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Tarina Rahmsn Totine

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Posted: 13 years ago

heeyyy..cuties...sweetiesss...maaneetians...nd gurtians...i hav been a silent reader 4 a long time ...so ab bhut chara...soo all jutis nd chappals r welcum...nd plzz tell me should i continue or nt...soo here goes...

😳Prolouge😳

it's 5:00 am...

A tiny bit of sunrays...start peeping into a hugemention.the mention...ws royal itself.Having a
huge corridor,the living room ws enchantd wid
various kind of rich paintings nd
sculptures.

Howevr the mention wsn't set up in a proper way.There were boxes of different sizes
lying all around the living room.The whole house
was in pin drop silenc...xcept 4 1 room...

There ws light cuming 4m 1 room of the house.the
room ws well-organized compairing wid the rest
of the mansion.there were few boxes here
also...lying lazily...

A guy wearing his vest nd track pants...ws
unpacking the boxes.Evry muscle of his hand ws
reflexd whn he reachs 4 a book in the box...nd
thus placing it on the shelf.Suddenly he found a
picture which ws half burnt by fire in the box.A
faint smile appeard on his perfect M-shapd lips.He ws admiring the photo...there ws a knock on the
door.

His smile ws instantly replacd by anger.He said in
cold voice "nakul,u knw k mujhe mere study me
kisika ana pasand nahi..."

Nakul "srry...sir...bt he is here..."

He sighs nd says "fine...tell him 2 wait...i m
cuming..."

Precap: "i knw...i knw ...evry tim a new nam...a
new identity...wht's the nam this time'

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😳INDEX😳

Prolouge pg 1

Part 1 pg 1

Part 2 pg 2

Part 3 pg 3

Part 4 pg 3

Part 5 pg 4

Part 6 pg 4

Part 7 pg 5

Part 8 pg 6

Part 9 pg 7

Part 10 pg 8

Part 11 pg 11

Part 12 pg 13

Part 13 pg 15

Part 14 pg 19

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disha

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Posted: 13 years ago

congooo for the new ff...
great start dear...
cont sooonnn...😊

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Tarina Rahmsn Totine

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Posted: 13 years ago

guyzzz i'l b updating evryday...so no pms...

Nw tell me want 1 nw or tomorrow...???

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Tarina Rahmsn Totine

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 1

After keeping all his books...& the photo frame
on the shelf...he proceeded 2wards the door.
Giving 1 last luk 2 his study...nd being content wid
his work...he got out of the room.

He startd
walking to the long stairs that ws connectd wid
the living room... The living room which ws pitch dark a few
minutes ago...ws nw decoratd wid bright lights
which ws eluminating 4m the large
shandelier ...hanging 4m the centre of the celing
of the room...

Climbing down the stairs he saw a middle-agd
man...probably late in his fiftys waiting 4 him... Nakul ws trying 2 move the boxs 2 1 side...4 free
movemnt of the 2 men...

He said...'nakul...bring...sumthg 4 the gr8...ACP
RAVI RATHOR...nd 1 blck coffee 4 me...

Nakul...'yes...sirr...'

Ravi 'okk...tht ws rude...btw hw r u young
man...'

He lukd at ravi wid a sarcastic smile nd said...'wht
brings u here this early...???'

Ravi...'no hellooo...no...hiii...sraight 2 the point...'
& laughd a little nd added...'u r geeting ruder...'

He bends a little...aftr taking a box...he
startd...unpacking it...thn said...'i told nakul 2 get
u sumthg 2 eat...nd u r telling me i m rude...huh...'

he surpressd a small laugh...nd said...'u still didn't
giv me my answr...y r u here...????'

Ravi smild...nd shook his head nd said...'u knw y i
m here...u hav 2 start a new lif...'

He lukd bck at ravi...nd stood staight...saying...'i
knw i knw...evrytim ...a new name...a new
identity...wht's the nam this tim...????'

Ravi passd sum papers 2 him nd said...'maan...it's
maan singh khurana...'

Maan took the papers...nd said...'hmmm..,..classy
nam.,...much better than last tim...'

Ravi chukld a little nd said...'nakul'l b needing sum
help in cleaning this house,...i'l b sending sum
serventss...

Maan nooded...

Ravi again lukd at him nd said...'u knw how
impotant this is...'

Maan...'who cn knw bettr than me...'

Maan took a
seat on the europian sofa...nd said...'wht's the
story this time...???'

Ravi...'u were born here nd movd 2 london...ur
family i mean ur mom nd dad yash nd simran singh
khurana...were dead in an accident...nw u r bck
in delhi...in ur home...nd nw continuing ur
studies...'

Maan gave him a small smirk nd said...'hmm,...nic
story...kisi film se liya kya... '

Ravi smild a little and said ...'u should knw all the
details...btw hav made ur admission in the best
cllg of delhi...the xcel cllg..nd my son also studies
there...'

Nakul brought sum snacks 4 ravi nd 1 blck coffee 4
maan...Maan took the coffee...nakul placd the othr
snacks ...nd wnt bck 2wards the kitchn...

Maan ws going through the papers nd
said...'hmmm...my clss starts 4m 2morrow...'

Ravi took sum cookies nd said...'yess...i hav gave
ur report 2 thm...tht u were needed here 4 ur family
business ...tht's y ...u r joining in mid-term...'

Maan...'okkk...this is it thn...'

Ravi...'yess..kind of...i'l b wid u on ur first day at
cllg...'

Maan...'i don't need a baby-sittr...i cn tak care of
myself...'

Ravi...' i knw tht maan...bt i wnt u 2 meet my
son..may b u 2 becum gud frnds...'

Maan...'wht's the need of all these...????..".he rose
4m his seat nd said...'whn nothg is going 2 last...'

Ravi sighd nd got up... Ravi...'i knw maan...bt...'

Maan...'there is no but in my life...i thk ur job is
done nw...u cn go...'

Ravi...lukd at maan nd said...'fine...i m leaving...bt i
m nt stop cuming here..' he cukld a bit...nd
said...'okk...byee...young man...srry maan...tak
care...'

Wid tht ravi wnt out of the mansion... Maan ws luking at his vanishing figure,...nd turnd
2 luk 4 nakul...

Maan...'nakul...nakul...'

Nakul...'yess sir...'

Maan...'mr.rathore has arrangd sum more servents
4 the house,...thy'l b cuming in sum
minutes...clean the house nd arrange evrythg...'

Nakul...'okk...sir'

Maan...'i m going 2 my gym...evrythg should b
done...b4 i cum bck...'

Nakul...'yess ...sir...'

Wid tht maan left 4 his gym nd nakul stard the task
askd by his mastr who ws nw calld...

MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Precap

'aap apne pati k sath romnc kijiye...nd
mera khana...italy se plane me aajayega...'

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

😆Part 2😆

At 7:45 am...

Handa haveli...

A girl ws lying on her bed in the most luxerious
room 1 cn evr imagine...The room ws decoratd
wid baby pink color...Evry whr of the room ws
decoratd wid pink...There were pink colord
curtains flying 4 the little breeze tht ws cuming 4m
the window...A ray of sunlight disturbd the sleeping beauty of handa haveli...She stird a little
in sleep...nd turnd her face 2 the othr side... The room ws decoratd wid evry possible thg tht
ws needed 4 lif...A white bean bag ws lying in 1
cornr of the room.A laptop ws on it...half
opn...There were papers all ovr the room...The
table of the room ws the most scariest plc...no 1
in the whole wrld could find 1 thg on it widout spnding atleast 12 hrs... Bt the princess ws jst oblivious 2 the
sorroundings...She ws in her beauty sleep...Her
1 arm nd 1 leg ws out of the bed...Her 1 bunch of
long brown curly hair...ws securing her 4m the
sunlight...

Suddnly the door of the room opend...A woman at
her last sixties enterd the room...She lukd around
of the room nd sighd...She wnt 2wards the
window...nd movd the curtains 2...1 side...nd
opend the window...the fresh breeze of the
morning enterd the room...making the room a little cooler...

Our princess movd a little in her sleep...nd pulld the
duvlet a lttle 2wards herself...the woman wnt 2
wards the bed nd settld herself on the bed beside
her...she slowly said... 'Geet...utho beta...subah ho gayi...'

Geet movd 2wards her nd put her head on her lap
nd said...'kya hai Dai ma...sone dona...'

Dai ma smild 2 her princess nd said...'geet...subah
ho gayi hai...bohot der ho rahi hai...tujhe cllg nahi
jana...'

Geet..'kya dai ma...ab toh sirf 5 or 6 baj rahe
honge...sone dona...'

Dai ma...' geet...it's almost 8 ...nd tera cllg 9 se shuru
hota hai..'

Geet took a moment 2 absorb the reality...nd jerkd
herself on a sitting position on bed...taking all her
hair infront of her face...nd
screamd..'kyaaa...?????'

Dai ma chuckld seeing her angel lik this...nd movd
her hair 4m her face...nd said...kissing her
forhead...' haa mera bacha..nd gudd mrng...'

Geet stood up 4m her bed nd startd walking 2
wards her cupward ...she took her towal nd
said...'kaheka gud mrng...apko pata tha na aj
mera presentation hai...nd koi garbar nahi honi
chahiye...nd main aaj hi late ho
gayi...heyy..babaji...aapko mujhe aage uthana chahiye tha nah...'

Dai ma...'nai main tujhe kyun uthaungi...ab tak toh
main yaha...kabaddi khel rahi thi...'

Geet...'aapko abhi aise ghatiya joke suj rahe
hai...cum on...apko thik se koshish karni chahiye
thi mujhe uthaneki...'

Dai mai...rose up 4m her position nd said...'main
koshish nahi kr rahi thi...hmmm...?????'...nd lukd
at geet seriously...

Geet gulpd her saliva...nd said...'nai nai...main toh
aivenhi keh rahi thi...ap toh best ho nah...ap jo
karogi thik hai...'

Dai ma surpreesd her chukle nd
said...'hmmm..maska lagane ki koshish maat kr...ja
jaldi ready ho ja...nd breakfast k liye niche aa ja...'

Geet...' dai ma...plzzz...aj maaf kr do...cllg jake
canteen se kha lungi,,,,'

Dai ma wnt 2wards the door nd said...'no wyz
geet...u knw k breakfast k ilawa ghar k bhar nahi
jate...'

Geet...'bt plzzz...aj dai ma...'

Dai ma..'geeettt...'

Geet...'fine pura ghar kha jayungi...'

Nd she stormd 2wards the wash room... Dai ma smild a little...nd wnt out of her room nd
said ...'pagliii...'

Geet quickly took a shower nd wnt into her room
wearing a towal...she opend the cupward...nd
startd searching 4 sumthg 2 wear...in her
enormous collection of dress...

Geet,...'kya pehnooo...????'

She took 1 torn jeans nd a blue top... Geet...'nai nai...aise pathe kapre pehen k nahi jaa
sakti...'

She again took a yellow sulwar-suit... Geet...'nai nai..salwar nahi...meri image ka kya
hoga...'

She thn took a red saree.. Geet...'tu pagal ho gayi hai kya geet...tu cllg ja rahi
hai...kisi k shadi me nahi...'

Geet ws going through all the dresses...suddnly
dai ma enterd the room...

Dai ma...becam shockd 2 c the conditon of geet's
room...which ws bad b4 nw it was horrible...nd
said...'geet yeh kya kr rahi hai tu...????...pehle hi iss
room ki shoba kya kam thi jo tu aur bada rahi
hai...????'

Geet...' plzz dai ma...don't disturb...pehle hi
pareshan hu...aur ap aap...' Dai ma,...'par problem kya hai...???'

Geet turnd around 2 c dai ma...nd put her hands on
her waist... Geet...'aapko kya lagta hai...mujhe towel me ghum
ne ka shouk hai...main achanak mallika sherawat ki
fan ban gai hu...of course main pehene k liye
dhang k kapre dhundh rahi hu...'

Dai ma smild a little...she wnt 2wards her bed...nd
took 1 packet 4m 1 drawer... Dai ma gav the packet 2 geet nd said...'jaanti thi tu
subah aisa hi karegi...jab bhi tere liye koi khas din
hota hai tu aisa hi krti hai...kal shopping k waqt
liya tha...dekh le...'

Geet quickly opend the packet nd saw a cute green
kurti..nd a sofisticatd blue jeans... She jumpd nd kissd dai ma's cheek nd said...'luv u
dai ma ...ur the bst...'

Wid tht geet quickly ran 2wards the washroom...2
get changd 4 her big day...

Precap.

..same...

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 12 years ago

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nice👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

Nxttt...JALDIII...😛😊

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Tarina Rahmsn Totine

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Posted: 13 years ago

😳Part 3😳

Geet quickly changd into her newly found kurti nd
jeans...she stood in front of the huge dressing
table...she quickly took 1 pair of silvr earings...put
thm on her ears..,,quickly brushd off her hair...teid
thm in a cute ponny tale...got sum kohl on her
eyes...tht enchantd her green hazal eyes...She once again lookd herself in the mirror...satisfeid wid
her luk...she took her lappy,phone,purse...othr sum
important stuff in her bag...nd stormd off outside
her room...

Geet startd climbing down the stairs
screaming...'dai ma...dhanno...jaldi mera khana
doo...'

Geet reachd the dinning table...nd lukd
evrywhr...no1 ws there...

Geet...'ajeb hai...sab gaye kaha...'

She lukd at her watch...

Geet...'shoot...it's 8:15...daima toh babaji se meri
shikayat kar rahi hongi...bt yeh danno madam
kaha hai...??'

Suddenly there ws sum sounds cuming 4m
kitchn...she wnt 2 the kitchen nd opnd the
door...nd the scn she saw caused her 2 pop her
eyes out of the sockets...n thus shaping her mouth
in an 'o' form...

There dhanno...nd the mali of their house aka
dhanno's hubby aka lucky were both holding 1
genda flowr lost in each othr's eye...

Geet wnt 2wards thm...wavd her hand betwn
thm...bt they won't evn buldge...geet surpressd
her giggle...

Geet...'dhannnoo...'

No response...

Geet...'luckyyy...'

No response...

Geet...' dhanno...mera paratha...'

No response...

Geet..'dhaano...tu yaha apne pati k saath romnce kr
nd mera khana italy se aa jayega...'

Dhanno..' ji didi...'

Geet lost her cool nd screamd...'kya ...ji didi...'

The luvbirds trance broke nd thy lukd down
embarassd...

Dm (dai ma) came running in the kitchen hearing
geet's scream...

Dm..'kya hua...beta...r u okk...???'

Geet...'main toh thik hu...bt in dono ka kuch keh
nahi sakte...
she chuckld a bit...

Dm frownd a bit nd said...'matlab...???'

Geet...'arey...pure romeo-juliet ban chuke hai...yeh
dono...yaha main bhuk se mar rahi hu...nd in dono
ko apne rmnc se fursat hi nahi...'

Dm smild...nd said...'tere hi match-making ka natija
hai...ab sambhal...'

Geet poutd nd said...'agr inki shadi nahi karwati
toh kya karti...jab bhi dono ko mauka milta yeh
kitch nd yeh gardn se...ek duje ko romntic luk
dete...agr main inki shadi nahi karwati...toh mere
pote-poti bhi yahi scn dekh k bade hote...'

Luky nd dhanno were dying out of embarassmnt
there...

Luky...'didi mujhe kam hai main chalta hu...'
He literally ran out of kitchn...

Dm nd geet laughd alaud...

Dhanno...'didi ...woh yeh raha apka paratha...ap
bahar bethiye main lati hu...'

Geet ws going 2 answr whn her cell beeped...she
saw a text 4m yash...her best frind...tht read...'IT'S
8.30...KAHA HAI TU...HUMARA PRESENTATION
SUHAH K 9 BAJE HAI ...RAAT K 9 BAJE NAHI...JALDI
AA...'

Geet almost chockd the juice which she ws
drinking while reading the text...she quickly
stuffed a parata ...nd startd running 2wards the
door...

Dm...'areeh...geet pura khana toh kha jaa...'

Geet...'nahi dm...agr ek minute aur late hua toh
yash mujhe kaccha...nahi...isbar masaala laga k
chaba jayega...'

Dm...'bt geet...'

By thn geet ws out of dm's sight...dm sighd nd
turnd around...suddenly felt geet hugging her 4m
behind...geet kissed her chick...nd quickly had a
spoon of the mixture of yogurt nd suger...tht ws
on dm's boul...

Geet..'luv u...'

Dm..smild nd said...'bst of luk...'

Geet ran outside nd got herself seatd in her car...nd
drove off 2 her cllg 2 c sum angry frnds...

Precap

Geet..'kaun tha wo...???'

Maan..'kaun thi wo...???'

Edited by Tarina.R.Totine - 12 years ago