MG SS 'Sehmi Aahatein' PART 5 ON PG 22 ON 8/6 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it..
maneets first meet with audacity
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 2







Maharani (MH) & Anjali looked at each other helplessly.They wanted every thing to get sorted out between the two families but these two are hell bent on
ruining everything.MH looked at Geet & Maan who were ready to attack each other.It looked like They were having a virtual battle in their heads
through their eyes.MH caughed again to gain their attention.Maan & Geet looked away while cursing each other mentally.Anjali was cursing herself for
bringing Maan here when she knew he is a disaster in making any kind of relationship.His brain only works in business thinking all
the benefits & possibilities.He has spend his whole life making deals with clients,winning every client with his own rule & regulations,getting evrything
which is the same of his status & family.He thinks relations are made by the same way.He should win here too.But He or his mind doesn't understand that
life is a deal which is not signed seeing where ur benefit is but is signed where ur happiness & heart lies.


MH glared at Geet to which she just made a baby face.She knew that she was not wrong here.This guy was getting on her nerves.What the hell
he thinks he is...??? Some kind of prince charming...huh...This guy really need a reality check.She was about to continue her cursing programme
but was halted with the voice of MH."dekhiye...hm...Maan ...yehi ap ka naam hai nah...??????"



Anjali smiled uncomfortably saying "areh humne toh apna naam hi nahi bataya...hum anjaly hai ...dev ki badi behen aur yeh hai Maan ...mere chote par
Dev k bade bhai..."
MH smiled saying "han ...dev ne kayi baar ap logo k bare me humse bohot si baatein ki hai...waise hum nandani ki dadima hai Savitri
Devi aur yeh hai nandani ki bhabi Geet..."
Geet folded her hands & smiled saying namaste to Anjali & again glared at Maan.Maan also returned her greeting
with equal glareness.He was so feed up with this useless talks & greeting.He jst wanted to know where Dev id & why he hid such a big thing from them.Maan
gave a sarcastic smile to them saying "agar milna milana ho gaya toh hum ab kam ki baat kare..." Geet was going to answer him but MH held her shaking
her head in a negative manner.Geet looked away feeling superbly irritated.MH smiled thking he is just like the person whom Dev has described ALWAYS ON
POINT.


MH "jarur beta...woh ap janna chahte hai nah...k Dev ne ap ko kyun nahi bataya...kyunki woh daar gaye the...unhe laga ki ap nara ho jayenge...vishwas
kijiye unhone bohot bar koshish ki ap ko bolne ki...par shayas himmat nahi hui..."
Geet murmmered in a low voice which only Maan could hear...
"aise kharus ko koi kya bataya..." Maan only glared at her but concentrated on MH's saying.MH "par parso jab apne unki engagemnt tai kar di...He was very
much scared...aur nadangi me yaha aa gaya...He knew k ap log yaha aayoge...he wanted us to talk to u first..."



Maan slided a little back on the sofa saying "par agar usse koi aur pasand tha toh wih pehle keh sakta tha...humari aise izzat nilam karne
ki kya zarurat thi ..."
Geet smiled a mocary smile at Maan saying "dadima ne kaha na...woh daar gaye the..." Anjaly smiled at them saying "hum samaj
sakte hai..."
MH also smiled saying "aur jaha tak ap humare bare me janna chate hai hum yaha ki MAHARANI hai...Humara parivar pichle kayi saalon se yaha
ki zimmedari sambhal rahe hai...hum yaha kuch zammen sambhate hai...par humari construction farm Geet sambhal rahi...hai...humare aur ek pota
hai jo London me M.B.A kar raha hai...agle saal aa jayenge...Yaha k MAHARAJA aur YUVRAAJ ..ahem...woh...ek hadse me chhal base...tab se main aur Geet sab kuch
sambhal rahe hai... agar ap aur kuch puchna chahte hai...toh puch sakte hai..."



Maan looked at Geet at the moment MH said the last lines.Her face was blank.It was lik it was drained of all emotions.Maan expected a sad emotion but it
was nothing.All the emotions which were before in her eyes were gone...jst gone.Maan was in his thoughts whn Anjaly replied "nahi nahi...humme jo
janna tha ap ne usse zyada baata ...Hume iss rishte se koi problem nahi...ab agar hum Dev aur Nandani se mille toh...acha ho..."
MH smiled & told Geet
to bring both them down...Maan was also now convinced that these people are nice,worthy of them & he can trust them...


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Dev was literally shaking in fear thinking what could be happening down there .He knew Maan was here & he can do whatever he wants to do.He was biting his
fingernails continously.He knew whatever he did was wrong & Maan must be furious about that.But he didn't have any choices...he was damn scared...
& what came to at that moment he did it. He ran here to nandani,the girl he loves.


Nandani entered her room to see a almost pale dev who was shaking like a leaf.She sighed knowing how idiotly Dev behaves when it comes To his big bro Maan.
she knew he was a hot-tempered man but the way Dev behaves...it's lik Maan is a animal who kills anyone who comes infront of him.Nandani "dev tum aise kyun
behave kar rahe ho...aur apne nakhun ko baksh do..."
Dev turned to see Nandini who was looking at him with amuse ment. Dev "tum janti ho nah k niche kon
aye hai...humare furture ka decision lia jaa raha hai & u r so chilled..."
Nandani smiled & hugged Dev saying "han pata hai...aur yeh bhi pata hai k
dadima aur bhabi sab sambhal lenge...aur meri shadi tumse hi hogi..."
Dev smiled at her talks & hugged her back.He knew she trusted her bhabi more than anythg & nothg can change that.


Geet entered Nandani's room only to find Nandani & dev hugging.She coughed to get their attention.Dev & Nandani broke apart & blushed cutely.Geet
smiled saying "agar ap dono taiyar ho toh...hum niche chale..." Dev looked unbelievingly at Geet saying "woh maan gaye..." Geet smiled "han apki di
maan gayi par apke bhai abhi bhi naraz hai...unhe sorry kahiye ga...Nandani ap taiyar ho...???"
Nandani noded but Dev was finding it difficult to
breath thinking about Maan's anger.But he can't back off now.IT'S NOW OR NEVER.


Dev & Nandani came down with Geet .First thing That Dev did was to say sorry to Maan even before anyone could say anything else.Evryone smiled along
with Maan.Maan knew how much Dev feared him as well as respect him.No matter what he does he is still his little brother & he loves him a lot.Dev saw Maan
smilling & He knew he is saved now.Dev also smiled & took A seat between His siblings.Now it was wedding time...


Khuranas were leaving The Palace now.It was decieded That the wedding will take place here after some days according to their head purohit .
Maan needed to go to Delhi to fix his meetings & his shedule for his brothers wedding.So he needed some days to arrange everything.
Dev also paked his bags to return to his home.


Anjali "ab hum chalte hai...hume agya dijiye..." Maharani smiled saying "accha ab toh anna jana rahega..." Dev met with everyone before leaving &
winked at Nandani to which she just blushed.Maan looked at Geet before leaving.Their was a smaal smile playing on her lips which brought a smirk on Maan's
face.Geet looked feling someone's gaze on hers & saw Maan smilling at her.She made a disgusted face & looked away.Maan once again mentally slapped
himself for checking out Geet again & swore not to look at her again...With that Khurana's were off To Delhi...


Precap...


wedding preparations & Maaneet moments
Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Lovely part..
omg!maaneet r ready to kill each other..
loved dev's actions!!!And maan loves his siblings a lot even he s a khadoos 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
loved this maneet tom n jerry
devs bachpana..
all settled 4 marriage
w8ing 4 maneet moments..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2
nice part...
so all are fine with the marriage...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey...

u r not updating ur FFs...

please update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
First of all I hope u all remember me & U guys can all throw at all jutis,tomatos,sada hua anda etc.I knw should hav updated long ago but i was so caught up in studies for my entrance xm.But Nw
tht i am admitted in a university at an awsome subject CSE.But immediately aftr tht my mom got admitted in hospital 4 a operation tht's y i couldn't update.I m so
sorrryyy.But nw i m bck i want to continue all my writings.But i want all of ur support.So if i get sum liks & commnts in this update,thr'l b
a update daily frm my side.I promise.





😳PART 3😳


Maan stopped running to catch his breath.He looked up to see the morning sun which was shinning with it's full glory jst lik him.He loved this part of day.may be It was
5 in the morning whn he started his jogging around the huge lawn of KHurana Mansion.He loves the fresh feeling of the morning air crashing in his hair.He loves the
morning sun challenging him to be more powerful.he loves the quit atmosphere around him which makes him wonder if he was still in Delhi which is one of the
busiest city of India.He closed eyes to capture the peaceful morning in his mind whn Geet's face flashed & he snapped opened his eyes.


Maan just cursed himself almost 100th time for letting his heart rull over his mind.It had been almost 2 weeks since he visited Jaigarh.But whnevr he closed his eyes
to get sum peace he saw Geet's face.It always popped in front of his closed eyes.He used to get angry on himself but nw he knew may b sumthgs can't be controlled...
not evn bt Maan Singh Khurana.Maan jst wiped his face with a towel & started 4 his home.Maan entered his house to see anjali roaming all over the place decieding
everythg 4 Dev's engagemnt in Jaigarh.It was a week after now.But No one can control anjali whn it came to any preparations tht too 4 her brother's wedding.she had been chosing
the xact gifts 4 everyone in Nandani's house.Jwelleries,clothes,sweets..u jst name it...Anjali broght it all...But still she thought it wasn't enough.


Anjali saw Maan cuming 4m his jogging & ran towards him saying"Maan yaha ayiye...". Even Maan could say anythg Anjali Pulled Maan And mande him sit on sofa.She took
two sherwanis Nd placed rhm in front of Maan saying 'ab boliye kon sa accha hai...yeh Nandani k bade bhai k liye hai...we didn't see him naa...so can't decide.Maan jst shook his head
smilling & saying "jo bhi pasand kaarlo...both of thm are good..." Anjali " kya...?? Maan thik se bataeiye...nah..i don't want any kind of mistakes.."
Maan " di agar app aise hi confuse hoti rahi nah..toh ho chuiki dev ki shadi..." Anjali made a baby face saying "i jst want the bst 4 my bro..." Maan Kissed Anjali's
cheek saying "i knw ...nd whtevr u choose it'l b the bst..." Anjali jst smiled nodding her head in yes.Maan "ab mujhe jane ...i hav got a important meating 4 a project
...i got to hav this project di...it's the biggest..."
Anjali "of course...u'l hav it ...my bro is the bst..."Maan jst smiled making his way towards his room...


Geet checked everythg 4 the last time all the arrangemnt 4 the upcuming engagemnt of this Haveli.The dresses which Dev & his family would wear 4 the occassion.Some jwelleries
,Small gifts 4 the distant relatives...everythg was brought 4m the bst shops.Thy were the Royal family of this plc so evrythg should b perfect.
Thy couldn't afford any mistakes.Many important guests were cuming 4 this occassion 4m both the sides.so it was important tht their reputation was presentd in
a perfct way.Maan,his family & guests were cuming before two days of the engagemnt.Evryone's stay was planned on the outhouse of the palace.Geet as the eldest
daughter in law of this family had to do it all in a perfect way.She made sure everythg was classy & could make anyone aware abt their love towards Nandani.


Maharani,Geet's Dadima (DM) made her way towards the living room to see Geet engrossed in a coversation with the Royal Chefs.She shook her head thking this grl is
sumthg.She can do anythg.She had so mch burden 4 their constuction frm nw Nandini's engagemnt.But she wouldnt let anyone do anythg.She took all the pressure on herself widout
a second thought.Dm touched Geet shoulder saying "ho gayi sari taiyarian...???" Geet smiled & hugged DM saying "hann..dadima..fir bi...u check thm onc again...kuch
mujse chut toh nahi gaya..."
DM " ap se kuch bhi chut nahi sakta...evrythg'l b g8..." Geet was going to continue but was stopped by a sevent who told the arrival of
The head architect of Rathore constructions.Geet xcused herself & made her towards the visiting area.


Sunil Patil,the head accountant of Rathore constructions,in his late 40s was waiting for the current MD of Thier company.Geet entered & saw Mr. Patil waiting 4 her.Both
of thm sat on the oppossite each othr.Geet "wht brings u here Mr. Patil ...?? i thought i gav all the details of todays presentation. Mr.Patil adjusted his glasses
saying "
WOh maam...all of us want u to giv this presentation urself..u knw if u do this we can get this.." Geet stood up saying " ap jante hai nah...main kisi
presentation me nahi ati...u knw tht..."
Mr. Patil "but maam u knw...we hav losts 2 projcts back to back only because we didn't hav a gud architect who can give presentation
on ur behalf.We can't afford anothr failure mam..this is very mch important for us.all the biggst construction frms will be there...If we get this we can forget all the previous failures...Maam we need u in these...plss..."
Geet sighed knwing
he was r8.Only she can do this nw & Rathore constructions need one big achievemnt. Geet "fine...I'b there...but this is the first & last time ...jaldi kisi ache
architect ko appoint ki jiye..."
Mr. Patil nodded smilling & left 4m there..


Maan was in the conferance room checking the last minute details along with his assistant.He looked around to see his compitition.No one looked talented enough to
beat him.He mentally smirked & concentrated on his task.Suddenly he felt every one was gossiping & looking towards the door.Maan looked towards the door only to
find Geet walkng alongside a middle aged man.Maan's eyes were stucked on her .She looked more beautiful than the first day He meet her.wearing a simple pearl necklace
she was looking out of the world.He again mentally slapped himself fo checking out her again.He crocked his eye-brows to thk wht the hell was happenning.He hav nevr seen her doing any presentation.Rathore
constructions always presented thmself through one or anothr architect.But thy nevr introduced one of their FMLy membrs.It was really a buzz making news.Evryone was
thking the same thing.But thieir thking halted whn the owners of the project arrived.


Geet could feel every one's attention on her at the moment she entered.She knew wht evry one was thking.She didn't care for tht.It didn't take her much time to notice
Maan there.She knew she should greet him as nw he is their relative but she also knw in this corporation world u can't disclose ur personal relations.So she kept quiet.
She looked around to see The compititon.Among all thm only one man stood out.MAAN SINGH KHURANA.She knew Maan was the bst in this field.If she feared anyone now,it was him.She knew he never left any stone unturned,to get any project...so she was now very
mch nervous.


Every presentation was over nw.Presentations were done in an anothr room whr only the owners were present so no one knew abt any one other's strenth or weakness
It was time 4 result.Geet was feeling so mch nervous jst lik the old days.At tht time she used get so mch anxious 4 any result of
her school or cllg.She sighed how mch she wished she could go bck there.Maan looked at Geet 4m the corner of his eyes.He could guess she was hell nervous.It showed
4m her facial xpressions.He smiled & looked away.The owners come bck to reveal the results.


Host " Ladies & & gentlemen...we r bck here to reveal the results...to annoucne who got the biggest project today.It was very close between two companies,The Khurana
constructions & the Rathore constructions.
"Two spot lights stopped on Maan & Geet.Both of thm looked at each othr.Maan was quite astonished tht sumone was out there who can
challenge him & geet jst looked away knwing this was bound to happen.Host " Both of the companies gav their bst...So we hav decieded tht this projct'l b done by
both of thm in a merging way & we would lik to giv thm sum time to thk abt if thy want to continue this projec with us.If any of the companies backs away now,The othr
one will get the whole projct.."


Maan & Geet both were in a fix.Both Of thm wanted this projct badly.So without having any othr option Both of thm said yes.
Maan & Geet signed the contracts.Maan cleared his throat to get Geet's attention.Maan "woh .." Geet cut him in between saying "I'l meet u in ur office at 8 am
tomorrow to discuss the project.."
Maan " sure...may i knw where u r staying...??...I mean if u r staying in a hotel u can come to Khurana mansion..."
Geet " no thanks...bt i hav a flat here in Delhi.." Maan "gr8...Thn meet u tomorrow ...Gud N8.." Geet " gud n8..." Both shook their hands Nd headed 4 their respectiv
plces not knwing wht the fate was planning for thm tomorrow.


Precap


Maan roared in anger "y on earth Mrs.Geet rathore is nt here ...??? "
Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was a lovely update..
new proj..new beginning..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update
loved it
new beginning
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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part 3
nice part...
cont soon dear...

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