SwaRon OS: 'Pls forgive me..I can't stop loving U'

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok.. I wanted to write an OS since I don't know how long' finally aaj time mil gaya' the credit of the idea goes to my sweetypie Sakina' saku hope you like it... so not wasting further time ' I hope you all enjoy.. I m not sure if u all will like it or not but still do leave your valuabe feedbacks

This is basically after the major confrontation' Sharon kept on insulting swayam as she felt that is the best thing for both of them.. to stay away from each other' swayam is devastated by this cold.. rude and indifferent behavior by Sharon' he was completely broken


11pm:

Tring Tring

Re: kal 9am principal's office aa jana kuch important discuss karna hai charity event ke baareme

Sw: I am not coming anywhere.. please do not call or message me.. or try to contact me in anyway

Re: but swayam meri baat toh'

Before he could complete the sentence.. swayam had already disconnected the phone.. he again tried to call him up

'The number you are trying to reach is currently unavailable, please try again later or leave a voice message after the beep'

Rey disconnected the phone.. .

Re: aarrgghh inn dono ki problem kya hai.. kabhi toh itne paas hote aur kabhi ek dusre se itni nafrat.. inn dono ka bhagwan hi bhala kare' swayam toh mera call uthane se raha.. wait let me call up Taani

Tring Tring

Re: hey please swayam ko bula dogi..

Ta: vo actually bhai to terrace pe hai and terrace ka door andar se locked hai'

Re: damn it' ok thik hai.. anyways bye and thanks

Ta: bye

Next day:

Sh: Rey sab presentation ready hai?? Muje koi gadbad nai chahiye'

Re: Sharon sab ready hai' chalo'

Principal's Office:

Pr: so tum log aa gaye.. sab ready hai???

Sh: haan sir almost everything is ready par'

Pr: where is ACS?? Swayam kaha hai?? Vo nai aya?

Sh: sir voo

Re: sir he is suffering from high fever'

Sharon looked at rey in disbelief *ab swayam ko achanak kya hua, anyways why do I care about him*

Pr: okay so presentation ki reports yahi rakh do.. ill check it out and u may leave now

Sh&re: thank you sir *and they leave*

Sh: swayam ko kya hua??

Re: omg out of the whole tum muje ye puch rahi ho.. par phirse batata hu he has high fever' par why do u even care even if he exists or not' *and he leaves*

Sh to herself: ouch that hurts rey.. a silent tear fell from her eyes'

a week had passed sharon was missing swayam terribly.. though she did not show that on her face... but from inside not seeing him for so long was breaking her... and the main thing which was troubling her was was she so much affected...

In the rehearsal hall:

Si: guys Wednesday ko event hai we just have two days in hand' aadhi taiyaari baki hai and look at Sharon.. she is all lost pata nai use kya hua hai..

Vi: I know lekin vo toh CS hai na

Ne: wat we doing now??

Re: guys leave her.. hum kam kare' ri: rey tum itna rude kyu behave kar rahe ho'

Ni: dumbo Sharon ne jo swayam ke saath kia uske baad hi toh he is not coming to college'

Vis: humne use contact karne ki kitni koshish ki but.. agar Sharon use nai baat karna chahti toh na karre.. but hum'

Sharon overheard all this'

Sh to herself: kya mere vajese swayam' ohh wait what m I thinking he deserves all insult' and leaves without anyone noticing her but it was late rey had already seen her'

Re: guys u all continue ill be back in a moment'

And leaves behind Sharon

Sharon was sitting in the same empty classroom'

Re: Sharon? Tum ne sab sunn liya na

Sh: haan par ye sab sirf swyaam ka natak hai' to make me feel guilty asal me vo sirf apne kaam se bachna chahta hai'

Re: do you serious think Sharon he is doing all that kykui vo apne kaam se bhaag raha hai' *shouting*

Sh: rey u cannot talk to me like that'

Re: oohh I cannot talk like that aur tum jo swayam saath kia vo' use koi bukhar nai hai' he is devasted and tired' vo thak chukka hai tumhe apne pyaar ka ahsaas dilate dilate' pura zombie bann chukka hai na kahi aata hai na kahi jaata hai.. ya toh pura time apne room me ya phir terrace me khud ko lock kar deta hai uska cell phone switched off taani se bhi baat nai karta.. aur tum kehti ho ki I cant talk like that.. Sharon get real' *and leaves frustrated*

Sh to herself: its all my fault usko khudse door rakhne ke liye I hurted so much' how m I gonna mend my mistake' he loved me always' uss din usne apni limits cross kit hi lekin me bhi kit hi we both were angry we could not think straight.. I love him.. I always did.. bas realize aaj hua.. ab kuch bhi ho jaaye I will bring back.. I will bring my swayam back'

Taani called up swayam

Ta: bhai college me kuch urgent kaam hai apko aana hi padega

Sw: but

Ta: bhai please bahot urgent hai'

Sw: aacha thik hai me aata hu'

And cuts the call

After almost half an hour he reaches the college and goes towards canteen it was dark all over'

Sw: hello? Sab kaha gaye? Rey?? Taani?? Nil?? Sab kaha ho?

Suddenly lights were turned on'

And the sight that welcomed him' white and red balloons all over *just like the vslentines dy scene in DTPH* there was even a welcome back board there

Sharon chupke se was watching all this.. .

Suddenly everyone enters' all are shocked as much as swayam is'

Sw: guys muje laga tum logo ko kaam hai iss liye me aya inn sab time paas ke liye nai' yeh sab kya hai'

Ne: lekin swayam we doing nothing'

Ni: haan be humne toh kuch nai kia'

Re: trust me swayam hum sab toh rehearsal hall me the'

Sw: toh yeh sab? Anyways ye lo presentation ki baaki ki report.. I need go and before anyone could say anything he just left'

Si: isse kya ho gaya hai'

Sh to herself: plan flop ab kuch aur sochna hoga'

She called up someone

Sh: haan bilkul vaise naam nai haan.. thnk you'

Sharon enters'

Sh: rey mujhe urgently jaana hai so baaki ka kaam please tum dekhlena' bye'

Later (swayam)

Ting tong

Swayam opens the door: he saw a boy lying' he picked it up and found a bracelet *guys one*

Sw to himself: kisne bheja hoga' he went upto his room and suddenly his phone beeped' it was a message from a private number'

Message: please I know I have hurted you a lot please accept this gift and forgive me'.

Swayam kept wondering who can it be' he was wondering and suddenly'

There was a knock on the window' Swayam mouth fell to the ground

Sw: tu, yaha? Kya?? Mera matlab kaise?? Kyu??

Sh: mujhe itni acchi tarah se jante ho toh itna nahi pata ki yeh sab MAINE kiya hai?"

Sw: TUM??Par kyun?

Sh: Seriously Swayam.. you shud have guessed. Tumhaare ilava mujhe koi nahi jhel sakta yeh baat sab jante hai But ek baat nahi jaante... ki tumhe bhi mere ilava aur koi jhel nahi sakta'

Sw: Huh?

Sh: Your philosophical talks n all... mujhe irritate karna... tang karna... yeh sab jhelti hoon na main.

swayam is open mouthed.

Sh: Wat happned to ur manners Swayam? Kabse khidki pe hoon andar nahi aane doge?

Then he pulls her in n galti se they fall on the bed...Sharon over Swayam

They are still in that position...

Sw: tum ne ye sab WHY,Sharon?

Sharon smiles... n winks... BECAUSE...

Sharon leanes forward and place her lips firmly on his' swayam was shocked.. confused but he responded he could not resist her.. he loved her so much' their lips moulded into one' her hand playing with his soft hair and his hand held her waist' Sharon never wanted to stop but then they parted as their breath became heavier'

And then said.. "Because i love u idiot!

Swayam gets up suddenly, shocked... n she falls to the ground

Sh: AAARRRGGGHHH... Swayam!!!Ek toh main propose kar rahi hoon... aur tumne mujhe gira diya??

Sw: oh sorry sorry...n pulls her back again.

Sw: Phirse kaho?

Sh: I love you.. swayam' I love you swayam shekhawat' I always did.. bas mujhe kabhi jatana nai aya' muje life ne kabhi pyaar nai diya' kabhi koi mere saath nai.. khud galti karti thi khud sabhalti thi.. but tumse milne baad I realized but that irritated me.. iss liye aaj tak tumhe itna hurt kia I am sorry swa'

n then Swayam puts a finger on her lips n says..aur bolti ho MAIN philosophical hoon? ...n then kisses her again

after the kiss...

Sw: waise khidki ka idea accha tha.

Sh: Ab pyaar kiya hai toh thodi adventurous banni padhti hai na!

He sighed and kissed her forehead'

Sw: I love you too'

And just pulled her into a long and never ending hug'

-THE END-


so this is it... please hit the like button... and leave your valuabe comments means a lot to me... For PM's add 'mannupmff' to yuor Buddylist.

Edited by manasie - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
LOVED it Mannu!I LOVE how you write...felt really sad for Swayam in the beginning..:(..Loved how Sharon played his perfect Laila!<33
Hayye..khidki se uthke propose kiya...LOVE YOU FOR THIS MANNU!! <333
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice os...loved the khidki wala idea-plus a gal aking out-something new and good...keep up...it was written beautifully...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mannu di, this is so awesome! Sharon khidki pe charing..? Wow! And finally SwaRon are together. EEEP! Keep writing such awesome OS, please. 😳👏😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow amazing os luved it to the core
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...loved it...loved the way sharon proposed him...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...
so cute... manu...
ha ha ... sharon at swayam's window... bechari usse propose kar rahi hain n ussne sharon ko niche giraya!🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i luvvv it fubbles !!!!!!
itss osmmm !!!!!
sharon proposing swayam was soo hayyyeee... !!!!!! hidki pe ayi spialy uske lie...u hav strted it really nicely...bt its a curiosity ki sharon ne knsi insult ki swayam ko...leave dat !!!!! dey r togethr ! isse acha kya ho skta h !!
luved d update 2 d core...update asap n dun frgt to PM me ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sharon aise... Swayam ko... propose... waah kya baat hai loved it awesome 1 nd thnkx for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sharon entering through khidki. Now that would be a sight to behold. Fabulous OS.

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