MG SS 'Sehmi Aahatein' PART 5 ON PG 22 ON 8/6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OKK GUYS I M TRYING SUMTHING NEW...SO ALL THE JUTHIS ND CHAPPALS R EXPECTED...


😆Prolouge😆



Today he was ferocious...


He the MAAN SINGH KHURANA...owner of a International company named KHURANA CONSTRUCTIONS...The youngest most
successful businessman of the world...the heart throb of millons nd millions of girls...was insulted today...
tht too becose of his younger brother....DEV KHURANA....


ANJALI KHURANA (AK/di) the darling eldest sister of her two yonger khurana brothers looked at Maan...who was jst sitting nxt 2 her in a mersades...
thy were on their way 2 bring bck Dev...Maan was literally fuming in anger...It
was like if his anger lasts any more second...he'l jst burst in flames...


AK "maan..calm down ...tum itne gussa kyun ho rahe ho...?"


Maan glared at his ovr-sweet nd calm di saying... "u r asking me tht..."


AK sighed sying "Maan hum jante hai jo bhi hua...woh accha nahi hua par..."


Maan shot her an angry glare saying "par kya di...agr dev sagai krni hi nahi thi toh fir rishte k liye haa kyun kia tha..."


Maan took a envelope 4m his pocket nd waved it in front of his di...saying " sagai ki raat yeh khat chor k chala gaya...
really pathetic...agr kisi aur se pyar tha toh he could have jst told us...aisi bachkani harkat krne ki kya zarurat thi...
u knw dii...hw terrible i was feeling jab mujhe yeh baat naintara k dad se kehn para...tht too on the engagement venue k
mera bhai bhag gaya...god...i was feeling so ashamed...tht too because of dev ek baar woh mere hath lag jaye...
i'l jst...huh ...pehli baar mera saaar juka...for the 1st time in my life..."


AK murmered under her breath " ap jab faisla sunate ho tab kisi ki majal hai k ap se nah bole..."


Maan " apne kuch kaha di...?"


AK " han woh...par dev ne acha kiya k hume apne escape note me bata dia k woh bhag kar jayenge yeh hume baata dia usse
dhundh neki jarurat hi nahi padi..."


Maan "han...aisa bewakufi toh Dev hi kar sakta hai..."


AK gigged nd suddenly stopped whn their car entered the ROYAL PALACE OF JAIGARH IN RAJASTHAN...


Thy got down of the car nd entered the palace...Thy told the Durban tht Thy wanted 2 meet the MAHARANI...The durban told thm
tht Maharani was xpecting thm...


Maan & Ak looked at each other in confussion...Thy jst followed the Durban escorted thm 2 the centre of the palace nd requested thm 2 seat nd
wait 4 their Maha rani...


Maan & AK were waiting...& enjoys the royal decorantons of the palace...nd suddenly stood up seeing an elderly lady coming
downstairs...Thy instantly knew tht She was THE MAHARANI of this palace...
She was clad in a golden saree having a strong aura alongside her...She came close to thn nd gestured thm 2 seat...
Maan & AK were seated again whn Maharani said "welcum 2 our palace ...i hope ur journey was a pleasent 1...would u lik 2 ..."

Before Maharani could say anythg furtherMaan spit in anger " kaha chupa k rakha hai ap logo ne Dev ko..."


Maan was going 2 continue bt was stopped by a sweet voice yet challenging voice...


"TAMIZ SE BAAT KIJIYE AP JANTE HAI K AP JAIGARH KI MAHARANI SE BAAT KR RAHE HAI..."


Maan looked up 2 see the sorce of the voice...He saw a girl clad in a white saree climbing down the stairs in a gr8 elegant way...She
had a moon lik face bt without any spots...she had a perfect figure nd was angellicly beautiful...


Seeing Maan lost in her Anvesha smiled nd said " app...??"


The girl shifted her gaze 4m maan 2 Anvesha nd said... "hum iss ghar ki badi bahu

GEET AMAR SINGH RATHORE..."



Precap...


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INDEX



PROLOUGE PG 1


PART 1 PG 4


PART 2 PG 6


PART 3 PG 8


PART 4 PG 10


TEASER 19


PART 5 PG 22








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Downhill thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome prologue...post it in GHSP forum..u will good response in geet forum...ppl dont visit fanfictions forum much...and yes add me in
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful prologe dear👏
please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on the new ff
awesome prologue...
Shefali16 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb concept!
bt geet married? :s
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new FF.
Beautiful prologue.
Loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats...

prologue
awesome start...
Geet is a Princess and is married too...
Dev bhaag gaya...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratulation dear
awesome start
n superb prologue
dev run away
shocked geet is married
continue soon


thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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prologue is good and quit interesting

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