Iss Paar Yaa Uss Paar-MAANEET FF Part 10 Pg 117 - Page 67

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvScooby

I hope that distances b/w Maaneet gets lessens soon...nice update


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: drashti.dfan

interesting,,, continue sooon plz



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Posted: 13 years ago

Next week Pakkkaaa
my xams end this week
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Posted: 13 years ago
completed all the parts in one go u left it at the cliff hanger update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 9

When Geet comes into Maaneet room she sees Maan coming out from the shower in hs tracks with a towel around his neck

Geet "Wooo Meinnn'''.Meinnn''Meinnn"

(Ohh me'me'meee)

Maan "Yeh kya Meinnn Meinnn kar rahi hoo????Bakrii kii mimicry kar rahii ho kyaaa????

(What me mee are you doing??? Are you mimicring a Sheep????)

Geet "Nahiii''

(No'..)

Maan "Tho kya koi problem haiii ????Mere pass tumhare jaisa faltuu waqt nahi haiii

(Then what is your problem??? I dnt have free time like you to waste)

Jo bhi bolna haiii jaldiii bolo????

(what ever you want to tell,tell it fast)

Geet "Haan 'wohhh'Mein'.."

(Yes'.ohh'me)

Maan "Kya tumhariii train Mein mein main hiii rukiii haiii''

(What's this your train is just stuck in Me'Me')

School mein se bilkul improvement nahi huiii haiii tumhariii (There is no improvement in you from school time)

Phele bhi yese hiii Mein Mein main hi atak jathi thiii''.

(Before also you used to get stuck in this word Me'.)

Pata nahiii itni Badiii Tycoon kaise bangayiii Tum"

(Don't know how you became such a big Tycoon)

Geet "Haan tho aap ne mujhe kabhi dekha hiii nahii, yese kaise bol sakthe haiii ke Mein bas Awaiyee Tycoon bangayiii???"

(Yesss you have never seen me only, then how can you tell that I by chance became a Tycoon)

Maan "Haan waise bhi mujhe tumhe dekhna bhi nahi hai'.. Main tumharee upar mera koi precious time nahi spend karna chahta'. Samjhi'' ab hato mujhe wardrobe se apni dress leni hai aur neeche jana hai"

(Yess I also don't want to see you''I don't wanna spend my precious time on you ''You understood''Now move I want to take my clothes from the wardrobe and have to go down)

N went to the wardrobe, took his clothes n changed in the walk in closet n left without saying a word to Geet by banging the door.

Though Geet was angry on Maan for questioning her on her speech but was happy that he had remembered her in his school memories but it did hurt her that Maan thought talking to her was a waste of his precious time.

Geet (self talk)"Geet tu kyu dukhi ho rahi hai'.. Woh itne dino baad aaye hai aur phir yeh news aur who sab ke wajhe se who pareshaan honge aur upar se tu jhaliii ki tarah gussa hogayi'. Toh unhone ne bhi gusse main bol diya hoga'.. Tu itna mat soch aur abhi jaldi chal warna sab log tera intezaar karte reh jayenge aur phir who tujhe tana marenge ke Late latif hu mein jaise school mein bhi thi aur sab ke saamne kachara kar dengee''Chal aab jaldiii bhaagthe huve fresh hojaaa"

(Geet Why are you getting sad'.He has come after such a long time n then this news n because of this he must be tensed n you mad girl got angry of him'..Because of that he also spoke in anger'.You don't think sooo much n now get going fast otherwise all will be left waiting for you n he will again taunt you as Late latif as you were in school n in front of everyone will rubbish my image'..Now come run n get fresh soon)

N Geet rushed towards the washroom to get fresh n made her way towards the sitting room to find all of them waiting for her seated on the dinning table.

Daadi all the while was trying to bring Maaneet closer n so she made Geet sit next to Maan n kept asking for dishes which were near Maan n so Geet would have to get closer to Maan to get them.

Maan was getting irritated by Daadi asking Geet for dishes which were near him n when he got annoyed he just pulled the dish from Geet's hand n passed it to Daadi.

Maan "Daadi main Geet se zyada nasdeek hu aur agar phir aapko dish chaiye toh mujhe bol dijyega main aapko de dunga"

(Daadi im Closer than Geet to you n if you want the dishes then tell me I will pass it to you)

Armaan "Daadi dekha humara Maan humse paraya hogaya"

(Daadi see our Maan has become distant from us)

Maan "Meine yesa kya kiyaaa haiii ,ke mein paraya hogayaaa????"

(What have I done that I have distanted myself from all of you)

Yash "Haan Maan thts not fair"

Maan just glared at Yash as to what he meant n Geet Shilpa n Meera were confused as to what they were telling'.

Daadi "Armaan I think Maan ne yeh sab tumse hii sikha hogaaa"

(Armaan I think Maan has learnt it from you only)

Geet "Daadi Armaan bhai mein bhi kuch sikhne kii baath haiii"

(Daadi Is there anything worth learning from Armaan Brother)

Meera "Hai naaa Armaan Bhai kitnaa Romantic haiii aur yaha tho koi ''ker chodo" giving side glance towards Yash

(Itsss there Armaan Brother is sooo romantic n here to somebody'..huh leave it)

Shilpa "Tujhe Romance ke ilava sujtha bhi kya hai"

(You just think about romance n nothing else)

Geet "Iskee Bheje mein itni hii tho jagah haiii naa aur kuch kaise sochegiii" n hi-fied Yash

(Her Brains has only that much space n what else will she think)

Maan "Sab ke paas tumhare jaisa extra big but useless dimaag tho nahi hotha naaa" says seeing towards Geet

(All don't have extra big but useless brain like you)

Geet smile turned into a frown seeing Maan taunting her

Yash "Maan sab tumare jaise 24*7 serious tho nahi reh sakte naa"

(Maan all cant be serious like you for full 24*7)

Armaan "Areee mein kya bol raha tha aur tum sab kyaa behas kar rahee hooo"

(Ohhh what I was thinking n what you all started argueing on this)

Maan "Tum kyaa bol rahee thee Armaan"

(What were you trying to tell Armaan)

Armaan "Haan yahii kiii tum meriii Behan Geet se kitna pyaar karthe hooo"

(Yaa that you love my sister Geet sooo much)

Maan n Geet were confused that what made Armaan think that way

Geet "Woh kaise Bhai?????"

(Hows that Bro????)

Armaan "Woh yese kee Maan tho tumhe dishes serve karte dekh hii nahi sakthaa chahe who Daadi ke liye hii kyun naa hoo kaise eekdum Daadi se keh diyaa ke mujhe bol do mein serve kar doon gaaa"

(Ohh that is like Maan cant see you serving dishes even if its for Daadi n see how he told Daadi that tell me Daadi I will serve you)

Geet just blushed hearing this n Maan just faked a smile seeing everyone's attention towards them.

Precap '


Maan making someone Jealous by getting closer to Geet

Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Note -
I know it is a very small update n i give its credit to my sis Hinal_maaneet for helping me write ittt
mostly its her idea
but im sorrryyy i dont have time to update n also not well
but somehow managing to update
plzzz bear with me

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Edited by rsroopali - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update yaar..
but does maan love someone else
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
but yaar does maan loved someone else
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update n. Get well sooon

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