Kriyansh SS: Love-Bittersweet

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love- Bittersweet

It was an usual Saturday morning , everyone was busy in their own world...

Some were getting ready for their college and some were still sleeping peacefully...

But in one corner of the earth, one beautiful girl , who used to be a charmer once but now the glow on her face was replaced by pain and defeat, was sitting all alone on the window of her room holding a black jacket n a photo frame in her hand.

It has become her daily routine to sit there for hours n cherish the best moments of her life which however have become past, but for her those precious moments were the only reason for her existence. That girl was none other than Kriya...

KRIA'S POV:

I left my window open tonight
And turned the porch light on,
So that when I awake from my dreams,
I can look out into the rain
and still see us there...
You holding me in your arms,
pulling me close to you as we dance,
Hearing our own song through the rain,
Laughing and kissing,
Compelled to never let each other go...
Finally the vision vanishes,
We aren't really there...
And we never were:'(


-kaise ho aap(caressing photo of a boy) n baki sab kaise hai, i hope Sharon n Swayam ab sath ho n aapne hamara undono ko milane ka mission pura kiya ho. Aap mjhse bahot naraz hoge na, shayad nafrat bhi karte hoge but i m sorry Rey mere paas uss time aur koi option nahi tha. Main ni chahti thi ki meri galtiyon ki saza aapko bhi mile. Maa se jhut maine bola tha toh punishment bhi mjhe milna chahiye. I know maine jo kiya wo kafi hadh tak aapke liye sahi tha but jab bhi pre valentine's night ke bare me sochti hun toh aapka woh chehra woh aankhe mere saamne aa jati hai jinme uss din maine pehli baar aansu dekhe the n ye sochke ki unn aansu uss dard ki responsible main hoon i feel like killing myself. Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki main kabhi kisi ladke se pyar krungi actually maine aapse milne ke pehle tak kabhi in sab ke bare me socha hi nahi but aapse milne ke baad i felt very different n special, phir bhi main unn feelings se bhaagti rhi bt aapse door jaane ke baad mjhe pata chala ki mere liye aap mere ache dost se kuch zyada ni balki mera pehla n aahkri pyaar ho.

I LOVE U REY n will always luv u till my last breath. I miss u but main chahti hoon aap mujhe kabhi miss na karo n life me aage badh jao n ek aisi ladki se pyar karo jo aapko deserve kare meri tarah nahi jiski vajah se aapko sirf dard mila hai aur kuch nahi n uss baat ke liye main apne aap ko kabhi maaf ni kar paungi.

Then she kissed his photograph n caressed his jacket wid her cheeks(the one which he gave it to her after shivam's party) n tear drops rolled down from her beautiful eyes which have turned red becoz of excess of crying.😭







only this much for now...plz tell me whether i should continue or not..

actually pehli baar kuch likha hai so i m lil bit tensed🤔

do reply!!!!!!!!!!!!😊


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kritzzz_ArSha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice plz continue n pm me!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey plzz cont... really nice concept...😊 😛
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Wow . . . Its beautiful . . . .

kriya's pain is killin her inside for hurting her love . . . 😭

plz continue & pm me . . . .i'm sending u request..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritzzz_ArSha

Nice plz continue n pm me!!!



Thanxx😊
n i'll surely pm u...
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Originally posted by: angelritika

hey plzz cont... really nice concept...😊 😛



Thanxxx!!!!!!😊
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Originally posted by: kaba3003

Pls continue and pm me...



i'll pm u whenever i'll update next...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its really nice...

Loved d way she talked n caressed his photo..

D lines were too gud.

Pls pm me wenevr u updt d next part.

N do updt soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: yogini64

Wow . . . Its beautiful . . . .

kriya's pain is killin her inside for hurting her love . . . 😭

plz continue & pm me . . . .i'm sending u request..




thanxx a lot!!!!!!😊
yup i feel kriya is the one who has suffered d most...😒
i'll surely pm u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha

Its really nice...

Loved d way she talked n caressed his photo..

D lines were too gud.

Pls pm me wenevr u updt d next part.

N do updt soon.





thanxxx for d appreciation...it really means a lot to me😊
n yeah will pm u the next part asap!!!!!!!!!!!!

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