IPKKND FF: Except My Love (Ch12 pg17)

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This story starts from when Khushi and Arnavs 6-month contract marriage is nearly over, well only 6 days is left, to be precise...lol...Shyam's truth hasn't been revealed yet muahahaha, however, he is trying to get the property transfered to his name...so lets continue...PS: by the way this is my first OS, so I apologise for for any and all mistakes in advance...
Chapter 1
Khushi and Payal are in the kitchen, preparing dinner for everyone. Anjali, Mami and Nani are in the Living area, chatting away excitedly.
Maami: arrey Anjali bitiya, c'mon tells tells!!! kiya naam rakhogey bachchey ka? bolo bolo
(c'mon tell me, what name are you going to give the baby? speak up)
Anjali: Hum ne socha hai ki agar beti hogi toh uskaa naam muskaan rakhengey aur agar beta hoga toh krishna...aapko naam kaisaa laga naani? maami?
(I have descided that if I have a girl then I shall call her muskaan and if its a boy then I shall name him Krishna. How did you like the name nani? mami?)
Naani: bahot hi pyara naam hai...aapne bahot hi achchaa sochaa...
(very lovely names...you thought well)
mami: hello hi bye bye...krishna naam tumne isi liye choose kiya na kyunki damadji ka naam Shyam hai...so Shyam aur krishna...hi hi...hello hi...par bitiya...eeh muskaan naam kyun?
(hello hi, u chose the name krishna because son-in-laws name is Shyam...therefore krishna...but why muskaan?)
Naani: woh isi liye ki jab se Khushi bitiya iss ghar mein aaee hai tab se iss ghar mein sirf khushiyaan aaee hai...isi liye...muskaan...hai naa Anjali bitiya? *Anjali nods enthusiastically*
(that is because ever since Khushi has come here, only happiness has come into this home)
Anjali smiled, her glowing beauty which was a tribute to her pregnancy, captured everyones heart.
Arnav who had just entered the house, to get an important file, stood stunned. He had anguished tears burning his eyes...burning him up in his own hell, unknowingly created by him...and he thought, Di is going to name her child after Khushi?!! THE ONE who is trying to STEAL her husband. Oh Di...u r so innocent, u trust everybody and look at me!!! Your Chotey, the one whom you nourished and cared for, as if I were your own child,...I can't even fix this...I cannot tell u the truth about your scumbag of a husband and I can't even tell u about that two-faced khushi who acts like an Angel...but I will make her pay...I will not let her go that easily. And with that particular poisonous thought, ASR was back in control again.
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Khushi who had also heard Anjali's discussion about the baby names was sad. Tears of sadness and loss adorned her eys and Payals.
Payal: Khushi apne aasoo pe kabu rakh ho...agar koi dekh lega toh kya batao gi?
(Khushi, keep control over your tears. If anyone sees then how will you explain it)
Khushi: par Jiji, I miss her...I miss her soo much...and do you remember how Khushi used to tease us?...Its all my fault that they are dead...*sobs quietly*
(But Jiji, I miss her...)
Payal: Agar aaj Khushi aur Muskaan zinda hoti...toh pata hai kya kahetee?...kahetee ki Tuj pe jaan kurbaan ...aur unki iss kurbaani ko zaya mat hone doh...pagli...ab chal ...jaldi se apni pyari si muskurahat dikhaa?
(If Khushi and Muskaan had been here today...then do you know what they would have said?...they would have said that they would give up their lives for you,...and don't let their sacrifices go in vain...madgirl...now lets go...quickly show me your beautiful smile)
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Aakash, who was just about to walk into the kitchen to surprise his wife, stood hidden in the shadows. Aakash (thinking): Khushiji just SPOKE fluent English!!!...Then why does she speak as if she can not speak English???...and why is she talking about herself? why is she saying "if Khushi was here"?... And who is this Muskaan?...
And Payal??? HIS Payal?? <flashback to the night when Manorama had created havoc over Payals broken marriage...how they had promised each other to never hide anything from the other...<end of flashback>
Aakash felt stabbed. Secrets!!!...and how Payal had lectured him about keeping the truth from his Mum...Maybe Bhai is right!!! Maybe these low class girls...!!! ...WAIT..., what am I thinking?...I am very sure there is a good explanation...I am jumping to conclusions...I will ask Payal about all this when I take her out to dinner...Yes thats what I will do...I am sure everything will be fine...And so Aakash moved back to his room, his heart in turmoil, feeling the very foundations on which he based his marriage shake...Was his trust about to be broken? Were his Bhai and Class conscious Mum right all along?
PRECAP:
Aakash: Payal, you can tell me anything? I won't tell a soul...I promise
Payal: Okay but First you have to answer one of my question!!! Tell me Where Arnav Bhai hides his important documents? And what is his bank account number?
Aakash is stunned. Could it be true? Were they really just after money? Just like other low class...
Payal (interrupting his thoughts) : WELL!!! I am waiting...
Well thats it...let me know if you think its worth continueing the story...Oh and please let me know if this story sounds like anyone elses...Thanks ...byes...Oh and any suggestions about how to go about writing it is also welcome...lol...like I said its my First OS...
Please comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊 Hi...it seems interesting...please do continue...its very rare to seeany commotion going on between Payal n akash...plus...it wouldbe interesting to see how does Aakash handle the situation since its a bit similar to ASR's situation...about Payal and Khushi...hmm...so who is Khushi and Muskaan?
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khushi and muskaan ... well update soon can't wait to read further
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Chapter 2
Arnav had refused to attend dinner since he had an important meeting scheduled with the foreign delegates. Seeing Arnav leave, Aakash descided to take this opportunity to declare his evening plans.
Aakash: Actually naani, could Payal and I be excused as well since I had planned to take her out tonight...
Naani: Zaroor beta...yeh toh bahot hi achchee baat hai...
(Definitely dear, that sounds very nice)
Anjali: Kyun Aakash...pahele toh tum apne bhai ke peechey peechey ghoom tey te...ab kya hua?...kya Chotey ke saat office nahe jaana... aakhir jaise chotey ne kaha ki bahot kaam pending hai...*mischief twinkled in Anjali's eyes*
(What happened Aakash? Before you used to just tag behind your brother wherever he went...so what happened now?...Aren't you going to accompany Chotey to office...afterall, like Chotey said, that there's a lot of work pending...)
Payal blushed...but when she looked at Aakash, she became apprehensive...why wasn't he looking at her in the eye...what was going on?...
Aakash turned red...he smiled and then said: Arrey Di, ab jab aapka nanha munna mehmaan aayega toh usko bhi apne saath khelney wala koi chaaheeyaga na???...toh uski planning abhi se kar raha hoon...ok bye naani, bye Di, bye mom...we will be back late.
(oh Di, now when your little bundle of joy will arrive then he too will need a playbuddy, no?...so am just planning for that from now...)
A shocked Anjali was left behind with her mouth hanging open...Manorama's eyes popping out of her socket and desparately trying to regain the ability to speak whereas Naani was very happy. Happy that finally Aakash dared to tease Anjali back...oh this was going to be so much fun...because she knew Anjali may be shocked now but she was going to come back two fold to Aakash tomorrow...Khushi winked at her Jiji.
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Once Payal and Aakash were in the car, Aakash drove Payal to the same place where they had spent the New Years eve together. Payal smiled shyly, remembering how Aakash's pants were glued to the chair.
Aakash: Tum mujh pe vishwaas kartee ho na?
(You do trust me, don't you?)
Payal: Jee Aakash...aap aisaa kyun pooch rahen hai?
(Yes Aakash...why are you asking such a question?)
Aakash: This afternoon I heard yours and Khushiji's conversation...and please talk to me properly as you would normally do...not like a gawaar...WHATS GOING ON ????why does Khushi pretend she can not speak English?...who is muskaan and who is khushi? Have you people stolen someones identity?...are you in some sort of trouble?..Tell me, I will help you!!! SAY SOMETHING DAMNIT!!!
Payal cried silent tears...she wanted to tell Aakash everything but it wasn't just her secret...it was khushi's secret...it was Muskaan's secret...and above all, it was Pari's secret. ... How should she make him understand her dilemma...how? She loved Aakash with the depth of her very soul but she could not put others life in danger by revealing the truth? What should she do?
Noting Payal's inner conflict,
Aakash asked: Is your real name even Payal?...
Payal, you can tell me anything? I won't tell a soul...I promise
Payal: Okay!!! but First you have to answer one of my question!!! Tell me Where Arnav Bhai hides his important documents? And what is his bank account number?
Aakash is stunned. Could it be true? Were they really just after money? Just like other low class...
Payal (interrupting his thoughts) : WELL!!! I am waiting...
Aakash: I cannot tell you anything about Bhai's confidentiality matters, if you want I can give you my personal account funds and any other investments which may have been made in my name, including all my stocks and shares in the market...but I cannot tell you anything associated with any other member of the Raizada family.
Payal: Why? why cant you tell me their information, afterall, I am a Raizada too now...so whats the big deal??
Aakash (in a severe voice): It is not my place to discuss others confidential matters with you or anybody else. UNDERSTOOD?
Even though, Aakash's voice was quiet gentle, it still showed the subdued anger which was normally seen in ASR.
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Payal: No thanks. I am not interested. I just asked about Arnav Bhai's personal info so that you will understand what I may be going through when you expect me to answer all your questions!!!...And likewise, I can only share those details regarding myself which will not pose any threat to any other members of my family...Therefore, getting back to your first question...
...Well, my middle name is Payal and we haven't stolen anything in our entire lives, let alone someones identity. However, these identies belong to my late friends and before they died they gave us permission to use their names...I am sorry that I cannot even tell u my first name. Our marriage is real and I promise you that the moment everything is back to normal, Khushi and I will explain the whole truth to everyone. In the meantime I ask you to trust me, and don't even think of hiring a private detective to locate any personal information regarding me and Khushi!!! Do YOU UNDERSTAND MR RAIZADA?
Aakash was shocked to hear Payal talk like this...she had spoken fluent English, with a British accent too, if he was not mistaken. And Payal looked fierce...and yet to any outsider watching, Payal would have appeared absolutely calm and gentle, unable to hurt a fly.
Aakash: Is our family in any danger?
Payal: Not as long as this conversation remains between us and we continue to talk normally around family...hahaha...what is it your Bhai always says? oh yeah..."gawaar"...yes...so long as you and I continue to talk in boring monotones back home, everything should be fine. Okay?
Aakash nodded. He had a deep thought about what all she had stated and he descided that he still loves her and he would stick by her side as long as she needed any help, and if there really was any danger then that would have to pass through Aakash first before reaching Payal and Khushiji...With his mind madeup, and his heart at peace, he held his wifes beautiful hands and kissed it ever so gently. Yes they were together, misunderstanding can go on a hike, he thought and chuckled to himself. He didn't care who Payal was. To him she was HIS WIFE and him being the lion he was going to protect her no matter what...
Yeah Chapter 2 completed...comments and bashing can start now...lol...thanks to all those peopple who took their time out to even press "Like"or even read my OS...Its been ages since I wrote anything...I hope it wasn't boring and Yes I know this Chapter is full of Aakash and Payal but no worries, from next chapter on it will be khushi and ASR and Shyam...byes and take cares lovely people
Edited by s-576 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome x
Love it x
Sooo mysterious
Hope u update soon :)
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What is going on
Update soon
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Interesting and mysterious. Liked it. Want to read more. Please do cont soon and add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello All...thanks for your support and patience...I will put upchapter 3 today for sure...and who knows...maybe even chapter 4...lol...fingers crossed...byes
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interesting story add me to pm list for this story
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šŸ‘šŸ‘thanks...great job...brilliant...amazing...loved it...great start...please update sooon...šŸ‘šŸ‘

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