhijeet according to the script but where is Abhijeet ? ACP sir feel very irritated & told to the crew members to find him. One crew member who became the watchman of the hotel for this episode (actually last time no actor is found for this role 😆) & he called everyone from the outside of the hotel & four of them is looking outside from the window..

ACP : Daya yeh Abhijeet niche kya kar raha hein ?

Daya : Pata nehin sir...wahan to koi scene vi nehin hein...

Purvi : Sir woh aurat kaun hein Abhijeet sir ke saath ?

Freddy : Kya Purvi tumne CID ki old episodes nehin dekhe kya ? Woh to Dr Niyati hein...

ACP : Mujhe yeh samajh mein nehin aa raha hein ke Niyati yahan kya kar rehi hein...

Freddy : Sir ho sakta hein Dr Tarika ko koi achha offer mil gaya hein aur sab lady officers ki tarah woh vi CID chod rehi hein...

ACP : Par kisine mujhe kyun nehin bataya...😕

Daya : Sir woh production wale bohot hi pareshan hein aajkal ek to CID ke liye 3 stories dhundo ek week mein aur woh Shapath ke liye 2 aur...bohot muskil ka kaam hein...shayad vul gaya hoga...😆

ACP (irritated) : Are woh sab thik hein par Abhijeet kya kar raha hein niche ???

Freddy : Are sir Dr Tarika agar CID chod rehi hein to ek aur pyaar kahani suru karni padegi naa...akhir TRP ka sawaal hein...😆

Daya : Lagta hein yeh scene baad mein add kiya hoga isliye humhe malum nehin...

ACP : To phir chalo niche ka scene pehele karte hein baad mein yahan ka scene shoot karenge...

Daya : Sir aap log jayiye...mera niche ka koi scene nehin woh aajkal ek saath kahan roz roz scene milta hein...mein yahin par hoon...Sachin aur Purvi ke saath mera ek scene hein yahan...

OUTSIDE THE HOTEL

ACP : Abhijeet kamse kam batana to chahiye tha ke tum niche Niyati ke saath phir suru ho gaye ho aur hum log upar tumhara intezar kar rehe the...

Abhijeet : 😳 Sir mein kya karu...yeh scene to script mein tha hi nehin...5 minute pehele mujhe bataya...par sir aapko kisine bataya nehin ?

ACP : Nehin kisine bataya nehin jab meine pucha to woh hamara X (I don't want to write the name 😉) hein na jo aaj watchman bana hein...usine bataya ke tum Niyati ke phir suru ho gaye ho...aab chodo chalo shoot suru karte hein...

Abhijeet : (Looking to the watchman, saying within himself) Achha...to phir tumne bataya...sabke samne mujhe kitna embarrassed hona padha...aab dekho mein aaj ki writer se kahunga tumhe hi qatil banaye phir dekhna Daya ka thapad padhega to kaisa lagta hein...😆

Edited by debasree04 - 13 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

Achiever

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Entry # 4

ACP, FREDDIE, PURVI and DAYA comes at the hotel room for Investigation... after few minutes ACP
in Confusion😕 asked DAYA..

ACP: DAYA ye Tum Chashma kyun nay utar rahay😕... ab tou hum Kamray mein hain na...😊

DAYA: Sir jub say Main nay apnay ek Interview mein RAJNI KANT ko apna Super Hero kaha hay...😉

he takes a Deep Breath... Suddenly all moved towards Window pan side after hearing some loud voices...

ACP: arry ye tou ABHIJEET hay..!!!😕

FREDDIE: Sir shayed kisi ki Shamat aa gayii hay...🤔

PURVI: Sir Humein foran chalana chahayey... (towards DAYA) aur Sir agar is beech Mujhy kuch...!!!

DAYA tried to Compose😉 whereas ACP pat on His head😆 and moved Downward after signalling the Team...

DAYA slowed down and after their Exit... Lock the Door... Unzip His Jacket😉... initially He saw the Jacket Inner Left side got a Short/lower with a Tee Shirt/jersey😆, then He looked to the Right Inner side of Jacket... found a Towel😆 and after taken out that JADOO KI JACKET moved to take a Chilling Shower...😉😈

ACP, FREDDIE and PURVI moved Downward and because of the Magical Spell😈 FREDDIE changed into NIKHIL and PURVI into VIVEK... 😉😆

here they all trying to Relax ABHIJEET and ask Him about the Matter... before that ACP saw NIKHIL and VIVEK and raise...😕

ACP: Tum log... FREDDIE aur PURVI kahan gayey...😲

VIVEK: Sir Mera Waist Coat itna Bara hay kay bar bar Kandhun say Gir raha tha😔😆 tou Mujhy usay Stitch karwanay kay liyey rukna para😡 aur meri jagah ooper PURVI ko Director nay Scene mein Shift ker diya...😆😆

ACP (to Nikhil): aur tum...!!!😕

ACP (again): acha choro😉... Tum tou ho gay hee😆 (mermur) Karan ki zya zarurat hay😉.. (to ABHIJEET) haan kya hua ABHIJEET, kyun itna Shoor macha rahay ho???❓

ABHIJEET: Sir jub say Main aaya hun tou...!!!😡

ACP: to kiya...😲

ABHIJEET feeling Embarrass😳 as well Harsh😡 to say any thing... at meantime He saw the Watchman who is looking Anxious to say something😉.. ABHIJEET comes in Anger state again and say... ABHIJEET moved towards Him...😡

ABHIJEET: haan kya masla hay😡... kyun aisay ghoor ghaoor kay Mujhy dekh rahay ho??😡

WATCHMAN: nahi shaahb😲 ... main tou bus ye poochna chahta tha...😉

ABHIJEET (rash😡): haan kay Main COAT kyun pehanta hun😉... pooch lo... tou ye ACP Sir nay kya pehna hay😡 aur is hotel kay Manager nay SHERWANI tou pehni

nahi😡 COAT hee kehtay hain isay😡... in logun say poochtay huay tou Tum logun ki Jaan chali jati hay😡... bus Mujh say poochanay aa jatay ho..😡

ACP (pat on his Head): aye BHAGWAN, Jub bhi koi Becharay kay Coat kay baaray mein kuch pooch leta hay😉... ABHIJEET ka dimagh he Kharab ho jata hay...

VIVEK: Sir main kuch karun...???

ACP: haan Next Scene mein is Waist Coat ko mazeed Tight karwa lena😉😉... lagat hay DAYA ka pehan ker aa gayey ho...😆😆

VIVEK Embarrass😳 so NIKHIL asked...

NIKHIL: Sir... wo Main...😕

ACP: haan Tum aisa karo😉... yahein Kharay raho...😈

WATCHMAN: nahi Shahab... mujhy ye nahi poochna...😕

ABHIJEET (harsh): matlab kuch aur poochna hay😡... poocho poocho (looking at NIKHIL😊) aaj kal Hum log GIYAAN baatnay ka kaam Samaj Sewa kay tour per ker rahay hain..😉(again) poocho ye COAT mujhy kub mila😉, kahan say liya😉... hain na...😆😆

WATCHMAN: nahi shahab😊... main tou ye kehna chah raha tha kay aap ka COAT buht PURANA ho gaya hay...😉😆😆

everyone in Shock😲 trying to be Serious as if anybody Smiles hope ABHIJEET tons of Anger dipped Him/her...😉

ABHIJEET (in shock😲): kyunkay FW walay Mujhy Naya Coat denay ko Tayyar nahi😡... Main apna Weight bhi isi liyey nahi barha pa raha😡 kay agar ye Coat Tight ho gaya ya Chota😡 tou wo log Mujhy wohi 1920 ka DENUM Coat pehna dein gay😡 jis ko pehan ker Main mazeed Hot ho jata hun aur🤢... aur Tum ko malum nahi😉... ain😉... kay OLD is GOLD...😉

WATCHMAN: tou yehi baat aap kay Writers/Producer/Directors ko kyun samjh nahi aa rahi...😕😕

ABHIJEET came towards Him... a usual Teasing Smile comes on His Lips with...😉

ABHIJEET: kyunkay wo sub Naye Coat pehhanny lagay hain😈... samjhay...😊

Edited by gadhadada - 13 years ago

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Evil Dramebaaz

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

+ 43

Team Silver Trio

Posted: 13 years ago

Entry 5

Freddie: SIRRR!!!!! BHOOOTTT!!! AAATMMMAAA!!!

Purvi: Kya hua Freddie sir?

Freddie: Yahan din dahade aatmayein aane lagi hain. Neeche dekho!!!

Purvi: Looks down, looks behind. Haan sir!!!! Main Daya sir ko bulati hoon. DAYA SIR!!!

Daya: Kya hua Freddie. Chilla kyon rahe ho?

Freddie: Sir. Neeche dekhiye. Aur ek ACP Saab.

Daya too shocked. Meanwhile ACP joins.

ACP: Kya hua Daya, laash ko chodkar khidki se kya tamasha dekh rahe ho?

Daya: Sir. Aap aap hi hain na?

ACP: Kya keh rahe ho Daya?

Looks down...

ACP(to receptionist): Raat ko aapne hotel se kisi ko baahar jaate hue dekha?

Receptionist; Maainn...maaain..

ACP: Aapko yaad nahi aa raha hai? Koi baat nahi. Aaraam se sochkar batayiye.

Receptionist: Sir. Mujhe neend aa gayi, thodi der ke liye so gaya tha.

Nikhil: Abey machchar, tum duty par so gaye?

Sir, ise main dekhta hoon, tote ke tarah bolne lagega.

Abhijeet (to himself): Yeh toh bilkul Daya ki tarah baatein kar raha hai.😕

ACP: Nikhil, raat ko kisi ko bhi neeend aa sakti hai. Kyon bechare par gussa ho raha hai?

Manager: Sir, main ise naukri se nikaal doonga.

ACP: Manager saab, yeh bechara thak gaya hoga. Aap ise naukri se nikaal denge toh iski wife bechari kya karegi?

Vivek(to Abhijeet): Sir, ACP saab ko ho kya gaya hai?

Abhijeet: Main bhi wohi soch raha hoon Vivek, sir aaj itne shaanth kaise ho gaye?

Abhijeet receives a call from Daya asking him to meet him outside away from both ACPs.

Daya arrives: Abhijeet, yahan 2 ACP hain, pata kaise chalega ki asli kaun hai?

Abhijeet: KAISE DETECTIVE HO TUM DAYA? MAIN HOON ACP PRADYUMAN.

Daya: Abhijeet, tumhe kya ho gaya hai. Kaisi baaten kar rahe ho?

Koi bohot badi gadbad chal rahi hai.

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Daya forcibly pulls out the dialogue sheets from Adi sir's pocket and looks at it; Uff. Aditya, yeh tumhare dialogues nahi hai. Tumhe kisi ne ACP ke dialogues diye hain.

Adi sir: Mujhe toh pata bhi nahi hai ki main kaunse episode ke liye shoot kar raha hoon. Dimaag ghoom gaya hai mera. Isliye jo dialogues diye gaye the wohi bol raha hoon. Kiska dialogue hai iss baat par mera dhyan nahi gaya.

Achcha ek baat bataao, ACP sir kiske dialogues bol rahe hain?

Daya sir: Lagta hai unhe Freddie ke dialogues diye gaye hain aur Nikhil ko mere dialogues.

Adi sir: Woh sab theek hai. Lekin 2 ACP kahan se aa gaye?

Daya sir: Lagta hai ek asli Satam sir hai, aur doosra body double hai. Tri-weekly ke liye yeh bhi karna padta hai.

AKAKR series mein tumhare dummy ka bhi istemaal kiya gaya tha. Us dummy ko naya orange shirt bhi pehnaya gaya tha.

Adi sir: Achcha? Mujhe toh pata bhi nahin tha.

Toh kyon na hum sab lambi chutti par chale jaaye. Yeh log body doubles se hi kaam chala lenge.

Edited by khota_sikka_sri - 13 years ago

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Daydreaming

@Daydreaming

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Entry: 6
Its morning time, Abhijeet enters the bureau. All are laughing and Daya is sitting with a disgusted expression.
A: Arey kya hua??
Freddy :Yeh toh aap Daya sir se hi poochhiye.
A: Kya hua Daya??
D: Arey yaarrr... Irritate ho gaya hoon main iss Nikhil ki vajeh se. Jab bhi mere saamne hota hain, lagta hai ke jo haath mein aaye woh cheez fenk ke maar doon use. Meri tarah chalta hai jab main haath pocket mein daalta hoon toh woh bhi daalta hain main jis tarah bolta hoon waise bolta hain.
A (with a mischivious expression): Ruko. Aaj toh hum Nikhil ko maza chakhaenge. Tum log khidki se dekho. Main neeche jaa raha hoon.

Abhijeet calls Nikhil.
A: Hello Nikhil kahaan ho???
N: Sir woh ACP sir ne telephone office jaane ke liye kaha tha, wahi jaa raha hoon.
A: Oh Gaaawwwddd... Jaldi waapas aa jaao. Yahaan Daya...
N: Kyaaa??? Kya hua Daya sir ko???
A: (In a flabbergasted tone) DAYA KO... OHHH NOOO... (Cuts the call)
Nikhil rushes to bureau. He hits a car while returning. Still speeds away without stopping.
Nikhil reaches near the entrance of bureau. Abhijeet is standing there, all are watching from the window.

N: DAYAAA SIIIRRR...
A: Haan Nikhil, le kar aa gaye tum phone records??
N: Nahi sir. Woh aapka phone aa gaya toh main bhaga chala aya.
A: Kya???? Bina records liye???
N: Sir aap ne kaha ke Daya sir ko kuchh ho gaya hain toh main tension me waise hi chala aya.
A: Maine aisa kab kaha?? Main toh keh raha tha ke Daya ko woh records jaldi chahiye. Lekin meri baat poori hone se pehle hi tumne phone kaat diya.
N: Sir phone toh aapne kaata tha.
A: Ab tum mujhse argue karoge???
N: Nahin sir. Sorry sir.
(meanwhile the man whose car was hit by nikhil comes along with his driver)
Man: Yahi hai woh.
A: Kya hua??
Man: Yeh admi mere car ko dash de kar bhag raha tha.
(Looking all this chaos, ACP sir and Vivek go downstairs)
ACP sir listens to the man and then he turns to nikhil.
ACP: Yeh main kya sun raha hoon Nikhil?? Tumne yeh kya kar diya?? Ek CID officer hokar yeh sab karte hue tumhe sharam nahin aai??
N: Sir woh main..
ACP: Kya woh??? Tum jaante ho is ke liye tumhe saja bhi ho sakti hain??
N (With his head down) : Sorry sir. Aagese aisi galati nahin hogi sir.
ACP: Maafi inse maango aur inki gaadi repair kara ke lao.
N: Yes Sir.
A: Nikhil, agar ek achha officer banna hain toh apne kaam par zyada dhyan do. Kisi ko follow karne par nahin. Samze??
N: Yes sir.

Edited by pvkd - 13 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

Entry no 7:

CID team rush to a window after hearing noice.

ACP : yeh nikhil yahaan kaise aa gaya ? Hum log toh chutti mana rahe the .. isko aane ki kya zaroorath thi.
Purvi : aur yeh itna chilla kyun raha hai aur ro raha hai.
ACP : Abhijeet bhi aa gaya .. par woh toh undercover case pe tha na ..

The team go downstairs to check out what's happening ..

ACP : Bolo manager yahaan kya hua ?
Manager : Sir yeh aadmi shor machathe hue zabardasti hotel ke andar ghus gaya kehte hue ki use Daya ji se milna hai .. humaare waiter ne mana kiya toh usne jaan de dene ki dhamki di ..
Waiter : Haan sir.. ab aap bataiye aise bhi koi kartha hai ..
Nikhil (crying out very loudly) : aaa ... aaa ... Daya saaar ... aap mujhe lana kaise bhul gaye ? Kyun bhul gaye ... (starts beating his chest) ..main ab toh pakka anaath ho gaya .. jab aapne hi mujhe thukra diya toh main yahaan jeeke kya karunga ?? Main jaan de dunga ..
Abhijeet : Arre Nikhil yeh jaan ki dhamki kyun dethe ho baar baar.
(Watchman comes in at that time)
Watchman : Sir .. woh ..
Abhijeet looks at him and the watchman goes silent ..
ACP : Batao kya baat hai ?
Watchman : sir woh .. woh ..
Freddy : Daro mat aur batao ..
Watchman : sir yeh coat waale bhai saab hi isko andar laaye the apne gaadi mein...
ACP : Abhijeet tum .. tumne aisa kyun kiya ??

Abhijeet : Sir aap logon ne mujhe undercover bhej diya aur khud chutti manaane aaye ?
ACP : Arre Abhijeet .. woh Shamsher ne bulaya tha yahaan .. isliye aaye .. patha nahi usko kya ho gaya kehne laga CID team ko chutti par le jaana chaahta hai .. mana karne par bhi nahi maana .. waise tumhe yeh baat batai kisne ?
Abhijeet : woh ... and looks at Daya ..
Daya : sir woh .. bas aise hi baaton baaton mein ..
Abhijeet : Sir woh Shamsher .. patha nahi kya dushmani hai uski mujhse .. isliye jaise hi patha chala main nahi hoon tabhi aisa plan banaya ..

Vivek : Sir Nikhil ko dekhiye ..
(Nikhil's crying has increased and he's standing on the balcony of one room ready to jump)
Daya : ufff ab iski nautanki .. na jaane woh kaunsa pal tha jab maine ise apna student banaya .. gondh ki tarah chipak gaya
Nikhil : Daya sir jab aapne mujhe nahi bataya toh mujhe jeene ka koi haq nahi .. main kood jaaunga yahaan se ..
Team : trying to stop Nikhil ..
Daya to Abhijeet : Abhijeet yaar tumne mujhe iss bar sach mein phasaa diya .. ek din iss se chutkaara mila tha woh bhi ..
Abhijeet : sorry yaar.

(By Bhavana)

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago